Comments received on poems by dusk arising
my muse went meowsy
SureshG said:
Old farts,
like me,
divorced by,
my muse,
she’s content,
to live apart.
light and much enjoyed
March 6th, 2022 13:33
SureshG said:
Old farts,
like me,
divorced by,
my muse,
she’s content,
to live apart.
light and much enjoyed
March 6th, 2022 13:33
my muse went meowsy
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it can happen sometimes d a but she normally calms down if I send her flowers.
https://youtu.be/I6ElRV_beuE
Andy
March 6th, 2022 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it can happen sometimes d a but she normally calms down if I send her flowers.
https://youtu.be/I6ElRV_beuE
Andy
March 6th, 2022 03:03
my muse went meowsy
Neville said:
.. Now that is wot we in the trade call a musing sir ...................... Neville :)
March 6th, 2022 02:55
Neville said:
.. Now that is wot we in the trade call a musing sir ...................... Neville :)
March 6th, 2022 02:55
my muse went meowsy
Michael Edwards said:
Always surprises me where the inspiration for a write comes from - must have a muse somewhere but I\'ve never given it much thought.
March 6th, 2022 02:43
Michael Edwards said:
Always surprises me where the inspiration for a write comes from - must have a muse somewhere but I\'ve never given it much thought.
March 6th, 2022 02:43
my muse went meowsy
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t avoid this one.
The end of line words .- are they special? some connection between them or something......?
A fun write dusk - hopefully lightens the moods here for a little while. Many thanks.
March 6th, 2022 00:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t avoid this one.
The end of line words .- are they special? some connection between them or something......?
A fun write dusk - hopefully lightens the moods here for a little while. Many thanks.
March 6th, 2022 00:50
the light we see we dont see
Michael Edwards said:
A stunning read - it\'s all been said already by others - nothing left to add.
March 4th, 2022 15:31
Michael Edwards said:
A stunning read - it\'s all been said already by others - nothing left to add.
March 4th, 2022 15:31
the light we see we dont see
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! I totally enjoyed the imagery and your persuasion! A message for all! 💖
March 4th, 2022 09:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! I totally enjoyed the imagery and your persuasion! A message for all! 💖
March 4th, 2022 09:42
the light we see we dont see
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich, gut tearing poetry, dusk.
March 4th, 2022 04:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich, gut tearing poetry, dusk.
March 4th, 2022 04:09
the light we see we dont see
Neville said:
... as a poet DA you have long had my respect .. now sir, you have even more of it ...
March 4th, 2022 04:00
Neville said:
... as a poet DA you have long had my respect .. now sir, you have even more of it ...
March 4th, 2022 04:00
the light we see we dont see
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a and the music suits it, strangely that music is being played on the radio while I write these words.
Andy
March 4th, 2022 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a and the music suits it, strangely that music is being played on the radio while I write these words.
Andy
March 4th, 2022 03:09
the light we see we dont see
Fay Slimm. said:
Superb - - top class writing dear D. -- this one should be read worldwide and by everyone --- - it is truly a masterpiece to read over and over.
March 4th, 2022 01:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Superb - - top class writing dear D. -- this one should be read worldwide and by everyone --- - it is truly a masterpiece to read over and over.
March 4th, 2022 01:58
я з тобою україно
Rozina said:
We are all as one with you and others from all around the world. A great write.
March 4th, 2022 00:24
Rozina said:
We are all as one with you and others from all around the world. A great write.
March 4th, 2022 00:24
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Doggerel Dave said:
Echoes of WW2. Avoidable until it is too late.
Thanks dusk.
March 3rd, 2022 21:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Echoes of WW2. Avoidable until it is too late.
Thanks dusk.
March 3rd, 2022 21:51
я з тобою україно
sorenbarrett said:
Dusk a wonderful title that I don\'t understand about a war that I don\'t understand. On the surface, yes, economics, past history, geographic location etc. But I really don\'t understand. Great write.
March 3rd, 2022 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Dusk a wonderful title that I don\'t understand about a war that I don\'t understand. On the surface, yes, economics, past history, geographic location etc. But I really don\'t understand. Great write.
March 3rd, 2022 11:40
я з тобою україно
Laura🌻 said:
DA,,
так ми з тобою Україно…
і я там, духовно, зі своїм дорогим другом, який так близько до небезпеки.
A touching and heartbreaking poem, dear Dusk. I hear my father’s voice speaking through your poem voicing his father’s experiences in WWII and his grandfather’s about WWI…where many of our relatives as others did not survive the bloodshed.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Laura🌻
March 3rd, 2022 10:46
Laura🌻 said:
DA,,
так ми з тобою Україно…
і я там, духовно, зі своїм дорогим другом, який так близько до небезпеки.
A touching and heartbreaking poem, dear Dusk. I hear my father’s voice speaking through your poem voicing his father’s experiences in WWII and his grandfather’s about WWI…where many of our relatives as others did not survive the bloodshed.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Laura🌻
March 3rd, 2022 10:46
я з тобою україно
Dove said:
Heartfelt sad write. God bless the people of Ukraine.
March 3rd, 2022 10:44
Dove said:
Heartfelt sad write. God bless the people of Ukraine.
March 3rd, 2022 10:44
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spilleronsheet said:
A tragic tale
I hope it could only be a tale
Often imaginative poetry may move the mind
But a recount is heavy
Too heavy where tears won’t dry
A very emotional read dear dusk
I wish it could stop
Can nature not control it
March 3rd, 2022 10:35
spilleronsheet said:
A tragic tale
I hope it could only be a tale
Often imaginative poetry may move the mind
But a recount is heavy
Too heavy where tears won’t dry
A very emotional read dear dusk
I wish it could stop
Can nature not control it
March 3rd, 2022 10:35
я з тобою україно
Caring dove said:
One of the reasons I avoid the news .. most of the time .. it’s too upsetting . Why such cruelty .. in this world .. il never understand 😞😞
March 3rd, 2022 10:22
Caring dove said:
One of the reasons I avoid the news .. most of the time .. it’s too upsetting . Why such cruelty .. in this world .. il never understand 😞😞
March 3rd, 2022 10:22
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Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem and the war is a universal feeling. We\'re all weeping with the sufferers and I hope that change will commence! This is unfair and cruel. 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:00
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem and the war is a universal feeling. We\'re all weeping with the sufferers and I hope that change will commence! This is unfair and cruel. 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:00
careless dusting
Laura🌻 said:
da,
Ahh…memories…lovely memories.
‘So it\'s the laughter
We will remember
Whenever we remember
The way we were
The way we were’
One of my favorite songs. It brings back a time of happiness that’s worth remembering, especially during these difficult times.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 2nd, 2022 15:27
Laura🌻 said:
da,
Ahh…memories…lovely memories.
‘So it\'s the laughter
We will remember
Whenever we remember
The way we were
The way we were’
One of my favorite songs. It brings back a time of happiness that’s worth remembering, especially during these difficult times.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
March 2nd, 2022 15:27
careless dusting
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Careless dusting by dusk arising,..it has a nice ring to it. It sounds like a nice introduction as you approach the stage for a poetry reading.🌞✌️🕊
March 2nd, 2022 14:07
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Careless dusting by dusk arising,..it has a nice ring to it. It sounds like a nice introduction as you approach the stage for a poetry reading.🌞✌️🕊
March 2nd, 2022 14:07
careless dusting
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Beautiful memories of a beautiful time. Beautifully written.🌞🕊😀
March 2nd, 2022 14:02
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Beautiful memories of a beautiful time. Beautifully written.🌞🕊😀
March 2nd, 2022 14:02
careless dusting
Tj Struska said:
I am sorry to hear about your cancer. I would never make light about such a terr affliction. Cancer took my Mom at 59. Pray, write and laugh. By the way, your poem of window shopping was winsome and tender. Yours, Tj Struska
March 2nd, 2022 12:52
Tj Struska said:
I am sorry to hear about your cancer. I would never make light about such a terr affliction. Cancer took my Mom at 59. Pray, write and laugh. By the way, your poem of window shopping was winsome and tender. Yours, Tj Struska
March 2nd, 2022 12:52
careless dusting
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes so lovely! Hope and the dreams of Tomorrow! Future awaits and holds great treasures! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 10:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes so lovely! Hope and the dreams of Tomorrow! Future awaits and holds great treasures! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 10:24
careless dusting
Rozina said:
Such a lovely memory. I enjoyed looking into shop windows with some wonderful displays.
March 2nd, 2022 09:20
Rozina said:
Such a lovely memory. I enjoyed looking into shop windows with some wonderful displays.
March 2nd, 2022 09:20
careless dusting
Neville said:
.. even as we approach our newest spring, not a single word here feels out of place ......................... Neville
March 2nd, 2022 09:04
Neville said:
.. even as we approach our newest spring, not a single word here feels out of place ......................... Neville
March 2nd, 2022 09:04
careless dusting
Fay Slimm. said:
very moving walk down memory lane dear friend
March 2nd, 2022 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
very moving walk down memory lane dear friend
March 2nd, 2022 03:32
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