Comments received on poems by Lorna



Road Trip Conclusions
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Been there, done that,
and I too am glad to be
anywhere but Delaware!

The above words are not mine! They are from a friend who was born in Deleware and left as soon as she could!

A great and honest write!
Thank you for taking me to
Phil Collins...one of my favorites!

~Laura~



May 2nd, 2018 06:48

The Flower Moon - May
marlenawood said:

Absolutely love your poems so elegantly spoken

May 1st, 2018 11:49

The Flower Moon - May
onepauly said:

just me and you
in a clearing
in a forest
in the days of may.


May 1st, 2018 09:35

The Flower Moon - May
Goldfinch60 said:

To the moon and the stars with your words is wonderful.

May 1st, 2018 08:15

The Flower Moon - May
orchidee said:

A lovely write and clip/pic Lorna. Better than the sight of me today. I\'m a Morris dancer (am I? lol), with me shorts on and costume, and bells, going round this May pole in circles! heehee.

May 1st, 2018 06:45

The Flower Moon - May
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Happy May Day...aka...Happy Labor Day( in Italy and many other countries)...national holiday...or as my dad use to say, “Every day is labor day! I work every day!”

A great posting! I loved the video...the piano playing, the visuals, etc. Awesome!
Enjoy the day!

~Laura~

May 1st, 2018 06:28

The Flower Moon - May
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW ~ Lorna ~ this has made me weep with Joy ~ These are all of my FAVOURITE THINGS ! Love the Moon ~ May ~ Flowers and Solo Piano and You for posting such a perfect GEM ! A lovely tribute to MAY (the Prettiest of Months !) In ESSEX we have had the rain with a vengeance ~ but this Morning (on my way to work ~ by BIKE) the Sun was shining and all the flowers were blooming for MAY DAY. It\'s my COFFEE BREAK NOW so just catch up on MPS in the Office with a Fresh Perk ! Yours as always BRIAN ~ Please check my HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ Thanks B. Loved the visuals in the VIDEO !

May 1st, 2018 04:33

My Sails are Luffing
MendedFences27 said:

Brilliant metaphor! A simple but powerful poem. Life, boats, wind , and sails; simple things that express a sadness and a hope. Terrific poem. - Phil A.

April 30th, 2018 11:59

My Sails are Luffing
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
I have a feeling your sails will forever be filled to keep your little boat afloat!
I sense through your writings that you’re a very strong individual with a great sense of humor that will rise above any adversity thrown your way!

~Laura~


April 30th, 2018 10:34

My Sails are Luffing
marlenawood said:

I absolutely love this Lorna and I\'ll have to start posting my artwork for you all to see. Much love

April 30th, 2018 09:47

My Sails are Luffing
Ryuji said:

This is a wonderful write!

April 30th, 2018 09:29

My Sails are Luffing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing LORNA ~ Cool Picture ~ Melancholy Song ~ Sad Poem ! LUFFING is a cool word and something I have often done in Lake Sailing where the wind iv very unpredictable ! \"Steering close to catch the wind in your sails\".
When we are losing someone close we can reflect on the effect of their presence in nautical terms as in many songs ! They are the \"Wind in our Sails\" and the \"Compass to direct us\" ! In my experience ~ the sad thing is ~ when they\'ve gone ~ their support & guidance goes with them. We must cherish our Mentors while we still have them ! Every Blessing BRIAN ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks B !

April 30th, 2018 09:02

My Sails are Luffing
orchidee said:

This poem is \'floating my boat\', as they say!

April 30th, 2018 09:00

My Sails are Luffing
Goldfinch60 said:

May the wind be always in your sails Lorna.

April 30th, 2018 08:04

The Ostrich Pose
onepauly said:

greatly defined.
the way you used the words.
good harmony.

April 27th, 2018 10:28

The Ostrich Pose
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

There are times when one
must bury their head in
the sand, but ultimately
“...behind the hands
she’ll have no doubts “...

An awesome write that will
resonate beyond the read!
I enjoyed the excellent
choice of lyrics by
Garrett Hedlund to accentuate your poem!
Did you see the movie
COUNTRY STRONG?

~Laura~

April 27th, 2018 08:53

The Ostrich Pose
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

April 27th, 2018 07:22

The Ostrich Pose
kevin browne said:

a good strong poignant poem of fighting through the win at the end. love this one, Lorna.

April 27th, 2018 06:01

The Great Escape
Noah said:

Pillows of sand riding camels into foreign lands. Love this

April 26th, 2018 17:08

The Great Escape
Christina8 said:

I really like this write, Lorna! Love the last few lines in particular. Sleep is wonderful!

April 26th, 2018 16:54

The Great Escape
Fay Slimm. said:

I love this write Lorna - the feel of this tribute to sleep soothes as it is being read aloud - an escape indeed from the day\'s demands. - -great number and singer too.

April 26th, 2018 16:01

The Great Escape
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ for sharing such a beautiful lullaby ~ the fact that it is a lament for her dead baby makes it infinitely more POIGNANT ~ AMEN ! Love the singer and her perfect features ! Love your POEM ~ sleep is such a Blessing ! I have no difficulty sleeping ~ its waking up and staying awake that bothers me ~ Thanks for sharing & Caring ~ Please check my Poem ~ Yours as always ~ Friend BRIAN

April 26th, 2018 14:02

The Great Escape
onepauly said:

no rest for the weary.

April 26th, 2018 10:02

The Great Escape
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Just finished listening to
the lullaby. It is beautiful!
Dr. KS Chithra’s voice,
the music, and the
lyrics(downloaded the translation) are very soothing!
An excellent write...
metaphorically rich!
Love the poem and the pic! (that’s how I feel some days)
Thank you fo sharing!

~Laura~

April 26th, 2018 09:14

The Great Escape
orchidee said:

I would say a fine poem, but I\'m a bit sleepy nowwzzzzzzzzzz....lol.

April 26th, 2018 08:30

The Great Escape
Goldfinch60 said:

Sleep is so important and can be so life fulfilling.

April 26th, 2018 08:00

The Good Bad Ugly and In Between
Goldfinch60 said:

Brilliant video. Here is a link to another version - https://youtu.be/_P-m2yt0264

April 26th, 2018 00:35

The Good Bad Ugly and In Between
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Lorna. I have a great deal of Ennio Morricone\'s music and as Laura said, it is infectious.

April 26th, 2018 00:25

The Good Bad Ugly and In Between
lasergraph said:

Let\'s juat forget the fight and step up to the bar for a drink.

April 25th, 2018 14:58

The Good Bad Ugly and In Between
Michael Edwards said:

A real steamin\' woman - love the little ditty Lorna

April 25th, 2018 12:40



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