Comments received on poems by dusk arising
within the depths of beyond
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful imagery
Looking beyond those lines
Giving the depth of challenges borne in life
January 24th, 2022 09:44
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful imagery
Looking beyond those lines
Giving the depth of challenges borne in life
January 24th, 2022 09:44
the hazey dreams of Janice
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a sad picture - so evocative.
January 24th, 2022 09:11
Michael Edwards said:
Paints a sad picture - so evocative.
January 24th, 2022 09:11
the hazey dreams of Janice
L. B. Mek said:
love the tempo
that subtle ebb n flow
where your words
emulate
your sighs and exhales of heavy, impassioned breath
while inking, these seemingly therapeutic words
(or at least in my imagination)
a great read, dear Poet
really enjoyed, taking my time
to savour the unfolding of each line
to find the right reading pace
and squeeze out
the very most out of such a cathartic, reading experience
January 24th, 2022 07:33
L. B. Mek said:
love the tempo
that subtle ebb n flow
where your words
emulate
your sighs and exhales of heavy, impassioned breath
while inking, these seemingly therapeutic words
(or at least in my imagination)
a great read, dear Poet
really enjoyed, taking my time
to savour the unfolding of each line
to find the right reading pace
and squeeze out
the very most out of such a cathartic, reading experience
January 24th, 2022 07:33
the hazey dreams of Janice
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words d a.
Andy
January 24th, 2022 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive words d a.
Andy
January 24th, 2022 02:00
within the depths of beyond
Paul Bell said:
Reflection is a fishing rod and a nonchalant mood. It\'s like mother nature carved a seat from the mountain, and you were told to sit on it.
January 23rd, 2022 08:22
Paul Bell said:
Reflection is a fishing rod and a nonchalant mood. It\'s like mother nature carved a seat from the mountain, and you were told to sit on it.
January 23rd, 2022 08:22
within the depths of beyond
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant writing again my friend, - -- must have this one in my list for its fantastic imagery.
January 22nd, 2022 14:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant writing again my friend, - -- must have this one in my list for its fantastic imagery.
January 22nd, 2022 14:42
within the depths of beyond
Michael Edwards said:
A tapestry of dreams - great imagery.
January 22nd, 2022 04:19
Michael Edwards said:
A tapestry of dreams - great imagery.
January 22nd, 2022 04:19
within the depths of beyond
Poetic Dan said:
You been on my beach.... Next time a cuppa please!
Loved this
January 22nd, 2022 03:24
Poetic Dan said:
You been on my beach.... Next time a cuppa please!
Loved this
January 22nd, 2022 03:24
within the depths of beyond
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love your choice of words , in this poem , dusk 🙂
January 22nd, 2022 02:19
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love your choice of words , in this poem , dusk 🙂
January 22nd, 2022 02:19
within the depths of beyond
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, we both know we are in that place.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, we both know we are in that place.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:58
within the depths of beyond
jarcher54 said:
Heart-stopping images. Beautifully composed. Don\'t jump in just yet!
January 22nd, 2022 01:13
jarcher54 said:
Heart-stopping images. Beautifully composed. Don\'t jump in just yet!
January 22nd, 2022 01:13
emotionless?
sorenbarrett said:
don\'t despair, all is fair. As long as your poems come from your heart. Don\'t dare your poems to compare
each one is a new start.
I liked the message you had
January 21st, 2022 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
don\'t despair, all is fair. As long as your poems come from your heart. Don\'t dare your poems to compare
each one is a new start.
I liked the message you had
January 21st, 2022 19:22
dimes of joy
spilleronsheet said:
Jewel adorned words
Told a tale
The tale of broken hearts
Mended up in a juke box
Wounded by dimes that lay
Very beautiful but heart wrenching poetry dear dusk
January 21st, 2022 17:38
spilleronsheet said:
Jewel adorned words
Told a tale
The tale of broken hearts
Mended up in a juke box
Wounded by dimes that lay
Very beautiful but heart wrenching poetry dear dusk
January 21st, 2022 17:38
dimes of joy
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
your arrowed words
took a scalpel, to my dense callouses
and helped me shed, a few layers
of repressed, hurt..
and for that, I can\'t thank you enough, Great Poet!
January 21st, 2022 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
your arrowed words
took a scalpel, to my dense callouses
and helped me shed, a few layers
of repressed, hurt..
and for that, I can\'t thank you enough, Great Poet!
January 21st, 2022 06:06
dimes of joy
Neville said:
as far as poetry is concerned DA .. you are on a flippin roll these last few days or so ................. mighty ink n true say\'s I .................... Neville :)
January 21st, 2022 04:27
Neville said:
as far as poetry is concerned DA .. you are on a flippin roll these last few days or so ................. mighty ink n true say\'s I .................... Neville :)
January 21st, 2022 04:27
bird of love
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Such a talent you have dusk,..so few words,..so much feeling😊
January 20th, 2022 16:12
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Such a talent you have dusk,..so few words,..so much feeling😊
January 20th, 2022 16:12
bird of love
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, Dusk
those first 9 words had a somewhat, magical
effect on me
as-if a resounding sense of calmness
just seeped-in, to soothe
my callouses and aches of life
January 20th, 2022 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, Dusk
those first 9 words had a somewhat, magical
effect on me
as-if a resounding sense of calmness
just seeped-in, to soothe
my callouses and aches of life
January 20th, 2022 05:57
bird of love
spilleronsheet said:
I am now a fan of these short lines
I wish those birds to fly inside
Very good one dear Dusk
January 20th, 2022 04:07
spilleronsheet said:
I am now a fan of these short lines
I wish those birds to fly inside
Very good one dear Dusk
January 20th, 2022 04:07
bird of love
Fay Slimm. said:
Such imagery will leap into every heart as its message drives home dear Dusk -- a further example of your talent with words - - keep that peaceful and healing song flowing my friend. Great read.
January 20th, 2022 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Such imagery will leap into every heart as its message drives home dear Dusk -- a further example of your talent with words - - keep that peaceful and healing song flowing my friend. Great read.
January 20th, 2022 03:28
bird of love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem , dusk )) lovely words 🙂
January 20th, 2022 02:17
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem , dusk )) lovely words 🙂
January 20th, 2022 02:17
halls of otherness
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
WOW dusk! The sunlight caught in the pearl lustre of a seashells secret. That\'s striking ⚡️ Um? Otherness? Other path ways?😳
January 19th, 2022 22:31
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
WOW dusk! The sunlight caught in the pearl lustre of a seashells secret. That\'s striking ⚡️ Um? Otherness? Other path ways?😳
January 19th, 2022 22:31
halls of otherness
spilleronsheet said:
Wonder who the lady was
Who would fall for these gilded lines
Such beauty in these lines of poetry
Speechless I am
January 19th, 2022 13:35
spilleronsheet said:
Wonder who the lady was
Who would fall for these gilded lines
Such beauty in these lines of poetry
Speechless I am
January 19th, 2022 13:35
halls of otherness
sorenbarrett said:
The words captivated me and ring like an echo over and over. I loved it
January 19th, 2022 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
The words captivated me and ring like an echo over and over. I loved it
January 19th, 2022 13:11
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