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be able to enter
Michael Edwards said:
I share many of your views and agree there is much hypocrisy and double standards but we are all entitled to believe whatever we want to - as long our beliefs don\'t impact on others and as long as we don\'t try to impose them on others.
August 8th, 2019 02:29
Michael Edwards said:
I share many of your views and agree there is much hypocrisy and double standards but we are all entitled to believe whatever we want to - as long our beliefs don\'t impact on others and as long as we don\'t try to impose them on others.
August 8th, 2019 02:29
be able to enter
orchidee said:
There\'s some element of truth in this, I think, applying to SOME people, some Christians even, but not to all.
August 8th, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
There\'s some element of truth in this, I think, applying to SOME people, some Christians even, but not to all.
August 8th, 2019 01:34
there
Goldfinch60 said:
Why - the most unanswered question of them all. Wonderful emotive write d a.
August 8th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Why - the most unanswered question of them all. Wonderful emotive write d a.
August 8th, 2019 01:16
there
PoeticBiscuit said:
Perhaps you could show me where this place is? I could use a bit of reflection myself. I always enjoy your work Dusk, keep on taking me on these wonderful journeys
August 7th, 2019 21:21
PoeticBiscuit said:
Perhaps you could show me where this place is? I could use a bit of reflection myself. I always enjoy your work Dusk, keep on taking me on these wonderful journeys
August 7th, 2019 21:21
there
Suresh said:
(why?), lacking the reason, the journey is too arduous,
Your poetic words, deeply touch
August 7th, 2019 11:49
Suresh said:
(why?), lacking the reason, the journey is too arduous,
Your poetic words, deeply touch
August 7th, 2019 11:49
there
Michael Edwards said:
So simply written with such effectiveness - a gem of a write.
August 7th, 2019 08:09
Michael Edwards said:
So simply written with such effectiveness - a gem of a write.
August 7th, 2019 08:09
there
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Currently, I’m “there” !
I ‘think and feel
reflect and cry’,
but haven’t accepted...yet!
Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:08
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Currently, I’m “there” !
I ‘think and feel
reflect and cry’,
but haven’t accepted...yet!
Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 7th, 2019 08:08
there
DesertWords said:
I\'m quite sure I have been...there.
It all sounds so familiar.
August 7th, 2019 07:13
DesertWords said:
I\'m quite sure I have been...there.
It all sounds so familiar.
August 7th, 2019 07:13
there
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with Fay and whilst I hardly ever read the words of my reviewing predecessors, today was an exception .... I seriously hope these words, this lament gets the recognition they truly deserve.......... Neville
August 7th, 2019 05:44
Neville said:
I aint gonna argue with Fay and whilst I hardly ever read the words of my reviewing predecessors, today was an exception .... I seriously hope these words, this lament gets the recognition they truly deserve.......... Neville
August 7th, 2019 05:44
there
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle pathos in this read brought me near tears D.A. - you are a master at slow reach into readers\' minds with short-line appeal. Liked the sad feel of the lonely finalé.
August 7th, 2019 04:59
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle pathos in this read brought me near tears D.A. - you are a master at slow reach into readers\' minds with short-line appeal. Liked the sad feel of the lonely finalé.
August 7th, 2019 04:59
upon midnight
Suresh said:
Those, that trouble follows,
Lost in thought..
Excellently prosed
August 6th, 2019 16:06
Suresh said:
Those, that trouble follows,
Lost in thought..
Excellently prosed
August 6th, 2019 16:06
upon midnight
Fay Slimm. said:
I like the idea of opening verse with a continued title - - as in \"and\" - it flows so well into the poetic remainder and as for the the last two lines I have to agree with Neville that the the word \"treads\" seems to fit better - - and see you have decided it does too......... the metaphors you use in this are to sigh for my friend - first class write and save to my favourites.
August 6th, 2019 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
I like the idea of opening verse with a continued title - - as in \"and\" - it flows so well into the poetic remainder and as for the the last two lines I have to agree with Neville that the the word \"treads\" seems to fit better - - and see you have decided it does too......... the metaphors you use in this are to sigh for my friend - first class write and save to my favourites.
August 6th, 2019 05:50
upon midnight
Neville said:
this is certainly one of your strong points... note.. I said one.....
they dont get much better..... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:35
Neville said:
this is certainly one of your strong points... note.. I said one.....
they dont get much better..... Neville
August 6th, 2019 03:35
upon midnight
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sorrow soon be lost and the path before you becomes smooth.
August 6th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sorrow soon be lost and the path before you becomes smooth.
August 6th, 2019 01:07
takes me there
Neville said:
I just checked in again.. and yes.. tis still as good as I remember..... N
August 4th, 2019 13:50
Neville said:
I just checked in again.. and yes.. tis still as good as I remember..... N
August 4th, 2019 13:50
takes me there
baddaytobealive said:
I love this so much. Beautiful writing ☹️💜
August 4th, 2019 09:24
baddaytobealive said:
I love this so much. Beautiful writing ☹️💜
August 4th, 2019 09:24
takes me there
Suresh said:
If you recall her often enough, the pleasure of her scent will never leave you.
So, go ahead and day dream
August 3rd, 2019 19:13
Suresh said:
If you recall her often enough, the pleasure of her scent will never leave you.
So, go ahead and day dream
August 3rd, 2019 19:13
takes me there
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes you got the sense that always remains - - scent is the thing that never changes - the mind can remember a life-time ago when the same scent wafts into focus...... a first rate love poem D.A.
August 3rd, 2019 15:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes you got the sense that always remains - - scent is the thing that never changes - the mind can remember a life-time ago when the same scent wafts into focus...... a first rate love poem D.A.
August 3rd, 2019 15:59
takes me there
Christina8 said:
Our five senses are powerful when it comes to remembering someone or an event....great poem DA!
August 3rd, 2019 15:49
Christina8 said:
Our five senses are powerful when it comes to remembering someone or an event....great poem DA!
August 3rd, 2019 15:49
takes me there
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the strongest senses for remembering the past is smell. May those memories always be with you.
August 3rd, 2019 14:20
Goldfinch60 said:
One of the strongest senses for remembering the past is smell. May those memories always be with you.
August 3rd, 2019 14:20
takes me there
PoeticBiscuit said:
Always writing zingers my friend please keep them coming for I am always waiting to read them.
August 3rd, 2019 11:05
PoeticBiscuit said:
Always writing zingers my friend please keep them coming for I am always waiting to read them.
August 3rd, 2019 11:05
takes me there
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Some scents just make me sneeze, or the scent irritates my eyes. Doh!
August 3rd, 2019 10:07
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Some scents just make me sneeze, or the scent irritates my eyes. Doh!
August 3rd, 2019 10:07
takes me there
Neville said:
Deep breath.... Aahh........ yes you got it...
Pitched perfectly and poemed to perfection sir....... Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:22
Neville said:
Deep breath.... Aahh........ yes you got it...
Pitched perfectly and poemed to perfection sir....... Neville
August 3rd, 2019 07:22
the love of birdsong
Goldfinch60 said:
Those birds soings are all part of Nature\'s Symphony where there are never any bum notes.
Like jazz there is never a wrong note, as it is the note you felt you needed to play at that time.
August 2nd, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Those birds soings are all part of Nature\'s Symphony where there are never any bum notes.
Like jazz there is never a wrong note, as it is the note you felt you needed to play at that time.
August 2nd, 2019 00:51
the love of birdsong
Christina8 said:
That is so true....when a bird sings you just never expect a bum note do ya? Wonderful writing DA!!
August 1st, 2019 12:55
Christina8 said:
That is so true....when a bird sings you just never expect a bum note do ya? Wonderful writing DA!!
August 1st, 2019 12:55
the love of birdsong
baddaytobealive said:
I love this one. It’s simple but effective. Thank you for sharing 😊
August 1st, 2019 09:57
baddaytobealive said:
I love this one. It’s simple but effective. Thank you for sharing 😊
August 1st, 2019 09:57
the love of birdsong
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ! Before the time of H. Sapiens ~ Before a Human note was sung or Man or Woman crafted a Musical Instrument ~ the Birds Sang ! And before that the Wind sang in the Trees and the waves sang as they crashed & splashed on the shore.
All Human Music is derived from the *Sounds of Nature* ! Today we drown out Natures Harmony & Melody and delude ourselves that we invented Music and that before Mozart there was just discord & cachophony ! What fools we are !
If only we would take time to stroll in the Woods (without our headphones) and just listen ! We would then realise ~ MUSICWISE ~ WE are really only mimicing ~ Natures Notes after Her ~ AMEN !
Harmony & Melody ~ to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
August 1st, 2019 09:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ! Before the time of H. Sapiens ~ Before a Human note was sung or Man or Woman crafted a Musical Instrument ~ the Birds Sang ! And before that the Wind sang in the Trees and the waves sang as they crashed & splashed on the shore.
All Human Music is derived from the *Sounds of Nature* ! Today we drown out Natures Harmony & Melody and delude ourselves that we invented Music and that before Mozart there was just discord & cachophony ! What fools we are !
If only we would take time to stroll in the Woods (without our headphones) and just listen ! We would then realise ~ MUSICWISE ~ WE are really only mimicing ~ Natures Notes after Her ~ AMEN !
Harmony & Melody ~ to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
August 1st, 2019 09:28
the love of birdsong
Michael Edwards said:
Love the write and that last line is to break wind for.
August 1st, 2019 05:33
Michael Edwards said:
Love the write and that last line is to break wind for.
August 1st, 2019 05:33
the love of birdsong
Fay Slimm. said:
Proud that my yesterday effort inspired this outburst of well-written lines D.A. - lovers indeed can end their song of beauty but a song-bird never forgets.
August 1st, 2019 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Proud that my yesterday effort inspired this outburst of well-written lines D.A. - lovers indeed can end their song of beauty but a song-bird never forgets.
August 1st, 2019 03:23
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