Comments received on poems by Lorna



Choosing My Chains When We Met
Michael Edwards said:

Great uplifting write Lorna - super work.

May 11th, 2018 14:45

Choosing My Chains When We Met
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ George is a great solo singer ~ but often in the shade with the FAB FOUR ~ Even in Tribute Bands ! Love the song ~ repetition is so important to get a message across ! \"I\'ve got MY mind set on YOU !\"
Before we met ANGELA & I were both free spirits but ~ especially when we got engaged in March we exchanged rings ~ which are like a chain ! When she\'s in NZ for a YEAR it will tell all those Hunky Kiwis ~ that there are chains on her heart ! And my signet ring will send the same message to all the Single Ladies I meet at work ! We love and trust each other so the CHAINS are VIRTUAL but just as real as ANCHOR CHAINS ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA XOX Please check my poem today ~ Thanks B !

May 11th, 2018 12:51

Choosing My Chains When We Met
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ George is a great solo singer ~ but often in the shade with the FAB FOUR ~ Even in Tribute Bands ! Love the song ~ repetition is so important to get a message across ! \"I\'ve got MY mind set on YOU !\"
Before we met ANGELA & I were both free spirits but ~ especially when we got engaged in March we exchanged rings ~ which are like a chain ! When she\'s in NZ for a YEAR it will tell all those Hunky Kiwis ~ that there are chains on her heart ! And my signet ring will send the same message to all the Single Ladies I meet at work ! We love and trust each other so the CHAINS are VIRTUAL but just as real and ANCHOR CHAINS ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA XOX

May 11th, 2018 12:51

Choosing My Chains When We Met
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,
After a rough morning with my mom, I finally got to my iPhone to see whatā€™s happening on MPS! I see a lot of great stuff is going on!
The first posting I saw was yours! That was a good thing! Love your poem and George Harrison!
This is the first time I heard, ā€œGot My Mind Set on Youā€! What an awesome video!! Thank you for the share!
With George on my mind, I know the rest of the day will be a breeze!šŸ˜‰

~Laura~

P.S.-Great pic! I envision you in that outfit!

May 11th, 2018 09:32

Choosing My Chains When We Met
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

May 11th, 2018 08:57

Choosing My Chains When We Met
Goldfinch60 said:

May those chains bind you and your forever.

May 11th, 2018 07:56

Seine Haul Fishing For Life
Jabberwocky said:

And if we can not let them go
We tie them to a string
And wear them light around our neck;
A parody of bling


May 11th, 2018 07:39

Oh the Joy of Knowing You
orchidee said:

I\'m glad ya met me then! heehee.

May 10th, 2018 11:36

Oh the Joy of Knowing You
Michael Edwards said:

Full of hope and joy - super Lorna

May 10th, 2018 11:02

Oh the Joy of Knowing You
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,
So much love in this one! I love it! I agree with Andy... ā€œuplifting write...a great start to my dayā€! A Roman holiday today!

A great pic! Is that you and hubby?
The Harrison clip was perfect for your poem! Awesome!

~Laura~

May 10th, 2018 03:00

Oh the Joy of Knowing You
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful uplifting write, a great start to my day.

May 10th, 2018 02:45

Simply Shakespeare
Goldfinch60 said:

A very good write Lorna although I do not like Shakespeare, it was forced down our throats at school (that was a long, long time ago) and it has put me off him completely.

May 10th, 2018 00:40

Simply Shakespeare
lasergraph said:

We certainly hold dear. A great write and tribute.

May 9th, 2018 15:16

Simply Shakespeare
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,
A great pic!
I love the poem! Yes, I wonder who his muses were that inspired his creativity!

I loved the pic in the video of the three children trying to get the ball through the hoop!

~Laura~

May 9th, 2018 12:07

Simply Shakespeare
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Aww, I\'m a bit un-cultured. The only \'Hey ho\' I know is ...\'It\'s off to work we go\'. Snow White and The Seven Dwarfs. Still classical?! lol.

May 9th, 2018 12:03

Simply Shakespeare
Fay Slimm. said:

Wonderfully poetic questions in this little gem Lorna.

May 9th, 2018 11:21

Simply Shakespeare
Michael Edwards said:

This is such a little gem of a write Lorna - love it as I do Deller - one of the best countertenors ever.

May 9th, 2018 07:36

Simply Shakespeare
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

TWELFTH NIGHT ~ WS
When that I was a little tiny boy
With hey ho ~ the wind and the rain
A foolish thing was but a toy
For the rain it raineth every day !

A great while ago the World began
With hey ho ~ the wind and the rain
But that\'s all done ~ our play is done
And we\'l strive to please you again and again !

Thanks Lorna for a fine tribute to the World\'s foremost Playwright and Poet ~ William Shakespeare ! Love the Picture ~ the Poem and the Video ! Please check my LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ Thanks ~ Yours as always BRIAN !

May 9th, 2018 05:56

Seine Haul Fishing For Life
Michael Edwards said:

A super write Lorna and great sentiments.

May 8th, 2018 10:20

Seine Haul Fishing For Life
orchidee said:

You gorn fishing there Lorna? When will ya be back?! heehee.

May 8th, 2018 08:34

Seine Haul Fishing For Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HAPPY TUESDAY LORNA ~ Great Song with a great Lyric ! Love the Muppets & Judy

They seem to know the Ocean
Like a Man knows Woman
She makes him wait around
For half the mornin\' for the tide to turn

Pull in the ropes ~ Seine haul fishermen
Nevr catches more than he can sell in a day
Pull in the nets ~ Seine haul fishermen
Day\'s for work and night\'s to go dancing !

I live in the EAST COAST of the UK ~ some of my Friends are Deep Sea Fishermen ~ hard work but exhilarating and our staple diet is Fish ~ Chips ~ Mushy Peas !

Love your poem ~ It\'s my experience too that life is like a fishing trip (I\'ve been out with the Trawlers !) and you never know ~ from one day to the next ~ who or what you may catch !!!
Thanks for caring & sharing
Hugs Angela & Brian @@@
Please check my latest ODE !

May 8th, 2018 08:25

Seine Haul Fishing For Life
Goldfinch60 said:

I have much respect for the fisherman of the world, they work so hard and in sometimes very challenging conditions. Good write Lorna.

May 8th, 2018 05:29

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
Goldfinch60 said:

People who only worry about themselves and expect others to help them are not worth bothering with, move on in your life after you have written these wonderful words.

May 8th, 2018 00:14

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
w c said:

Thanks, Lorna. I enjoyed your poem.

May 7th, 2018 21:03

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing LORNA ! Love the Picture (love those Art Deco Ladies !) Love the Poem (I\'m still deciphering it ~ but I get the message)Love DYLAN great Poet and a passable Singer ! Spanish is my second language so enjoyed the bilingual sub~titles. I agree to be empathetic to someone we need to walk in their SHOES ~ That is one of the Missions of MPS ~ it is a very caring site ! Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN Pleases check my Poems & Fusion ~ Thanks B !

May 7th, 2018 16:51

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
Fay Slimm. said:

So sad you had to write this to a person who does not feel the need of keeping a promise and the hurt this causes on behalf of one you love - - Self righteous people know all the excuses to make dear Lorna and their company therefore will never be missed. An needed rant and so well written.

May 7th, 2018 16:07

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
LaurašŸŒ» said:

To answer the question in the pic, Iā€™d use both hands simultaneously...left to right, right to left!
I guess Iā€™d be accused of promoting physical violence!
So then Iā€™d do exactly what you did...
slap them with a powerful verse!

An excellent write my dear Lorna! A mighty message! Hooray for the mighty pen! I hope itā€™ll be read by the individual it was intended for!

~Laura~

P.S.-a great Bob Dylan song to accompany your poem!


May 7th, 2018 09:41

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
orchidee said:

Boo hoo, you mean me? Am I that bad?! (heehee). That malarkeying - will it make me swoon?! lol.

May 7th, 2018 08:12

Malarkey Blowing in the Wind
Michael Edwards said:

When someone hurts someone I love they hurt me - I guess this is what this great write is saying.

May 7th, 2018 08:11

Cobwebs of the Sun
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Lorna, the light is with us.

May 6th, 2018 00:59



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