Comments received on poems by dusk arising
halls of otherness
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - you excel yourself again with this little gem Dusk - - a dream of a read and now in my faves.
January 19th, 2022 12:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - you excel yourself again with this little gem Dusk - - a dream of a read and now in my faves.
January 19th, 2022 12:22
halls of otherness
Neville said:
the little gasp I just set free had nothing to do with envy .. honest ......... maybe ..................... N
January 19th, 2022 11:51
Neville said:
the little gasp I just set free had nothing to do with envy .. honest ......... maybe ..................... N
January 19th, 2022 11:51
halls of otherness
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , dusk )) love your poem 🙂🙂
January 19th, 2022 11:39
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , dusk )) love your poem 🙂🙂
January 19th, 2022 11:39
sands fell slow
Fay Slimm. said:
Late in the day age-wise brings its own music of promise and you spelled it out so very well here in these few gentle lines my dear friend.
January 18th, 2022 17:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Late in the day age-wise brings its own music of promise and you spelled it out so very well here in these few gentle lines my dear friend.
January 18th, 2022 17:01
sands fell slow
GypsyLady said:
Such a sweetly poignant brevity! so beautifully touching, deep emotion expressed in so few words...
January 18th, 2022 11:57
GypsyLady said:
Such a sweetly poignant brevity! so beautifully touching, deep emotion expressed in so few words...
January 18th, 2022 11:57
sands fell slow
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a sadness to this poem, like the final record playing at the end of life. Also, nice in a way, we all want to go that way.
January 18th, 2022 10:11
Paul Bell said:
There\'s a sadness to this poem, like the final record playing at the end of life. Also, nice in a way, we all want to go that way.
January 18th, 2022 10:11
sands fell slow
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Sounds like it\'s about 2 lifelong soul mates late in their years who\'ve excepted their lives are coming to a close. Just as the faced life together,they face death together Not sure if I\'m right or not,but that\'s what I see in your words here.
January 18th, 2022 09:01
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Sounds like it\'s about 2 lifelong soul mates late in their years who\'ve excepted their lives are coming to a close. Just as the faced life together,they face death together Not sure if I\'m right or not,but that\'s what I see in your words here.
January 18th, 2022 09:01
sands fell slow
spilleronsheet said:
So many shades you painted
Shading and shining in life
Thanks dear poet for such beautiful lines
January 18th, 2022 08:37
spilleronsheet said:
So many shades you painted
Shading and shining in life
Thanks dear poet for such beautiful lines
January 18th, 2022 08:37
sands fell slow
L. B. Mek said:
love those first two lines
just another of your succinctly penned shorty\'s, Dusk
thank you, wise Poet
January 18th, 2022 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
love those first two lines
just another of your succinctly penned shorty\'s, Dusk
thank you, wise Poet
January 18th, 2022 07:00
sands fell slow
Caring dove said:
So few words but so truly beautiful . Love this ))
January 18th, 2022 04:57
Caring dove said:
So few words but so truly beautiful . Love this ))
January 18th, 2022 04:57
for living
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope becomes reality when living for another day is within us.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That hope becomes reality when living for another day is within us.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 02:44
for living
Rozina said:
Hope for a better morning, hope for a better week, hope to see my overseas daughter soon, hope I can write better poems! Always hopeful. Let us all keep on hoping. Thank you for this.
January 17th, 2022 22:43
Rozina said:
Hope for a better morning, hope for a better week, hope to see my overseas daughter soon, hope I can write better poems! Always hopeful. Let us all keep on hoping. Thank you for this.
January 17th, 2022 22:43
for living
Poetic Dan said:
Yes and yet you turn the corner one day and find out why, got to carry on until the end.
Thanks for sharing
January 17th, 2022 14:03
Poetic Dan said:
Yes and yet you turn the corner one day and find out why, got to carry on until the end.
Thanks for sharing
January 17th, 2022 14:03
for living
Fay Slimm. said:
I know how this feels Dusk and yet we must keep going despite life\'s tough side which derides our efforts.
January 17th, 2022 13:45
Fay Slimm. said:
I know how this feels Dusk and yet we must keep going despite life\'s tough side which derides our efforts.
January 17th, 2022 13:45
for living
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you have to see the funny side of life. We spend that much time worrying about life, we forget through time what the worry was.
January 17th, 2022 11:39
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you have to see the funny side of life. We spend that much time worrying about life, we forget through time what the worry was.
January 17th, 2022 11:39
for living
Neville said:
my guess is that you have just poemed something that most, if not all will relate to at one time or other .. I know I do, did and am likely to again .. Neville
January 17th, 2022 11:08
Neville said:
my guess is that you have just poemed something that most, if not all will relate to at one time or other .. I know I do, did and am likely to again .. Neville
January 17th, 2022 11:08
for living
spilleronsheet said:
And I could relate to those lines
Penned were emotions that cling to the heart
Hope
Something it was
But what were they ?
And those perfect ending lines
“ but again somehow
you live in hope
of some vague happiness
someplace out there
where life
is for living‘“
January 17th, 2022 11:01
spilleronsheet said:
And I could relate to those lines
Penned were emotions that cling to the heart
Hope
Something it was
But what were they ?
And those perfect ending lines
“ but again somehow
you live in hope
of some vague happiness
someplace out there
where life
is for living‘“
January 17th, 2022 11:01
for living
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
It doesn\'t relate to your life? Well it sure does to mine,..my milestone birthday is closing in on me,the big five O,..it\'s had me thinking lately😀Lol Nice,it\'s relatable,reflective and funny 🌟🌟🌟
January 17th, 2022 10:57
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
It doesn\'t relate to your life? Well it sure does to mine,..my milestone birthday is closing in on me,the big five O,..it\'s had me thinking lately😀Lol Nice,it\'s relatable,reflective and funny 🌟🌟🌟
January 17th, 2022 10:57
for living
L. B. Mek said:
\'and hope is not
just believing
in those twisted knot\'s
of life\'s
sans of naught..\'
a relatable shorty, Dusk
thanks for sharing
January 17th, 2022 09:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'and hope is not
just believing
in those twisted knot\'s
of life\'s
sans of naught..\'
a relatable shorty, Dusk
thanks for sharing
January 17th, 2022 09:02
darkened the daylight from my smile
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'spilled milk\' is in the past, leave it there and move on into a drier future, it is there for us all.
Andy
January 15th, 2022 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'spilled milk\' is in the past, leave it there and move on into a drier future, it is there for us all.
Andy
January 15th, 2022 01:22
darkened the daylight from my smile
Rozina said:
Beautiful. So few lines with so much meaning.
January 14th, 2022 22:02
Rozina said:
Beautiful. So few lines with so much meaning.
January 14th, 2022 22:02
darkened the daylight from my smile
Poetic Dan said:
Just another..... that sings to us all of not maybe they haven\'t lived yet!
January 14th, 2022 11:43
Poetic Dan said:
Just another..... that sings to us all of not maybe they haven\'t lived yet!
January 14th, 2022 11:43
darkened the daylight from my smile
spilleronsheet said:
Deep insight
And such hard breaking lines
A deep iceberg
Epic sir
January 14th, 2022 07:35
spilleronsheet said:
Deep insight
And such hard breaking lines
A deep iceberg
Epic sir
January 14th, 2022 07:35
darkened the daylight from my smile
L. B. Mek said:
your title, alone
is better
than most haiku\'s
and other cropped, poems
I\'ve read in my life, Dusk..
\'darkened the daylight
from my smile, so now go on
say, I told you so\'
January 14th, 2022 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
your title, alone
is better
than most haiku\'s
and other cropped, poems
I\'ve read in my life, Dusk..
\'darkened the daylight
from my smile, so now go on
say, I told you so\'
January 14th, 2022 07:20
darkened the daylight from my smile
woundedheart said:
In hindsight or with foresight so many things we would change or never do as love is a very bumpy road, great poem friend ☺
January 14th, 2022 05:14
woundedheart said:
In hindsight or with foresight so many things we would change or never do as love is a very bumpy road, great poem friend ☺
January 14th, 2022 05:14
remembering lockdowntown
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a sad reminder but why is it called a lockdown. When your movements are constricted as in prison it\'s called a lock-up.
January 12th, 2022 08:38
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a sad reminder but why is it called a lockdown. When your movements are constricted as in prison it\'s called a lock-up.
January 12th, 2022 08:38
remembering lockdowntown
Paul Bell said:
I remember it hit home when 25 died in an old folk\'s home. The public did their part. Sadly, as we know now, the so-called elite just partied and laughed at us.
January 12th, 2022 06:32
Paul Bell said:
I remember it hit home when 25 died in an old folk\'s home. The public did their part. Sadly, as we know now, the so-called elite just partied and laughed at us.
January 12th, 2022 06:32
remembering lockdowntown
orchidee said:
Some of it may be of choice - people not travelling to and from workplaces, if they don\'t have to. The strain of getting there and back, if commuting.
But for some, who before lockdown, said \'I\'m working from home today\', we might reply \'Oh yeah? pull the other one\'.
January 12th, 2022 06:10
orchidee said:
Some of it may be of choice - people not travelling to and from workplaces, if they don\'t have to. The strain of getting there and back, if commuting.
But for some, who before lockdown, said \'I\'m working from home today\', we might reply \'Oh yeah? pull the other one\'.
January 12th, 2022 06:10
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