Comments received on poems by dusk arising
relax
L. B. Mek said:
An important and timely message, Dusk
thanks for sharing..
(such a hard thing, to do
because first
we\'ve all, got to find that \'yourself\'
since
we\'re so used to that other: \'self\'
we\'ve spent our lives, projecting
to the world...)
February 4th, 2022 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
An important and timely message, Dusk
thanks for sharing..
(such a hard thing, to do
because first
we\'ve all, got to find that \'yourself\'
since
we\'re so used to that other: \'self\'
we\'ve spent our lives, projecting
to the world...)
February 4th, 2022 06:18
relax
spilleronsheet said:
The five letter word so essential “relax”
It’s been long since someone said so, burdened by duties and ambitions
When was the last the dreams allowed to sleep peacefully
Well penned dear dusk
February 4th, 2022 03:50
spilleronsheet said:
The five letter word so essential “relax”
It’s been long since someone said so, burdened by duties and ambitions
When was the last the dreams allowed to sleep peacefully
Well penned dear dusk
February 4th, 2022 03:50
relax
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s so nice when we can comfortably be ourselves . A nice writing dusk )
February 4th, 2022 02:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s so nice when we can comfortably be ourselves . A nice writing dusk )
February 4th, 2022 02:59
peace
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, may that light of peace be forever with you.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, may that light of peace be forever with you.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:53
Gedling memories
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to this one dusk, given my interest in railways. A piece loaded with images and evocative detail.
In the case of Beeching, who did the dirty work, I suppose the old adage \'It\'s an ill wind...\' is applicable as all those closures did provide great walking tracks for those so inclined.
Enjoyabe read - many thanks.
February 3rd, 2022 16:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to this one dusk, given my interest in railways. A piece loaded with images and evocative detail.
In the case of Beeching, who did the dirty work, I suppose the old adage \'It\'s an ill wind...\' is applicable as all those closures did provide great walking tracks for those so inclined.
Enjoyabe read - many thanks.
February 3rd, 2022 16:42
peace
spilleronsheet said:
And that’s the dream that heart aspires for
That’s the fantasy that mind paints
What a beautiful poetry
Giving me positive vibes dear dusk
Thanks for the beautiful lines
February 3rd, 2022 14:22
spilleronsheet said:
And that’s the dream that heart aspires for
That’s the fantasy that mind paints
What a beautiful poetry
Giving me positive vibes dear dusk
Thanks for the beautiful lines
February 3rd, 2022 14:22
peace
ForeverJesus7 said:
I am truely glad that you found this peace.
... and a peace that surpasses all understanding will guard your heart.
Persistence is key
February 3rd, 2022 13:24
ForeverJesus7 said:
I am truely glad that you found this peace.
... and a peace that surpasses all understanding will guard your heart.
Persistence is key
February 3rd, 2022 13:24
peace
Fay Slimm. said:
Step by step your lines lead to peace and love - a beautiful place to be my dear friend and thank you for sharing it.
February 3rd, 2022 13:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Step by step your lines lead to peace and love - a beautiful place to be my dear friend and thank you for sharing it.
February 3rd, 2022 13:17
gardens of hell
AuburnScribbler said:
A powerful and insightful stanza here dusk arising, splendidly written.
I really do hope that a paradise can be found, after wading through those sinister gardens.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:52
AuburnScribbler said:
A powerful and insightful stanza here dusk arising, splendidly written.
I really do hope that a paradise can be found, after wading through those sinister gardens.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 3rd, 2022 12:52
peace
Crowns4Christ said:
I love this one dusk, it\'s unlike anything I\'ve read from you before.great job my friend,I pray you continue have this peace you have found
February 3rd, 2022 12:42
Crowns4Christ said:
I love this one dusk, it\'s unlike anything I\'ve read from you before.great job my friend,I pray you continue have this peace you have found
February 3rd, 2022 12:42
peace
Paul Bell said:
This is pure contentment, and that\'s a good place to be. Also, very comforting, and that\'s not bad either.
February 3rd, 2022 09:44
Paul Bell said:
This is pure contentment, and that\'s a good place to be. Also, very comforting, and that\'s not bad either.
February 3rd, 2022 09:44
peace
L. B. Mek said:
you\'ve just put words
to what, all
my accumulated dreams
amount to..
(what a wonderfully, realisable
utopia
you paint, for us to strive towards)
thank you! dear Poet
February 3rd, 2022 08:10
L. B. Mek said:
you\'ve just put words
to what, all
my accumulated dreams
amount to..
(what a wonderfully, realisable
utopia
you paint, for us to strive towards)
thank you! dear Poet
February 3rd, 2022 08:10
Gedling memories
Michael Edwards said:
I pictured this as I read it through - I was there - well i was once a long time ago.
February 2nd, 2022 15:35
Michael Edwards said:
I pictured this as I read it through - I was there - well i was once a long time ago.
February 2nd, 2022 15:35
Gedling memories
spilleronsheet said:
Railways means a lot to me to….where one can reach anywhere in minutes via a flight…railways signify journey to me
February 2nd, 2022 12:11
spilleronsheet said:
Railways means a lot to me to….where one can reach anywhere in minutes via a flight…railways signify journey to me
February 2nd, 2022 12:11
Gedling memories
Rozina said:
I enjoyed this poem, the pictures I can see from your lines. A wonderful memory.
February 2nd, 2022 08:32
Rozina said:
I enjoyed this poem, the pictures I can see from your lines. A wonderful memory.
February 2nd, 2022 08:32
Gedling memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a and such wonderful memories of times passed.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 06:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a and such wonderful memories of times passed.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 06:46
Gedling memories
Neville said:
How I long for those glorious days, when steam ruled the rails, roads and waves ................................. N
February 2nd, 2022 04:35
Neville said:
How I long for those glorious days, when steam ruled the rails, roads and waves ................................. N
February 2nd, 2022 04:35
gardens of hell
spilleronsheet said:
That wisdom helped you write such wonderful lines
Telling us about different experiences of life
Since angels live in heaven
Your like an angel bestowed on earth to write beautiful poetries
January 28th, 2022 03:48
spilleronsheet said:
That wisdom helped you write such wonderful lines
Telling us about different experiences of life
Since angels live in heaven
Your like an angel bestowed on earth to write beautiful poetries
January 28th, 2022 03:48
the hazey dreams of Janice
Neville said:
this is quite simply brill mate & no kiddin .. N
January 27th, 2022 09:13
Neville said:
this is quite simply brill mate & no kiddin .. N
January 27th, 2022 09:13
gardens of hell
Paul Bell said:
I myself being a Bastian of society have already had a nod from the big man. Though, for some reason, he\'s still nodding.
January 27th, 2022 08:08
Paul Bell said:
I myself being a Bastian of society have already had a nod from the big man. Though, for some reason, he\'s still nodding.
January 27th, 2022 08:08
gardens of hell
Rozina said:
Challenges of life to overcome to get to peace and serenity. Meaningful indeed.
January 26th, 2022 08:43
Rozina said:
Challenges of life to overcome to get to peace and serenity. Meaningful indeed.
January 26th, 2022 08:43
gardens of hell
Neville said:
that very same principle applies to me mate .. and a whole load of other folk too I imagine ............ a seriously good & thought provoking little masterpiece on offer today DA ................................ Neville
January 26th, 2022 04:34
Neville said:
that very same principle applies to me mate .. and a whole load of other folk too I imagine ............ a seriously good & thought provoking little masterpiece on offer today DA ................................ Neville
January 26th, 2022 04:34
gardens of hell
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure those gardens will let you through to the heaven in your life d a.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 03:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure those gardens will let you through to the heaven in your life d a.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 03:22
the hazey dreams of Janice
Doggerel Dave said:
Romantically tragic, dusk.
Much entertaining informative value in your responses to commentary also.
January 24th, 2022 20:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Romantically tragic, dusk.
Much entertaining informative value in your responses to commentary also.
January 24th, 2022 20:34
the hazey dreams of Janice
Paul Bell said:
This is so raw, and the image stark.
Yet the summer still beholds, Janice, and that leaves a smile for the broken-hearted.
January 24th, 2022 11:58
Paul Bell said:
This is so raw, and the image stark.
Yet the summer still beholds, Janice, and that leaves a smile for the broken-hearted.
January 24th, 2022 11:58
the hazey dreams of Janice
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Halls of otherness,within the depths of beyond and now the hazy dreams of Janice,..I think you should call the fire department,it appears your muse is on fire😉✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 11:02
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Halls of otherness,within the depths of beyond and now the hazy dreams of Janice,..I think you should call the fire department,it appears your muse is on fire😉✌️🕊
January 24th, 2022 11:02
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