Comments received on poems by Parisab
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
sorenbarrett said:
Something that man has done from the beginning and what he seems to do best. Where there is greed, avaris, different beliefs there will be war. A heart wrenching write
December 13th, 2024 17:48
sorenbarrett said:
Something that man has done from the beginning and what he seems to do best. Where there is greed, avaris, different beliefs there will be war. A heart wrenching write
December 13th, 2024 17:48
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
vividvoid14 said:
Is this a metaphoric statement? Petty arguments between parents or siblings causing family to drift away? Or is it smt else?
December 13th, 2024 03:43
vividvoid14 said:
Is this a metaphoric statement? Petty arguments between parents or siblings causing family to drift away? Or is it smt else?
December 13th, 2024 03:43
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Neville said:
This needed to be said .. the truth must out .. it is such a crying shame so few politicians and despots don\'t read poetry .. For once, I am glad someone took the words out of my mouth .. and even more so, that it was You .. So bloody glad you are safe and back here P .. N
October 27th, 2024 02:09
Neville said:
This needed to be said .. the truth must out .. it is such a crying shame so few politicians and despots don\'t read poetry .. For once, I am glad someone took the words out of my mouth .. and even more so, that it was You .. So bloody glad you are safe and back here P .. N
October 27th, 2024 02:09
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
October 26th, 2024 23:35
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
October 26th, 2024 23:35
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
sorenbarrett said:
War devours its worshipers as well as the innocent. I think of Israel and Palestine Russia and Ukraine as well as all the other unmentioned wars. A most powerful write
October 26th, 2024 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
War devours its worshipers as well as the innocent. I think of Israel and Palestine Russia and Ukraine as well as all the other unmentioned wars. A most powerful write
October 26th, 2024 14:04
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Teddy.15 said:
Parisab, so powerful and so true, sometimes when reading the headlines I just want to burst into tears like this morning. Sending you loads of hugs my dear friend. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 02:29
Teddy.15 said:
Parisab, so powerful and so true, sometimes when reading the headlines I just want to burst into tears like this morning. Sending you loads of hugs my dear friend. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 02:29
Lose-Lose, Old News, New War
Doggerel Dave said:
An impassioned observation, Parisab. Children involved in war do carry scars, sometimes physical but definitely emotional for their life’s duration.
October 26th, 2024 02:10
Doggerel Dave said:
An impassioned observation, Parisab. Children involved in war do carry scars, sometimes physical but definitely emotional for their life’s duration.
October 26th, 2024 02:10
Old Men of Steel
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to which I agree. \"Junk of trash which one to click\" my sentiments exactly. Maybe they should go back to Plato and his view on politics in the Republic. No liar aloud to hold office and not only no payment outside of a house and food provided but not aloud to have any money. A good write
August 16th, 2024 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to which I agree. \"Junk of trash which one to click\" my sentiments exactly. Maybe they should go back to Plato and his view on politics in the Republic. No liar aloud to hold office and not only no payment outside of a house and food provided but not aloud to have any money. A good write
August 16th, 2024 04:12
Full Disclosure
Neville said:
You ma\'am have have incredible versatility & clearly many strings to your bow ..
With much respect, respect .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 03:16
Neville said:
You ma\'am have have incredible versatility & clearly many strings to your bow ..
With much respect, respect .. Neville
August 5th, 2024 03:16
Full Disclosure
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning poetess,
a very evocative and
thought provoking write!! 🤔
Brilliantly composed and
my pleasure to recite! 🙏
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
July 16th, 2024 21:29
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning poetess,
a very evocative and
thought provoking write!! 🤔
Brilliantly composed and
my pleasure to recite! 🙏
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
July 16th, 2024 21:29
Full Disclosure
Neville said:
My very dearest P .. this clearly demonstrates just what a versatile writer you are .. Indeed, your emphasis here on the attitude, values and behaviours most often associated (but sometimes wrongly) with an evidently different and complex mindset that is known to exist within certain subcultures magnificently comes across and achieves the goal I suspect you originally intended for it .. Bravo .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:50
Neville said:
My very dearest P .. this clearly demonstrates just what a versatile writer you are .. Indeed, your emphasis here on the attitude, values and behaviours most often associated (but sometimes wrongly) with an evidently different and complex mindset that is known to exist within certain subcultures magnificently comes across and achieves the goal I suspect you originally intended for it .. Bravo .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:50
The Fig Tree and the Bird
sorenbarrett said:
Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength and produces good fruit. Such a one attracts all in search of peace and nurturance giving strength and calm even to bad fruit. There is no judging or withholding by a good tree. Very nice.
July 7th, 2024 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength and produces good fruit. Such a one attracts all in search of peace and nurturance giving strength and calm even to bad fruit. There is no judging or withholding by a good tree. Very nice.
July 7th, 2024 11:29
Full Disclosure
sorenbarrett said:
Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
July 5th, 2024 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
July 5th, 2024 08:25
Full Disclosure
Bobby O said:
I grew up and was able to immerse myself in various culture and my “ear of recognition “ is practiced .. you wrote w a precision that achieved and rose to that valued benchmark that leaves readers wanting more such that most all will reread and reread to gather up the nuance you allowed us to reach for. The quality of your chosen detail and hip vernacular reads as it YOU are currently immersed in the world snd everyday life of the creators that’s currently share their magical ryhym’sneithbthe world. I can’t compliment this enough.
July 5th, 2024 07:32
Bobby O said:
I grew up and was able to immerse myself in various culture and my “ear of recognition “ is practiced .. you wrote w a precision that achieved and rose to that valued benchmark that leaves readers wanting more such that most all will reread and reread to gather up the nuance you allowed us to reach for. The quality of your chosen detail and hip vernacular reads as it YOU are currently immersed in the world snd everyday life of the creators that’s currently share their magical ryhym’sneithbthe world. I can’t compliment this enough.
July 5th, 2024 07:32
Full Disclosure
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful and brilliant I\'ve worked with young children all my life and I\'ve always believed if we give them inspiration and a means to find their passions the world would be better,.with current gun laws in the USA helping those who have been forgotten or abandoned sometimes finding their anger and therefore using guns so sad to.see the carnage on international TV 🌹 I am very passionate about this.
July 5th, 2024 03:23
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful and brilliant I\'ve worked with young children all my life and I\'ve always believed if we give them inspiration and a means to find their passions the world would be better,.with current gun laws in the USA helping those who have been forgotten or abandoned sometimes finding their anger and therefore using guns so sad to.see the carnage on international TV 🌹 I am very passionate about this.
July 5th, 2024 03:23
A Hazy Strange Winter
Neville said:
to put it quite simply, those subtle changes you made make an already fine poem so very much more refined .. excellence at its very best .. Neville
April 14th, 2024 10:51
Neville said:
to put it quite simply, those subtle changes you made make an already fine poem so very much more refined .. excellence at its very best .. Neville
April 14th, 2024 10:51
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Parisab said:
Thank you for the kind sentiment and connecting to the words…
April 14th, 2024 09:34
Parisab said:
Thank you for the kind sentiment and connecting to the words…
April 14th, 2024 09:34
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
sorenbarrett said:
Young deaths always draw more attention due to the potential loss and the basic feeling of needing to protect the helpless. It is so sad when unknown potential is snuffed out too soon. The metaphor here fits so well and the imagery is great.
April 14th, 2024 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Young deaths always draw more attention due to the potential loss and the basic feeling of needing to protect the helpless. It is so sad when unknown potential is snuffed out too soon. The metaphor here fits so well and the imagery is great.
April 14th, 2024 09:30
A Hazy Strange Winter
Neville said:
.... incredible ink even more cohesively daubed .. quite simply beautifully scribed .. Neville
March 2nd, 2024 04:08
Neville said:
.... incredible ink even more cohesively daubed .. quite simply beautifully scribed .. Neville
March 2nd, 2024 04:08
A Hazy Strange Winter
peto said:
The imagery is stunning
Especially liked \"smiling fish\"
Only complaint I have is we don\'t see enough writing from you
That being said
They are always worth the wait
Superb
March 1st, 2024 13:41
peto said:
The imagery is stunning
Especially liked \"smiling fish\"
Only complaint I have is we don\'t see enough writing from you
That being said
They are always worth the wait
Superb
March 1st, 2024 13:41
A Hazy Strange Winter
Parisab said:
I truly appreciate your refreshing view of this piece, Cassie:)
March 1st, 2024 10:47
Parisab said:
I truly appreciate your refreshing view of this piece, Cassie:)
March 1st, 2024 10:47
A Hazy Strange Winter
Cassie58 said:
the shining winter is where my heart fluttered
it flew and the streams were full
of smiling fish
I sense a change in a relationship here. What was once bright even in the coldest season has lost some heat and light. Beautiful poetic expression Parisiab. A fabulous piece of poetry.
March 1st, 2024 09:16
Cassie58 said:
the shining winter is where my heart fluttered
it flew and the streams were full
of smiling fish
I sense a change in a relationship here. What was once bright even in the coldest season has lost some heat and light. Beautiful poetic expression Parisiab. A fabulous piece of poetry.
March 1st, 2024 09:16
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This mysteriously takes me to the Middle East affair for some reason, and it even semi-references a book I read on Israel and the star of David. There\'s so much in it about losing one\'s way, and perhaps even a fall from grace... \"My hands were sorting the stars in the sky this night\" is such a great line, and very relatable... \"And I fear that you may even have lost your way back to your star\" underpins a lot about an unforgettable history and legion that cannot be forgotten nor ignored, but is sadly lost, along with its innocence.
This is where this piece kept me abducted, vividly so. Unmatched story telling, dear P.
February 20th, 2024 06:16
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This mysteriously takes me to the Middle East affair for some reason, and it even semi-references a book I read on Israel and the star of David. There\'s so much in it about losing one\'s way, and perhaps even a fall from grace... \"My hands were sorting the stars in the sky this night\" is such a great line, and very relatable... \"And I fear that you may even have lost your way back to your star\" underpins a lot about an unforgettable history and legion that cannot be forgotten nor ignored, but is sadly lost, along with its innocence.
This is where this piece kept me abducted, vividly so. Unmatched story telling, dear P.
February 20th, 2024 06:16
A Hazy Strange Winter
vividvoid14 said:
hey, do you plan on making another poem??
February 15th, 2024 23:11
vividvoid14 said:
hey, do you plan on making another poem??
February 15th, 2024 23:11
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