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disjointed memories of north britain
Suresh said:
The furthest north I travelled was to the Lake District. A pleasant memory etched forever.
Poetically ascribed your memories here
June 2nd, 2019 11:13
Suresh said:
The furthest north I travelled was to the Lake District. A pleasant memory etched forever.
Poetically ascribed your memories here
June 2nd, 2019 11:13
when out of my thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
The fact that you knew that your little gem giggled and smiled must have been your salvation back then D.A. - - a challenge which if not experienced could be so difficult to imagine yet you found a way to see through the dire diagnosis and wrote down your assessment that your little darling was blessed with joy -- - a heartfelt thank you for deciding to post this.
June 2nd, 2019 05:52
Fay Slimm. said:
The fact that you knew that your little gem giggled and smiled must have been your salvation back then D.A. - - a challenge which if not experienced could be so difficult to imagine yet you found a way to see through the dire diagnosis and wrote down your assessment that your little darling was blessed with joy -- - a heartfelt thank you for deciding to post this.
June 2nd, 2019 05:52
when out of my thoughts
Neville said:
I am glad that you decided to publish these words DA... they are so very vital, ragged and real... I love the fact you mentioned right at the end your darling daughter giggles a lot.... a most necessary poem in my book.... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 05:36
Neville said:
I am glad that you decided to publish these words DA... they are so very vital, ragged and real... I love the fact you mentioned right at the end your darling daughter giggles a lot.... a most necessary poem in my book.... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 05:36
disjointed memories of north britain
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, wonderful memories for me as well.
June 2nd, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, wonderful memories for me as well.
June 2nd, 2019 01:19
If i could stay
dusk arising said:
Well bless you Dan. I\'m pleased that my words have meant stuff for you. I know that you too will be passing on worthwhile nuggets to people as and when. We are not special people. We are just caring people who have come through a few things we might call set backs (or were they tests given to us to prove our mettel in this one earthly existence... hmmm there i go .. i\'m thinking about reincarnation in those words). Whichever it is, it\'s good to be positive and encourage positiveness in others.
June 1st, 2019 19:56
dusk arising said:
Well bless you Dan. I\'m pleased that my words have meant stuff for you. I know that you too will be passing on worthwhile nuggets to people as and when. We are not special people. We are just caring people who have come through a few things we might call set backs (or were they tests given to us to prove our mettel in this one earthly existence... hmmm there i go .. i\'m thinking about reincarnation in those words). Whichever it is, it\'s good to be positive and encourage positiveness in others.
June 1st, 2019 19:56
If i could stay
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve not read the comments yet but I know there be great as my friend you run through my mind on so many days and now you have made sure, there you shall always remain.
I am truly blessed to have connected with a soul like yours. Thank you again for sharing this as its the one that is now going to send me back to a needed sleep.
I hope this all was written well!
June 1st, 2019 19:40
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve not read the comments yet but I know there be great as my friend you run through my mind on so many days and now you have made sure, there you shall always remain.
I am truly blessed to have connected with a soul like yours. Thank you again for sharing this as its the one that is now going to send me back to a needed sleep.
I hope this all was written well!
June 1st, 2019 19:40
If i could stay
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece to put aside and come back to read when the need rises - your expressions flow with inspiration and leave such a feeling of oneness with all kinds of nature - - an exceptionally good finalé too -- eyes that see love find a beautiful world - Saved this little treasure.
May 30th, 2019 16:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece to put aside and come back to read when the need rises - your expressions flow with inspiration and leave such a feeling of oneness with all kinds of nature - - an exceptionally good finalé too -- eyes that see love find a beautiful world - Saved this little treasure.
May 30th, 2019 16:39
If i could stay
Neville said:
this is indeed a beautiful poem sir.. and for what its worth, I\'m glad you aint going anywhere in a hurry........ Neville
May 30th, 2019 13:03
Neville said:
this is indeed a beautiful poem sir.. and for what its worth, I\'m glad you aint going anywhere in a hurry........ Neville
May 30th, 2019 13:03
If i could stay
Suresh said:
Dreams can take you anywhere
So, go ahead and travel to this place the words sketched.
Very enjoyable piece
May 30th, 2019 12:06
Suresh said:
Dreams can take you anywhere
So, go ahead and travel to this place the words sketched.
Very enjoyable piece
May 30th, 2019 12:06
If i could stay
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s an inspired piece indeed DA
Indeed
May 30th, 2019 08:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s an inspired piece indeed DA
Indeed
May 30th, 2019 08:47
If i could stay
kevin browne said:
I\'m very thankful that you ain\'t going anywhere and this poem, my gosh is so beautiful and a magic thrust was put upon my a magic carpet for me to ride over your skies of this beautiful world. Totally awesome piece of writing. Can\'t wait for your next one to lavish upon the taste of your skilled writing. Perfect!!!
May 30th, 2019 08:19
kevin browne said:
I\'m very thankful that you ain\'t going anywhere and this poem, my gosh is so beautiful and a magic thrust was put upon my a magic carpet for me to ride over your skies of this beautiful world. Totally awesome piece of writing. Can\'t wait for your next one to lavish upon the taste of your skilled writing. Perfect!!!
May 30th, 2019 08:19
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Suresh said:
I totally ampathize with the gravity of this poem. Wrote one called \"Trying Times\", though on a much broader scale.
Damned if you do and damned if you don\'t, but by the nature of the secret, I hope you find the strength, but sometimes you dissolve the importance by sharing.
May 29th, 2019 09:52
Suresh said:
I totally ampathize with the gravity of this poem. Wrote one called \"Trying Times\", though on a much broader scale.
Damned if you do and damned if you don\'t, but by the nature of the secret, I hope you find the strength, but sometimes you dissolve the importance by sharing.
May 29th, 2019 09:52
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Neville said:
filled with possibilities, this grabs you by the throat and shakes ya hard... I sincerely hope, for the sake of poetry, filled with red herrings too... I am keeping my fingers crossed regardless...... Neville
May 29th, 2019 06:40
Neville said:
filled with possibilities, this grabs you by the throat and shakes ya hard... I sincerely hope, for the sake of poetry, filled with red herrings too... I am keeping my fingers crossed regardless...... Neville
May 29th, 2019 06:40
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Fay Slimm. said:
This write fires the imagination until I now I too am crying with needing to know this big secret D.A. - - such a compelling first read of my day. ... Fay
May 29th, 2019 05:57
Fay Slimm. said:
This write fires the imagination until I now I too am crying with needing to know this big secret D.A. - - such a compelling first read of my day. ... Fay
May 29th, 2019 05:57
when out of my thoughts
kevin browne said:
Beautifully emotional from the heart of your daughter. You wrote with her grace all through this dedicated poem towards your brave little girl x
May 28th, 2019 17:01
kevin browne said:
Beautifully emotional from the heart of your daughter. You wrote with her grace all through this dedicated poem towards your brave little girl x
May 28th, 2019 17:01
of Elspenore pt2
Fay Slimm. said:
Elspenore rises again with gods in the offing to please and placate - another great part to your wonderful saga D.A.
May 28th, 2019 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Elspenore rises again with gods in the offing to please and placate - another great part to your wonderful saga D.A.
May 28th, 2019 04:36
of Elspenore pt2
Neville said:
part one was good.. part two is even better... a great feel to these words .... Neville
May 28th, 2019 04:18
Neville said:
part one was good.. part two is even better... a great feel to these words .... Neville
May 28th, 2019 04:18
now i find
lonelyraccoon said:
I love this, I could read this forever, makes me think
May 27th, 2019 18:55
lonelyraccoon said:
I love this, I could read this forever, makes me think
May 27th, 2019 18:55
now i find
Fay Slimm. said:
Lots of our aims have to bite the dust and your verse D.A. shows how in the end changes can make us unrecognizable to the person we thought would emerge. A positive ending though shows how to look at tomorrows. An inspirational write and thanks for sharing.
May 27th, 2019 15:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Lots of our aims have to bite the dust and your verse D.A. shows how in the end changes can make us unrecognizable to the person we thought would emerge. A positive ending though shows how to look at tomorrows. An inspirational write and thanks for sharing.
May 27th, 2019 15:48
now i find
Michael Edwards said:
When you stop planning and thinking ahead it\'s time for the long box - super work.
May 27th, 2019 13:04
Michael Edwards said:
When you stop planning and thinking ahead it\'s time for the long box - super work.
May 27th, 2019 13:04
now i find
Suresh said:
Yes, tomorrow is another day, and I\'ll continue to keep my hopes up.
Poetically recalled
May 27th, 2019 11:50
Suresh said:
Yes, tomorrow is another day, and I\'ll continue to keep my hopes up.
Poetically recalled
May 27th, 2019 11:50
now i find
Neville said:
these words are darn good words & true.... nice one DA.... N
May 27th, 2019 06:25
Neville said:
these words are darn good words & true.... nice one DA.... N
May 27th, 2019 06:25
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