Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Freedom of Wolves
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the wild - - - running in freedom is all a wolf wants. A reminder for all who love nature to remember.
June 13th, 2018 11:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the wild - - - running in freedom is all a wolf wants. A reminder for all who love nature to remember.
June 13th, 2018 11:04
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Lorna, that love will go on to eternity.
June 13th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Lorna, that love will go on to eternity.
June 13th, 2018 00:38
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
This is an exceptional write!
So beautiful to read!
That Titania and Oberon
are something else!
Joining my man in the afterlife...
If I can take His hand,
I will not fear the Reaper.
If the...
āSeasons donāt fear the Reaper
Nor the wind, the sun or the rainā...
then neither shall I!
Great choice of song to accentuate your poem! I have a feeling you can wheedle him till you accomplish your mission!
I enjoyed this very much...
poem, song, and message!
Kudos!!!
~Laura~
June 12th, 2018 12:11
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
This is an exceptional write!
So beautiful to read!
That Titania and Oberon
are something else!
Joining my man in the afterlife...
If I can take His hand,
I will not fear the Reaper.
If the...
āSeasons donāt fear the Reaper
Nor the wind, the sun or the rainā...
then neither shall I!
Great choice of song to accentuate your poem! I have a feeling you can wheedle him till you accomplish your mission!
I enjoyed this very much...
poem, song, and message!
Kudos!!!
~Laura~
June 12th, 2018 12:11
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
willyweed said:
What can one say BRAVO!!! ww
June 12th, 2018 08:37
willyweed said:
What can one say BRAVO!!! ww
June 12th, 2018 08:37
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. My poems bring tears to people\'s eyes too - mainly when I sing them! hehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. My poems bring tears to people\'s eyes too - mainly when I sing them! hehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:54
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Fay Slimm. said:
A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly thought out and the final stanza brought tears to my eyes. A favourite with me for sure.
June 12th, 2018 06:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly thought out and the final stanza brought tears to my eyes. A favourite with me for sure.
June 12th, 2018 06:06
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Heartwriter said:
Read like magic. I loved it.
June 12th, 2018 05:58
Heartwriter said:
Read like magic. I loved it.
June 12th, 2018 05:58
A Honey of a Day
SLR said:
Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
June 11th, 2018 16:35
SLR said:
Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
June 11th, 2018 16:35
A Honey of a Day
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful yet sad write - I even have to admit that I like ND
June 11th, 2018 10:31
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful yet sad write - I even have to admit that I like ND
June 11th, 2018 10:31
A Honey of a Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write highlights the sadness their words leave behind. That memory box with blue ribbons brought me near tears dear Lorna -and a haunt of a number from N.D. which adds to your poetic message on what to believe on those days when honey seems to sweeten each pseudo promise of love without end.. Such a moving write.
June 11th, 2018 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write highlights the sadness their words leave behind. That memory box with blue ribbons brought me near tears dear Lorna -and a haunt of a number from N.D. which adds to your poetic message on what to believe on those days when honey seems to sweeten each pseudo promise of love without end.. Such a moving write.
June 11th, 2018 05:32
A Honey of a Day
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Thank you for poeticizing a page out of my book! I was confident you would be the one to do it! š
A superb write accompanied with a great pic and song by one of the best artists! Love it!
Have a great day!
~Laura~
June 11th, 2018 05:19
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Thank you for poeticizing a page out of my book! I was confident you would be the one to do it! š
A superb write accompanied with a great pic and song by one of the best artists! Love it!
Have a great day!
~Laura~
June 11th, 2018 05:19
A Honey of a Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LORNA ~ Love ND and his mellow version of this beautiful BALLAD ! Sometime a Fair Weather Lover just disappears into the BLUE with no word of farewell and even in these Hi-tech days no email or mobile phone number ~ NOTHING !
Your very elegant poem mirrors the song and is very nostalgic ! Most MEN I know ~ keep somewhere a Memory Box with Pink Ribbons and Billet Doux ! I have one for ANGELA and I hope (and pray !) it will be my LAST ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my POEM for TODAY and my latest FUSION on FLOWERS ~ a two word Poem like WATER LILLIES would suffice ~ CON AMOR BRIAN y ANGELA XOX
June 11th, 2018 05:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LORNA ~ Love ND and his mellow version of this beautiful BALLAD ! Sometime a Fair Weather Lover just disappears into the BLUE with no word of farewell and even in these Hi-tech days no email or mobile phone number ~ NOTHING !
Your very elegant poem mirrors the song and is very nostalgic ! Most MEN I know ~ keep somewhere a Memory Box with Pink Ribbons and Billet Doux ! I have one for ANGELA and I hope (and pray !) it will be my LAST ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my POEM for TODAY and my latest FUSION on FLOWERS ~ a two word Poem like WATER LILLIES would suffice ~ CON AMOR BRIAN y ANGELA XOX
June 11th, 2018 05:01
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, rise up and move forwards into a wonderful future.
June 11th, 2018 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, rise up and move forwards into a wonderful future.
June 11th, 2018 00:36
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
w c said:
Thanks for the pep talk. very nice
June 10th, 2018 13:15
w c said:
Thanks for the pep talk. very nice
June 10th, 2018 13:15
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoy your poem. With God all things are possible. We can do all things through Christ who gives us strength. I am not sure if we should get angry though, but I see what you mean.
Persistence is key
June 10th, 2018 11:45
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoy your poem. With God all things are possible. We can do all things through Christ who gives us strength. I am not sure if we should get angry though, but I see what you mean.
Persistence is key
June 10th, 2018 11:45
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
orchidee said:
Doh! I might only get really angry - oohh about once every 5 years! lol. I have me moods though, not always the full-blown thing! lol.
June 10th, 2018 11:02
orchidee said:
Doh! I might only get really angry - oohh about once every 5 years! lol. I have me moods though, not always the full-blown thing! lol.
June 10th, 2018 11:02
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Michael Edwards said:
And be proud of who you are - fine work - so well expressed,
June 10th, 2018 10:54
Michael Edwards said:
And be proud of who you are - fine work - so well expressed,
June 10th, 2018 10:54
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done there is definitely something in the air.
June 10th, 2018 09:58
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done there is definitely something in the air.
June 10th, 2018 09:58
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
A super duper of a write!
Iām visualizing YOU all throughout this poem! I donāt think you let anything get you down! If youāre knocked down, Iām positive you spring right back up each time!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 08:54
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
A super duper of a write!
Iām visualizing YOU all throughout this poem! I donāt think you let anything get you down! If youāre knocked down, Iām positive you spring right back up each time!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 08:54
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Michela Vismara said:
very uplifting and sassy :)
June 10th, 2018 06:53
Michela Vismara said:
very uplifting and sassy :)
June 10th, 2018 06:53
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Heartwriter said:
A great write. I wrote one similar today. It\'s all about letting go. Wonderful write.
June 10th, 2018 06:53
Heartwriter said:
A great write. I wrote one similar today. It\'s all about letting go. Wonderful write.
June 10th, 2018 06:53
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