Comments received on poems by Neville
With Only Five Leaves Left
Doggerel Dave said:
Not wrong there Neville. Took the obvious course (that\'s me...). Owing to lousy speakers or poor hearing or possibly both was unable to sus Nick Drake out via the three songs available on u tube. His story on w\'pedia makes for grim reading.... although I recall encounters with several folks with similar behaviors way back when... I have a terrible feeling I didn\'t show them enough compassion.....
August 23rd, 2022 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Not wrong there Neville. Took the obvious course (that\'s me...). Owing to lousy speakers or poor hearing or possibly both was unable to sus Nick Drake out via the three songs available on u tube. His story on w\'pedia makes for grim reading.... although I recall encounters with several folks with similar behaviors way back when... I have a terrible feeling I didn\'t show them enough compassion.....
August 23rd, 2022 18:40
With Only Five Leaves Left
orchidee said:
I not got a clue! I wouldn\'t have. Trust me not to have. heehee.
August 23rd, 2022 14:49
orchidee said:
I not got a clue! I wouldn\'t have. Trust me not to have. heehee.
August 23rd, 2022 14:49
Anticipating Angels
spilleronsheet said:
I felt as if lovers separated by a boundary called heaven…so much romantic and full of fantasy dear Neville…
August 22nd, 2022 03:58
spilleronsheet said:
I felt as if lovers separated by a boundary called heaven…so much romantic and full of fantasy dear Neville…
August 22nd, 2022 03:58
Anticipating Angels
Doggerel Dave said:
I find my literal mind unable to be sure of the directional movement here, Nev - closer or further away? Am I to make the choice?
For me almost koan like.
August 21st, 2022 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I find my literal mind unable to be sure of the directional movement here, Nev - closer or further away? Am I to make the choice?
For me almost koan like.
August 21st, 2022 19:38
Anticipating Angels
dean langmuir said:
Thank you for exercising my one brain cell,take care,poem on
August 21st, 2022 17:43
dean langmuir said:
Thank you for exercising my one brain cell,take care,poem on
August 21st, 2022 17:43
Anticipating Angels
MendedFences27 said:
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought this might be a sad poem or a joyous one, but, \"Milligrams\" draws everything closer. This is about separation (maybe?) as in waiting for one\'s return. Someone bringing the joy to you. Well, I now see the expectation vs, the carrier of angels (joy). Maybe a homecoming. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2022 13:55
MendedFences27 said:
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought this might be a sad poem or a joyous one, but, \"Milligrams\" draws everything closer. This is about separation (maybe?) as in waiting for one\'s return. Someone bringing the joy to you. Well, I now see the expectation vs, the carrier of angels (joy). Maybe a homecoming. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2022 13:55
Anticipating Angels
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a milligram or two of anticipation my friend. You paint such a seductive ;picture as always.......x
August 21st, 2022 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a milligram or two of anticipation my friend. You paint such a seductive ;picture as always.......x
August 21st, 2022 04:22
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Bella Shepard said:
Doesn\'t the exotic, or even the quixotic always attract us? Without it we\'d be a pretty dull lot, and a little perversion every now and then just might be, dare I say, healthy. So yes, I think that this makes sense. Hope the knee is feeling better.
August 20th, 2022 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
Doesn\'t the exotic, or even the quixotic always attract us? Without it we\'d be a pretty dull lot, and a little perversion every now and then just might be, dare I say, healthy. So yes, I think that this makes sense. Hope the knee is feeling better.
August 20th, 2022 13:36
Come Let us Dance Some More
Bella Shepard said:
The dance is always divine, no matter how, no matter wear (pun intended). Dance on my friend. What fun!
August 20th, 2022 13:27
Bella Shepard said:
The dance is always divine, no matter how, no matter wear (pun intended). Dance on my friend. What fun!
August 20th, 2022 13:27
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Doggerel Dave said:
The key definitely was chucked away.
So on what grounds do you appeal?
I\'m sure you will get remission for good behaviour, Nev.
August 19th, 2022 06:46
Doggerel Dave said:
The key definitely was chucked away.
So on what grounds do you appeal?
I\'m sure you will get remission for good behaviour, Nev.
August 19th, 2022 06:46
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Goldfinch60 said:
Those strange relationships can lead to that padded cell sometimes Neville, that\'s ok as long as it is not the one next to Orchi. LOL
Andy
August 19th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those strange relationships can lead to that padded cell sometimes Neville, that\'s ok as long as it is not the one next to Orchi. LOL
Andy
August 19th, 2022 01:42
Come Let us Dance Some More
Accidental Poet said:
Dance as you wish N, but don\'t be surprised if a swooning Orchi dances circles around you both. 🤣
August 18th, 2022 21:41
Accidental Poet said:
Dance as you wish N, but don\'t be surprised if a swooning Orchi dances circles around you both. 🤣
August 18th, 2022 21:41
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
orchidee said:
They might throw away the key when I am in the same room as her. Will it bring on my swoons?! I talk some rot sometimes. lol.
August 18th, 2022 12:24
orchidee said:
They might throw away the key when I am in the same room as her. Will it bring on my swoons?! I talk some rot sometimes. lol.
August 18th, 2022 12:24
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed a femme fatale can play many a perverted game methinks Nev and it makes sense to me that their key is maybe in the right place when thrown away - - - - . well perhaps it is..........x
August 18th, 2022 07:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed a femme fatale can play many a perverted game methinks Nev and it makes sense to me that their key is maybe in the right place when thrown away - - - - . well perhaps it is..........x
August 18th, 2022 07:49
Come Let us Dance Some More
orchidee said:
I was OK until I got to \'naked\'. Then it brought on a swoon. It would! lol.
August 18th, 2022 01:29
orchidee said:
I was OK until I got to \'naked\'. Then it brought on a swoon. It would! lol.
August 18th, 2022 01:29
Come Let us Dance Some More
L. B. Mek said:
(\'vulnerability
is a curse, as much
as being a path
to our emancipation\'s
self-worth..\'
but we must be so
so
careful, who
we choose to intrust
for those battered doors
betrayed, once more
may jam themselves, locked
for life..)
Hyung
I know your profession
affords you so much insight
into the \'human psyche\'
but, your poetry
zooms-in and unfurls
those most knotted of situations
we all come across in life
and somehow makes us realise
its alright
we\'re not the only ones, scared
to let someone in
scared to offer ourselves, once again
scared
of this fear, we carry deep inside
that this time, it might all work out
then what
then what do we do, with all this
bruises and scars..
August 18th, 2022 00:53
L. B. Mek said:
(\'vulnerability
is a curse, as much
as being a path
to our emancipation\'s
self-worth..\'
but we must be so
so
careful, who
we choose to intrust
for those battered doors
betrayed, once more
may jam themselves, locked
for life..)
Hyung
I know your profession
affords you so much insight
into the \'human psyche\'
but, your poetry
zooms-in and unfurls
those most knotted of situations
we all come across in life
and somehow makes us realise
its alright
we\'re not the only ones, scared
to let someone in
scared to offer ourselves, once again
scared
of this fear, we carry deep inside
that this time, it might all work out
then what
then what do we do, with all this
bruises and scars..
August 18th, 2022 00:53
Come Let us Dance Some More
Goldfinch60 said:
Once you are with the right person there are never any regrets Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2022 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Once you are with the right person there are never any regrets Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2022 00:48
Come Let us Dance Some More
Doggerel Dave said:
You gotta do wot ya gotta do given the circumstances, I suppose, Nev. Regret on any form is regrettable (!) - ultimately futile....
August 17th, 2022 22:09
Doggerel Dave said:
You gotta do wot ya gotta do given the circumstances, I suppose, Nev. Regret on any form is regrettable (!) - ultimately futile....
August 17th, 2022 22:09
Come Let us Dance Some More
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes despite acid rain let the dancing continue - cleverly writ the \"battered temple doors\" give a semi-ironic view of those who unhearing always condemn but where defiant nakedness will have no regrets - - aptly woven this piece of perceptive imagery to keep us all dancing dear Nev.... ........x
August 17th, 2022 14:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes despite acid rain let the dancing continue - cleverly writ the \"battered temple doors\" give a semi-ironic view of those who unhearing always condemn but where defiant nakedness will have no regrets - - aptly woven this piece of perceptive imagery to keep us all dancing dear Nev.... ........x
August 17th, 2022 14:22
Spellbound
Dove said:
Bewitched, oh the potion of time, pigs don’t sweat, I must say you matter.. lol
Best to you on your injury, and don’t let those pagan verses tatter your spirit..
August 16th, 2022 12:59
Dove said:
Bewitched, oh the potion of time, pigs don’t sweat, I must say you matter.. lol
Best to you on your injury, and don’t let those pagan verses tatter your spirit..
August 16th, 2022 12:59
Spellbound
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets are always around us Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets are always around us Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2022 00:32
Spellbound
Bella Shepard said:
Mysterious, cryptic, I just wish I had a dark and stormy night to read this by, but still a great read!
August 11th, 2022 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
Mysterious, cryptic, I just wish I had a dark and stormy night to read this by, but still a great read!
August 11th, 2022 12:25
Spellbound
dusk arising said:
Definitely some \"eye of newt\" about this piece amid it joyous splendour of a reading.
I feel that to dwell and seek measure in its words would betray the pure pleasure of it\'s reading.
August 11th, 2022 09:45
dusk arising said:
Definitely some \"eye of newt\" about this piece amid it joyous splendour of a reading.
I feel that to dwell and seek measure in its words would betray the pure pleasure of it\'s reading.
August 11th, 2022 09:45
Spellbound
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and hearing those whispers and shakin\' a bit as I light a candle to this grandly full and spellbinding moon - - hey-up then amigo cos tonight I\'ll be adancin\' .............x
August 11th, 2022 09:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and hearing those whispers and shakin\' a bit as I light a candle to this grandly full and spellbinding moon - - hey-up then amigo cos tonight I\'ll be adancin\' .............x
August 11th, 2022 09:13
Spellbound
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t realise there was a place for horse manure in the Wicca armoury.... 😊
August 11th, 2022 06:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t realise there was a place for horse manure in the Wicca armoury.... 😊
August 11th, 2022 06:56
Spellbound
Doggerel Dave said:
Woooo - Spells and incantations rule during the full moon - Had you not better take a full case history there, Dr Nev?
August 11th, 2022 06:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Woooo - Spells and incantations rule during the full moon - Had you not better take a full case history there, Dr Nev?
August 11th, 2022 06:16
Naturally
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville but the H20 is missing at the moment.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville but the H20 is missing at the moment.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 23:53
Naturally
Bella Shepard said:
Priceless!!! If only we listened more to what is right under our noses.
August 9th, 2022 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
Priceless!!! If only we listened more to what is right under our noses.
August 9th, 2022 11:19
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