Comments received on poems by daydreaming
Esperanza
Seek said:
Amigo valorado, no hay porque rendirte en sentir abandonado. El peor abandono debe ser el abandono de nuestra esencia. Dentro de Ʃl, es posible que haya un compaƱero, amigo y socio sin precio. Esa confianza in uno mismo es la que inspira confianza en los demƔs. Creaste un poema de mucha nobleza y honestidad. Lindo poema. Menos mal que te conoces a ti mismo tanto, que todo es lo demƔs es redundancia. Suerte con tus obras de arte.
October 15th, 2021 07:21
Seek said:
Amigo valorado, no hay porque rendirte en sentir abandonado. El peor abandono debe ser el abandono de nuestra esencia. Dentro de Ʃl, es posible que haya un compaƱero, amigo y socio sin precio. Esa confianza in uno mismo es la que inspira confianza en los demƔs. Creaste un poema de mucha nobleza y honestidad. Lindo poema. Menos mal que te conoces a ti mismo tanto, que todo es lo demƔs es redundancia. Suerte con tus obras de arte.
October 15th, 2021 07:21
Esperanza
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your capacity to share yourself so bravely/openly/defiantly..
sadly, the more emotional our write
the more our abstract artistry suffers, but
in its place, we are offered the opportunity to word so many thoughts and concerns, most people dare not face or accept
as a reality of their own circumstances, and in so doing
we offer our readers a chance of reflecting on themselves, with a little more honesty/sincerity..
this is another example of the vast range in that meaningful word \'poetic\',
kudos to you! thank you for sharing..
I genuinely hope you see the answers you\'ve unfurled in your own write
and they offer you a semblance of solace and peace, sadly
there\'s a lot of suffering in life
a lot of which we have to traverse alone
\'I know the time is coming To lose my family And so many people that I love.\'
borrow some of the Trust you have in your chosen faith and let those around you help, if they\'re willing
October 15th, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your capacity to share yourself so bravely/openly/defiantly..
sadly, the more emotional our write
the more our abstract artistry suffers, but
in its place, we are offered the opportunity to word so many thoughts and concerns, most people dare not face or accept
as a reality of their own circumstances, and in so doing
we offer our readers a chance of reflecting on themselves, with a little more honesty/sincerity..
this is another example of the vast range in that meaningful word \'poetic\',
kudos to you! thank you for sharing..
I genuinely hope you see the answers you\'ve unfurled in your own write
and they offer you a semblance of solace and peace, sadly
there\'s a lot of suffering in life
a lot of which we have to traverse alone
\'I know the time is coming To lose my family And so many people that I love.\'
borrow some of the Trust you have in your chosen faith and let those around you help, if they\'re willing
October 15th, 2021 04:46
I Love You Anyway
L. B. Mek said:
I really liked how you utilised repetition with purpose,
and as I\'ve experienced something similar it was easy for me to relate to the subtle desperation, in the emotive elements of your write,
thanks for choosing to share
September 30th, 2021 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
I really liked how you utilised repetition with purpose,
and as I\'ve experienced something similar it was easy for me to relate to the subtle desperation, in the emotive elements of your write,
thanks for choosing to share
September 30th, 2021 03:47
I Love You Anyway
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be there forever Ed as love can conquer all.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be there forever Ed as love can conquer all.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:36
A Fieldtrip to Heaven
daydreaming said:
Very interesting. I believe that the concept and the reality of God are so HUGE, that it is impossible for me to grasp who or what he is. If God is as big and complex as the Universe, I am a grain of sand incapable of grasping all that He or She is. But at the same time, my human mind is what constructs everything that is. Therefore, God must be outside the Universe\'s realm. And now I understand the importance of the Incarnation: God becomes human to break that barrier.
September 25th, 2021 23:52
daydreaming said:
Very interesting. I believe that the concept and the reality of God are so HUGE, that it is impossible for me to grasp who or what he is. If God is as big and complex as the Universe, I am a grain of sand incapable of grasping all that He or She is. But at the same time, my human mind is what constructs everything that is. Therefore, God must be outside the Universe\'s realm. And now I understand the importance of the Incarnation: God becomes human to break that barrier.
September 25th, 2021 23:52
A Fieldtrip to Heaven
L. B. Mek said:
I couldn\'t help relate your words to the philosophy of Baruch Spinoza\'s
distilled interpretation of (A/The - God/Nature), to quote:
*Spinoza meant God was Natura naturans not Natura naturata, that is, \"a dynamic nature in action, growing and changing, not a passive or static thing.\"..
( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spinozism )
such an intriguing read!
well defined and thought-out arguments
for justifying your chosen belief system
May 4th, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
I couldn\'t help relate your words to the philosophy of Baruch Spinoza\'s
distilled interpretation of (A/The - God/Nature), to quote:
*Spinoza meant God was Natura naturans not Natura naturata, that is, \"a dynamic nature in action, growing and changing, not a passive or static thing.\"..
( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spinozism )
such an intriguing read!
well defined and thought-out arguments
for justifying your chosen belief system
May 4th, 2021 04:10
A Fieldtrip to Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be a fantasy Ed, but in our lives we have moved a long way into the light and the reality is as good as the fantasy.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well be a fantasy Ed, but in our lives we have moved a long way into the light and the reality is as good as the fantasy.
Andy
May 3rd, 2021 01:18
Letting Go
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a poem I could have written for my wife who has now passed.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a poem I could have written for my wife who has now passed.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:42
Invisible
Goldfinch60 said:
Friends are so important in our lives and your words show this.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Friends are so important in our lives and your words show this.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:55
The Prophesy
Goldfinch60 said:
That wait will soon be over Ed if you keep writing wonderful words like these.
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That wait will soon be over Ed if you keep writing wonderful words like these.
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:39
Stroke After Stroke
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that person will be there for you and your future together will be full of love.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that person will be there for you and your future together will be full of love.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:34
Stroke After Stroke
FredPeyer said:
Daydreaming, looks like your dreams have come true.
March 20th, 2021 21:36
FredPeyer said:
Daydreaming, looks like your dreams have come true.
March 20th, 2021 21:36
What Love Can Do
L. B. Mek said:
loyalty, truly is a virtue..
accessibly worded feelings of loss, that readers can relate to easily
I agree there is no such thing as time constraints for dealing with the pain that comes with loss,
but similarly I doubt our loved one\'s will want us to remain suffering forever..
an emotive read, thanks for sharing
March 16th, 2021 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
loyalty, truly is a virtue..
accessibly worded feelings of loss, that readers can relate to easily
I agree there is no such thing as time constraints for dealing with the pain that comes with loss,
but similarly I doubt our loved one\'s will want us to remain suffering forever..
an emotive read, thanks for sharing
March 16th, 2021 04:00
What Love Can Do
Goldfinch60 said:
I totally agree with your words dd, my wife passed away 15 months ago but she is still with me so I can understand your feelings.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
I totally agree with your words dd, my wife passed away 15 months ago but she is still with me so I can understand your feelings.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:37
I Forgive You, My Lord
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to follow organised religion until my wife was taken by dementia, she had been singing a praying to the christian god all her long life but it did nothing for her at her end. I have now dismissed all organise religion but believe that there is a god in my life and that god is mine and will be waiting for me.
May your god go with you.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to follow organised religion until my wife was taken by dementia, she had been singing a praying to the christian god all her long life but it did nothing for her at her end. I have now dismissed all organise religion but believe that there is a god in my life and that god is mine and will be waiting for me.
May your god go with you.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:33
I Forgive You, My Lord
Doggerel Dave said:
To utilise the god fable as a hook upon which to hang a savage piece of social commentary is, for me, a nice poetic conceit.
Good one, both content and form.
March 8th, 2021 20:33
Doggerel Dave said:
To utilise the god fable as a hook upon which to hang a savage piece of social commentary is, for me, a nice poetic conceit.
Good one, both content and form.
March 8th, 2021 20:33
I Forgive You, My Lord
dusk arising said:
Your words here are those of someone coming to the realisation that the version of god we were all taught about from a young age is a sick fabrication of lies. Don\'t misunderstand me, I am no atheist, no anti god. But whatever god is, he/she/it ain\'t that thing in the bible.
Plenty here reject that old tradition. We are in a new spiritual age.
March 8th, 2021 13:27
dusk arising said:
Your words here are those of someone coming to the realisation that the version of god we were all taught about from a young age is a sick fabrication of lies. Don\'t misunderstand me, I am no atheist, no anti god. But whatever god is, he/she/it ain\'t that thing in the bible.
Plenty here reject that old tradition. We are in a new spiritual age.
March 8th, 2021 13:27
I Forgive You, My Lord
orchidee said:
I admit I go along with \'blind faith\' at times.
Yet we are the creatures (created beings), and He is the Creator.
One said: \'When I see God, I will give Him a good talking-to\' - but we won\'t. We will bow before Him, or else we may be consumed by the light of His presence.
March 8th, 2021 11:44
orchidee said:
I admit I go along with \'blind faith\' at times.
Yet we are the creatures (created beings), and He is the Creator.
One said: \'When I see God, I will give Him a good talking-to\' - but we won\'t. We will bow before Him, or else we may be consumed by the light of His presence.
March 8th, 2021 11:44
Up on my Roof
Goldfinch60 said:
That balance in life is so important, I believe I am in that place where I am happy with what I have got, it is an important place to find in oneās life.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 15:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That balance in life is so important, I believe I am in that place where I am happy with what I have got, it is an important place to find in oneās life.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 15:35
Up on my Roof
FredPeyer said:
Well written Ed, but reading that last line I wonder if that is true all the time. I guess it depends on what success and what sacrifice.
February 19th, 2021 11:25
FredPeyer said:
Well written Ed, but reading that last line I wonder if that is true all the time. I guess it depends on what success and what sacrifice.
February 19th, 2021 11:25
Cruising on the Red Line
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so powerful on occasions like this, good write daydreaming.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so powerful on occasions like this, good write daydreaming.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:20
Cruising on the Red Line
Doggerel Dave said:
Within My memory are lodged several such missed opportunities. Each time I asked myself \'what have I got to loose?\' Still no move. aaah!
You\'ve been upfront about utilizing poetry as therapy; I believe quite a few contributors do that here - something I should be more mindful of.
February 18th, 2021 22:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Within My memory are lodged several such missed opportunities. Each time I asked myself \'what have I got to loose?\' Still no move. aaah!
You\'ve been upfront about utilizing poetry as therapy; I believe quite a few contributors do that here - something I should be more mindful of.
February 18th, 2021 22:55
Cruising on the Red Line
FredPeyer said:
Nicely done, Ed! Your writing drew me in, made me want to know more. Sad ending though with a glimmer of hope. But isn\'t life like that?
February 18th, 2021 20:03
FredPeyer said:
Nicely done, Ed! Your writing drew me in, made me want to know more. Sad ending though with a glimmer of hope. But isn\'t life like that?
February 18th, 2021 20:03
The Direction of Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, may that forgiveness be with you soon.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, may that forgiveness be with you soon.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:43
Full Moon
Goldfinch60 said:
That full moon can show us so many things and lead us into life\'s wonder.
Andy
May 7th, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That full moon can show us so many things and lead us into life\'s wonder.
Andy
May 7th, 2020 00:24
Dementia
Lauraš» said:
Ed,
Waking up from a dream about my mom whom I miss so much, I came to visit MPS because thatās what I do when my nights are devoid of sleep. The first poem I read this early morning is yours. A beautiful poem youāve written... but so, so sad! It brought tears to my eyes. It made me wonder if thatāll be me one day! Will I be remembered and/or written about as you have of your mom?
You are a wonderful son!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 14th, 2019 02:20
Lauraš» said:
Ed,
Waking up from a dream about my mom whom I miss so much, I came to visit MPS because thatās what I do when my nights are devoid of sleep. The first poem I read this early morning is yours. A beautiful poem youāve written... but so, so sad! It brought tears to my eyes. It made me wonder if thatāll be me one day! Will I be remembered and/or written about as you have of your mom?
You are a wonderful son!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 14th, 2019 02:20
If I Could Paint My Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Have a listen to this YouTube video, I think it relates to your words, it is my one of my favourite poems.
https://youtu.be/IO1r8Wve51k
November 27th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Have a listen to this YouTube video, I think it relates to your words, it is my one of my favourite poems.
https://youtu.be/IO1r8Wve51k
November 27th, 2019 01:42
If I Could Paint My Life
Goldfinch60 said:
The painting of our lives is a never ending artwork especially between lovers, may those random lines connect you for ever.
November 27th, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
The painting of our lives is a never ending artwork especially between lovers, may those random lines connect you for ever.
November 27th, 2019 01:33
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