Comments received on poems by dusk arising
still warm sands (rewrite)
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again - a super write.
July 26th, 2020 02:06
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve done it again - a super write.
July 26th, 2020 02:06
still warm sands (rewrite)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Memories are made of thoughts & memories
Such as these ! Cherish & ponder them - You
Will never ever forget them - never ever !
God Morning DA - Angela here. Thnaks for a very lovely nostalgic Love Poem. An ideal Ode for a lazy hazy Sunday Morning enjoying a *Full English* on the Patio with Brian & Smokey. Hes waiting for Me to drop a bit of Soss on purpose - Smokey that is not Brian !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
July 26th, 2020 01:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Memories are made of thoughts & memories
Such as these ! Cherish & ponder them - You
Will never ever forget them - never ever !
God Morning DA - Angela here. Thnaks for a very lovely nostalgic Love Poem. An ideal Ode for a lazy hazy Sunday Morning enjoying a *Full English* on the Patio with Brian & Smokey. Hes waiting for Me to drop a bit of Soss on purpose - Smokey that is not Brian !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
July 26th, 2020 01:35
moment of release
Goldfinch60 said:
That release freed you to a wonderful life.
Andy
July 26th, 2020 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That release freed you to a wonderful life.
Andy
July 26th, 2020 00:36
it rained
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sunnier times are always with us.
I think I may have heard that song before somewhere. If I had a quid for every time I have heard that song I think I could buy an island somewhere.
I obviously have the album by Miles (I think I have all his albums) but yesterday I heard it sung and played by Andrea Motis https://youtu.be/UxIPVAPRBi4
Andy
July 26th, 2020 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sunnier times are always with us.
I think I may have heard that song before somewhere. If I had a quid for every time I have heard that song I think I could buy an island somewhere.
I obviously have the album by Miles (I think I have all his albums) but yesterday I heard it sung and played by Andrea Motis https://youtu.be/UxIPVAPRBi4
Andy
July 26th, 2020 00:29
moment of release
Michael Edwards said:
When I saw the title I thought this was a follow-up to my earlier posting. A little gem.
July 25th, 2020 13:14
Michael Edwards said:
When I saw the title I thought this was a follow-up to my earlier posting. A little gem.
July 25th, 2020 13:14
it rained
Michael Edwards said:
I just love your work dusk. You write some great pieces and this is no exception.
July 24th, 2020 13:01
Michael Edwards said:
I just love your work dusk. You write some great pieces and this is no exception.
July 24th, 2020 13:01
it rained
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. Will we need brollies, or is that \'improper rain\' of drizzle?
July 24th, 2020 10:21
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. Will we need brollies, or is that \'improper rain\' of drizzle?
July 24th, 2020 10:21
of Elspenore part4
Goldfinch60 said:
Reading your words and listening to the pipes took me way back in time to be in those times.
Andy
July 23rd, 2020 23:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Reading your words and listening to the pipes took me way back in time to be in those times.
Andy
July 23rd, 2020 23:51
of Elspenore part4
Suresh said:
while reading these poetic verses, one gets transported to times past, as if in virtual reality experiencing the events unfolding.
I so enjoyed this.
July 23rd, 2020 09:32
Suresh said:
while reading these poetic verses, one gets transported to times past, as if in virtual reality experiencing the events unfolding.
I so enjoyed this.
July 23rd, 2020 09:32
of Elspenore part4
L. B. Mek said:
made me look for parts 1 to 3, what pages are they on in your published poems folder? (might be an idea to include info, so we can enjoy reading your work as a whole)
wonderfully rhythmic and immersive
July 23rd, 2020 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
made me look for parts 1 to 3, what pages are they on in your published poems folder? (might be an idea to include info, so we can enjoy reading your work as a whole)
wonderfully rhythmic and immersive
July 23rd, 2020 04:38
walk away
MendedFences27 said:
They say
Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home can be a lonely place without any love.. Yet, self-preservation is a natural instinct. And the battle goes on
A fine but sad write. - Phil A..
July 22nd, 2020 11:45
MendedFences27 said:
They say
Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home can be a lonely place without any love.. Yet, self-preservation is a natural instinct. And the battle goes on
A fine but sad write. - Phil A..
July 22nd, 2020 11:45
walk away
TWENTY3 said:
dont walk too far as youll fall off the edge of the world. Great poetry. Favourite poem of my day.
July 22nd, 2020 05:14
TWENTY3 said:
dont walk too far as youll fall off the edge of the world. Great poetry. Favourite poem of my day.
July 22nd, 2020 05:14
walk away
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling write on self-preservation D.A. - - such a scent of sadness to the whole read.
July 22nd, 2020 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling write on self-preservation D.A. - - such a scent of sadness to the whole read.
July 22nd, 2020 03:31
In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sad read and showing how the planet and occupants may be in that year is described with the pathos the subject deserves.
July 22nd, 2020 02:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sad read and showing how the planet and occupants may be in that year is described with the pathos the subject deserves.
July 22nd, 2020 02:09
walk away
orchidee said:
I know you walked away from my singing, but there\'s no need to rub it in, by reminding me in this (fine) poem! lol.
July 22nd, 2020 01:49
orchidee said:
I know you walked away from my singing, but there\'s no need to rub it in, by reminding me in this (fine) poem! lol.
July 22nd, 2020 01:49
walk away
Goldfinch60 said:
Simple but emotive words d a.
Andy
Know the tune well.
July 22nd, 2020 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Simple but emotive words d a.
Andy
Know the tune well.
July 22nd, 2020 01:18
In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good message d a, and unfortunately those in power who could stop it happening don\'t care.
Love the music, great take on the original Stravinsky suite.
Andy
July 22nd, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good message d a, and unfortunately those in power who could stop it happening don\'t care.
Love the music, great take on the original Stravinsky suite.
Andy
July 22nd, 2020 00:13
In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance
Poetic Dan said:
Lol that\'s an interesting night read for me, I shall dream of all that is yet to be as no nuke will set us free!
Great stuff..
July 21st, 2020 16:10
Poetic Dan said:
Lol that\'s an interesting night read for me, I shall dream of all that is yet to be as no nuke will set us free!
Great stuff..
July 21st, 2020 16:10
In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance
Michael Edwards said:
A glimpse into the future and it doesn\'t look good - there\'s only one thing worse than ignorance - it\'s called burying your head in the sand. A fine write dusk.
July 21st, 2020 12:49
Michael Edwards said:
A glimpse into the future and it doesn\'t look good - there\'s only one thing worse than ignorance - it\'s called burying your head in the sand. A fine write dusk.
July 21st, 2020 12:49
In the year twenty four hundred and ignorance
Bragee said:
Ignorance brings about the death of many blessings.
Good writing!
July 21st, 2020 11:41
Bragee said:
Ignorance brings about the death of many blessings.
Good writing!
July 21st, 2020 11:41
an interesting day
L. B. Mek said:
great example of structure complimenting delivery,
cascading glimpses at a stream of consciousness: revealing and witty,
brilliant write
July 20th, 2020 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
great example of structure complimenting delivery,
cascading glimpses at a stream of consciousness: revealing and witty,
brilliant write
July 20th, 2020 05:57
an interesting day
Fay Slimm. said:
A tale to take the imagination to heights of wanting a sequel - - - a compelling read of happenings that only your pen knows how to describe.D..A.
July 20th, 2020 05:09
Fay Slimm. said:
A tale to take the imagination to heights of wanting a sequel - - - a compelling read of happenings that only your pen knows how to describe.D..A.
July 20th, 2020 05:09
an interesting day
orchidee said:
Should I try some of that \'sugar\'? And should I meet this gal? Or would it be too much for me? lol.
July 20th, 2020 01:44
orchidee said:
Should I try some of that \'sugar\'? And should I meet this gal? Or would it be too much for me? lol.
July 20th, 2020 01:44
an interesting day
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed listening to the music but enjoyed your poem even more. An original and highly engaging work - a top notch write.
July 20th, 2020 01:39
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed listening to the music but enjoyed your poem even more. An original and highly engaging work - a top notch write.
July 20th, 2020 01:39
an interesting day
Goldfinch60 said:
As we arise each day and explore our lives
Age shows us that another day in our lives is good
And in our long lives we realise
Every day is interesting.
Andy
Another set of music and musicians for me to explore d a. Thank you.
July 20th, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
As we arise each day and explore our lives
Age shows us that another day in our lives is good
And in our long lives we realise
Every day is interesting.
Andy
Another set of music and musicians for me to explore d a. Thank you.
July 20th, 2020 00:30
fossil
orchidee said:
One angle on this - some churches are fossils - not going to change; not wanting to change. It can\'t be helped sometimes - not many people there; they do what they can, but can\'t do that much; etc.
July 19th, 2020 01:56
orchidee said:
One angle on this - some churches are fossils - not going to change; not wanting to change. It can\'t be helped sometimes - not many people there; they do what they can, but can\'t do that much; etc.
July 19th, 2020 01:56
fossil
Goldfinch60 said:
I nowadays see Jesus as the first Hippie in the world. The idea of organised religion is a farce just trying to brainwash people into thinking that it is the way life is. BALDERDASH!
Andy
July 19th, 2020 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I nowadays see Jesus as the first Hippie in the world. The idea of organised religion is a farce just trying to brainwash people into thinking that it is the way life is. BALDERDASH!
Andy
July 19th, 2020 00:57
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