Comments received on poems by dusk arising
now i find
lonelyraccoon said:
I love this, I could read this forever, makes me think
May 27th, 2019 18:55
lonelyraccoon said:
I love this, I could read this forever, makes me think
May 27th, 2019 18:55
now i find
Fay Slimm. said:
Lots of our aims have to bite the dust and your verse D.A. shows how in the end changes can make us unrecognizable to the person we thought would emerge. A positive ending though shows how to look at tomorrows. An inspirational write and thanks for sharing.
May 27th, 2019 15:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Lots of our aims have to bite the dust and your verse D.A. shows how in the end changes can make us unrecognizable to the person we thought would emerge. A positive ending though shows how to look at tomorrows. An inspirational write and thanks for sharing.
May 27th, 2019 15:48
now i find
Michael Edwards said:
When you stop planning and thinking ahead it\'s time for the long box - super work.
May 27th, 2019 13:04
Michael Edwards said:
When you stop planning and thinking ahead it\'s time for the long box - super work.
May 27th, 2019 13:04
now i find
Suresh said:
Yes, tomorrow is another day, and I\'ll continue to keep my hopes up.
Poetically recalled
May 27th, 2019 11:50
Suresh said:
Yes, tomorrow is another day, and I\'ll continue to keep my hopes up.
Poetically recalled
May 27th, 2019 11:50
now i find
Neville said:
these words are darn good words & true.... nice one DA.... N
May 27th, 2019 06:25
Neville said:
these words are darn good words & true.... nice one DA.... N
May 27th, 2019 06:25
amid the hills
Suresh said:
Whenever we would go to the hill stations for summer, I would wander off and contemplate as you poem has so rekindled those pleasant memories. Nature has a way to make us so insignificant in the realm of space.
May 26th, 2019 15:35
Suresh said:
Whenever we would go to the hill stations for summer, I would wander off and contemplate as you poem has so rekindled those pleasant memories. Nature has a way to make us so insignificant in the realm of space.
May 26th, 2019 15:35
amid the hills
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those hills can show us so much and give us so much peace.
May 26th, 2019 15:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those hills can show us so much and give us so much peace.
May 26th, 2019 15:19
Limericus Unholy
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m lost for words how you lighten a dark truth.
Thank you
May 26th, 2019 09:35
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m lost for words how you lighten a dark truth.
Thank you
May 26th, 2019 09:35
amid the hills
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks *DA* for caring & sharing ! Angela & I love HILLS & MOUNTAINS and the higher we get (17,000 ft in PERU) the nearer to HEAVEN we get. We do take care and have proper BOOTS ~ Safety Kit and all the GEAR ~ We don\'t want to get to HEAVEN ~ TOO SOON ! We are both Qualified in Mountain Leadership for leading Young People on Expeditions in Snowdonia ~ The Lake District & Scotland. Some kids from ESSEX have never been higher than 1000 feet so a trip to the Lake District is a real EYE OPENER ! If we move too fast they often get breathless @ 2000 ft !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 26th, 2019 09:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks *DA* for caring & sharing ! Angela & I love HILLS & MOUNTAINS and the higher we get (17,000 ft in PERU) the nearer to HEAVEN we get. We do take care and have proper BOOTS ~ Safety Kit and all the GEAR ~ We don\'t want to get to HEAVEN ~ TOO SOON ! We are both Qualified in Mountain Leadership for leading Young People on Expeditions in Snowdonia ~ The Lake District & Scotland. Some kids from ESSEX have never been higher than 1000 feet so a trip to the Lake District is a real EYE OPENER ! If we move too fast they often get breathless @ 2000 ft !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 26th, 2019 09:21
amid the hills
orchidee said:
You\'ve set me off on a song now, with them quiet hills. Pity I sound like two cats fighting! lol.
May 26th, 2019 08:17
orchidee said:
You\'ve set me off on a song now, with them quiet hills. Pity I sound like two cats fighting! lol.
May 26th, 2019 08:17
amid the hills
Neville said:
what a delightful perspective you have shared with us here.... I could close my eyes and almost be back in my little mountain retreat.... cheers sir..
May 26th, 2019 04:57
Neville said:
what a delightful perspective you have shared with us here.... I could close my eyes and almost be back in my little mountain retreat.... cheers sir..
May 26th, 2019 04:57
amid the hills
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for the best way to a really wonderful outlook on life my friend.
May 26th, 2019 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for the best way to a really wonderful outlook on life my friend.
May 26th, 2019 04:54
Limericus Unholy
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Naughty!
Are you not in church this morning?
Vicar
May 26th, 2019 03:18
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Naughty!
Are you not in church this morning?
Vicar
May 26th, 2019 03:18
Limericus Unholy
Goldfinch60 said:
A good fun write on this Sunday morning I will have to take them to Church this morning.
May 26th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
A good fun write on this Sunday morning I will have to take them to Church this morning.
May 26th, 2019 00:30
Limericus Unholy
orchidee said:
Ohhh, which church is this? Should I try it? An 18+ church, to be sure. We\'ll be excommunicated at this rate!
May 25th, 2019 11:05
orchidee said:
Ohhh, which church is this? Should I try it? An 18+ church, to be sure. We\'ll be excommunicated at this rate!
May 25th, 2019 11:05
Davey walked a mile
Goldfinch60 said:
Moving write d a, some people just do not drive in a watchful way, their lives appear to be too busy to care.
May 24th, 2019 23:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Moving write d a, some people just do not drive in a watchful way, their lives appear to be too busy to care.
May 24th, 2019 23:44
Davey walked a mile
Fay Slimm. said:
Your word- picture of early morning and road painter Davey doing his work brings home the dangers of jobs near wild drivers and the poor man who will paint no more. A powerful message behind your lines D.A.
May 24th, 2019 16:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Your word- picture of early morning and road painter Davey doing his work brings home the dangers of jobs near wild drivers and the poor man who will paint no more. A powerful message behind your lines D.A.
May 24th, 2019 16:14
Davey walked a mile
Suresh said:
Tragic indeed, and after reading the comments a real tragedy.
May 24th, 2019 10:17
Suresh said:
Tragic indeed, and after reading the comments a real tragedy.
May 24th, 2019 10:17
Davey walked a mile
Neville said:
what a ridiculous and unnecessary tragedy... apart from everything else, I can\'t get Manfred Mann\'s song \"Davy\'s on the road again\" out of my head..... Neville
May 24th, 2019 08:36
Neville said:
what a ridiculous and unnecessary tragedy... apart from everything else, I can\'t get Manfred Mann\'s song \"Davy\'s on the road again\" out of my head..... Neville
May 24th, 2019 08:36
Davey walked a mile
orchidee said:
A fine write d a. Some people don\'t observe the rule on country lanes with no pavements, of facing oncoming traffic when walking.
May 24th, 2019 02:04
orchidee said:
A fine write d a. Some people don\'t observe the rule on country lanes with no pavements, of facing oncoming traffic when walking.
May 24th, 2019 02:04
small praise
Goldfinch60 said:
In all the hardships of life we must keep going and your words show how hard life can be.
May 24th, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
In all the hardships of life we must keep going and your words show how hard life can be.
May 24th, 2019 00:43
small praise
orchidee said:
That\'s what Bugs Bunny, or Porky Pig says, at the end of cartoons \'That\'s All, Folks!\'
May 23rd, 2019 11:02
orchidee said:
That\'s what Bugs Bunny, or Porky Pig says, at the end of cartoons \'That\'s All, Folks!\'
May 23rd, 2019 11:02
small praise
Suresh said:
You have given life to the plight of most with these words of yours. Thou different times, maybe, the struggle to survive, chasing for crumbs, being content- that\'s all folks!
May 23rd, 2019 09:40
Suresh said:
You have given life to the plight of most with these words of yours. Thou different times, maybe, the struggle to survive, chasing for crumbs, being content- that\'s all folks!
May 23rd, 2019 09:40
small praise
Neville said:
these words more than adequately convey the important message and need to go on regardless of the obstacles in the way... a great poem with a dated feel... and that is meant to read as a compliment DA.... just in case you were wondering..... top marks to ya... Neville
May 23rd, 2019 04:07
Neville said:
these words more than adequately convey the important message and need to go on regardless of the obstacles in the way... a great poem with a dated feel... and that is meant to read as a compliment DA.... just in case you were wondering..... top marks to ya... Neville
May 23rd, 2019 04:07
small praise
Fay Slimm. said:
The message of struggle comes over so well in these haunting lines D.A. - - life is an on-going journey to prove we are winners - but as you so rightly state - thin rewards bring small praise. A compellingly good read.
May 23rd, 2019 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
The message of struggle comes over so well in these haunting lines D.A. - - life is an on-going journey to prove we are winners - but as you so rightly state - thin rewards bring small praise. A compellingly good read.
May 23rd, 2019 03:53
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