Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
So uncanny that you chose this particular time to write about. My father died at 3:00a.m. on a Monday !
You’re so right...
“No stopping time
Nowhere to run”
Loved the write complemented with the pic and video! Perfectly orchestrated!
~Laura~
May 15th, 2018 08:10
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
So uncanny that you chose this particular time to write about. My father died at 3:00a.m. on a Monday !
You’re so right...
“No stopping time
Nowhere to run”
Loved the write complemented with the pic and video! Perfectly orchestrated!
~Laura~
May 15th, 2018 08:10
The Inevitability of 3 A.M.
orchidee said:
All that while we\'re asleep - well, usually, or hopefully!
May 15th, 2018 08:01
orchidee said:
All that while we\'re asleep - well, usually, or hopefully!
May 15th, 2018 08:01
Time\'s River
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write may your boat always sail towards the moon.
May 15th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write may your boat always sail towards the moon.
May 15th, 2018 01:16
Time\'s River
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
The carefully chosen words for your poem resonate with many meanings! Most of us have probably experienced its general meaning! It’s the extremely personal message you have braided with your carefully chosen words that especially resonates with me! A brilliant write complemented by your pic and song!
A perfect trio!
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 14:01
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
The carefully chosen words for your poem resonate with many meanings! Most of us have probably experienced its general meaning! It’s the extremely personal message you have braided with your carefully chosen words that especially resonates with me! A brilliant write complemented by your pic and song!
A perfect trio!
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 14:01
Time\'s River
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna - you sailing?! Awesome - Oar-some? Boating? Urgh, my corny jokes. heehee.
May 14th, 2018 12:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna - you sailing?! Awesome - Oar-some? Boating? Urgh, my corny jokes. heehee.
May 14th, 2018 12:34
Time\'s River
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TIME ~ Like an ever rolling stream
Bears all her sons away
They fly forgotten as a dream
Flies at the opening day !
Thanks LORNA ~ I love all of this ! The visual ~ The song (love Joni) and of course the POEM !
I wish i had a River ~ I could skate away on
I wish I had a River so long
I would teach my feet to fly
So so much imagry ~ awesome!
Done fun ~ Dawn gone ~ Monotone
Moon suits ~ contemplative brow
River drifts ~ Moon & me
Float together ~ in our little boat
Love it Lorna ~ it\'s great when life slows down to drifting pace and your with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my JELLICO POEM & my FUSION on ARTISTS ~ B !
May 14th, 2018 10:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TIME ~ Like an ever rolling stream
Bears all her sons away
They fly forgotten as a dream
Flies at the opening day !
Thanks LORNA ~ I love all of this ! The visual ~ The song (love Joni) and of course the POEM !
I wish i had a River ~ I could skate away on
I wish I had a River so long
I would teach my feet to fly
So so much imagry ~ awesome!
Done fun ~ Dawn gone ~ Monotone
Moon suits ~ contemplative brow
River drifts ~ Moon & me
Float together ~ in our little boat
Love it Lorna ~ it\'s great when life slows down to drifting pace and your with the one you LOVE ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my JELLICO POEM & my FUSION on ARTISTS ~ B !
May 14th, 2018 10:03
Time\'s River
dusk arising said:
Yes the moon brings out the contemplative. In harmony wth our years. Though its mid afternoon in U.K. now, your poem lulls me into the peace of the night, my minds eye drifting upon a slow current neath that big ole moon.
May 14th, 2018 08:46
dusk arising said:
Yes the moon brings out the contemplative. In harmony wth our years. Though its mid afternoon in U.K. now, your poem lulls me into the peace of the night, my minds eye drifting upon a slow current neath that big ole moon.
May 14th, 2018 08:46
Time\'s River
Michael Edwards said:
Great - it flows along like the words in the poem.
May 14th, 2018 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
Great - it flows along like the words in the poem.
May 14th, 2018 08:07
Elusive Endorphins
Goldfinch60 said:
the light is there for you Lorna jsut keep looking up.
May 13th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
the light is there for you Lorna jsut keep looking up.
May 13th, 2018 01:40
Elusive Endorphins
Fay Slimm. said:
Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never too far away my dear friend. Lo ve the read and love Sting\'s number too.
May 12th, 2018 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never too far away my dear friend. Lo ve the read and love Sting\'s number too.
May 12th, 2018 16:40
Elusive Endorphins
Michael Edwards said:
This carries a great little punch - super write Lorna
May 12th, 2018 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
This carries a great little punch - super write Lorna
May 12th, 2018 11:44
Elusive Endorphins
orchidee said:
Oh no! That poem is suspiciously in the shape of a .....mushroom. No magic ones now!
May 12th, 2018 11:36
orchidee said:
Oh no! That poem is suspiciously in the shape of a .....mushroom. No magic ones now!
May 12th, 2018 11:36
Elusive Endorphins
orchidee said:
Coeeeee Ms Endorphins. Never knew that was your surname! Now, laugh at my jokes, or be bored to death at their corniness! lol. Please laugh at them - no one else but me seems to. heehee.
May 12th, 2018 11:34
orchidee said:
Coeeeee Ms Endorphins. Never knew that was your surname! Now, laugh at my jokes, or be bored to death at their corniness! lol. Please laugh at them - no one else but me seems to. heehee.
May 12th, 2018 11:34
Elusive Endorphins
dusk arising said:
One day, when your back is turned and the sun is shining on all around but ignoring you a soul will wander across your path and you will find your eyes slowly opening to the shine behind their eyes and the poetry of their word. The sun will find you.
May 12th, 2018 09:34
dusk arising said:
One day, when your back is turned and the sun is shining on all around but ignoring you a soul will wander across your path and you will find your eyes slowly opening to the shine behind their eyes and the poetry of their word. The sun will find you.
May 12th, 2018 09:34
Elusive Endorphins
Lorna said:
I haven\'t resorted to mushrooms yet although there\'s news out there that the funny ones have some very antidepressant effects...... knowing me though they would send me into orbit.......I\'ll stick with vitamins L!
May 12th, 2018 06:40
Lorna said:
I haven\'t resorted to mushrooms yet although there\'s news out there that the funny ones have some very antidepressant effects...... knowing me though they would send me into orbit.......I\'ll stick with vitamins L!
May 12th, 2018 06:40
Elusive Endorphins
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great video, pic and verse!
Sting does it for me all the time...
I enjoyed the video very much...up and dancing!
As far as the mushrooms go, I like them sautéed with a little garlic!😉
Be careful with those 🍄🍄!Enjoy your day...
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 06:31
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great video, pic and verse!
Sting does it for me all the time...
I enjoyed the video very much...up and dancing!
As far as the mushrooms go, I like them sautéed with a little garlic!😉
Be careful with those 🍄🍄!Enjoy your day...
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 06:31
Choosing My Chains When We Met
Nicholas Browning said:
\"It\'s a together thing.\" Not bad at all~ I quite like it.
May 11th, 2018 20:35
Nicholas Browning said:
\"It\'s a together thing.\" Not bad at all~ I quite like it.
May 11th, 2018 20:35
Choosing My Chains When We Met
Michael Edwards said:
Great uplifting write Lorna - super work.
May 11th, 2018 14:45
Michael Edwards said:
Great uplifting write Lorna - super work.
May 11th, 2018 14:45
Choosing My Chains When We Met
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ George is a great solo singer ~ but often in the shade with the FAB FOUR ~ Even in Tribute Bands ! Love the song ~ repetition is so important to get a message across ! \"I\'ve got MY mind set on YOU !\"
Before we met ANGELA & I were both free spirits but ~ especially when we got engaged in March we exchanged rings ~ which are like a chain ! When she\'s in NZ for a YEAR it will tell all those Hunky Kiwis ~ that there are chains on her heart ! And my signet ring will send the same message to all the Single Ladies I meet at work ! We love and trust each other so the CHAINS are VIRTUAL but just as real as ANCHOR CHAINS ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA XOX Please check my poem today ~ Thanks B !
May 11th, 2018 12:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ George is a great solo singer ~ but often in the shade with the FAB FOUR ~ Even in Tribute Bands ! Love the song ~ repetition is so important to get a message across ! \"I\'ve got MY mind set on YOU !\"
Before we met ANGELA & I were both free spirits but ~ especially when we got engaged in March we exchanged rings ~ which are like a chain ! When she\'s in NZ for a YEAR it will tell all those Hunky Kiwis ~ that there are chains on her heart ! And my signet ring will send the same message to all the Single Ladies I meet at work ! We love and trust each other so the CHAINS are VIRTUAL but just as real as ANCHOR CHAINS ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA XOX Please check my poem today ~ Thanks B !
May 11th, 2018 12:51
Choosing My Chains When We Met
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ George is a great solo singer ~ but often in the shade with the FAB FOUR ~ Even in Tribute Bands ! Love the song ~ repetition is so important to get a message across ! \"I\'ve got MY mind set on YOU !\"
Before we met ANGELA & I were both free spirits but ~ especially when we got engaged in March we exchanged rings ~ which are like a chain ! When she\'s in NZ for a YEAR it will tell all those Hunky Kiwis ~ that there are chains on her heart ! And my signet ring will send the same message to all the Single Ladies I meet at work ! We love and trust each other so the CHAINS are VIRTUAL but just as real and ANCHOR CHAINS ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA XOX
May 11th, 2018 12:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ George is a great solo singer ~ but often in the shade with the FAB FOUR ~ Even in Tribute Bands ! Love the song ~ repetition is so important to get a message across ! \"I\'ve got MY mind set on YOU !\"
Before we met ANGELA & I were both free spirits but ~ especially when we got engaged in March we exchanged rings ~ which are like a chain ! When she\'s in NZ for a YEAR it will tell all those Hunky Kiwis ~ that there are chains on her heart ! And my signet ring will send the same message to all the Single Ladies I meet at work ! We love and trust each other so the CHAINS are VIRTUAL but just as real and ANCHOR CHAINS ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA XOX
May 11th, 2018 12:51
Choosing My Chains When We Met
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
After a rough morning with my mom, I finally got to my iPhone to see what’s happening on MPS! I see a lot of great stuff is going on!
The first posting I saw was yours! That was a good thing! Love your poem and George Harrison!
This is the first time I heard, “Got My Mind Set on You”! What an awesome video!! Thank you for the share!
With George on my mind, I know the rest of the day will be a breeze!😉
~Laura~
P.S.-Great pic! I envision you in that outfit!
May 11th, 2018 09:32
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
After a rough morning with my mom, I finally got to my iPhone to see what’s happening on MPS! I see a lot of great stuff is going on!
The first posting I saw was yours! That was a good thing! Love your poem and George Harrison!
This is the first time I heard, “Got My Mind Set on You”! What an awesome video!! Thank you for the share!
With George on my mind, I know the rest of the day will be a breeze!😉
~Laura~
P.S.-Great pic! I envision you in that outfit!
May 11th, 2018 09:32
Choosing My Chains When We Met
Goldfinch60 said:
May those chains bind you and your forever.
May 11th, 2018 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May those chains bind you and your forever.
May 11th, 2018 07:56
Seine Haul Fishing For Life
Jabberwocky said:
And if we can not let them go
We tie them to a string
And wear them light around our neck;
A parody of bling
May 11th, 2018 07:39
Jabberwocky said:
And if we can not let them go
We tie them to a string
And wear them light around our neck;
A parody of bling
May 11th, 2018 07:39
Oh the Joy of Knowing You
Michael Edwards said:
Full of hope and joy - super Lorna
May 10th, 2018 11:02
Michael Edwards said:
Full of hope and joy - super Lorna
May 10th, 2018 11:02
Oh the Joy of Knowing You
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
So much love in this one! I love it! I agree with Andy... “uplifting write...a great start to my day”! A Roman holiday today!
A great pic! Is that you and hubby?
The Harrison clip was perfect for your poem! Awesome!
~Laura~
May 10th, 2018 03:00
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
So much love in this one! I love it! I agree with Andy... “uplifting write...a great start to my day”! A Roman holiday today!
A great pic! Is that you and hubby?
The Harrison clip was perfect for your poem! Awesome!
~Laura~
May 10th, 2018 03:00
Oh the Joy of Knowing You
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful uplifting write, a great start to my day.
May 10th, 2018 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful uplifting write, a great start to my day.
May 10th, 2018 02:45
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