Comments received on poems by Neville
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Sunsetmet said:
This is lovely how it is worded Elephant to me good luck I love them
August 4th, 2023 14:21
Sunsetmet said:
This is lovely how it is worded Elephant to me good luck I love them
August 4th, 2023 14:21
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , Neville )). I love the soft tone to this poem and the way the words flow
So nicely expressed
August 4th, 2023 12:22
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , Neville )). I love the soft tone to this poem and the way the words flow
So nicely expressed
August 4th, 2023 12:22
Afterbirth
Christina8 said:
OMG your write rings so true! It may even be a different experience with each child.I hope your daughter heals and with it, peace of mind . i know sleepless nights well and i hope that gets better too! Hugs
August 4th, 2023 08:32
Christina8 said:
OMG your write rings so true! It may even be a different experience with each child.I hope your daughter heals and with it, peace of mind . i know sleepless nights well and i hope that gets better too! Hugs
August 4th, 2023 08:32
Afterbirth
Bobby O said:
Like a Birmingham Dart shooter
Trip 20
Trip 20
Dbl 20 out! Tell all to stuff their pockets w the mini arrows cuz WHEN ITS your turn you finish
Mood swings tears dried all fair advice applied, have respect for that man with the Plan.
August 4th, 2023 06:33
Bobby O said:
Like a Birmingham Dart shooter
Trip 20
Trip 20
Dbl 20 out! Tell all to stuff their pockets w the mini arrows cuz WHEN ITS your turn you finish
Mood swings tears dried all fair advice applied, have respect for that man with the Plan.
August 4th, 2023 06:33
Afterbirth
Teddy.15 said:
What empathy you behold truly, being a new mum is the most crazy experience a women can ever have, I\'ve done it so I can safely say this, emotions and hormones. I know she is your beloved daughter but you got inside her mind and a few million other women too. You always amaze me But this is out of extraordinary dear Nev. Kudos on so many levels. Sending big hugs and loads of love to you all from Italy 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:43
Teddy.15 said:
What empathy you behold truly, being a new mum is the most crazy experience a women can ever have, I\'ve done it so I can safely say this, emotions and hormones. I know she is your beloved daughter but you got inside her mind and a few million other women too. You always amaze me But this is out of extraordinary dear Nev. Kudos on so many levels. Sending big hugs and loads of love to you all from Italy 💖
August 4th, 2023 05:43
Afterbirth
orchidee said:
KP\'s mood swings are unbearable. She\'s only in a mood when she can\'t afford more botox. lol.
Here\'s a poem by her: \'Me, me, me, me,......\'
August 4th, 2023 04:59
orchidee said:
KP\'s mood swings are unbearable. She\'s only in a mood when she can\'t afford more botox. lol.
Here\'s a poem by her: \'Me, me, me, me,......\'
August 4th, 2023 04:59
Afterbirth
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XauMRc4pXZc
)
August 4th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XauMRc4pXZc
)
August 4th, 2023 04:12
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
you\'ve perfected your flow and timing
in your trademark poetic, conversational style
it all reads so effortless
even on a first read, it feels like something I\'ve practised before
August 4th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
you\'ve perfected your flow and timing
in your trademark poetic, conversational style
it all reads so effortless
even on a first read, it feels like something I\'ve practised before
August 4th, 2023 04:10
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
L. B. Mek said:
\'feel, taste,
smell and see
you smiling ..
Full on, that is\'
(reading your pearls of poetic wisdom
my cherished friend
is like having a conversation
with someone who has known us a long time
you imbue so much relatable accessibility
and versions of a past, we somehow recognise,
allowing us to delve deep in your ink and excavate
our very own private answers
to questions, we would otherwise
would still be happy to keep repressed
pretending, we didn\'t know they were there...)
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'feel, taste,
smell and see
you smiling ..
Full on, that is\'
(reading your pearls of poetic wisdom
my cherished friend
is like having a conversation
with someone who has known us a long time
you imbue so much relatable accessibility
and versions of a past, we somehow recognise,
allowing us to delve deep in your ink and excavate
our very own private answers
to questions, we would otherwise
would still be happy to keep repressed
pretending, we didn\'t know they were there...)
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 04:05
Tongue Spillage
L. B. Mek said:
so true dear Poet supreme!
\'toxicity\' is a most subtle
yet debilitating, ingredient of love...
(certain relationships seem to be vacuum sealed
in their own cyclical despair
too invested for either party to walk away
yet, within a week of that now
well practised make-up routine
both are playing that cagey assassin game
waiting to see, which lie
will stab deeper
and which betrayal, will eventually
deal that final blow
till then, they\'re left restlessly squirming
fidgeting, trying to gage the threat
of every kiss and embrace...)
August 4th, 2023 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
so true dear Poet supreme!
\'toxicity\' is a most subtle
yet debilitating, ingredient of love...
(certain relationships seem to be vacuum sealed
in their own cyclical despair
too invested for either party to walk away
yet, within a week of that now
well practised make-up routine
both are playing that cagey assassin game
waiting to see, which lie
will stab deeper
and which betrayal, will eventually
deal that final blow
till then, they\'re left restlessly squirming
fidgeting, trying to gage the threat
of every kiss and embrace...)
August 4th, 2023 03:57
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories bring back such wonderful memories Neville.
Andy
August 4th, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories bring back such wonderful memories Neville.
Andy
August 4th, 2023 00:41
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
MendedFences27 said:
The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t.
A most intriguing poem. A memory from the past relived and now memorialized forever. Life\'s crossroads cause the most colorful meetings. This is a classic, - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2023 15:20
MendedFences27 said:
The girl may have forgotten you but the elephant sure as hell hasn\'t.
A most intriguing poem. A memory from the past relived and now memorialized forever. Life\'s crossroads cause the most colorful meetings. This is a classic, - Phil A.
August 3rd, 2023 15:20
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
orchidee said:
KP\'s got a naughty elephant joke, but she can\'t repeat it in public - requests for it via e-mail, please! lol.
August 3rd, 2023 12:58
orchidee said:
KP\'s got a naughty elephant joke, but she can\'t repeat it in public - requests for it via e-mail, please! lol.
August 3rd, 2023 12:58
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
jarcher54 said:
My wife had an uncle who ran away in his mid-teens and joined the circus back in the 1930\'s. He was apparently a clown and a roadie. If I recall, you\'ve had an eye issue that affects colors? Well, maybe that clown career is off the table, but you are now MPS\'s court jester so there\'s that!
August 3rd, 2023 09:13
jarcher54 said:
My wife had an uncle who ran away in his mid-teens and joined the circus back in the 1930\'s. He was apparently a clown and a roadie. If I recall, you\'ve had an eye issue that affects colors? Well, maybe that clown career is off the table, but you are now MPS\'s court jester so there\'s that!
August 3rd, 2023 09:13
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Bella Shepard said:
Love is such a tangled web, that if we had the power to lay straight, every strand, would we? It\'s the unpredictibility that keeps us on our toes, as does the weather. Beautifully crafted and a joy to read dear Nev. Wishing you fair skies!
August 3rd, 2023 08:13
Bella Shepard said:
Love is such a tangled web, that if we had the power to lay straight, every strand, would we? It\'s the unpredictibility that keeps us on our toes, as does the weather. Beautifully crafted and a joy to read dear Nev. Wishing you fair skies!
August 3rd, 2023 08:13
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Doggerel Dave said:
Loved the circus...and the fantasies I had about the lady on the flying trapeze... until the sawdust got the better of my asthma.
Never mind - the evocation was all...
August 3rd, 2023 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Loved the circus...and the fantasies I had about the lady on the flying trapeze... until the sawdust got the better of my asthma.
Never mind - the evocation was all...
August 3rd, 2023 05:55
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Parisab said:
I just imagined a boy looking at a vintage circus post card…this poem seems subliminal and I wonder what Jung would have said! So beautiful…
August 3rd, 2023 01:42
Parisab said:
I just imagined a boy looking at a vintage circus post card…this poem seems subliminal and I wonder what Jung would have said! So beautiful…
August 3rd, 2023 01:42
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:37
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:37
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
KP was an elephant-rider in a circus. One day she fell off. The elephant stepped on her, but its foot bounced off her, as she is full of botox! lol.
Don\'t ya just love it when she\'s taken down a peg or two.
August 3rd, 2023 01:34
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
KP was an elephant-rider in a circus. One day she fell off. The elephant stepped on her, but its foot bounced off her, as she is full of botox! lol.
Don\'t ya just love it when she\'s taken down a peg or two.
August 3rd, 2023 01:34
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful in every way, pain can bring such art as this. 💖
August 3rd, 2023 01:32
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful in every way, pain can bring such art as this. 💖
August 3rd, 2023 01:32
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
LIZ said:
I love this one!! Days when things were simple and innocent!! ❤️
August 3rd, 2023 01:25
LIZ said:
I love this one!! Days when things were simple and innocent!! ❤️
August 3rd, 2023 01:25
A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:14
Bobby O said:
That’s true treasure.
The wheel snd the write.
August 3rd, 2023 01:14
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Christina8 said:
Well, I\'m smiling! A beautifully penned write! x
August 3rd, 2023 00:44
Christina8 said:
Well, I\'m smiling! A beautifully penned write! x
August 3rd, 2023 00:44
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
orchidee said:
And now some words that do have something to do with the weather - sun, rain, wind, whatever ya fancy! lol.
It\'s educational on \'ere, as I\'ve said!
August 2nd, 2023 12:36
orchidee said:
And now some words that do have something to do with the weather - sun, rain, wind, whatever ya fancy! lol.
It\'s educational on \'ere, as I\'ve said!
August 2nd, 2023 12:36
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
MendedFences27 said:
Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others live under a cloud. Then, there are the realists, who get snowed, get sunburnt, or carried away on winds of promise.
This poem, it seems to me, is about a relationship that is on and off, again and again. Perhaps a stormy one, where she brings the rain. Enjoyed it. - phil A.
August 2nd, 2023 10:08
MendedFences27 said:
Some folks change with the weather, some are sunny all the time, others live under a cloud. Then, there are the realists, who get snowed, get sunburnt, or carried away on winds of promise.
This poem, it seems to me, is about a relationship that is on and off, again and again. Perhaps a stormy one, where she brings the rain. Enjoyed it. - phil A.
August 2nd, 2023 10:08
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Teddy.15 said:
I see an image of a love that once was, peeping in and out again,. I often wonder why people are cruel when it comes to love, I have come somewhat to the conclusion it\'s pure selfishness with an ugly ego mixed in. lol 💖🤣 sorry to go on dear boy!
August 2nd, 2023 02:43
Teddy.15 said:
I see an image of a love that once was, peeping in and out again,. I often wonder why people are cruel when it comes to love, I have come somewhat to the conclusion it\'s pure selfishness with an ugly ego mixed in. lol 💖🤣 sorry to go on dear boy!
August 2nd, 2023 02:43
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say this to KP:\' Not now, KP, I\'ve got a headache; or \'Not now, KP, it\'s raining - though we are indoors!\' Any excuse to not...... TMI (Too Much Info) to tell you more! lol.
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say this to KP:\' Not now, KP, I\'ve got a headache; or \'Not now, KP, it\'s raining - though we are indoors!\' Any excuse to not...... TMI (Too Much Info) to tell you more! lol.
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
LIZ said:
Well, it\'s the full moon 🌚....it highlights emotions that need healing, and things we need to release!! Happy Wednesday!!!
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
LIZ said:
Well, it\'s the full moon 🌚....it highlights emotions that need healing, and things we need to release!! Happy Wednesday!!!
August 2nd, 2023 02:15
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Parisab said:
The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most interesting read, poet friend…
August 2nd, 2023 01:48
Parisab said:
The weather seems hazy and a bit shady-yet you still make it the most interesting read, poet friend…
August 2nd, 2023 01:48
Tongue Spillage
Parisab said:
I’ve never heard a masculine brand of annoyances to sound so delightful… Must be the English humor…
August 1st, 2023 22:03
Parisab said:
I’ve never heard a masculine brand of annoyances to sound so delightful… Must be the English humor…
August 1st, 2023 22:03
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