Comments received on poems by Neville
And All Before Our Awakening
Teddy.15 said:
Sending all my love to both Fay and Dusk and to you Nev, two of the most charming and kind poetic hearts who are forever missed here on site. Hoping they are both well. ❤️ ❤️ and one for you beautiful Nev. ❤️
October 26th, 2023 02:02
Teddy.15 said:
Sending all my love to both Fay and Dusk and to you Nev, two of the most charming and kind poetic hearts who are forever missed here on site. Hoping they are both well. ❤️ ❤️ and one for you beautiful Nev. ❤️
October 26th, 2023 02:02
Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
Bobby O said:
I’d give that dude some advice. Like find a Conch? What thrills me the most is that I’m a million miles away from knowing how these thoughts possibly drift to your mind? Should I read that Timothy Leary book?
October 25th, 2023 23:59
Bobby O said:
I’d give that dude some advice. Like find a Conch? What thrills me the most is that I’m a million miles away from knowing how these thoughts possibly drift to your mind? Should I read that Timothy Leary book?
October 25th, 2023 23:59
Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
MendedFences27 said:
\"The Voice of the Sea\" has called many to her bosom, and all were thus enslaved. Life on the sea is slave labor at its very least. A sailor is but a droplet in a furious ocean.
Well-spoken and personified this poem of yours. \"She\" is what sailor\'s call the sea and all the boats upon her. Just a clever piece of imagery. - Phil A.
October 25th, 2023 15:53
MendedFences27 said:
\"The Voice of the Sea\" has called many to her bosom, and all were thus enslaved. Life on the sea is slave labor at its very least. A sailor is but a droplet in a furious ocean.
Well-spoken and personified this poem of yours. \"She\" is what sailor\'s call the sea and all the boats upon her. Just a clever piece of imagery. - Phil A.
October 25th, 2023 15:53
Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
arqios said:
Compelling, N... what sway she has.
October 25th, 2023 03:23
arqios said:
Compelling, N... what sway she has.
October 25th, 2023 03:23
Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
orchidee said:
KP did this - the clenched fist - I heard the sound of botox! Doh!
October 25th, 2023 01:46
orchidee said:
KP did this - the clenched fist - I heard the sound of botox! Doh!
October 25th, 2023 01:46
Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
Teddy.15 said:
She can certainly persuade the most strongest of souls. Absolutely beautiful. ❤️
October 25th, 2023 01:06
Teddy.15 said:
She can certainly persuade the most strongest of souls. Absolutely beautiful. ❤️
October 25th, 2023 01:06
Conchetta - Voice of the Sea
LIZ said:
Mmmmm \"To him, and him alone\", a confession...private, intimate, pure!! Wrapped in calming, soothing sounds! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 25th, 2023 00:30
LIZ said:
Mmmmm \"To him, and him alone\", a confession...private, intimate, pure!! Wrapped in calming, soothing sounds! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 25th, 2023 00:30
Advice on Learning to Fall
Bobby O said:
Alas , both. Prepare but never fear, and keep your wing tips shiny.
October 24th, 2023 20:10
Bobby O said:
Alas , both. Prepare but never fear, and keep your wing tips shiny.
October 24th, 2023 20:10
Advice on Learning to Fall
MendedFences27 said:
Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very clever poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A
October 24th, 2023 11:19
MendedFences27 said:
Sound advice on how to break a fall and to survive a broken heart. A very clever poem. Much enjoyed. - Phil A
October 24th, 2023 11:19
Advice on Learning to Fall
LIZ said:
Welcome back!!!! You know....because I\'m a bodybuilder...the \"landing lightly\" makes a lot of sense to me. So, yes, give it your all, GO HARD, BUT, remember to pay attention to how and where you land! Loved it!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜
October 24th, 2023 02:34
LIZ said:
Welcome back!!!! You know....because I\'m a bodybuilder...the \"landing lightly\" makes a lot of sense to me. So, yes, give it your all, GO HARD, BUT, remember to pay attention to how and where you land! Loved it!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜
October 24th, 2023 02:34
Advice on Learning to Fall
Teddy.15 said:
Ah welcome back my dear Nev, with sound advice as always. ❤️
October 24th, 2023 02:18
Teddy.15 said:
Ah welcome back my dear Nev, with sound advice as always. ❤️
October 24th, 2023 02:18
Advice on Learning to Fall
orchidee said:
Sounds like instructions for me as I train to become \'The Birdman!\' lol.
October 24th, 2023 01:59
orchidee said:
Sounds like instructions for me as I train to become \'The Birdman!\' lol.
October 24th, 2023 01:59
That Afterwards Feeling
rhmn_7 said:
Last day of school, still remember that feeling...
October 22nd, 2023 09:11
rhmn_7 said:
Last day of school, still remember that feeling...
October 22nd, 2023 09:11
That Afterwards Feeling
SureshG said:
For those who have not experienced That Afterwards Feeling, will positively exhale after reading these mesmerizing words.
October 19th, 2023 12:05
SureshG said:
For those who have not experienced That Afterwards Feeling, will positively exhale after reading these mesmerizing words.
October 19th, 2023 12:05
That Afterwards Feeling
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling of love from the past can be so strong Neville.
Andy
October 14th, 2023 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling of love from the past can be so strong Neville.
Andy
October 14th, 2023 01:20
That Afterwards Feeling
Christina8 said:
All those beautiful endorphins released to make \"that afterwards feeling\" are quite similar to what I feel now after reading your poem. Great job, N!
October 13th, 2023 07:51
Christina8 said:
All those beautiful endorphins released to make \"that afterwards feeling\" are quite similar to what I feel now after reading your poem. Great job, N!
October 13th, 2023 07:51
That Afterwards Feeling
Pop64 said:
What a feeling to read this! It reminds me of moments, some special, some not so much, but yet welcomed, comfortable moments. Lovely read, mt friend!
October 13th, 2023 07:30
Pop64 said:
What a feeling to read this! It reminds me of moments, some special, some not so much, but yet welcomed, comfortable moments. Lovely read, mt friend!
October 13th, 2023 07:30
That Afterwards Feeling
L. B. Mek said:
My favourite
of all my favourite\'s
from your Genius INK over the years!
\'THE POET\'
I bow low to your superior talent
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
oh i\'ll be reading this again and again
October 13th, 2023 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
My favourite
of all my favourite\'s
from your Genius INK over the years!
\'THE POET\'
I bow low to your superior talent
!!!BRILLIANT!!!
oh i\'ll be reading this again and again
October 13th, 2023 07:04
The Measure of a Single Year
L. B. Mek said:
I measure it in blinks
makes it easier to understand
how I time-travelled
from one to the next
forgetting where all the Time went
in-between...
still that great Scottish poem being sang
by the world, while holding hands
will never get old
(to me, at least)
October 13th, 2023 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
I measure it in blinks
makes it easier to understand
how I time-travelled
from one to the next
forgetting where all the Time went
in-between...
still that great Scottish poem being sang
by the world, while holding hands
will never get old
(to me, at least)
October 13th, 2023 07:01
Me My Bro and A Chainsaw
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
no, first one\'s are tepid cuts
because we hadn\'t learnt to fall
deep,
yet
but hey, later we learn
that barbies just like ken\'s
are to be played with, only
and eventually
we find ourselves a real person
to hope with...
(so graphic!
i think there\'s a horror director
trapped inside you
waiting for the right timing....
do you have a brother?
forgive me for being a little jealous
that Hyung, is more than a word to me
lol)
an energetic write this one...
Halloween themed one could suggest..
but always depth, wise Poet
always something to peel back
and appreciate
with all your poems!
October 13th, 2023 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
sadly
no, first one\'s are tepid cuts
because we hadn\'t learnt to fall
deep,
yet
but hey, later we learn
that barbies just like ken\'s
are to be played with, only
and eventually
we find ourselves a real person
to hope with...
(so graphic!
i think there\'s a horror director
trapped inside you
waiting for the right timing....
do you have a brother?
forgive me for being a little jealous
that Hyung, is more than a word to me
lol)
an energetic write this one...
Halloween themed one could suggest..
but always depth, wise Poet
always something to peel back
and appreciate
with all your poems!
October 13th, 2023 06:57
Why Else Wish Him So Blind
L. B. Mek said:
ermm one of your more
ermm \'literal\' poems my friend
that imbues more emotionality
than any words could, clever
(but hey
it could have just been
a Blighty bank holiday
since, you know
how we love our screws
and hammers, and making a mess
on those Monday\'s
we\'re left having a staring match
with Time and our home..)
too much comfort
always
a prerequisite, trait
of all
two-timing morons!
(there is no gun
to your fckn head
save your partner
from needles heartache
wait, one fckn night
have a conversation
say your goodbyes
then be all the randy rabbit
you want...)
morons! I\'ll never get it
ever
there is no why to it
(unless they\'re
emotionally pushed in-to it
by their own partner\'s actions
like a retaliation thing
but that\'s not \'cheating\' per say
that\'s just a release of wrath..)
..
I got carried away again Hyung
forgive me
October 13th, 2023 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
ermm one of your more
ermm \'literal\' poems my friend
that imbues more emotionality
than any words could, clever
(but hey
it could have just been
a Blighty bank holiday
since, you know
how we love our screws
and hammers, and making a mess
on those Monday\'s
we\'re left having a staring match
with Time and our home..)
too much comfort
always
a prerequisite, trait
of all
two-timing morons!
(there is no gun
to your fckn head
save your partner
from needles heartache
wait, one fckn night
have a conversation
say your goodbyes
then be all the randy rabbit
you want...)
morons! I\'ll never get it
ever
there is no why to it
(unless they\'re
emotionally pushed in-to it
by their own partner\'s actions
like a retaliation thing
but that\'s not \'cheating\' per say
that\'s just a release of wrath..)
..
I got carried away again Hyung
forgive me
October 13th, 2023 06:50
That Afterwards Feeling
LIZ said:
This reminds me of the song \"When we were young\" by Adele! Those moments are so beautiful!! Young feelings!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 13th, 2023 03:09
LIZ said:
This reminds me of the song \"When we were young\" by Adele! Those moments are so beautiful!! Young feelings!! 💜💜💜💜💜
October 13th, 2023 03:09
That Afterwards Feeling
Bobby O said:
Love the poem love the honest admittance. As an aside , the only English girl I dated was all excited to make me breakfast and it ended up being just beans and toast and eggs and I started looking around waiting for the what I thought was a certain to come punchline and when noticed her feelings got hurt and I was forever denied more English
“Dessert”!
October 13th, 2023 02:50
Bobby O said:
Love the poem love the honest admittance. As an aside , the only English girl I dated was all excited to make me breakfast and it ended up being just beans and toast and eggs and I started looking around waiting for the what I thought was a certain to come punchline and when noticed her feelings got hurt and I was forever denied more English
“Dessert”!
October 13th, 2023 02:50
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