Comments received on poems by dusk arising
there
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Currently, I’m “there” !
I ‘think and feel
reflect and cry’,
but haven’t accepted...yet!
Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:08
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Currently, I’m “there” !
I ‘think and feel
reflect and cry’,
but haven’t accepted...yet!
Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:08
there
DesertWords said:
I\'m quite sure I have been...there.
It all sounds so familiar.
August 7th, 2019 07:13
DesertWords said:
I\'m quite sure I have been...there.
It all sounds so familiar.
August 7th, 2019 07:13
there
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with Fay and whilst I hardly ever read the words of my reviewing predecessors, today was an exception .... I seriously hope these words, this lament gets the recognition they truly deserve.......... Neville
August 7th, 2019 05:44
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with Fay and whilst I hardly ever read the words of my reviewing predecessors, today was an exception .... I seriously hope these words, this lament gets the recognition they truly deserve.......... Neville
August 7th, 2019 05:44
there
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle pathos in this read brought me near tears D.A. - you are a master at slow reach into readers\' minds with short-line appeal. Liked the sad feel of the lonely finalé.
August 7th, 2019 04:59
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle pathos in this read brought me near tears D.A. - you are a master at slow reach into readers\' minds with short-line appeal. Liked the sad feel of the lonely finalé.
August 7th, 2019 04:59
upon midnight
Suresh said:
Those, that trouble follows,
Lost in thought..
Excellently prosed
August 6th, 2019 16:06
Suresh said:
Those, that trouble follows,
Lost in thought..
Excellently prosed
August 6th, 2019 16:06
upon midnight
Fay Slimm. said:
I like the idea of opening verse with a continued title - - as in \"and\" - it flows so well into the poetic remainder and as for the the last two lines I have to agree with Neville that the the word \"treads\" seems to fit better - - and see you have decided it does too......... the metaphors you use in this are to sigh for my friend - first class write and save to my favourites.
August 6th, 2019 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
I like the idea of opening verse with a continued title - - as in \"and\" - it flows so well into the poetic remainder and as for the the last two lines I have to agree with Neville that the the word \"treads\" seems to fit better - - and see you have decided it does too......... the metaphors you use in this are to sigh for my friend - first class write and save to my favourites.
August 6th, 2019 05:50
upon midnight
Neville said:
this is certainly one of your strong points... note.. I said one.....
they dont get much better..... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:35
Neville said:
this is certainly one of your strong points... note.. I said one.....
they dont get much better..... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:35
upon midnight
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sorrow soon be lost and the path before you becomes smooth.
August 6th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sorrow soon be lost and the path before you becomes smooth.
August 6th, 2019 01:07
takes me there
Neville said:
I just checked in again.. and yes.. tis still as good as I remember..... N
August 4th, 2019 13:50
Neville said:
I just checked in again.. and yes.. tis still as good as I remember..... N
August 4th, 2019 13:50
takes me there
baddaytobealive said:
I love this so much. Beautiful writing ☹️💜
August 4th, 2019 09:24
baddaytobealive said:
I love this so much. Beautiful writing ☹️💜
August 4th, 2019 09:24
takes me there
Suresh said:
If you recall her often enough, the pleasure of her scent will never leave you.
So, go ahead and day dream
August 3rd, 2019 19:13
Suresh said:
If you recall her often enough, the pleasure of her scent will never leave you.
So, go ahead and day dream
August 3rd, 2019 19:13
takes me there
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes you got the sense that always remains - - scent is the thing that never changes - the mind can remember a life-time ago when the same scent wafts into focus...... a first rate love poem D.A.
August 3rd, 2019 15:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes you got the sense that always remains - - scent is the thing that never changes - the mind can remember a life-time ago when the same scent wafts into focus...... a first rate love poem D.A.
August 3rd, 2019 15:59
takes me there
Christina8 said:
Our five senses are powerful when it comes to remembering someone or an event....great poem DA!
August 3rd, 2019 15:49
Christina8 said:
Our five senses are powerful when it comes to remembering someone or an event....great poem DA!
August 3rd, 2019 15:49
takes me there
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the strongest senses for remembering the past is smell. May those memories always be with you.
August 3rd, 2019 14:20
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the strongest senses for remembering the past is smell. May those memories always be with you.
August 3rd, 2019 14:20
takes me there
PoeticBiscuit said:
Always writing zingers my friend please keep them coming for I am always waiting to read them.
August 3rd, 2019 11:05
PoeticBiscuit said:
Always writing zingers my friend please keep them coming for I am always waiting to read them.
August 3rd, 2019 11:05
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orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Some scents just make me sneeze, or the scent irritates my eyes. Doh!
August 3rd, 2019 10:07
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Some scents just make me sneeze, or the scent irritates my eyes. Doh!
August 3rd, 2019 10:07
takes me there
Neville said:
Deep breath.... Aahh........ yes you got it...
Pitched perfectly and poemed to perfection sir....... Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:22
Neville said:
Deep breath.... Aahh........ yes you got it...
Pitched perfectly and poemed to perfection sir....... Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:22
the love of birdsong
Goldfinch60 said:
Those birds soings are all part of Nature\'s Symphony where there are never any bum notes.
Like jazz there is never a wrong note, as it is the note you felt you needed to play at that time.
August 2nd, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Those birds soings are all part of Nature\'s Symphony where there are never any bum notes.
Like jazz there is never a wrong note, as it is the note you felt you needed to play at that time.
August 2nd, 2019 00:51
the love of birdsong
Christina8 said:
That is so true....when a bird sings you just never expect a bum note do ya? Wonderful writing DA!!
August 1st, 2019 12:55
Christina8 said:
That is so true....when a bird sings you just never expect a bum note do ya? Wonderful writing DA!!
August 1st, 2019 12:55
the love of birdsong
baddaytobealive said:
I love this one. It’s simple but effective. Thank you for sharing 😊
August 1st, 2019 09:57
baddaytobealive said:
I love this one. It’s simple but effective. Thank you for sharing 😊
August 1st, 2019 09:57
the love of birdsong
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ! Before the time of H. Sapiens ~ Before a Human note was sung or Man or Woman crafted a Musical Instrument ~ the Birds Sang ! And before that the Wind sang in the Trees and the waves sang as they crashed & splashed on the shore.
All Human Music is derived from the *Sounds of Nature* ! Today we drown out Natures Harmony & Melody and delude ourselves that we invented Music and that before Mozart there was just discord & cachophony ! What fools we are !
If only we would take time to stroll in the Woods (without our headphones) and just listen ! We would then realise ~ MUSICWISE ~ WE are really only mimicing ~ Natures Notes after Her ~ AMEN !
Harmony & Melody ~ to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
August 1st, 2019 09:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ! Before the time of H. Sapiens ~ Before a Human note was sung or Man or Woman crafted a Musical Instrument ~ the Birds Sang ! And before that the Wind sang in the Trees and the waves sang as they crashed & splashed on the shore.
All Human Music is derived from the *Sounds of Nature* ! Today we drown out Natures Harmony & Melody and delude ourselves that we invented Music and that before Mozart there was just discord & cachophony ! What fools we are !
If only we would take time to stroll in the Woods (without our headphones) and just listen ! We would then realise ~ MUSICWISE ~ WE are really only mimicing ~ Natures Notes after Her ~ AMEN !
Harmony & Melody ~ to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
August 1st, 2019 09:28
the love of birdsong
Michael Edwards said:
Love the write and that last line is to break wind for.
August 1st, 2019 05:33
Michael Edwards said:
Love the write and that last line is to break wind for.
August 1st, 2019 05:33
the love of birdsong
Fay Slimm. said:
Proud that my yesterday effort inspired this outburst of well-written lines D.A. - lovers indeed can end their song of beauty but a song-bird never forgets.
August 1st, 2019 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Proud that my yesterday effort inspired this outburst of well-written lines D.A. - lovers indeed can end their song of beauty but a song-bird never forgets.
August 1st, 2019 03:23
the love of birdsong
Neville said:
I was not expecting that at all, I dunno what I was expecting
not sure I was expecting anything in particular
But bum notes made me smile bigger than a lot of other things might have done...
Tis good to wake up with a smile on ya face.. thanks DA.... N
August 1st, 2019 01:51
Neville said:
I was not expecting that at all, I dunno what I was expecting
not sure I was expecting anything in particular
But bum notes made me smile bigger than a lot of other things might have done...
Tis good to wake up with a smile on ya face.. thanks DA.... N
August 1st, 2019 01:51
the love of birdsong
orchidee said:
Ye have done a fine write dusk. Aww, some people are horrid. They say \'If birdsong wakes me up one more morning, I\'ll shoot those pesky birds!\' Well, they don\'t say \'pesky\' but you get the gist.
August 1st, 2019 01:42
orchidee said:
Ye have done a fine write dusk. Aww, some people are horrid. They say \'If birdsong wakes me up one more morning, I\'ll shoot those pesky birds!\' Well, they don\'t say \'pesky\' but you get the gist.
August 1st, 2019 01:42
her weakness
Christina8 said:
Too many choices....I just walk on by! Very cute poem....and oh so true!
July 31st, 2019 15:05
Christina8 said:
Too many choices....I just walk on by! Very cute poem....and oh so true!
July 31st, 2019 15:05
her weakness
Michael Edwards said:
Conjures up such a great, albeit sad, scene.
July 31st, 2019 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
Conjures up such a great, albeit sad, scene.
July 31st, 2019 10:28
her weakness
Neville said:
This is one of them great little sad reads I like so much .. clever, well crafted and easily relateable to too sir.... N
July 31st, 2019 06:55
Neville said:
This is one of them great little sad reads I like so much .. clever, well crafted and easily relateable to too sir.... N
July 31st, 2019 06:55
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