Comments received on poems by Lorna
A Honey of a Day
SLR said:
Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
June 11th, 2018 16:35
SLR said:
Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
June 11th, 2018 16:35
A Honey of a Day
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful yet sad write - I even have to admit that I like ND
June 11th, 2018 10:31
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful yet sad write - I even have to admit that I like ND
June 11th, 2018 10:31
A Honey of a Day
Fay Slimm. said:
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write highlights the sadness their words leave behind. That memory box with blue ribbons brought me near tears dear Lorna -and a haunt of a number from N.D. which adds to your poetic message on what to believe on those days when honey seems to sweeten each pseudo promise of love without end.. Such a moving write.
June 11th, 2018 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write highlights the sadness their words leave behind. That memory box with blue ribbons brought me near tears dear Lorna -and a haunt of a number from N.D. which adds to your poetic message on what to believe on those days when honey seems to sweeten each pseudo promise of love without end.. Such a moving write.
June 11th, 2018 05:32
A Honey of a Day
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Thank you for poeticizing a page out of my book! I was confident you would be the one to do it! š
A superb write accompanied with a great pic and song by one of the best artists! Love it!
Have a great day!
~Laura~
June 11th, 2018 05:19
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Thank you for poeticizing a page out of my book! I was confident you would be the one to do it! š
A superb write accompanied with a great pic and song by one of the best artists! Love it!
Have a great day!
~Laura~
June 11th, 2018 05:19
A Honey of a Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LORNA ~ Love ND and his mellow version of this beautiful BALLAD ! Sometime a Fair Weather Lover just disappears into the BLUE with no word of farewell and even in these Hi-tech days no email or mobile phone number ~ NOTHING !
Your very elegant poem mirrors the song and is very nostalgic ! Most MEN I know ~ keep somewhere a Memory Box with Pink Ribbons and Billet Doux ! I have one for ANGELA and I hope (and pray !) it will be my LAST ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my POEM for TODAY and my latest FUSION on FLOWERS ~ a two word Poem like WATER LILLIES would suffice ~ CON AMOR BRIAN y ANGELA XOX
June 11th, 2018 05:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LORNA ~ Love ND and his mellow version of this beautiful BALLAD ! Sometime a Fair Weather Lover just disappears into the BLUE with no word of farewell and even in these Hi-tech days no email or mobile phone number ~ NOTHING !
Your very elegant poem mirrors the song and is very nostalgic ! Most MEN I know ~ keep somewhere a Memory Box with Pink Ribbons and Billet Doux ! I have one for ANGELA and I hope (and pray !) it will be my LAST ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my POEM for TODAY and my latest FUSION on FLOWERS ~ a two word Poem like WATER LILLIES would suffice ~ CON AMOR BRIAN y ANGELA XOX
June 11th, 2018 05:01
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, rise up and move forwards into a wonderful future.
June 11th, 2018 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, rise up and move forwards into a wonderful future.
June 11th, 2018 00:36
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
w c said:
Thanks for the pep talk. very nice
June 10th, 2018 13:15
w c said:
Thanks for the pep talk. very nice
June 10th, 2018 13:15
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoy your poem. With God all things are possible. We can do all things through Christ who gives us strength. I am not sure if we should get angry though, but I see what you mean.
Persistence is key
June 10th, 2018 11:45
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoy your poem. With God all things are possible. We can do all things through Christ who gives us strength. I am not sure if we should get angry though, but I see what you mean.
Persistence is key
June 10th, 2018 11:45
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
orchidee said:
Doh! I might only get really angry - oohh about once every 5 years! lol. I have me moods though, not always the full-blown thing! lol.
June 10th, 2018 11:02
orchidee said:
Doh! I might only get really angry - oohh about once every 5 years! lol. I have me moods though, not always the full-blown thing! lol.
June 10th, 2018 11:02
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Michael Edwards said:
And be proud of who you are - fine work - so well expressed,
June 10th, 2018 10:54
Michael Edwards said:
And be proud of who you are - fine work - so well expressed,
June 10th, 2018 10:54
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done there is definitely something in the air.
June 10th, 2018 09:58
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done there is definitely something in the air.
June 10th, 2018 09:58
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LORNA ~ Love Banjo Pickers and the Blue Grass Sound and feel of this song very Sassy and Allapachian ! We\'ve \"All been down\" (some still are !) so we can empathise ! Love the TIGGA ~ AWESOME and your beaut Poem !
Don\'t let BLUES get ya down
Show ya Tiger Teeth ~ don\'t be weak
Never get knocked down ~ or out
Better MAD than SAD ~ AMEN
Sounds a bit like ANGELA ~ but because she loves me she doesn\'t scare me ! Thanks for scaring ~ Please check my POEM
Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
June 10th, 2018 09:34
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
A super duper of a write!
Iām visualizing YOU all throughout this poem! I donāt think you let anything get you down! If youāre knocked down, Iām positive you spring right back up each time!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 08:54
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
A super duper of a write!
Iām visualizing YOU all throughout this poem! I donāt think you let anything get you down! If youāre knocked down, Iām positive you spring right back up each time!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 08:54
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Michela Vismara said:
very uplifting and sassy :)
June 10th, 2018 06:53
Michela Vismara said:
very uplifting and sassy :)
June 10th, 2018 06:53
The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life
Heartwriter said:
A great write. I wrote one similar today. It\'s all about letting go. Wonderful write.
June 10th, 2018 06:53
Heartwriter said:
A great write. I wrote one similar today. It\'s all about letting go. Wonderful write.
June 10th, 2018 06:53
Second Best
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Lorna. Looks a bit like an ostrich!
June 9th, 2018 09:38
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Lorna. Looks a bit like an ostrich!
June 9th, 2018 09:38
Second Best
ForeverJesus7 said:
She looks like a Gertrude. Then again, I think Ethel would be the second best name for her. Hahaha
I find your piece to be more humorous than nature, but that is my opinion.
Persistence is key
June 9th, 2018 09:35
ForeverJesus7 said:
She looks like a Gertrude. Then again, I think Ethel would be the second best name for her. Hahaha
I find your piece to be more humorous than nature, but that is my opinion.
Persistence is key
June 9th, 2018 09:35
Second Best
Michael Edwards said:
Super looking garden - hope you\'re not hungry. Lol Great write too.
June 9th, 2018 09:14
Michael Edwards said:
Super looking garden - hope you\'re not hungry. Lol Great write too.
June 9th, 2018 09:14
Pink Royalty
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, as Michael said they are lovely flowers but do not last very long.
June 9th, 2018 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, as Michael said they are lovely flowers but do not last very long.
June 9th, 2018 00:17
Pink Royalty
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. I don\'t know what he\'s on about either, as video don\'t play for me either!
June 8th, 2018 11:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. I don\'t know what he\'s on about either, as video don\'t play for me either!
June 8th, 2018 11:38
Pink Royalty
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes I accessed the video no probs. - - I too love Danny Kaye - he was so talented.
June 8th, 2018 08:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes I accessed the video no probs. - - I too love Danny Kaye - he was so talented.
June 8th, 2018 08:46
Pink Royalty
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Loved listening to Danny Kaye...especially the part where he rolls his rrrs! When I taught ITALIAN and SPANISH, rolling the rrrs was part of our lesson!
Beautiful peonies! Is this a pic before the storm?
Love this...
āHolding sway over their court
Of stately greeneryā!
Very regal!
~Laura~
June 8th, 2018 08:42
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Loved listening to Danny Kaye...especially the part where he rolls his rrrs! When I taught ITALIAN and SPANISH, rolling the rrrs was part of our lesson!
Beautiful peonies! Is this a pic before the storm?
Love this...
āHolding sway over their court
Of stately greeneryā!
Very regal!
~Laura~
June 8th, 2018 08:42
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