Comments received on poems by Neville
Atarashī Kodō ga Hajimaru Shunken
orchidee said:
KP placed her hand..... I can\'t go on - swoon! heehee.
January 9th, 2023 03:20
orchidee said:
KP placed her hand..... I can\'t go on - swoon! heehee.
January 9th, 2023 03:20
Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Goldfinch60 said:
May that heaven be forever with you Neville.
Andy
January 9th, 2023 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
May that heaven be forever with you Neville.
Andy
January 9th, 2023 02:29
Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Bella Shepard said:
This is a poem to truly dive into head first, and be immersed in the richness of sensuous words. There can be no doubt but that it is personal and dear. Thank you for sharing the fervor.
January 8th, 2023 11:04
Bella Shepard said:
This is a poem to truly dive into head first, and be immersed in the richness of sensuous words. There can be no doubt but that it is personal and dear. Thank you for sharing the fervor.
January 8th, 2023 11:04
Something More Than Just Skin Deep
orchidee said:
Now why you not gonna tell us? I know why. You want to save me from a swoon! lol.
January 8th, 2023 08:00
orchidee said:
Now why you not gonna tell us? I know why. You want to save me from a swoon! lol.
January 8th, 2023 08:00
Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Fay Slimm. said:
The senses of love used by a romantic and told with such energy in line after line makes this an exciting read mon dear ami - - top marks again for making me sigh that I did not write this ...........x
January 8th, 2023 06:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The senses of love used by a romantic and told with such energy in line after line makes this an exciting read mon dear ami - - top marks again for making me sigh that I did not write this ...........x
January 8th, 2023 06:22
When I am Forgot
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s so sad but true the world moves on pretty fast and I\'d have to agree with you, at least we get to make a mark on each day that comes through!
January 8th, 2023 04:36
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s so sad but true the world moves on pretty fast and I\'d have to agree with you, at least we get to make a mark on each day that comes through!
January 8th, 2023 04:36
Something More Than Just Skin Deep
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Happy new year my friend and what a powerful read for me. As today I struggle with my body just falling apart, you reminded me at least I can still touch, feel and laugh.
Thank you again and many the rest of our year\'s be as wonderful as your great big heart.
Much peace and respect
January 8th, 2023 04:31
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Happy new year my friend and what a powerful read for me. As today I struggle with my body just falling apart, you reminded me at least I can still touch, feel and laugh.
Thank you again and many the rest of our year\'s be as wonderful as your great big heart.
Much peace and respect
January 8th, 2023 04:31
When I am Forgot
Jerry Reynolds said:
Forgetting- I could plan my own surprise party.
You dear poet never.
January 7th, 2023 10:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Forgetting- I could plan my own surprise party.
You dear poet never.
January 7th, 2023 10:43
When I am Forgot
Fay Slimm. said:
A slice of regret comes over from this sad reflection on life and cleverly drawn out in the final lines Reminds me of the old saying that \"Rusting maybe but when once really loved never is one forgotten\" ...... x
January 7th, 2023 06:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A slice of regret comes over from this sad reflection on life and cleverly drawn out in the final lines Reminds me of the old saying that \"Rusting maybe but when once really loved never is one forgotten\" ...... x
January 7th, 2023 06:14
When I am Forgot
orchidee said:
Oh no, not a \'has-been\' like some clapped-out movie star past their sell-by date! lol.
Or mutton dressed as lamb. I refer of course to KP. lol.
Good write, erm,..., I forgot who ya are. Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido!
January 7th, 2023 03:22
orchidee said:
Oh no, not a \'has-been\' like some clapped-out movie star past their sell-by date! lol.
Or mutton dressed as lamb. I refer of course to KP. lol.
Good write, erm,..., I forgot who ya are. Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido!
January 7th, 2023 03:22
When I am Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
You will not be forgotten Neville, after all I have one of your books.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
You will not be forgotten Neville, after all I have one of your books.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 03:14
Marina Girls
Goldfinch60 said:
You touch many hearts with your poetry Neville.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
You touch many hearts with your poetry Neville.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:49
Marina Girls
Bella Shepard said:
The olfactory is such a powerful sense, how with just the hint of a scent we can be transported, without even realizing it, to another place, another time. A sweet poem of reminiscence with the smell of love in the air. Lovely my friend!
January 6th, 2023 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
The olfactory is such a powerful sense, how with just the hint of a scent we can be transported, without even realizing it, to another place, another time. A sweet poem of reminiscence with the smell of love in the air. Lovely my friend!
January 6th, 2023 14:15
Marina Girls
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those scents of the sea bring back the most seductive memories Nev. - - your lines remind me of those nights of gone dreams and the harbour boys who left us girls breathless..
January 6th, 2023 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those scents of the sea bring back the most seductive memories Nev. - - your lines remind me of those nights of gone dreams and the harbour boys who left us girls breathless..
January 6th, 2023 11:44
Marina Girls
L. B. Mek said:
(if Poesy, had a physical form
I too think it would be in the guise
of effervescent mermaids:
\'beguilingly, illusive and endlessly
imbued with beatific sincerity
seeped, deep
in intensely, intuitive sensuality
that wisdom of feminine grace
and humane, empathy\')
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
I\'m just lucky you don\'t charge me
for endlessly inspiring
these humble scribbles of mine, Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 07:34
L. B. Mek said:
(if Poesy, had a physical form
I too think it would be in the guise
of effervescent mermaids:
\'beguilingly, illusive and endlessly
imbued with beatific sincerity
seeped, deep
in intensely, intuitive sensuality
that wisdom of feminine grace
and humane, empathy\')
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
I\'m just lucky you don\'t charge me
for endlessly inspiring
these humble scribbles of mine, Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 07:34
Marina Girls
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was KP one of those gals?! lol. Well, I never hardly see her. Dunno where she goes most of the time. lol.
January 6th, 2023 06:53
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was KP one of those gals?! lol. Well, I never hardly see her. Dunno where she goes most of the time. lol.
January 6th, 2023 06:53
New Wine From Old Vines
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
we must first survive our winter\'s, to earn
those comforting sips
of our life\'s warming mulled wine, mementos\'
(so relatable and worded accessible
a great write, Hyung
loved that subtle smooth jazz tonality
to your pacing and rhythm)
January 6th, 2023 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
we must first survive our winter\'s, to earn
those comforting sips
of our life\'s warming mulled wine, mementos\'
(so relatable and worded accessible
a great write, Hyung
loved that subtle smooth jazz tonality
to your pacing and rhythm)
January 6th, 2023 05:20
Amelie
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful smile
you and your family must be so very proud,
I pray fate shines only the kindest gaze
upon her long and fruitful, future..
(book will be purchased
and devoured, from first
to last alphabet)
Congrat\'s Hyung! how inspirational
what a great way to start my year\'s reading
220, you spoiled us, worth the wait!
👏🍻😎
January 6th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful smile
you and your family must be so very proud,
I pray fate shines only the kindest gaze
upon her long and fruitful, future..
(book will be purchased
and devoured, from first
to last alphabet)
Congrat\'s Hyung! how inspirational
what a great way to start my year\'s reading
220, you spoiled us, worth the wait!
👏🍻😎
January 6th, 2023 05:14
The Most Perfect Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'manipulate
undulating
bespoke
template\'
just wonderfully worded
(if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
they\'ve got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
lol
thanks for sharing Hyung
January 6th, 2023 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'manipulate
undulating
bespoke
template\'
just wonderfully worded
(if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
they\'ve got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
lol
thanks for sharing Hyung
January 6th, 2023 05:05
When We Were Hot
L. B. Mek said:
\'And my word,
how we did then shine ..
Both hot
and furnace bright ..\'
(tattooing those youthful sunshine skies
with the trails of our realised dreams
oh how we did fly, high
scorching our wings of love, for a lifetime)
absolutely loved your poem Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'And my word,
how we did then shine ..
Both hot
and furnace bright ..\'
(tattooing those youthful sunshine skies
with the trails of our realised dreams
oh how we did fly, high
scorching our wings of love, for a lifetime)
absolutely loved your poem Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 04:59
New Wine From Old Vines
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a glass of Rioja please Neville. 🍷🍷🍷
Andy
January 6th, 2023 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a glass of Rioja please Neville. 🍷🍷🍷
Andy
January 6th, 2023 02:33
New Wine From Old Vines
Fay Slimm. said:
An intoxicating read and no doubt that if old vines can grow new shoots young love will flourish again. I am taken with every line of your chosen metaphor mon ami. First class writing,.
January 4th, 2023 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
An intoxicating read and no doubt that if old vines can grow new shoots young love will flourish again. I am taken with every line of your chosen metaphor mon ami. First class writing,.
January 4th, 2023 13:40
New Wine From Old Vines
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful way to say love never grows old. That fine, mellow wine warms and intoxicates in the very best way. Thank you for this lovely image!
January 4th, 2023 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful way to say love never grows old. That fine, mellow wine warms and intoxicates in the very best way. Thank you for this lovely image!
January 4th, 2023 12:22
Amelie
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words for a very good cause Neville. I have ordered \"Somewhere Behind These Eyes\".
Andy
January 3rd, 2023 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words for a very good cause Neville. I have ordered \"Somewhere Behind These Eyes\".
Andy
January 3rd, 2023 03:11
Amelie
Fay Slimm. said:
Courage shines from Amelie\'s sweet smile and wishes for her healthy recovery wing straight from here to this brave little lady as I read of her recent surgery. These worthy causes are high on my list too dear Nev - am on the way to purchase another of those titles and will be telling all of my friends too. Bless you and the rest of the kin-folk as you wait in hopeful trust that Amelie\'s treatment in Germany will aid her return to her family soon fully restored and happily smiling once more .........x
January 2nd, 2023 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Courage shines from Amelie\'s sweet smile and wishes for her healthy recovery wing straight from here to this brave little lady as I read of her recent surgery. These worthy causes are high on my list too dear Nev - am on the way to purchase another of those titles and will be telling all of my friends too. Bless you and the rest of the kin-folk as you wait in hopeful trust that Amelie\'s treatment in Germany will aid her return to her family soon fully restored and happily smiling once more .........x
January 2nd, 2023 16:54
Amelie
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem for such a beautiful little girl. That such a cruel disease should strike anyone is heart breaking, but to touch a child doubly so. I admire your commitment to these causes and all that you do for them. I\'ve ordered \"Turquoise & Other Shades of Blue\" and can\'t wait to read it. God bless you and sweet little Amelie, wishing her all the best.
January 2nd, 2023 14:39
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem for such a beautiful little girl. That such a cruel disease should strike anyone is heart breaking, but to touch a child doubly so. I admire your commitment to these causes and all that you do for them. I\'ve ordered \"Turquoise & Other Shades of Blue\" and can\'t wait to read it. God bless you and sweet little Amelie, wishing her all the best.
January 2nd, 2023 14:39
Amelie
orchidee said:
A poignant write Neville.
Meanwhile in my ridiculously less comparable way to this - a publisher and I fell out about \'alway\'. They said, erm, dunno about that. Reckon it should be \'always\'. Don\'t these people know what \'poetic\' means? Doh!
January 2nd, 2023 09:06
orchidee said:
A poignant write Neville.
Meanwhile in my ridiculously less comparable way to this - a publisher and I fell out about \'alway\'. They said, erm, dunno about that. Reckon it should be \'always\'. Don\'t these people know what \'poetic\' means? Doh!
January 2nd, 2023 09:06
The Most Perfect Love
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love remain perfect Neville,
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love remain perfect Neville,
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:49
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