Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Neville said:
I decided to re-visit these fine words for three reasons
1) Because they are indeed worthy of subsequent consideration & views
2) Because I can
3) Because I wanted to....
June 14th, 2019 11:29
Neville said:
I decided to re-visit these fine words for three reasons
1) Because they are indeed worthy of subsequent consideration & views
2) Because I can
3) Because I wanted to....
June 14th, 2019 11:29
regret
Goldfinch60 said:
It will always be there, if it is not in the drawer it will be in your mind.
June 14th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
It will always be there, if it is not in the drawer it will be in your mind.
June 14th, 2019 00:35
beautiful pastime
Suresh said:
A truly erotic moment is how to pleasure another, and now all one has to do is follow the words you have so lustfully penned
June 12th, 2019 11:16
Suresh said:
A truly erotic moment is how to pleasure another, and now all one has to do is follow the words you have so lustfully penned
June 12th, 2019 11:16
beautiful pastime
Neville said:
I will not be the only one I\'m sure that is glad you had a pen to hand when you thought of these words... a delight to read my friend...... Neville
June 12th, 2019 02:53
Neville said:
I will not be the only one I\'m sure that is glad you had a pen to hand when you thought of these words... a delight to read my friend...... Neville
June 12th, 2019 02:53
beautiful pastime
Fay Slimm. said:
Finding pleasure in physical union could not be penned better my friend. - a sigh of a read with a delight of a title too.
June 12th, 2019 02:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Finding pleasure in physical union could not be penned better my friend. - a sigh of a read with a delight of a title too.
June 12th, 2019 02:31
therapoetic
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the one thing that being a poet you can do, you can set out your life (our lives) into words and that makes life easier to bear.
Life is wonderful.
June 12th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the one thing that being a poet you can do, you can set out your life (our lives) into words and that makes life easier to bear.
Life is wonderful.
June 12th, 2019 00:38
therapoetic
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing *DA* ~ much food for thought !
Poetry comes form inside ~ from the HEART !
For us to experience what you experience you must
First externalise it & Share it with all of us in a POEM !
Once that POEM is in the Public Domain its inluence is Eternal !
But it does not stop there because we who recieve YOUR MESSAGE
INTERNALISE IT and then ~ we internalise it and spread it !
The moving hand doth write and having writ move on .....
Nor all thy piety nor wit can move it back to cancel half a line
Nor all thy tears blot out a word of it !
This is why on a *PUBLIC* Poetry Group we must be very
careful what we write and how we comment verbally on
what others have written ! We should always value the
Poetic Freedom & Opportunity of MPS and never ever
abuse it !
Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 11th, 2019 17:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing *DA* ~ much food for thought !
Poetry comes form inside ~ from the HEART !
For us to experience what you experience you must
First externalise it & Share it with all of us in a POEM !
Once that POEM is in the Public Domain its inluence is Eternal !
But it does not stop there because we who recieve YOUR MESSAGE
INTERNALISE IT and then ~ we internalise it and spread it !
The moving hand doth write and having writ move on .....
Nor all thy piety nor wit can move it back to cancel half a line
Nor all thy tears blot out a word of it !
This is why on a *PUBLIC* Poetry Group we must be very
careful what we write and how we comment verbally on
what others have written ! We should always value the
Poetic Freedom & Opportunity of MPS and never ever
abuse it !
Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 11th, 2019 17:59
therapoetic
Poetic Dan said:
I read this a few times now and each time I feel something different the end sums it up so well my friend.
As if you took my feelings and showed me them in words.
Thank you pointing me to this, outstanding written masterful thoughts.
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
June 11th, 2019 07:21
Poetic Dan said:
I read this a few times now and each time I feel something different the end sums it up so well my friend.
As if you took my feelings and showed me them in words.
Thank you pointing me to this, outstanding written masterful thoughts.
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
June 11th, 2019 07:21
therapoetic
Fay Slimm. said:
A very inspiring theropoetic read my friend - am so glad you made it to where you are now - - by writing it out
June 11th, 2019 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A very inspiring theropoetic read my friend - am so glad you made it to where you are now - - by writing it out
June 11th, 2019 05:34
therapoetic
Neville said:
a clever message here contained within a message, wrapped within a poem... thanks sir.... N
June 11th, 2019 05:28
Neville said:
a clever message here contained within a message, wrapped within a poem... thanks sir.... N
June 11th, 2019 05:28
worth repeating
Neville said:
How amazingly ragged and bloody and real these words are... and how they do so convey the futility and wastefulness of war.... as fine a war.. or anti war poem as ya gonna get for a long time...... Neville
June 9th, 2019 05:13
Neville said:
How amazingly ragged and bloody and real these words are... and how they do so convey the futility and wastefulness of war.... as fine a war.. or anti war poem as ya gonna get for a long time...... Neville
June 9th, 2019 05:13
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Neville said:
A fine, timely and fitting poem without a question of a doubt....
Neville
June 7th, 2019 04:01
Neville said:
A fine, timely and fitting poem without a question of a doubt....
Neville
June 7th, 2019 04:01
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orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Yes, and even the birds don\'t sing at Auschwitz. Why would they want to?
June 7th, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Yes, and even the birds don\'t sing at Auschwitz. Why would they want to?
June 7th, 2019 01:52
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Fay Slimm. said:
Old memories stay fresh when they contain such travesty of cruelly slain men........... thanks for this powerful reminder D.A. - - lest we forget
June 6th, 2019 15:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Old memories stay fresh when they contain such travesty of cruelly slain men........... thanks for this powerful reminder D.A. - - lest we forget
June 6th, 2019 15:41
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Michael Edwards said:
So elegantly put - so much said in this short work.
June 6th, 2019 15:06
Michael Edwards said:
So elegantly put - so much said in this short work.
June 6th, 2019 15:06
promise
Shayl said:
Drunk driving it does destroy lives and really good/sad poem.
June 6th, 2019 14:47
Shayl said:
Drunk driving it does destroy lives and really good/sad poem.
June 6th, 2019 14:47
in the dark
Suresh said:
In the moment, being enveloped in darkness, a day will come, when I\'ll be guided by or at least see the light at the end of the tunnel...
Thnx for this guiding write.
June 6th, 2019 13:48
Suresh said:
In the moment, being enveloped in darkness, a day will come, when I\'ll be guided by or at least see the light at the end of the tunnel...
Thnx for this guiding write.
June 6th, 2019 13:48
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Suresh said:
\'Tis the time to remember, the price the unknown paid....
Well documented, my friend
June 6th, 2019 13:42
Suresh said:
\'Tis the time to remember, the price the unknown paid....
Well documented, my friend
June 6th, 2019 13:42
in the dark
Neville said:
dont\'cha just love dreams like that.. sometimes they are just so good... we have a little cracker here sir..... N
June 5th, 2019 13:46
Neville said:
dont\'cha just love dreams like that.. sometimes they are just so good... we have a little cracker here sir..... N
June 5th, 2019 13:46
graft
Suresh said:
More often our passion or art has to remain idle, as the necessities of survival rob of our time, and then it\'s too late
Alas, few words to express life\'s reality
June 4th, 2019 16:12
Suresh said:
More often our passion or art has to remain idle, as the necessities of survival rob of our time, and then it\'s too late
Alas, few words to express life\'s reality
June 4th, 2019 16:12
Storm
Neville said:
a tantalizing tale and a half, with a bit of a surprise at tother end... well writ and muchly enjoyed DA.... Neville
June 4th, 2019 08:10
Neville said:
a tantalizing tale and a half, with a bit of a surprise at tother end... well writ and muchly enjoyed DA.... Neville
June 4th, 2019 08:10
disjointed memories of north britain
Neville said:
almost a magnificent poem my friend and true... these words bring a lump to this readers throat.... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 04:30
Neville said:
almost a magnificent poem my friend and true... these words bring a lump to this readers throat.... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 04:30
disjointed memories of north britain
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ahhhhh DA the further NORTH one goes in the UK~ the more TRUE GRIT one encounters. Lancastrians & Men of YORK ~ Men of Oak not Southern Saplings ! Then one encounters the Scots ~ Comando under the KILT & everready for ACTION ! Haggis fed with Sword & Dirk ~ Kill first and then ask questions aftearwards ! They are ALREADY INDEPENDENT from the effete Southerners ~ South od BRUM ! LIVERPOOL v TOTTENHAM (LONDON) ~ no contest !
Blessing & Peace
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 2nd, 2019 14:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Ahhhhh DA the further NORTH one goes in the UK~ the more TRUE GRIT one encounters. Lancastrians & Men of YORK ~ Men of Oak not Southern Saplings ! Then one encounters the Scots ~ Comando under the KILT & everready for ACTION ! Haggis fed with Sword & Dirk ~ Kill first and then ask questions aftearwards ! They are ALREADY INDEPENDENT from the effete Southerners ~ South od BRUM ! LIVERPOOL v TOTTENHAM (LONDON) ~ no contest !
Blessing & Peace
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 2nd, 2019 14:40
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