Comments received on poems by dusk arising
for one another
kevin browne said:
Indeed the though must be spread from your poetry to humans who are always painting the wrong picture by not holding onto what you haven\'t got. A hand held out should resognate through and through to everyone. Well penned.
July 25th, 2019 07:40
kevin browne said:
Indeed the though must be spread from your poetry to humans who are always painting the wrong picture by not holding onto what you haven\'t got. A hand held out should resognate through and through to everyone. Well penned.
July 25th, 2019 07:40
for one another
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing *DA* This is MANTRA most on MPS will be able to share. It is Natural to care forOUR Families & OUR Lovers but it is Supanatural to care for all teh rest of the 7.5 Billion Humnas who cohabit this Old Earth with us. So yes I love Presidents Trump & Kim and our new PM Boris Johnson ! Just a s much as I love ANGELA but of course in a different way. To US *FRIENDS* are *STRANGERS* We haven*t met ! Because ~ as you say ~ We are all here for one another ~ To eliminate Hunger ~ Poverty ~ Unequality ~ War etc !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 25th, 2019 05:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing *DA* This is MANTRA most on MPS will be able to share. It is Natural to care forOUR Families & OUR Lovers but it is Supanatural to care for all teh rest of the 7.5 Billion Humnas who cohabit this Old Earth with us. So yes I love Presidents Trump & Kim and our new PM Boris Johnson ! Just a s much as I love ANGELA but of course in a different way. To US *FRIENDS* are *STRANGERS* We haven*t met ! Because ~ as you say ~ We are all here for one another ~ To eliminate Hunger ~ Poverty ~ Unequality ~ War etc !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 25th, 2019 05:46
for one another
Neville said:
words to remember
well penned, well shared and true...
July 25th, 2019 04:26
Neville said:
words to remember
well penned, well shared and true...
July 25th, 2019 04:26
for one another
Fay Slimm. said:
A request phrased in poetic language yet simply explaining what we all need to know...... an inspiring read D.A. and thank you.
July 25th, 2019 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A request phrased in poetic language yet simply explaining what we all need to know...... an inspiring read D.A. and thank you.
July 25th, 2019 02:45
for one another
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A beautifully stated sentiment that should be disseminated throughout the land!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 02:41
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A beautifully stated sentiment that should be disseminated throughout the land!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 02:41
for one another
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk. I\'m half-human, half-guinea pig (as in my pic!).
July 25th, 2019 02:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk. I\'m half-human, half-guinea pig (as in my pic!).
July 25th, 2019 02:28
Boris
Neville said:
Difficult and otherwise troubled times ahead.. I am sure the buffoon wont be around for very long... but oh\' dear what damage he could do in a fraction.... I am truly ashamed of most of our politicians.. A well written spoof that is actually filled with much troof........ Neville
July 24th, 2019 02:05
Neville said:
Difficult and otherwise troubled times ahead.. I am sure the buffoon wont be around for very long... but oh\' dear what damage he could do in a fraction.... I am truly ashamed of most of our politicians.. A well written spoof that is actually filled with much troof........ Neville
July 24th, 2019 02:05
Boris
orchidee said:
Somehow we\'ve got to bear with it and live with it, unless there\'s a General Election. I\'m not Tory, or anything, come to that. Who to choose? Which Party?
It\'s my fault you know! I should have hob-nobbed with Theresa over coffee at church, when she was PM, and often at a church near me. Well, she\'s till there, but is not the PM now.
July 24th, 2019 02:03
orchidee said:
Somehow we\'ve got to bear with it and live with it, unless there\'s a General Election. I\'m not Tory, or anything, come to that. Who to choose? Which Party?
It\'s my fault you know! I should have hob-nobbed with Theresa over coffee at church, when she was PM, and often at a church near me. Well, she\'s till there, but is not the PM now.
July 24th, 2019 02:03
Boris
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING *DA* : ANGELA HERE ! Im in NZ (11,500 from LONDON) and Im still reeling from the Shock even though it was inevitable : after the initial MPS vote ! Methinks that sometimes Countries get the Leaders they deserve TRUMP instead of Hillary (USA) and BORIS instead of Theresa (UK). Brian is coming to take me HOME (To Essex UK) in OCTOBER : BUT now I might stay in NZ and keep BRIAN here with me ! However we might have BROTHER CORBEN in No 10 by October if BORIS *Performs as Usual* WATCH THIS SPACE ! Loved your iconoclastic POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 24th, 2019 01:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING *DA* : ANGELA HERE ! Im in NZ (11,500 from LONDON) and Im still reeling from the Shock even though it was inevitable : after the initial MPS vote ! Methinks that sometimes Countries get the Leaders they deserve TRUMP instead of Hillary (USA) and BORIS instead of Theresa (UK). Brian is coming to take me HOME (To Essex UK) in OCTOBER : BUT now I might stay in NZ and keep BRIAN here with me ! However we might have BROTHER CORBEN in No 10 by October if BORIS *Performs as Usual* WATCH THIS SPACE ! Loved your iconoclastic POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 24th, 2019 01:39
dont ask me why
Poetic Dan said:
This felt so open and raw, as we all have our own answer I can just say, thank you for being the man you are today!
A gift in many many ways, always appreciated my friend.
A master of your own pen
July 23rd, 2019 11:47
Poetic Dan said:
This felt so open and raw, as we all have our own answer I can just say, thank you for being the man you are today!
A gift in many many ways, always appreciated my friend.
A master of your own pen
July 23rd, 2019 11:47
when i need
Suresh said:
Yes, our thoughts and our dreams are our companions, such as the lover you have beckoned in this poem
July 23rd, 2019 10:01
Suresh said:
Yes, our thoughts and our dreams are our companions, such as the lover you have beckoned in this poem
July 23rd, 2019 10:01
when i need
Neville said:
there is an ache that threads throughout this post.... and felt strong as one is pulled through it.....
July 23rd, 2019 02:57
Neville said:
there is an ache that threads throughout this post.... and felt strong as one is pulled through it.....
July 23rd, 2019 02:57
when i need
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream of peace be pieced together into reality.
July 23rd, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream of peace be pieced together into reality.
July 23rd, 2019 01:11
dont ask me why
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write d a, maybe those questions cannot be answered but at least you can still ask them and wonder why they cannot be answered.
The one thing that you do have though is your music, as do I.
https://youtu.be/PVf37URW_ys
July 23rd, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write d a, maybe those questions cannot be answered but at least you can still ask them and wonder why they cannot be answered.
The one thing that you do have though is your music, as do I.
https://youtu.be/PVf37URW_ys
July 23rd, 2019 00:50
dont ask me why
Christina8 said:
This is an awesome write Dusk! It\'s relatable to me in some ways and it is so well written.
July 22nd, 2019 17:20
Christina8 said:
This is an awesome write Dusk! It\'s relatable to me in some ways and it is so well written.
July 22nd, 2019 17:20
dont ask me why
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk.
Meanwhile - Why? Oops, you said \'Don\'t ask me why!\' (heehee - sorry!).
July 22nd, 2019 11:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk.
Meanwhile - Why? Oops, you said \'Don\'t ask me why!\' (heehee - sorry!).
July 22nd, 2019 11:02
dont ask me why
Suresh said:
Don\'t ask me why it is difficult to explain that growing up in wealth doesn\'t translate into no pain and unloved loneliness. Just don\'t ask me why .......penned to hit its mark
July 22nd, 2019 09:25
Suresh said:
Don\'t ask me why it is difficult to explain that growing up in wealth doesn\'t translate into no pain and unloved loneliness. Just don\'t ask me why .......penned to hit its mark
July 22nd, 2019 09:25
dont ask me why
Gogeta said:
After a life of absolutes I\'m in that void of uncertainty of questions I never thought I\'d ask with no answers. You have a great depth and an interesting style, I look forward to reading more
July 22nd, 2019 07:27
Gogeta said:
After a life of absolutes I\'m in that void of uncertainty of questions I never thought I\'d ask with no answers. You have a great depth and an interesting style, I look forward to reading more
July 22nd, 2019 07:27
dont ask me why
Fay Slimm. said:
A load of pathos in these poignant lines my friend - - questions that many are asking today about questionable care - - - your words should be in print and read to those who are in control of better home-making for growing minds.
July 22nd, 2019 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A load of pathos in these poignant lines my friend - - questions that many are asking today about questionable care - - - your words should be in print and read to those who are in control of better home-making for growing minds.
July 22nd, 2019 04:49
dont ask me why
Neville said:
a great poem DA and certainly one that many would relate to I\'m sure.......
July 22nd, 2019 04:19
Neville said:
a great poem DA and certainly one that many would relate to I\'m sure.......
July 22nd, 2019 04:19
strange land
Neville said:
you raise some very interesting issues here sir.... reads well and ends well................
July 22nd, 2019 04:15
Neville said:
you raise some very interesting issues here sir.... reads well and ends well................
July 22nd, 2019 04:15
but unbeaten
Neville said:
enjoyed & muchly so...
I particularly like the subtle word play of the unbeaten beating heart.....
July 21st, 2019 12:11
Neville said:
enjoyed & muchly so...
I particularly like the subtle word play of the unbeaten beating heart.....
July 21st, 2019 12:11
but unbeaten
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonder of words woven in hope to assure the heart that stays unbeaten - a lovely rea D.A.
July 21st, 2019 09:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonder of words woven in hope to assure the heart that stays unbeaten - a lovely rea D.A.
July 21st, 2019 09:17
but unbeaten
Poetic Dan said:
In your energy I see a champion, a master of many wits. A heart that I admire, the will to never give in!
I even shed a tear, greatful to the life that got me here!
Thank you
July 21st, 2019 04:09
Poetic Dan said:
In your energy I see a champion, a master of many wits. A heart that I admire, the will to never give in!
I even shed a tear, greatful to the life that got me here!
Thank you
July 21st, 2019 04:09
but unbeaten
Goldfinch60 said:
Your beating heart is still beating and will take you past that hesitancy back to that place that was once your life.
July 21st, 2019 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Your beating heart is still beating and will take you past that hesitancy back to that place that was once your life.
July 21st, 2019 01:14
strange land
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write d a. Pure anarchy would work but so would communism in its pure form but like all these things somebody would always say, \"I am better the you so I should be leader\" and there it fails.
July 21st, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write d a. Pure anarchy would work but so would communism in its pure form but like all these things somebody would always say, \"I am better the you so I should be leader\" and there it fails.
July 21st, 2019 00:40
strange land
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Now there is a thought
...But didn\'t we come from Anarchy? DA
Great provoking write
July 20th, 2019 02:59
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Now there is a thought
...But didn\'t we come from Anarchy? DA
Great provoking write
July 20th, 2019 02:59
blue eyes
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww sad memory, regretful vibes portrayed so poetically wow. Men are more likely to make women cry than vice versa ah. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww sad memory, regretful vibes portrayed so poetically wow. Men are more likely to make women cry than vice versa ah. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:28
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