Comments received on poems by Lorna



Mourn Not
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. I got lost along the way - DAS came up - Difficult Airway Society (???). That what you mean?!
Oh well, we learn something new everyday! lol.

July 28th, 2018 06:37

Charles Trenet - La Mer
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Beautiful words accompanied by beautiful music!
I enjoyed listening to “La Mer”!
Never heard it before!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~


July 27th, 2018 14:32

Charles Trenet - La Mer
kevin browne said:

a beautiful song alongside a stunning tiny tribute to this artist. A loving feeling.

July 27th, 2018 11:05

Charles Trenet - La Mer
dusk arising said:

Lovely words describing just how a piece of music/song/poem can lift us to an \'elsewhere\'.

July 27th, 2018 10:54

Charles Trenet - La Mer
Goldfinch60 said:

Great piece of music accompanying a wonderful poem.

July 27th, 2018 07:59

Charles Trenet - La Mer
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - an all time favourite and thanks for sharing his appealing voice Lorna - - - spending a few minutes eyed closed after reading your tender poem and taking in all the memories La Mer resurrects.

July 27th, 2018 05:31

The Buck Moon (July)
Heartwriter said:

Loved it. Beautiful write!

July 26th, 2018 13:24

The Buck Moon (July)
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

July 26th, 2018 08:48

The Buck Moon (July)
MrNobody40 said:

This is very beautiful and uplifting. Thanks for sharing

July 26th, 2018 08:12

The Buck Moon (July)
dusk arising said:

I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.

July 26th, 2018 08:03

The Buck Moon (July)
Poetic Dan said:

Just what I needed today, thank you

July 26th, 2018 07:41

The Buck Moon (July)
dusk arising said:

I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.

July 26th, 2018 06:57

The Buck Moon (July)
dusk arising said:

I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.

July 26th, 2018 06:50

The Buck Moon (July)
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

So glad you’re back...
Missed you!
Nice comeback with Bob Seger and “The Buck Moon”!

~Laura~

July 26th, 2018 06:48

The Buck Moon (July)
Rainbow said:

this is great really interesting


July 26th, 2018 06:37

Welcome the Nights
Bmulk said:

Nice. I really like this. The way it reads in my mind provokes me to think of a person that isn’t as simple as this “could be read”. But rather that creation that doesn’t want to have been created any longer. The person that can’t have a nice day because those daylight hours shine on what they dislike the most...there self. It’s sadly beautiful actually. Thank you for this!

June 22nd, 2018 22:08

Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
A.H. Browning said:

Yeah, this is great!!!

June 16th, 2018 18:15

Welcome the Nights
SLR said:

I enjoyed this as I also look forward to late evening/night hours. I spend the day waiting for it to be almost over. Great post. Definitely relatable.

June 14th, 2018 10:19

Welcome the Nights
Goldfinch60 said:

Many say that but each day you can get out of bed it is a good day,

June 14th, 2018 09:11

The Freedom of Wolves
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that freedom is just a dream for many.

June 14th, 2018 01:08

The Freedom of Wolves
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Being confined in a “concrete box” is not my idea of living either! “Running in the wild” sounds like a great idea...

I like the metaphors you used in this writing to convey your message!

~Laura~

June 13th, 2018 16:05

The Freedom of Wolves
Fay Slimm. said:

Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the wild - - - running in freedom is all a wolf wants. A reminder for all who love nature to remember.

June 13th, 2018 11:04

Who Put Me Here?
A.H. Browning said:

Love this!

June 13th, 2018 06:37

The Freedom of Wolves
Heartwriter said:

So beautifully written.

June 13th, 2018 05:35

A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write Lorna, that love will go on to eternity.

June 13th, 2018 00:38

A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
This is an exceptional write!
So beautiful to read!

That Titania and Oberon
are something else!

Joining my man in the afterlife...

If I can take His hand,
I will not fear the Reaper.
If the...
“Seasons don’t fear the Reaper
Nor the wind, the sun or the rain”...
then neither shall I!

Great choice of song to accentuate your poem! I have a feeling you can wheedle him till you accomplish your mission!

I enjoyed this very much...
poem, song, and message!
Kudos!!!

~Laura~


June 12th, 2018 12:11

A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
willyweed said:

What can one say BRAVO!!! ww

June 12th, 2018 08:37

A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. My poems bring tears to people\'s eyes too - mainly when I sing them! hehee.

June 12th, 2018 06:54

A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Fay Slimm. said:

A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly thought out and the final stanza brought tears to my eyes. A favourite with me for sure.

June 12th, 2018 06:06

A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Heartwriter said:

Read like magic. I loved it.

June 12th, 2018 05:58



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