Comments received on poems by Parisab
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
Thank you-your poems are good fruits…
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Parisab said:
Thank you-your poems are good fruits…
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
Unfortunately this topic is always a reminder! War is hell and PTSD ‘sucks’ as I’m told… Thank you for the read.
October 13th, 2023 21:41
Parisab said:
Unfortunately this topic is always a reminder! War is hell and PTSD ‘sucks’ as I’m told… Thank you for the read.
October 13th, 2023 21:41
Forever Losses
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great poem. War is hell.
October 13th, 2023 20:00
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great poem. War is hell.
October 13th, 2023 20:00
The Fig Tree and the Bird
peto said:
Parisab
I always look forward to your writes
As they are always full of meaning
Hope everything is good at your side if the world
With fingers being pointed in all directions
A writer always worth reading
October 13th, 2023 10:12
peto said:
Parisab
I always look forward to your writes
As they are always full of meaning
Hope everything is good at your side if the world
With fingers being pointed in all directions
A writer always worth reading
October 13th, 2023 10:12
The Fig Tree and the Bird
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
what an ode, a lucky tree
serenity versed poetic
thank you cherished Poet
we need all the peace we can get🙏
October 13th, 2023 07:53
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
what an ode, a lucky tree
serenity versed poetic
thank you cherished Poet
we need all the peace we can get🙏
October 13th, 2023 07:53
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
Lol-Why sir you did a quick spell check, while the “gilded creature” was dreaming-I’m glad you are here…
October 13th, 2023 02:49
Parisab said:
Lol-Why sir you did a quick spell check, while the “gilded creature” was dreaming-I’m glad you are here…
October 13th, 2023 02:49
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Bobby O said:
I know why that gilded creature dreams
October 13th, 2023 02:43
Bobby O said:
I know why that gilded creature dreams
October 13th, 2023 02:43
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Neville said:
how perfect a picture of calm you paint and all with such a steady hand ..
filled to the point of overflow with magnificent metaphor and meaning .. a seamless marriage in a world of increasing turmoil ... Neville
October 13th, 2023 02:32
Neville said:
how perfect a picture of calm you paint and all with such a steady hand ..
filled to the point of overflow with magnificent metaphor and meaning .. a seamless marriage in a world of increasing turmoil ... Neville
October 13th, 2023 02:32
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
I appreciate the literary exchange already and it even came with a small nudge to write this tonight
October 13th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
I appreciate the literary exchange already and it even came with a small nudge to write this tonight
October 13th, 2023 02:13
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted. I love the picture of the symbiotic relationship.
October 13th, 2023 02:06
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted. I love the picture of the symbiotic relationship.
October 13th, 2023 02:06
Only You Quench my Thirst
Thomas W Case said:
Tons of passion. The flow is brilliant and smooth in the outpouring of emotion.
October 13th, 2023 01:35
Thomas W Case said:
Tons of passion. The flow is brilliant and smooth in the outpouring of emotion.
October 13th, 2023 01:35
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. I can almost hear her now. Powerful poem.
October 13th, 2023 01:04
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. I can almost hear her now. Powerful poem.
October 13th, 2023 01:04
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Parisab said:
Thank you for your generous comment and feeling inspired by her…
October 5th, 2023 09:54
Parisab said:
Thank you for your generous comment and feeling inspired by her…
October 5th, 2023 09:54
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
AuburnScribbler said:
This was a true treat to read Parisab.
This is written in an epic narrative tone, that resembles the deep emotion is which Etta James performed her songs.
A beautiful homage, bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 5th, 2023 09:42
AuburnScribbler said:
This was a true treat to read Parisab.
This is written in an epic narrative tone, that resembles the deep emotion is which Etta James performed her songs.
A beautiful homage, bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 5th, 2023 09:42
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention for her music and appreciating this ode poet peer…
October 5th, 2023 09:31
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention for her music and appreciating this ode poet peer…
October 5th, 2023 09:31
Old Men of Steel
Parisab said:
‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so brilliantly in three words-a poem title perhaps? Thank you for your wise comments post friend…
October 5th, 2023 09:25
Parisab said:
‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so brilliantly in three words-a poem title perhaps? Thank you for your wise comments post friend…
October 5th, 2023 09:25
Social Media Whore
Parisab said:
Thank you sir, there was an urgent need, to say it that day…
October 5th, 2023 09:19
Parisab said:
Thank you sir, there was an urgent need, to say it that day…
October 5th, 2023 09:19
Social Media Whore
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece says it all, with brutal clarity. Definitely a fave... I love it! - I love it when poetry tells the sober truth! - A hard hitting expose in every write!
October 5th, 2023 07:51
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece says it all, with brutal clarity. Definitely a fave... I love it! - I love it when poetry tells the sober truth! - A hard hitting expose in every write!
October 5th, 2023 07:51
Old Men of Steel
Garth Rakumakoe said:
One realizes many a times that it\'s because the same old faces, and I mean literally old - are are at the helm - that the transformation and evolutionary wheel does not turn. Old politicians refuse to give in. It\'s the untold leadership pandemic! - Thank you for shining a light on this, dear Poet.
October 5th, 2023 07:41
Garth Rakumakoe said:
One realizes many a times that it\'s because the same old faces, and I mean literally old - are are at the helm - that the transformation and evolutionary wheel does not turn. Old politicians refuse to give in. It\'s the untold leadership pandemic! - Thank you for shining a light on this, dear Poet.
October 5th, 2023 07:41
Young Moon Killers
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Loaded with so much truth, also showing us, that there are certain things money cannot buy, or settle.
October 5th, 2023 07:38
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Loaded with so much truth, also showing us, that there are certain things money cannot buy, or settle.
October 5th, 2023 07:38
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Splendid, splendid write dear poet! - I cannot express my appreciation enough hey, especially as someone who appreciates her music as well... Thank you for this beautiful ode!
October 5th, 2023 07:19
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Splendid, splendid write dear poet! - I cannot express my appreciation enough hey, especially as someone who appreciates her music as well... Thank you for this beautiful ode!
October 5th, 2023 07:19
My son of 2000, My son of now
Parisab said:
Wow I was not aware of the cultural piece-it was born out of maternal intuition-thanks for sharing and I like your poetic name as well…
October 3rd, 2023 17:22
Parisab said:
Wow I was not aware of the cultural piece-it was born out of maternal intuition-thanks for sharing and I like your poetic name as well…
October 3rd, 2023 17:22
Young Moon Killers
falcon_mn said:
Interesting poem with political issues.
I would say this :
It is a shame that this is happening in a country of great Persian culture and heritage. Country of great poets, Rumi, Hafiz, and others
October 3rd, 2023 03:31
falcon_mn said:
Interesting poem with political issues.
I would say this :
It is a shame that this is happening in a country of great Persian culture and heritage. Country of great poets, Rumi, Hafiz, and others
October 3rd, 2023 03:31
My son of 2000, My son of now
falcon_mn said:
This poem hit my thoughts.
It is a great poem.
In my country, we would often say
My falcon to a young man or a child.
Words Go on falcon in my country is often said to encourage to support a young man to endure to fight. Mothers are sensitive and they would say to their son My falcon to express how proud they are. Thank you. Bravo!!
October 3rd, 2023 03:27
falcon_mn said:
This poem hit my thoughts.
It is a great poem.
In my country, we would often say
My falcon to a young man or a child.
Words Go on falcon in my country is often said to encourage to support a young man to endure to fight. Mothers are sensitive and they would say to their son My falcon to express how proud they are. Thank you. Bravo!!
October 3rd, 2023 03:27
Pomegranate
falcon_mn said:
Thanks for a beautiful poem
Three closing lines are so strong and effective! Bravo!
October 3rd, 2023 03:14
falcon_mn said:
Thanks for a beautiful poem
Three closing lines are so strong and effective! Bravo!
October 3rd, 2023 03:14
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
falcon_mn said:
Thanks for sharing the Elegy.. dedicated to Anthony Bourdain.
October 3rd, 2023 03:10
falcon_mn said:
Thanks for sharing the Elegy.. dedicated to Anthony Bourdain.
October 3rd, 2023 03:10
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
L. B. Mek said:
(Dear cherished Poet, you\'ve penned
Such a beautiful ode
to a most tragic, yet Talented
soul
what a wonderful read, thank you!
for inspiring my little scribbled reply
and letting me join you in celebrating
a True legend..)
troubled Grandmother of jazz/soul
Her name, as head of a household
that never let her head rest
nor heart feel sustained peace..
still, despite it all she triumphed
graced us with 73 years, and music
that will serenade
\'Sunday morning, Love\'
to a generation of generations
\'At Last\', may she rest in peace..
September 25th, 2023 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
(Dear cherished Poet, you\'ve penned
Such a beautiful ode
to a most tragic, yet Talented
soul
what a wonderful read, thank you!
for inspiring my little scribbled reply
and letting me join you in celebrating
a True legend..)
troubled Grandmother of jazz/soul
Her name, as head of a household
that never let her head rest
nor heart feel sustained peace..
still, despite it all she triumphed
graced us with 73 years, and music
that will serenade
\'Sunday morning, Love\'
to a generation of generations
\'At Last\', may she rest in peace..
September 25th, 2023 03:13
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Neville said:
I am sure this is a fine tribute
I had never heard of her until just now but will certainly go check her vocal chords out .. 🎶🎶🎵👍
September 24th, 2023 10:47
Neville said:
I am sure this is a fine tribute
I had never heard of her until just now but will certainly go check her vocal chords out .. 🎶🎶🎵👍
September 24th, 2023 10:47
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the introduction, Parisab. Decided to find her and what she was about (my ignorance). Dived down the rabbit hole. The utube warren is a wonderous place and after an interlude with Etta slipped down a side passage and found myself with Nina once more.....
September 23rd, 2023 20:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the introduction, Parisab. Decided to find her and what she was about (my ignorance). Dived down the rabbit hole. The utube warren is a wonderous place and after an interlude with Etta slipped down a side passage and found myself with Nina once more.....
September 23rd, 2023 20:52
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