Comments received on poems by Parisab
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment in
Mental health.
May 20th, 2023 21:48
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment in
Mental health.
May 20th, 2023 21:48
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
sorenbarrett said:
Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the patients I see come in they are set in their ways and it is costly in time and effort to make changes. Mental health should be given priority from infancy onward as prevention not treatment. A very interesting poem that keep thinking about. I am not as familiar with him as I need to be to completely understand the poem. It does seem to follow the thought process appropriate for this. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2023 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the patients I see come in they are set in their ways and it is costly in time and effort to make changes. Mental health should be given priority from infancy onward as prevention not treatment. A very interesting poem that keep thinking about. I am not as familiar with him as I need to be to completely understand the poem. It does seem to follow the thought process appropriate for this. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2023 18:51
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Neville said:
I have no reservation whatsoever in emphasizing here and now, just how sadly and much, I liked and enjoyed this poem ..
Like you, I met him briefly, but in London where we were both dining (my son himself was a chef there) ..
There are many great chefs and many great personalities, but few deserve the pedestal that I would place this particular gentleman on .. and indeed, for many reasons ..
Neville
May 15th, 2023 02:21
Neville said:
I have no reservation whatsoever in emphasizing here and now, just how sadly and much, I liked and enjoyed this poem ..
Like you, I met him briefly, but in London where we were both dining (my son himself was a chef there) ..
There are many great chefs and many great personalities, but few deserve the pedestal that I would place this particular gentleman on .. and indeed, for many reasons ..
Neville
May 15th, 2023 02:21
Love Potion No.19
Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer said:
Exquisite ink. Magnificently crafted.
May 14th, 2023 12:20
Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer said:
Exquisite ink. Magnificently crafted.
May 14th, 2023 12:20
Love Potion No.19
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Great write. Love by \"potion\" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and devotion. Such is life. Wisdom of experience laced with morality and understanding. Wise words indeed. - Phil A.
May 12th, 2023 13:48
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Great write. Love by \"potion\" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and devotion. Such is life. Wisdom of experience laced with morality and understanding. Wise words indeed. - Phil A.
May 12th, 2023 13:48
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
L. B. Mek said:
this reminds me of my feelings when I heard Robin Williams
had passed away
thank you! dear Poet
for this ever-Timely
and most necessary poem
\'Listen to the music when it fades.
You must let go of the summers.\'
that\'s why we have seasons
I think
to teach us change\'s
lessons of inevitability
and that for every Winter
a promise of Spring, awaits
we must never lose sight
of existence\'s small mercies
May 12th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
this reminds me of my feelings when I heard Robin Williams
had passed away
thank you! dear Poet
for this ever-Timely
and most necessary poem
\'Listen to the music when it fades.
You must let go of the summers.\'
that\'s why we have seasons
I think
to teach us change\'s
lessons of inevitability
and that for every Winter
a promise of Spring, awaits
we must never lose sight
of existence\'s small mercies
May 12th, 2023 04:44
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
orchidee said:
A sharp comment - delete it if it\'s too much. Wikipedia says he was a drug-crazed so-and-so.
May 12th, 2023 04:25
orchidee said:
A sharp comment - delete it if it\'s too much. Wikipedia says he was a drug-crazed so-and-so.
May 12th, 2023 04:25
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the reminder.
May 12th, 2023 02:50
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the reminder.
May 12th, 2023 02:50
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise to see through the words. I appreciate your helpful comments, poet-friend.
May 12th, 2023 01:54
Parisab said:
Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise to see through the words. I appreciate your helpful comments, poet-friend.
May 12th, 2023 01:54
Love Potion No.19
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative
\'batch no.19\'
what matters most, is that we find
hope/strength, stubbornness enough
to keep experimenting and hoping
\'We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption \'
not settling
for those shallow solutions
of love potion mirages...
(just a great read, dear Poet
your insightful poetry
as eloquently refined, as-ever)
thank you!
(widening our word spacing
like we widen our fishing nets
of hope,
a showcasing of wordless imagery)
May 12th, 2023 01:48
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative
\'batch no.19\'
what matters most, is that we find
hope/strength, stubbornness enough
to keep experimenting and hoping
\'We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption \'
not settling
for those shallow solutions
of love potion mirages...
(just a great read, dear Poet
your insightful poetry
as eloquently refined, as-ever)
thank you!
(widening our word spacing
like we widen our fishing nets
of hope,
a showcasing of wordless imagery)
May 12th, 2023 01:48
Midnight Flight
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I like both your opening and closing lines (so important)
May 11th, 2023 14:59
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I like both your opening and closing lines (so important)
May 11th, 2023 14:59
The Sins of Us
Parisab said:
Thank you. I’m looking forward to the literary exchange.
May 11th, 2023 01:04
Parisab said:
Thank you. I’m looking forward to the literary exchange.
May 11th, 2023 01:04
The Sins of Us
Neville said:
I first wanted to see where you are coming from .. I\'m delighted and clearly made the write decision .. write on my fine new literary friend .. Neville
May 11th, 2023 00:37
Neville said:
I first wanted to see where you are coming from .. I\'m delighted and clearly made the write decision .. write on my fine new literary friend .. Neville
May 11th, 2023 00:37
Love Potion No.19
Bella Shepard said:
Young love\'s niavete lasts briefly, but is never forgotten. The first palpatations of the heart awaken in us to emotions thrilling, confusing, perhaps a little frightening, but exhilerating. Such a good write dear poet!
May 7th, 2023 14:34
Bella Shepard said:
Young love\'s niavete lasts briefly, but is never forgotten. The first palpatations of the heart awaken in us to emotions thrilling, confusing, perhaps a little frightening, but exhilerating. Such a good write dear poet!
May 7th, 2023 14:34
Love Potion No.19
Peter Gates said:
You\'ve certainly caught the essence of love. Enjoyed this.
May 7th, 2023 10:31
Peter Gates said:
You\'ve certainly caught the essence of love. Enjoyed this.
May 7th, 2023 10:31
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Thank you for your sagacious viewing of the poem, poet friend-I guess as poets we respond the same way to the world and project our nature and point of view.
May 7th, 2023 10:18
Parisab said:
Thank you for your sagacious viewing of the poem, poet friend-I guess as poets we respond the same way to the world and project our nature and point of view.
May 7th, 2023 10:18
Love Potion No.19
Bobby O said:
Jumping in w integrity and honor , I’m certain is , was, and will always be your only choice.
May 7th, 2023 04:54
Bobby O said:
Jumping in w integrity and honor , I’m certain is , was, and will always be your only choice.
May 7th, 2023 04:54
Pomegranate
Parisab said:
Hi again poet friend-the theory is that eve’s Apple was actually a pomegranate-thanks for your positive comments
May 6th, 2023 22:49
Parisab said:
Hi again poet friend-the theory is that eve’s Apple was actually a pomegranate-thanks for your positive comments
May 6th, 2023 22:49
Pomegranate
jarcher54 said:
Pomegranates are the sexiest of fruits. Your whole poem is full of heavy serious joy. This is a grown-up ode by a creative soul.
May 6th, 2023 22:25
jarcher54 said:
Pomegranates are the sexiest of fruits. Your whole poem is full of heavy serious joy. This is a grown-up ode by a creative soul.
May 6th, 2023 22:25
Flight
Parisab said:
Your thoughtful insights are extremely impressive-your level of understanding about the “unsettled system” . “pay/reward from the pain caused” is such a difficult phenomenon to accept for the grieving parents/community of the young lost, too soon, by suicide or accident.
May 6th, 2023 01:13
Parisab said:
Your thoughtful insights are extremely impressive-your level of understanding about the “unsettled system” . “pay/reward from the pain caused” is such a difficult phenomenon to accept for the grieving parents/community of the young lost, too soon, by suicide or accident.
May 6th, 2023 01:13
This is Love
Parisab said:
Thank you dear poet besides your pensive look at the chorus, there is actually a Ocean Cliff which looks like two humans embracing near where I live. Thank you for appreciating the romantic elements, as I permitted myself this luxury to write about intimate feelings.
May 5th, 2023 20:21
Parisab said:
Thank you dear poet besides your pensive look at the chorus, there is actually a Ocean Cliff which looks like two humans embracing near where I live. Thank you for appreciating the romantic elements, as I permitted myself this luxury to write about intimate feelings.
May 5th, 2023 20:21
The Sins of Us
Bobby O said:
We play roles
I’m no saint
Those announcements declare a closeness rarely achieved not that there isn’t freedom it’s that we restrict it and it’s really hard to define why this situation this freedom lives but not that? Our own sense of freedom when it surrounds is a welcome beast though the strife lurks.
May 5th, 2023 03:10
Bobby O said:
We play roles
I’m no saint
Those announcements declare a closeness rarely achieved not that there isn’t freedom it’s that we restrict it and it’s really hard to define why this situation this freedom lives but not that? Our own sense of freedom when it surrounds is a welcome beast though the strife lurks.
May 5th, 2023 03:10
This is Love
L. B. Mek said:
these words, echoed
in those romance walls
of my heart,
beautifully worded, dear Poet
\'So this is love, it’s when I shine
At the bay where stones embrace\'
May 5th, 2023 02:59
L. B. Mek said:
these words, echoed
in those romance walls
of my heart,
beautifully worded, dear Poet
\'So this is love, it’s when I shine
At the bay where stones embrace\'
May 5th, 2023 02:59
Flight
Bobby O said:
Severance for all pain they felt and caused
This line set me to ponder
Pay/Reward for pain caused as if dutiful? Or inevitable to the degree of a necessary ingredient and thus be part of the “bills”
But it was unpaid severance - purposely skipped ? Consciously the avoidance indicates an unsettled system. I admit I don’t know but the compelling write thrust upon me the conundrum. Freaking successful piece thereby!!!
May 5th, 2023 00:49
Bobby O said:
Severance for all pain they felt and caused
This line set me to ponder
Pay/Reward for pain caused as if dutiful? Or inevitable to the degree of a necessary ingredient and thus be part of the “bills”
But it was unpaid severance - purposely skipped ? Consciously the avoidance indicates an unsettled system. I admit I don’t know but the compelling write thrust upon me the conundrum. Freaking successful piece thereby!!!
May 5th, 2023 00:49
Flight
Bobby O said:
Severance for all pain they felt and caused
This line set me to ponder
Pay/Reward for pain caused as if dutiful? Or inevitable to the degree of a necessary ingredient and thus be part of the “bills”
But it was unpaid severance - purposely skipped ? Consciously the avoidance indicates an unsettled system. I admit I don’t know but the compelling write thrust upon me the conundrum. Freaking successful piece thereby!!!
May 5th, 2023 00:48
Bobby O said:
Severance for all pain they felt and caused
This line set me to ponder
Pay/Reward for pain caused as if dutiful? Or inevitable to the degree of a necessary ingredient and thus be part of the “bills”
But it was unpaid severance - purposely skipped ? Consciously the avoidance indicates an unsettled system. I admit I don’t know but the compelling write thrust upon me the conundrum. Freaking successful piece thereby!!!
May 5th, 2023 00:48
Pomegranate
Parisab said:
You are so kind to I’ve of your time resources to familiarize yourself with some of my scribbles-Soon I may request your feedback of pairings of poems for a collection-thank you poet friend.
May 4th, 2023 22:29
Parisab said:
You are so kind to I’ve of your time resources to familiarize yourself with some of my scribbles-Soon I may request your feedback of pairings of poems for a collection-thank you poet friend.
May 4th, 2023 22:29
Midnight Flight
Parisab said:
You are most gracious for giving this a second look-I experimented with writing with delta like brain wave speed (sleep like:)) I get some of the philosophical part about quantum physics, but as the mathematical equation, my brain at most alert, would not grasp-
May 4th, 2023 22:26
Parisab said:
You are most gracious for giving this a second look-I experimented with writing with delta like brain wave speed (sleep like:)) I get some of the philosophical part about quantum physics, but as the mathematical equation, my brain at most alert, would not grasp-
May 4th, 2023 22:26
Pomegranate
Bobby O said:
It’s so BRAVE to claim desired and deserved fun using the word SHAME and skillfully making it work. Damn.
May 4th, 2023 22:20
Bobby O said:
It’s so BRAVE to claim desired and deserved fun using the word SHAME and skillfully making it work. Damn.
May 4th, 2023 22:20
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