Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Strawberry Moon (June)
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Nice June comeback...with š š !
Welcome back...missed you!
Hope allās well.
āThe strawberries and cream of June
Will serve to mend...ā
I think some strawberry ice cream is on the shopping list!š
Nice song to complement your fine poem!
I enjoy those oldies!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2018 09:20
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Nice June comeback...with š š !
Welcome back...missed you!
Hope allās well.
āThe strawberries and cream of June
Will serve to mend...ā
I think some strawberry ice cream is on the shopping list!š
Nice song to complement your fine poem!
I enjoy those oldies!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2018 09:20
Trees in the Breeze of Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awful situation Lorna, I am so glad that you are OK and your house is safe. Nature at it\'s rawest is so powerful.
May your garden be replanted with joy and love.
May 17th, 2018 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awful situation Lorna, I am so glad that you are OK and your house is safe. Nature at it\'s rawest is so powerful.
May your garden be replanted with joy and love.
May 17th, 2018 00:07
Trees in the Breeze of Time
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh LORNA ~ your news
has made me cry (real men do !)
We know not what a Day may bring forth
GAIA really is MAD and with good reason !
Houses falling in the Sea in England
The Earth erupting in Hawaii
And now TORNADOES ~ when will we ever learn ?
Love all trees ~ Love the Painting and the video & song
Love the Poem and it reminds us that all trees (even redwoods ~ we have same in our Town !) are living creatures and part of the web of life ! Therefor they (like us) can\'t live for ever ~ some of the oldest things on Earth are Trees ! My MANTRA in Ecology ~ Conservation & Sustainability is \"DON\'T MESS with GAIA you can never WIN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ Please check my SENRYUS and my new FUSION on ARTISTS ~ Thanks B !
May 16th, 2018 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh LORNA ~ your news
has made me cry (real men do !)
We know not what a Day may bring forth
GAIA really is MAD and with good reason !
Houses falling in the Sea in England
The Earth erupting in Hawaii
And now TORNADOES ~ when will we ever learn ?
Love all trees ~ Love the Painting and the video & song
Love the Poem and it reminds us that all trees (even redwoods ~ we have same in our Town !) are living creatures and part of the web of life ! Therefor they (like us) can\'t live for ever ~ some of the oldest things on Earth are Trees ! My MANTRA in Ecology ~ Conservation & Sustainability is \"DON\'T MESS with GAIA you can never WIN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ~ Please check my SENRYUS and my new FUSION on ARTISTS ~ Thanks B !
May 16th, 2018 11:47
Trees in the Breeze of Time
Poetic Dan said:
Glad to hear your okay.
Brilliant writing too
May 16th, 2018 11:29
Poetic Dan said:
Glad to hear your okay.
Brilliant writing too
May 16th, 2018 11:29
Trees in the Breeze of Time
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
How awful... (I donāt mean the POEM)...for you and your neighbors! So horrible!
Iām happy youāre ok!š¤
What a great painting and song...love it! A super video!
Of all things in nature, my dadās favorite were trees! His wish was to be buried beside a tree! He got his wish! His gravesite is right by a tree!
Take care of yourself! š
~Laura~
P.S.-I just heard a person was killed in Connecticut! Mother Nature is warring!
May 16th, 2018 10:50
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
How awful... (I donāt mean the POEM)...for you and your neighbors! So horrible!
Iām happy youāre ok!š¤
What a great painting and song...love it! A super video!
Of all things in nature, my dadās favorite were trees! His wish was to be buried beside a tree! He got his wish! His gravesite is right by a tree!
Take care of yourself! š
~Laura~
P.S.-I just heard a person was killed in Connecticut! Mother Nature is warring!
May 16th, 2018 10:50
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. 3am is the time that I remember something I have been trying to remember all day!
May 16th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. 3am is the time that I remember something I have been trying to remember all day!
May 16th, 2018 00:45
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
Michael Edwards said:
Thankfully I\'m always fast asleep at 3am - great write Lorna
May 15th, 2018 16:28
Michael Edwards said:
Thankfully I\'m always fast asleep at 3am - great write Lorna
May 15th, 2018 16:28
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
dusk arising said:
Yes those early hours certainly have something. I know i have written many pieces during them when night has solidly settled but i can\'t.
Your piece is so easily readable and entertaining whilst having depth but, i\'m glad to say, no darkness.
Wish i\'d written it!!! LOL It\'s going into my favourites.
May 15th, 2018 10:13
dusk arising said:
Yes those early hours certainly have something. I know i have written many pieces during them when night has solidly settled but i can\'t.
Your piece is so easily readable and entertaining whilst having depth but, i\'m glad to say, no darkness.
Wish i\'d written it!!! LOL It\'s going into my favourites.
May 15th, 2018 10:13
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
So uncanny that you chose this particular time to write about. My father died at 3:00a.m. on a Monday !
Youāre so right...
āNo stopping time
Nowhere to runā
Loved the write complemented with the pic and video! Perfectly orchestrated!
~Laura~
May 15th, 2018 08:10
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
So uncanny that you chose this particular time to write about. My father died at 3:00a.m. on a Monday !
Youāre so right...
āNo stopping time
Nowhere to runā
Loved the write complemented with the pic and video! Perfectly orchestrated!
~Laura~
May 15th, 2018 08:10
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
orchidee said:
All that while we\'re asleep - well, usually, or hopefully!
May 15th, 2018 08:01
orchidee said:
All that while we\'re asleep - well, usually, or hopefully!
May 15th, 2018 08:01
Time\'s River
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write may your boat always sail towards the moon.
May 15th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write may your boat always sail towards the moon.
May 15th, 2018 01:16
Time\'s River
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
The carefully chosen words for your poem resonate with many meanings! Most of us have probably experienced its general meaning! Itās the extremely personal message you have braided with your carefully chosen words that especially resonates with me! A brilliant write complemented by your pic and song!
A perfect trio!
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 14:01
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
The carefully chosen words for your poem resonate with many meanings! Most of us have probably experienced its general meaning! Itās the extremely personal message you have braided with your carefully chosen words that especially resonates with me! A brilliant write complemented by your pic and song!
A perfect trio!
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 14:01
Time\'s River
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna - you sailing?! Awesome - Oar-some? Boating? Urgh, my corny jokes. heehee.
May 14th, 2018 12:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna - you sailing?! Awesome - Oar-some? Boating? Urgh, my corny jokes. heehee.
May 14th, 2018 12:34
Time\'s River
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TIME ~ Like an ever rolling stream
Bears all her sons away
They fly forgotten as a dream
Flies at the opening day !
Thanks LORNA ~ I love all of this ! The visual ~ The song (love Joni) and of course the POEM !
I wish i had a River ~ I could skate away on
I wish I had a River so long
I would teach my feet to fly
So so much imagry ~ awesome!
Done fun ~ Dawn gone ~ Monotone
Moon suits ~ contemplative brow
River drifts ~ Moon & me
Float together ~ in our little boat
Love it Lorna ~ it\'s great when life slows down to drifting pace and your with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my JELLICO POEM & my FUSION on ARTISTS ~ B !
May 14th, 2018 10:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TIME ~ Like an ever rolling stream
Bears all her sons away
They fly forgotten as a dream
Flies at the opening day !
Thanks LORNA ~ I love all of this ! The visual ~ The song (love Joni) and of course the POEM !
I wish i had a River ~ I could skate away on
I wish I had a River so long
I would teach my feet to fly
So so much imagry ~ awesome!
Done fun ~ Dawn gone ~ Monotone
Moon suits ~ contemplative brow
River drifts ~ Moon & me
Float together ~ in our little boat
Love it Lorna ~ it\'s great when life slows down to drifting pace and your with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my JELLICO POEM & my FUSION on ARTISTS ~ B !
May 14th, 2018 10:03
Time\'s River
dusk arising said:
Yes the moon brings out the contemplative. In harmony wth our years. Though its mid afternoon in U.K. now, your poem lulls me into the peace of the night, my minds eye drifting upon a slow current neath that big ole moon.
May 14th, 2018 08:46
dusk arising said:
Yes the moon brings out the contemplative. In harmony wth our years. Though its mid afternoon in U.K. now, your poem lulls me into the peace of the night, my minds eye drifting upon a slow current neath that big ole moon.
May 14th, 2018 08:46
Time\'s River
Michael Edwards said:
Great - it flows along like the words in the poem.
May 14th, 2018 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
Great - it flows along like the words in the poem.
May 14th, 2018 08:07
Elusive Endorphins
Goldfinch60 said:
the light is there for you Lorna jsut keep looking up.
May 13th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
the light is there for you Lorna jsut keep looking up.
May 13th, 2018 01:40
Elusive Endorphins
Fay Slimm. said:
Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never too far away my dear friend. Lo ve the read and love Sting\'s number too.
May 12th, 2018 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never too far away my dear friend. Lo ve the read and love Sting\'s number too.
May 12th, 2018 16:40
Elusive Endorphins
Michael Edwards said:
This carries a great little punch - super write Lorna
May 12th, 2018 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
This carries a great little punch - super write Lorna
May 12th, 2018 11:44
Elusive Endorphins
orchidee said:
Oh no! That poem is suspiciously in the shape of a .....mushroom. No magic ones now!
May 12th, 2018 11:36
orchidee said:
Oh no! That poem is suspiciously in the shape of a .....mushroom. No magic ones now!
May 12th, 2018 11:36
Elusive Endorphins
orchidee said:
Coeeeee Ms Endorphins. Never knew that was your surname! Now, laugh at my jokes, or be bored to death at their corniness! lol. Please laugh at them - no one else but me seems to. heehee.
May 12th, 2018 11:34
orchidee said:
Coeeeee Ms Endorphins. Never knew that was your surname! Now, laugh at my jokes, or be bored to death at their corniness! lol. Please laugh at them - no one else but me seems to. heehee.
May 12th, 2018 11:34
Elusive Endorphins
dusk arising said:
One day, when your back is turned and the sun is shining on all around but ignoring you a soul will wander across your path and you will find your eyes slowly opening to the shine behind their eyes and the poetry of their word. The sun will find you.
May 12th, 2018 09:34
dusk arising said:
One day, when your back is turned and the sun is shining on all around but ignoring you a soul will wander across your path and you will find your eyes slowly opening to the shine behind their eyes and the poetry of their word. The sun will find you.
May 12th, 2018 09:34
Elusive Endorphins
Lorna said:
I haven\'t resorted to mushrooms yet although there\'s news out there that the funny ones have some very antidepressant effects...... knowing me though they would send me into orbit.......I\'ll stick with vitamins L!
May 12th, 2018 06:40
Lorna said:
I haven\'t resorted to mushrooms yet although there\'s news out there that the funny ones have some very antidepressant effects...... knowing me though they would send me into orbit.......I\'ll stick with vitamins L!
May 12th, 2018 06:40
Elusive Endorphins
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
A great video, pic and verse!
Sting does it for me all the time...
I enjoyed the video very much...up and dancing!
As far as the mushrooms go, I like them sautĆ©ed with a little garlic!š
Be careful with those šš!Enjoy your day...
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 06:31
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
A great video, pic and verse!
Sting does it for me all the time...
I enjoyed the video very much...up and dancing!
As far as the mushrooms go, I like them sautĆ©ed with a little garlic!š
Be careful with those šš!Enjoy your day...
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 06:31
Choosing My Chains When We Met
Nicholas Browning said:
\"It\'s a together thing.\" Not bad at all~ I quite like it.
May 11th, 2018 20:35
Nicholas Browning said:
\"It\'s a together thing.\" Not bad at all~ I quite like it.
May 11th, 2018 20:35
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