Comments received on poems by dusk arising
how transient
Rozina said:
Inevitable. A war would be stopped by a massive flood, earthquake, fire, tsunami, typhoon, Mother Nature.
March 10th, 2022 21:13
Rozina said:
Inevitable. A war would be stopped by a massive flood, earthquake, fire, tsunami, typhoon, Mother Nature.
March 10th, 2022 21:13
how transient
Christina8 said:
Undoubtedly we will, just a question of when will we do it? Wonderful song, dusk, I have never heard it before. Stirring. A sad, poignant but great write!
March 10th, 2022 14:43
Christina8 said:
Undoubtedly we will, just a question of when will we do it? Wonderful song, dusk, I have never heard it before. Stirring. A sad, poignant but great write!
March 10th, 2022 14:43
how transient
Neville said:
its inevitable methinks & although one may say methinks too much .. I reckon we all do .......................... and you are write ............................... N
March 10th, 2022 13:59
Neville said:
its inevitable methinks & although one may say methinks too much .. I reckon we all do .......................... and you are write ............................... N
March 10th, 2022 13:59
how transient
sorenbarrett said:
I fully agree that man\'s arrogance will probably be his demise either through war or technology. Well written it clearly conveyed the thought.
March 10th, 2022 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
I fully agree that man\'s arrogance will probably be his demise either through war or technology. Well written it clearly conveyed the thought.
March 10th, 2022 13:38
the long walk of hope
Rocky Lagou said:
\"The job of a poet is to witness.\" Praying for better days!
March 10th, 2022 11:57
Rocky Lagou said:
\"The job of a poet is to witness.\" Praying for better days!
March 10th, 2022 11:57
how transient
Fay Slimm. said:
You poem the dire situation so well Dusk - -- we are the worst of custodians and we shall pay. - like the number you chose to put words and music to our sad position.
March 10th, 2022 11:26
Fay Slimm. said:
You poem the dire situation so well Dusk - -- we are the worst of custodians and we shall pay. - like the number you chose to put words and music to our sad position.
March 10th, 2022 11:26
the long walk of hope
Rozina said:
Watching this on news channels is so heartbreaking. Your words are so moving.
March 9th, 2022 04:43
Rozina said:
Watching this on news channels is so heartbreaking. Your words are so moving.
March 9th, 2022 04:43
the long walk of hope
spilleronsheet said:
A very emotive write dear Dusk
The many estranged and wrecked
The rampage of war
The cries of innocent
All came with each line
The darkest eras of humanity is on play
Don’t know when sunshine will greet again
March 9th, 2022 04:30
spilleronsheet said:
A very emotive write dear Dusk
The many estranged and wrecked
The rampage of war
The cries of innocent
All came with each line
The darkest eras of humanity is on play
Don’t know when sunshine will greet again
March 9th, 2022 04:30
the long walk of hope
Neville said:
Yes indeed, sadly, this is very good & very moving ..................... Neville
March 9th, 2022 03:10
Neville said:
Yes indeed, sadly, this is very good & very moving ..................... Neville
March 9th, 2022 03:10
horrible
Goldfinch60 said:
True words d a, there is certainly bugger all we can do about it.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
True words d a, there is certainly bugger all we can do about it.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:11
horrible
Rocky Lagou said:
The hard truth! There\'s honestly not too much that the world can do in this time to prevent this coup, but hope for the best. The sanctions will most likely backfire like you say but I mean, what other option do we have but WWIII. Very sad times.
March 8th, 2022 13:58
Rocky Lagou said:
The hard truth! There\'s honestly not too much that the world can do in this time to prevent this coup, but hope for the best. The sanctions will most likely backfire like you say but I mean, what other option do we have but WWIII. Very sad times.
March 8th, 2022 13:58
horrible
Neville said:
I beg to differ sir ... this is indeed poetry ............................. Neville
March 8th, 2022 13:16
Neville said:
I beg to differ sir ... this is indeed poetry ............................. Neville
March 8th, 2022 13:16
accolade
SureshG said:
More than just wishing you a HAPPY BIRTHDAY, may I wish you a full and speedy recovery, to enjoy to the fullest your hearts wishes.
March 8th, 2022 09:22
SureshG said:
More than just wishing you a HAPPY BIRTHDAY, may I wish you a full and speedy recovery, to enjoy to the fullest your hearts wishes.
March 8th, 2022 09:22
horrible
Doggerel Dave said:
But politicians and war machines of each and every country never learn, do they?
March 8th, 2022 07:01
Doggerel Dave said:
But politicians and war machines of each and every country never learn, do they?
March 8th, 2022 07:01
horrible
Rozina said:
Dreadful times. Sanctions will hit the people the most. An evil man.
March 8th, 2022 05:26
Rozina said:
Dreadful times. Sanctions will hit the people the most. An evil man.
March 8th, 2022 05:26
horrible
Caring dove said:
Yes , it’s horrible . Just reading those first few lines of yours made me want to cry . Why .. the cruelty .. there’s no need for it .. (( I believe there will be more peace in the future ..
March 8th, 2022 03:51
Caring dove said:
Yes , it’s horrible . Just reading those first few lines of yours made me want to cry . Why .. the cruelty .. there’s no need for it .. (( I believe there will be more peace in the future ..
March 8th, 2022 03:51
accolade
Goldfinch60 said:
So you youngster you have reached the new 40 in life where life begins again, I reached it just over three years ago.
Many happy returns d a may you life be filled with your dreams.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So you youngster you have reached the new 40 in life where life begins again, I reached it just over three years ago.
Many happy returns d a may you life be filled with your dreams.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 01:53
accolade
Rozina said:
Happy Birthday Dusk. Wishing you a lovely day and a great year ahead.
March 7th, 2022 22:20
Rozina said:
Happy Birthday Dusk. Wishing you a lovely day and a great year ahead.
March 7th, 2022 22:20
accolade
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh? Well then, Happy Birthday, dusk....................I hate to boast, but..........
March 7th, 2022 18:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh? Well then, Happy Birthday, dusk....................I hate to boast, but..........
March 7th, 2022 18:21
accolade
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dusk,
Today I wish you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY and many more to come!👏🎈🎊🎉 🧁💝 You are such an inspiration. I applaud you. Reading your poetry is infectious. It makes any of us appreciate each day we are gifted with…no matter our circumstances.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Reading your scripted words always gives me hope.
Laura🌻
March 7th, 2022 15:55
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dusk,
Today I wish you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY and many more to come!👏🎈🎊🎉 🧁💝 You are such an inspiration. I applaud you. Reading your poetry is infectious. It makes any of us appreciate each day we are gifted with…no matter our circumstances.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Reading your scripted words always gives me hope.
Laura🌻
March 7th, 2022 15:55
accolade
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! 70 years YOUNG! And much much many to go! What a delight it must be! Happy Birthday Dusk! 💖
March 7th, 2022 11:41
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! 70 years YOUNG! And much much many to go! What a delight it must be! Happy Birthday Dusk! 💖
March 7th, 2022 11:41
accolade
Christina8 said:
Happy Birthday dear Dusk!! I hope for many more for you! Wonderful write.
March 7th, 2022 09:48
Christina8 said:
Happy Birthday dear Dusk!! I hope for many more for you! Wonderful write.
March 7th, 2022 09:48
accolade
Neville said:
Happy Birthday Big Fella I shall raise my glass to you this very eve and wish you all the very best of all good things and seriously improved general health and circumstances in the coming years .........................Yours sincerely Neville ......................... :)
March 7th, 2022 09:21
Neville said:
Happy Birthday Big Fella I shall raise my glass to you this very eve and wish you all the very best of all good things and seriously improved general health and circumstances in the coming years .........................Yours sincerely Neville ......................... :)
March 7th, 2022 09:21
my muse went meowsy
Rocky Lagou said:
hehe! Nice one! I felt this as my muses are almost everyone! I\'m inspired by the world! Well done!
March 7th, 2022 09:20
Rocky Lagou said:
hehe! Nice one! I felt this as my muses are almost everyone! I\'m inspired by the world! Well done!
March 7th, 2022 09:20
accolade
Poetic Dan said:
What a pleasure and gift to say happy birthday you old git! I\'m sure brother is proud of how far you\'ve stuck with it! Here\'s to plenty more once you\'ve finished playing nurses.
Many happy returns again and thank for blowing that trumpet or sax lol
March 7th, 2022 09:06
Poetic Dan said:
What a pleasure and gift to say happy birthday you old git! I\'m sure brother is proud of how far you\'ve stuck with it! Here\'s to plenty more once you\'ve finished playing nurses.
Many happy returns again and thank for blowing that trumpet or sax lol
March 7th, 2022 09:06
accolade
L. B. Mek said:
Ha!
seems we\'re days apart, my fellow Pisces
I\'ll toast
to your zeal, for life
that trait, to look at bleak reality
head-on
and still, Choose to Fight!
how I laud, your bravery
in wording your poetry with Hope, whenever you can!
Here\'s to you, Dusk
and to the fortitude, of goodness
prevailing over ill-fate\'s circumstance
cheer\'s, I wish you a year full of painless breaths
and sunshine smiles, adorned by those you love
and of course
an endless, deluge of inspiration
to fuel, your insightful Poetry...
to your health! 🍻
March 7th, 2022 08:03
L. B. Mek said:
Ha!
seems we\'re days apart, my fellow Pisces
I\'ll toast
to your zeal, for life
that trait, to look at bleak reality
head-on
and still, Choose to Fight!
how I laud, your bravery
in wording your poetry with Hope, whenever you can!
Here\'s to you, Dusk
and to the fortitude, of goodness
prevailing over ill-fate\'s circumstance
cheer\'s, I wish you a year full of painless breaths
and sunshine smiles, adorned by those you love
and of course
an endless, deluge of inspiration
to fuel, your insightful Poetry...
to your health! 🍻
March 7th, 2022 08:03
accolade
Fay Slimm. said:
Let me be first then -- my dear dear Dusky - from me HAPPY BIRTHDAY and may this be the start of wonderful things ahead for both your van and yourself. - - huggles galore. x x x x
March 7th, 2022 06:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Let me be first then -- my dear dear Dusky - from me HAPPY BIRTHDAY and may this be the start of wonderful things ahead for both your van and yourself. - - huggles galore. x x x x
March 7th, 2022 06:55
my muse went meowsy
Fay Slimm. said:
Muses are inclined to disappear if not given our whole attention and yours seems a control freak as well - - give her the elbow Dusk and she at first may sulk and then come to her senses and use you again - at least that has been my experience with mine goes missing. Still smiling at your witty Muse-chat
March 6th, 2022 16:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Muses are inclined to disappear if not given our whole attention and yours seems a control freak as well - - give her the elbow Dusk and she at first may sulk and then come to her senses and use you again - at least that has been my experience with mine goes missing. Still smiling at your witty Muse-chat
March 6th, 2022 16:33
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