Comments received on poems by dusk arising
slowly into a shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, those wonderful childhood memories are always with us.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, those wonderful childhood memories are always with us.
Andy
March 31st, 2022 00:39
slowly into a shadow
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful expression of memories of youth coming on gently as if in the onset of sleep and drifting into a dream. Very well written. I think this is one of your better poems.
March 30th, 2022 19:10
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful expression of memories of youth coming on gently as if in the onset of sleep and drifting into a dream. Very well written. I think this is one of your better poems.
March 30th, 2022 19:10
slowly into a shadow
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, Dusk, it is so descriptive...wonderful and i loved the ending!
March 30th, 2022 17:33
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, Dusk, it is so descriptive...wonderful and i loved the ending!
March 30th, 2022 17:33
slowly into a shadow
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Wow…
A great relatable poem. I’m having my ups and downs these days. Today is an up day…and reading your poem has made it even better.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Laura 🌻
March 30th, 2022 12:35
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Wow…
A great relatable poem. I’m having my ups and downs these days. Today is an up day…and reading your poem has made it even better.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Laura 🌻
March 30th, 2022 12:35
slowly into a shadow
Neville said:
when you were young and your heart was an open book ...
a delightful blast from the past sir if you dont mind me just sayin .. N
March 30th, 2022 12:20
Neville said:
when you were young and your heart was an open book ...
a delightful blast from the past sir if you dont mind me just sayin .. N
March 30th, 2022 12:20
slowly into a shadow
Rocky Lagou said:
Being young feels like being immortal, doesn\'t it? A lovely reminiscence of the past and left a nostalgic touch, great job!
March 30th, 2022 09:58
Rocky Lagou said:
Being young feels like being immortal, doesn\'t it? A lovely reminiscence of the past and left a nostalgic touch, great job!
March 30th, 2022 09:58
the cunning puppet
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, trying to find that word can bring such sadness if it cannot be found.
Andy
March 30th, 2022 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, trying to find that word can bring such sadness if it cannot be found.
Andy
March 30th, 2022 01:06
the cunning puppet
sorenbarrett said:
wearing sorrow to find a weeping audience in an attempt to paint a perfect picture to gift to others in order to give you pleasure is a deep message to all. Well worded.
March 29th, 2022 21:39
sorenbarrett said:
wearing sorrow to find a weeping audience in an attempt to paint a perfect picture to gift to others in order to give you pleasure is a deep message to all. Well worded.
March 29th, 2022 21:39
the cunning puppet
Rocky Lagou said:
Your poems are always such a delight. Although I can\'t pinpoint exactly what the main theme is about. I have some interpretations. Possibly feigning sorrow hinted at by the first couple of lines. But I\'m also a little ambivalent towards the last lines where you find pleasure in \"the giving.\" But then again you are referring to that \"cunning nature\" so yeah. It\'s ambiguous and I enjoy that!
March 29th, 2022 13:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Your poems are always such a delight. Although I can\'t pinpoint exactly what the main theme is about. I have some interpretations. Possibly feigning sorrow hinted at by the first couple of lines. But I\'m also a little ambivalent towards the last lines where you find pleasure in \"the giving.\" But then again you are referring to that \"cunning nature\" so yeah. It\'s ambiguous and I enjoy that!
March 29th, 2022 13:28
the cunning puppet
Dahlia said:
well penned, it appears you found the right words in this lovely string of metaphors! Dahlia
March 29th, 2022 12:32
Dahlia said:
well penned, it appears you found the right words in this lovely string of metaphors! Dahlia
March 29th, 2022 12:32
the cunning puppet
Christina8 said:
Taking from your poem I think you found those words to \"colour a picture perfect\" You have gifted us with another beautiful write!
March 29th, 2022 08:56
Christina8 said:
Taking from your poem I think you found those words to \"colour a picture perfect\" You have gifted us with another beautiful write!
March 29th, 2022 08:56
the cunning puppet
dean langmuir said:
Struggling over one word,I did know I enjoyed struggling so much,enjoyed the poem,take care.
March 29th, 2022 06:26
dean langmuir said:
Struggling over one word,I did know I enjoyed struggling so much,enjoyed the poem,take care.
March 29th, 2022 06:26
the cunning puppet
L. B. Mek said:
my cunning puppet
is \'hope\';
its very essence
essential in its, nature
to make reality, disappoint
at every turn
and yet, its existence
a quintessential
anchor, to our unbending
will
in each step, of breath
we accumulate
as our cherished life\'s
cyclical, progress...
(just another great, thought provoking write
dear insightful Poet!
thanks for sharing)
March 29th, 2022 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
my cunning puppet
is \'hope\';
its very essence
essential in its, nature
to make reality, disappoint
at every turn
and yet, its existence
a quintessential
anchor, to our unbending
will
in each step, of breath
we accumulate
as our cherished life\'s
cyclical, progress...
(just another great, thought provoking write
dear insightful Poet!
thanks for sharing)
March 29th, 2022 05:47
postcard home to mother russia
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly sad times we\'re living in. I hope for better days. You drew a touching story. 💖
March 28th, 2022 12:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Truly sad times we\'re living in. I hope for better days. You drew a touching story. 💖
March 28th, 2022 12:28
silent night
Rocky Lagou said:
Very reminiscent and nostalgic. I sense this strange sensation you\'ve described and I can relate. You\'ve explained it finely.
March 28th, 2022 12:23
Rocky Lagou said:
Very reminiscent and nostalgic. I sense this strange sensation you\'ve described and I can relate. You\'ve explained it finely.
March 28th, 2022 12:23
silent night
Neville said:
there are no two ways about it .. or if\'s n buts .. you are indeed one day gonna be one of the greats sir ........................ Neville
March 28th, 2022 07:58
Neville said:
there are no two ways about it .. or if\'s n buts .. you are indeed one day gonna be one of the greats sir ........................ Neville
March 28th, 2022 07:58
silent night
L. B. Mek said:
\'enraged my thundering timpani\'..
what imagery!
immersing us, in that crackling
monotone, drumming of our pulses
whilst traversing
that impending inevitability
of a love\'s
last, remaining autumnal leaf
surrendering, its grip...!
(a heartbreakingly beautiful depiction, Dusk
thank you!)
March 28th, 2022 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'enraged my thundering timpani\'..
what imagery!
immersing us, in that crackling
monotone, drumming of our pulses
whilst traversing
that impending inevitability
of a love\'s
last, remaining autumnal leaf
surrendering, its grip...!
(a heartbreakingly beautiful depiction, Dusk
thank you!)
March 28th, 2022 06:27
postcard home to mother russia
Katrina D said:
What a great, thought-provoking poem about this sad, mad war. Thanks for sharing.
March 28th, 2022 05:59
Katrina D said:
What a great, thought-provoking poem about this sad, mad war. Thanks for sharing.
March 28th, 2022 05:59
postcard home to mother russia
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good and very true write d a.
So many children being killed and deprived of their parents in this disgusting war.
Why do some people not care!!
Andy
March 28th, 2022 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good and very true write d a.
So many children being killed and deprived of their parents in this disgusting war.
Why do some people not care!!
Andy
March 28th, 2022 01:14
postcard home to mother russia
Doggerel Dave said:
Sir, I am pleased to inform you that you are appointed to the position of Chief Propagandist in the East Section here at MI6 effective immediately.
Please contact Personnel to complete formalities at your earliest convenience.
March 27th, 2022 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Sir, I am pleased to inform you that you are appointed to the position of Chief Propagandist in the East Section here at MI6 effective immediately.
Please contact Personnel to complete formalities at your earliest convenience.
March 27th, 2022 19:09
postcard home to mother russia
Neville said:
Ouch .......................no, actually double ouch ..................... N
March 27th, 2022 12:17
Neville said:
Ouch .......................no, actually double ouch ..................... N
March 27th, 2022 12:17
postcard home to mother russia
Christina8 said:
Sad, filled with emotion and the tragic outcomes of what Putin is doing. Thanks for sharing!
March 27th, 2022 10:23
Christina8 said:
Sad, filled with emotion and the tragic outcomes of what Putin is doing. Thanks for sharing!
March 27th, 2022 10:23
dark august days
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words about a wonderful place and great memories d a.
Andy
March 27th, 2022 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words about a wonderful place and great memories d a.
Andy
March 27th, 2022 00:48
i will comfort you
aburmeister said:
Very nice description of what a good friend can do💛🙏
March 26th, 2022 13:17
aburmeister said:
Very nice description of what a good friend can do💛🙏
March 26th, 2022 13:17
the long walk of hope
Simplyalice said:
Hi Dusk , woww the expressions are so vivid and descriptive.
March 26th, 2022 07:26
Simplyalice said:
Hi Dusk , woww the expressions are so vivid and descriptive.
March 26th, 2022 07:26
i will comfort you
Simplyalice said:
Very well written Beautiful...
Simple and so positive like you said earlier.
March 26th, 2022 07:22
Simplyalice said:
Very well written Beautiful...
Simple and so positive like you said earlier.
March 26th, 2022 07:22
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