Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Buck Moon (July)
dusk arising said:
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.
July 26th, 2018 06:57
dusk arising said:
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.
July 26th, 2018 06:57
The Buck Moon (July)
dusk arising said:
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.
July 26th, 2018 06:50
dusk arising said:
I really like the way you\'ve done this. Great to get a peep into your inspiring imagination.
July 26th, 2018 06:50
The Buck Moon (July)
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
So glad youâre back...
Missed you!
Nice comeback with Bob Seger and âThe Buck Moonâ!
~Laura~
July 26th, 2018 06:48
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
So glad youâre back...
Missed you!
Nice comeback with Bob Seger and âThe Buck Moonâ!
~Laura~
July 26th, 2018 06:48
Welcome the Nights
Bmulk said:
Nice. I really like this. The way it reads in my mind provokes me to think of a person that isnât as simple as this âcould be readâ. But rather that creation that doesnât want to have been created any longer. The person that canât have a nice day because those daylight hours shine on what they dislike the most...there self. Itâs sadly beautiful actually. Thank you for this!
June 22nd, 2018 22:08
Bmulk said:
Nice. I really like this. The way it reads in my mind provokes me to think of a person that isnât as simple as this âcould be readâ. But rather that creation that doesnât want to have been created any longer. The person that canât have a nice day because those daylight hours shine on what they dislike the most...there self. Itâs sadly beautiful actually. Thank you for this!
June 22nd, 2018 22:08
Welcome the Nights
SLR said:
I enjoyed this as I also look forward to late evening/night hours. I spend the day waiting for it to be almost over. Great post. Definitely relatable.
June 14th, 2018 10:19
SLR said:
I enjoyed this as I also look forward to late evening/night hours. I spend the day waiting for it to be almost over. Great post. Definitely relatable.
June 14th, 2018 10:19
Welcome the Nights
Goldfinch60 said:
Many say that but each day you can get out of bed it is a good day,
June 14th, 2018 09:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Many say that but each day you can get out of bed it is a good day,
June 14th, 2018 09:11
The Freedom of Wolves
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that freedom is just a dream for many.
June 14th, 2018 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that freedom is just a dream for many.
June 14th, 2018 01:08
The Freedom of Wolves
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
Being confined in a âconcrete boxâ is not my idea of living either! âRunning in the wildâ sounds like a great idea...
I like the metaphors you used in this writing to convey your message!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 16:05
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
Being confined in a âconcrete boxâ is not my idea of living either! âRunning in the wildâ sounds like a great idea...
I like the metaphors you used in this writing to convey your message!
~Laura~
June 13th, 2018 16:05
The Freedom of Wolves
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the wild - - - running in freedom is all a wolf wants. A reminder for all who love nature to remember.
June 13th, 2018 11:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the wild - - - running in freedom is all a wolf wants. A reminder for all who love nature to remember.
June 13th, 2018 11:04
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Lorna, that love will go on to eternity.
June 13th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Lorna, that love will go on to eternity.
June 13th, 2018 00:38
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
This is an exceptional write!
So beautiful to read!
That Titania and Oberon
are something else!
Joining my man in the afterlife...
If I can take His hand,
I will not fear the Reaper.
If the...
âSeasons donât fear the Reaper
Nor the wind, the sun or the rainâ...
then neither shall I!
Great choice of song to accentuate your poem! I have a feeling you can wheedle him till you accomplish your mission!
I enjoyed this very much...
poem, song, and message!
Kudos!!!
~Laura~
June 12th, 2018 12:11
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
This is an exceptional write!
So beautiful to read!
That Titania and Oberon
are something else!
Joining my man in the afterlife...
If I can take His hand,
I will not fear the Reaper.
If the...
âSeasons donât fear the Reaper
Nor the wind, the sun or the rainâ...
then neither shall I!
Great choice of song to accentuate your poem! I have a feeling you can wheedle him till you accomplish your mission!
I enjoyed this very much...
poem, song, and message!
Kudos!!!
~Laura~
June 12th, 2018 12:11
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
willyweed said:
What can one say BRAVO!!! ww
June 12th, 2018 08:37
willyweed said:
What can one say BRAVO!!! ww
June 12th, 2018 08:37
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. My poems bring tears to people\'s eyes too - mainly when I sing them! hehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. My poems bring tears to people\'s eyes too - mainly when I sing them! hehee.
June 12th, 2018 06:54
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Fay Slimm. said:
A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly thought out and the final stanza brought tears to my eyes. A favourite with me for sure.
June 12th, 2018 06:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly thought out and the final stanza brought tears to my eyes. A favourite with me for sure.
June 12th, 2018 06:06
A Flirtatious Understanding with Death
Heartwriter said:
Read like magic. I loved it.
June 12th, 2018 05:58
Heartwriter said:
Read like magic. I loved it.
June 12th, 2018 05:58
A Honey of a Day
SLR said:
Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
June 11th, 2018 16:35
SLR said:
Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
June 11th, 2018 16:35
A Honey of a Day
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful yet sad write - I even have to admit that I like ND
June 11th, 2018 10:31
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful yet sad write - I even have to admit that I like ND
June 11th, 2018 10:31
A Honey of a Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write highlights the sadness their words leave behind. That memory box with blue ribbons brought me near tears dear Lorna -and a haunt of a number from N.D. which adds to your poetic message on what to believe on those days when honey seems to sweeten each pseudo promise of love without end.. Such a moving write.
June 11th, 2018 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write highlights the sadness their words leave behind. That memory box with blue ribbons brought me near tears dear Lorna -and a haunt of a number from N.D. which adds to your poetic message on what to believe on those days when honey seems to sweeten each pseudo promise of love without end.. Such a moving write.
June 11th, 2018 05:32
A Honey of a Day
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
Thank you for poeticizing a page out of my book! I was confident you would be the one to do it! đ
A superb write accompanied with a great pic and song by one of the best artists! Love it!
Have a great day!
~Laura~
June 11th, 2018 05:19
Laurađ» said:
Lorna,
Thank you for poeticizing a page out of my book! I was confident you would be the one to do it! đ
A superb write accompanied with a great pic and song by one of the best artists! Love it!
Have a great day!
~Laura~
June 11th, 2018 05:19
A Honey of a Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LORNA ~ Love ND and his mellow version of this beautiful BALLAD ! Sometime a Fair Weather Lover just disappears into the BLUE with no word of farewell and even in these Hi-tech days no email or mobile phone number ~ NOTHING !
Your very elegant poem mirrors the song and is very nostalgic ! Most MEN I know ~ keep somewhere a Memory Box with Pink Ribbons and Billet Doux ! I have one for ANGELA and I hope (and pray !) it will be my LAST ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my POEM for TODAY and my latest FUSION on FLOWERS ~ a two word Poem like WATER LILLIES would suffice ~ CON AMOR BRIAN y ANGELA XOX
June 11th, 2018 05:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LORNA ~ Love ND and his mellow version of this beautiful BALLAD ! Sometime a Fair Weather Lover just disappears into the BLUE with no word of farewell and even in these Hi-tech days no email or mobile phone number ~ NOTHING !
Your very elegant poem mirrors the song and is very nostalgic ! Most MEN I know ~ keep somewhere a Memory Box with Pink Ribbons and Billet Doux ! I have one for ANGELA and I hope (and pray !) it will be my LAST ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my POEM for TODAY and my latest FUSION on FLOWERS ~ a two word Poem like WATER LILLIES would suffice ~ CON AMOR BRIAN y ANGELA XOX
June 11th, 2018 05:01
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, rise up and move forwards into a wonderful future.
June 11th, 2018 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, rise up and move forwards into a wonderful future.
June 11th, 2018 00:36
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