Comments received on poems by dusk arising
blue eyes
Suresh said:
Real tears flowed down with droplets of rain, yet they left their own impression.
July 9th, 2019 19:47
Suresh said:
Real tears flowed down with droplets of rain, yet they left their own impression.
July 9th, 2019 19:47
blue eyes
Neville said:
you paint a pretty picture here with colours running down cheeks
mainly blue as may be expected.... N
July 9th, 2019 10:25
Neville said:
you paint a pretty picture here with colours running down cheeks
mainly blue as may be expected.... N
July 9th, 2019 10:25
blue eyes
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. I\'m not a blue-eyed boy for nothing! I\'m not in the rain - I\'m indoors! heehee.
July 9th, 2019 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. I\'m not a blue-eyed boy for nothing! I\'m not in the rain - I\'m indoors! heehee.
July 9th, 2019 01:37
Pershore bridge
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
Thank you for this wonderful share! A fun and informative read! 🦆
~Laura~
July 2nd, 2019 19:35
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
Thank you for this wonderful share! A fun and informative read! 🦆
~Laura~
July 2nd, 2019 19:35
Pershore bridge
Neville said:
What better way to educate anyone than by exposing them to something that is not only fun but carries an important message that even many grown ups are likely to be unaware of.... Could ya write another one about hedgehogs and milk my friend...... Neville
July 2nd, 2019 09:39
Neville said:
What better way to educate anyone than by exposing them to something that is not only fun but carries an important message that even many grown ups are likely to be unaware of.... Could ya write another one about hedgehogs and milk my friend...... Neville
July 2nd, 2019 09:39
Pershore bridge
Suresh said:
A duck and a goose, I saw in a pond, play
While the duck was waddling, the nasty goose chased us away
Many a smiles, both the read and the memory, thnx
July 2nd, 2019 03:52
Suresh said:
A duck and a goose, I saw in a pond, play
While the duck was waddling, the nasty goose chased us away
Many a smiles, both the read and the memory, thnx
July 2nd, 2019 03:52
Pershore bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes often been there d a.
If you are interested it is Pershore Midsummer Brass on Saturday, I will be there.
July 2nd, 2019 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes often been there d a.
If you are interested it is Pershore Midsummer Brass on Saturday, I will be there.
July 2nd, 2019 02:22
Pershore bridge
Fay Slimm. said:
A great read not only for children my friend as adults too need informing of health hazards to ducks given bread -- thank you D.A. for your tale is enchanting and takes me back moons ago to Pershore and its old bridge.
July 2nd, 2019 01:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A great read not only for children my friend as adults too need informing of health hazards to ducks given bread -- thank you D.A. for your tale is enchanting and takes me back moons ago to Pershore and its old bridge.
July 2nd, 2019 01:48
Pershore bridge
Michael Edwards said:
A real beauty of a fun-write - apart from the important message it gave me a smile
July 2nd, 2019 00:35
Michael Edwards said:
A real beauty of a fun-write - apart from the important message it gave me a smile
July 2nd, 2019 00:35
quench
Suresh said:
The tears of the Sycamore, quench the lovers thirst.
You call it fantasy, I call this well versed.
July 1st, 2019 11:12
Suresh said:
The tears of the Sycamore, quench the lovers thirst.
You call it fantasy, I call this well versed.
July 1st, 2019 11:12
Storm
Suresh said:
Dreams are reality in an alternate universe, and you penned a beauty here and drew the reader all the way to the end.
By the way, in that alternate universe,, they escaped to live a rich life - so I wish to believe.
June 26th, 2019 11:47
Suresh said:
Dreams are reality in an alternate universe, and you penned a beauty here and drew the reader all the way to the end.
By the way, in that alternate universe,, they escaped to live a rich life - so I wish to believe.
June 26th, 2019 11:47
make believe its your first time
Fay Slimm. said:
Later first-timers have every right to feel as they did long before........ a great tribute to those who find love in the autumn of life.
June 24th, 2019 11:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Later first-timers have every right to feel as they did long before........ a great tribute to those who find love in the autumn of life.
June 24th, 2019 11:00
make believe its your first time
Neville said:
a return visit from me to this page and these words... because You & they each deserve it..... Neville
June 24th, 2019 09:37
Neville said:
a return visit from me to this page and these words... because You & they each deserve it..... Neville
June 24th, 2019 09:37
birthday blue
marijoy said:
It is clear that we never forget what we should have had but did not have. Those are wondering memories that sticks to the back of our mind and haunt us forever. Nice writing.
June 20th, 2019 14:36
marijoy said:
It is clear that we never forget what we should have had but did not have. Those are wondering memories that sticks to the back of our mind and haunt us forever. Nice writing.
June 20th, 2019 14:36
of Elspenore pt 3
Poetic Dan said:
Great read, thank you kindly. I to stand before then with my sword of tooth ;)
June 20th, 2019 07:53
Poetic Dan said:
Great read, thank you kindly. I to stand before then with my sword of tooth ;)
June 20th, 2019 07:53
of Elspenore pt 3
Goldfinch60 said:
May that truth move forward from the gods of the past into the world of today.
June 18th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that truth move forward from the gods of the past into the world of today.
June 18th, 2019 00:16
of Elspenore pt 3
Suresh said:
It\'s time that all be challenged
In the land of elsepenore
Enough, of prostrating oneself
Just because it was so before
Your poem befitting all times
June 17th, 2019 14:32
Suresh said:
It\'s time that all be challenged
In the land of elsepenore
Enough, of prostrating oneself
Just because it was so before
Your poem befitting all times
June 17th, 2019 14:32
of Elspenore pt 3
Neville said:
I like anything that is even remotely like Arthurian England and this is certainly the stuff of mythological legend .... part 3 is a great follow on.... Neville
June 17th, 2019 12:00
Neville said:
I like anything that is even remotely like Arthurian England and this is certainly the stuff of mythological legend .... part 3 is a great follow on.... Neville
June 17th, 2019 12:00
of Elspenore pt 3
orchidee said:
I don\'t know these guys - and gals? of Elspenore. Is it near Clacton?!
June 17th, 2019 10:18
orchidee said:
I don\'t know these guys - and gals? of Elspenore. Is it near Clacton?!
June 17th, 2019 10:18
birthday blue
Neville said:
seems like the anniversary of something that might possibly have once been great...
I also get the impression that these words are truly meant
whatever the case may be... tinged with sorrow & regret....
another one of yours that sounds good in the head and looks good posted on the page.... Neville
June 16th, 2019 13:47
Neville said:
seems like the anniversary of something that might possibly have once been great...
I also get the impression that these words are truly meant
whatever the case may be... tinged with sorrow & regret....
another one of yours that sounds good in the head and looks good posted on the page.... Neville
June 16th, 2019 13:47
birthday blue
orchidee said:
Ccoooeeee you hearing me then?! Even if \'He\' does not hear me?
June 16th, 2019 08:18
orchidee said:
Ccoooeeee you hearing me then?! Even if \'He\' does not hear me?
June 16th, 2019 08:18
birthday blue
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
Your writing resonates and it’s not easy to forget! However, I’m a firm believer of whatever happens, it happens for a reason! After all is said and done, I’m sure we’re better for it!
~Laura~
June 16th, 2019 05:00
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
Your writing resonates and it’s not easy to forget! However, I’m a firm believer of whatever happens, it happens for a reason! After all is said and done, I’m sure we’re better for it!
~Laura~
June 16th, 2019 05:00
birthday blue
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for Sharing DA ~ This is something most of us can empathise with !
There have been GIRLS Ive loved before
Who have passed IN & OUT my DOOR ........ !
Im 35 now and (in some circles) almost old enough
to be a GRANDAD (17 + 17 + 1 !) However I am so
so pleased I waited for Angela and my Future Father
in Law is a Wine Merchant ~ Amen
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
June 16th, 2019 03:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for Sharing DA ~ This is something most of us can empathise with !
There have been GIRLS Ive loved before
Who have passed IN & OUT my DOOR ........ !
Im 35 now and (in some circles) almost old enough
to be a GRANDAD (17 + 17 + 1 !) However I am so
so pleased I waited for Angela and my Future Father
in Law is a Wine Merchant ~ Amen
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
June 16th, 2019 03:33
birthday blue
Michael Edwards said:
A great reflective write - thankfully I married my loved one and we are still together so no regrets.
June 16th, 2019 01:03
Michael Edwards said:
A great reflective write - thankfully I married my loved one and we are still together so no regrets.
June 16th, 2019 01:03
birthday blue
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought and actions of the past can be so wonderful and never be regretted.
June 16th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought and actions of the past can be so wonderful and never be regretted.
June 16th, 2019 00:36
make believe its your first time
Goldfinch60 said:
Those first times were so special in our lives and they will never be forgotten.
June 16th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those first times were so special in our lives and they will never be forgotten.
June 16th, 2019 00:34
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