Comments received on poems by Parisab
Love Confessional
arqios said:
Reading this with the fires in the background brings to the fore both urgency and edge 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 17:35
arqios said:
Reading this with the fires in the background brings to the fore both urgency and edge 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 17:35
Love Confessional
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. I\'m glad that love has found you. Life can be grand.
February 18th, 2025 11:25
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. I\'m glad that love has found you. Life can be grand.
February 18th, 2025 11:25
A Hazy Strange Winter
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor layer upon layer. I chose it because of the similarity it contains to one I posted today prior to reading it. In its fogginess it shows clarity and in its outer cold there is an inner warmth. Very nicely written
February 18th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor layer upon layer. I chose it because of the similarity it contains to one I posted today prior to reading it. In its fogginess it shows clarity and in its outer cold there is an inner warmth. Very nicely written
February 18th, 2025 04:46
Love Confessional
Neville said:
Jeez I just love it when you talk dirty and write just for me like that .. it has the feel of finality about it .. I hope I am wrong and there\'s many more coming my way .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 04:17
Neville said:
Jeez I just love it when you talk dirty and write just for me like that .. it has the feel of finality about it .. I hope I am wrong and there\'s many more coming my way .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 04:17
Love Confessional
sorenbarrett said:
To love something you must know it and to know it is to live it. A poem of life. Have lived much of that, even in California, so I feel it. Lovely
February 17th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
To love something you must know it and to know it is to live it. A poem of life. Have lived much of that, even in California, so I feel it. Lovely
February 17th, 2025 04:13
Love Confessional
Poetic Licence said:
Someone appreciating life to the full, good and bad, a positive write which i enjoyed.
February 17th, 2025 02:56
Poetic Licence said:
Someone appreciating life to the full, good and bad, a positive write which i enjoyed.
February 17th, 2025 02:56
Love Confessional
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Parisb
Sweet And Poignant Like Sunsets
February 17th, 2025 00:26
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Parisb
Sweet And Poignant Like Sunsets
February 17th, 2025 00:26
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
sorenbarrett said:
Something that man has done from the beginning and what he seems to do best. Where there is greed, avaris, different beliefs there will be war. A heart wrenching write
December 13th, 2024 17:48
sorenbarrett said:
Something that man has done from the beginning and what he seems to do best. Where there is greed, avaris, different beliefs there will be war. A heart wrenching write
December 13th, 2024 17:48
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
vividvoid14 said:
Is this a metaphoric statement? Petty arguments between parents or siblings causing family to drift away? Or is it smt else?
December 13th, 2024 03:43
vividvoid14 said:
Is this a metaphoric statement? Petty arguments between parents or siblings causing family to drift away? Or is it smt else?
December 13th, 2024 03:43
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Neville said:
This needed to be said .. the truth must out .. it is such a crying shame so few politicians and despots don\'t read poetry .. For once, I am glad someone took the words out of my mouth .. and even more so, that it was You .. So bloody glad you are safe and back here P .. N
October 27th, 2024 02:09
Neville said:
This needed to be said .. the truth must out .. it is such a crying shame so few politicians and despots don\'t read poetry .. For once, I am glad someone took the words out of my mouth .. and even more so, that it was You .. So bloody glad you are safe and back here P .. N
October 27th, 2024 02:09
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
October 26th, 2024 23:35
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
October 26th, 2024 23:35
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
sorenbarrett said:
War devours its worshipers as well as the innocent. I think of Israel and Palestine Russia and Ukraine as well as all the other unmentioned wars. A most powerful write
October 26th, 2024 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
War devours its worshipers as well as the innocent. I think of Israel and Palestine Russia and Ukraine as well as all the other unmentioned wars. A most powerful write
October 26th, 2024 14:04
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Teddy.15 said:
Parisab, so powerful and so true, sometimes when reading the headlines I just want to burst into tears like this morning. Sending you loads of hugs my dear friend. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 02:29
Teddy.15 said:
Parisab, so powerful and so true, sometimes when reading the headlines I just want to burst into tears like this morning. Sending you loads of hugs my dear friend. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 02:29
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Doggerel Dave said:
An impassioned observation, Parisab. Children involved in war do carry scars, sometimes physical but definitely emotional for their life’s duration.
October 26th, 2024 02:10
Doggerel Dave said:
An impassioned observation, Parisab. Children involved in war do carry scars, sometimes physical but definitely emotional for their life’s duration.
October 26th, 2024 02:10
Old Men of Steel
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to which I agree. \"Junk of trash which one to click\" my sentiments exactly. Maybe they should go back to Plato and his view on politics in the Republic. No liar aloud to hold office and not only no payment outside of a house and food provided but not aloud to have any money. A good write
August 16th, 2024 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to which I agree. \"Junk of trash which one to click\" my sentiments exactly. Maybe they should go back to Plato and his view on politics in the Republic. No liar aloud to hold office and not only no payment outside of a house and food provided but not aloud to have any money. A good write
August 16th, 2024 04:12
Full Disclosure
Neville said:
You ma\'am have have incredible versatility & clearly many strings to your bow ..
With much respect, respect .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 03:16
Neville said:
You ma\'am have have incredible versatility & clearly many strings to your bow ..
With much respect, respect .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 03:16
Full Disclosure
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning poetess,
a very evocative and
thought provoking write!! 🤔
Brilliantly composed and
my pleasure to recite! 🙏
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
July 16th, 2024 21:29
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning poetess,
a very evocative and
thought provoking write!! 🤔
Brilliantly composed and
my pleasure to recite! 🙏
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
July 16th, 2024 21:29
Full Disclosure
Neville said:
My very dearest P .. this clearly demonstrates just what a versatile writer you are .. Indeed, your emphasis here on the attitude, values and behaviours most often associated (but sometimes wrongly) with an evidently different and complex mindset that is known to exist within certain subcultures magnificently comes across and achieves the goal I suspect you originally intended for it .. Bravo .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:50
Neville said:
My very dearest P .. this clearly demonstrates just what a versatile writer you are .. Indeed, your emphasis here on the attitude, values and behaviours most often associated (but sometimes wrongly) with an evidently different and complex mindset that is known to exist within certain subcultures magnificently comes across and achieves the goal I suspect you originally intended for it .. Bravo .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:50
The Fig Tree and the Bird
sorenbarrett said:
Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength and produces good fruit. Such a one attracts all in search of peace and nurturance giving strength and calm even to bad fruit. There is no judging or withholding by a good tree. Very nice.
July 7th, 2024 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength and produces good fruit. Such a one attracts all in search of peace and nurturance giving strength and calm even to bad fruit. There is no judging or withholding by a good tree. Very nice.
July 7th, 2024 11:29
Full Disclosure
sorenbarrett said:
Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
July 5th, 2024 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
July 5th, 2024 08:25
Full Disclosure
Bobby O said:
I grew up and was able to immerse myself in various culture and my “ear of recognition “ is practiced .. you wrote w a precision that achieved and rose to that valued benchmark that leaves readers wanting more such that most all will reread and reread to gather up the nuance you allowed us to reach for. The quality of your chosen detail and hip vernacular reads as it YOU are currently immersed in the world snd everyday life of the creators that’s currently share their magical ryhym’sneithbthe world. I can’t compliment this enough.
July 5th, 2024 07:32
Bobby O said:
I grew up and was able to immerse myself in various culture and my “ear of recognition “ is practiced .. you wrote w a precision that achieved and rose to that valued benchmark that leaves readers wanting more such that most all will reread and reread to gather up the nuance you allowed us to reach for. The quality of your chosen detail and hip vernacular reads as it YOU are currently immersed in the world snd everyday life of the creators that’s currently share their magical ryhym’sneithbthe world. I can’t compliment this enough.
July 5th, 2024 07:32
Full Disclosure
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful and brilliant I\'ve worked with young children all my life and I\'ve always believed if we give them inspiration and a means to find their passions the world would be better,.with current gun laws in the USA helping those who have been forgotten or abandoned sometimes finding their anger and therefore using guns so sad to.see the carnage on international TV 🌹 I am very passionate about this.
July 5th, 2024 03:23
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful and brilliant I\'ve worked with young children all my life and I\'ve always believed if we give them inspiration and a means to find their passions the world would be better,.with current gun laws in the USA helping those who have been forgotten or abandoned sometimes finding their anger and therefore using guns so sad to.see the carnage on international TV 🌹 I am very passionate about this.
July 5th, 2024 03:23
A Hazy Strange Winter
Neville said:
to put it quite simply, those subtle changes you made make an already fine poem so very much more refined .. excellence at its very best .. Neville
April 14th, 2024 10:51
Neville said:
to put it quite simply, those subtle changes you made make an already fine poem so very much more refined .. excellence at its very best .. Neville
April 14th, 2024 10:51
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Parisab said:
Thank you for the kind sentiment and connecting to the words…
April 14th, 2024 09:34
Parisab said:
Thank you for the kind sentiment and connecting to the words…
April 14th, 2024 09:34
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
sorenbarrett said:
Young deaths always draw more attention due to the potential loss and the basic feeling of needing to protect the helpless. It is so sad when unknown potential is snuffed out too soon. The metaphor here fits so well and the imagery is great.
April 14th, 2024 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Young deaths always draw more attention due to the potential loss and the basic feeling of needing to protect the helpless. It is so sad when unknown potential is snuffed out too soon. The metaphor here fits so well and the imagery is great.
April 14th, 2024 09:30
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