Comments received on poems by Parisab
Old Men of Steel
Thomas W Case said:
So much corruption, new and old. Great write.
October 18th, 2023 00:40
Thomas W Case said:
So much corruption, new and old. Great write.
October 18th, 2023 00:40
Pomegranate
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. Strange, I always thought the pomegranate was a sensual fruit. Something about those seeds. Well crafted and powerful.
October 16th, 2023 15:12
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. Strange, I always thought the pomegranate was a sensual fruit. Something about those seeds. Well crafted and powerful.
October 16th, 2023 15:12
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
So glad you enjoyed this dear Teddy…
October 14th, 2023 01:24
Parisab said:
So glad you enjoyed this dear Teddy…
October 14th, 2023 01:24
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning piece of poetry dear Parisab wonderful imagery and you truly did make the tree stand strong loved your last lines too. ❤️
October 14th, 2023 01:22
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning piece of poetry dear Parisab wonderful imagery and you truly did make the tree stand strong loved your last lines too. ❤️
October 14th, 2023 01:22
Like a Video
Thomas W Case said:
I love the way you use assonance and alliteration in this poem. Great job.
October 14th, 2023 01:10
Thomas W Case said:
I love the way you use assonance and alliteration in this poem. Great job.
October 14th, 2023 01:10
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
Thank you-your poems are good fruits…
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Parisab said:
Thank you-your poems are good fruits…
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
Unfortunately this topic is always a reminder! War is hell and PTSD ‘sucks’ as I’m told… Thank you for the read.
October 13th, 2023 21:41
Parisab said:
Unfortunately this topic is always a reminder! War is hell and PTSD ‘sucks’ as I’m told… Thank you for the read.
October 13th, 2023 21:41
Forever Losses
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great poem. War is hell.
October 13th, 2023 20:00
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great poem. War is hell.
October 13th, 2023 20:00
The Fig Tree and the Bird
peto said:
Parisab
I always look forward to your writes
As they are always full of meaning
Hope everything is good at your side if the world
With fingers being pointed in all directions
A writer always worth reading
October 13th, 2023 10:12
peto said:
Parisab
I always look forward to your writes
As they are always full of meaning
Hope everything is good at your side if the world
With fingers being pointed in all directions
A writer always worth reading
October 13th, 2023 10:12
The Fig Tree and the Bird
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
what an ode, a lucky tree
serenity versed poetic
thank you cherished Poet
we need all the peace we can get🙏
October 13th, 2023 07:53
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
what an ode, a lucky tree
serenity versed poetic
thank you cherished Poet
we need all the peace we can get🙏
October 13th, 2023 07:53
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
Lol-Why sir you did a quick spell check, while the “gilded creature” was dreaming-I’m glad you are here…
October 13th, 2023 02:49
Parisab said:
Lol-Why sir you did a quick spell check, while the “gilded creature” was dreaming-I’m glad you are here…
October 13th, 2023 02:49
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Bobby O said:
I know why that gilded creature dreams
October 13th, 2023 02:43
Bobby O said:
I know why that gilded creature dreams
October 13th, 2023 02:43
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Neville said:
how perfect a picture of calm you paint and all with such a steady hand ..
filled to the point of overflow with magnificent metaphor and meaning .. a seamless marriage in a world of increasing turmoil ... Neville
October 13th, 2023 02:32
Neville said:
how perfect a picture of calm you paint and all with such a steady hand ..
filled to the point of overflow with magnificent metaphor and meaning .. a seamless marriage in a world of increasing turmoil ... Neville
October 13th, 2023 02:32
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
I appreciate the literary exchange already and it even came with a small nudge to write this tonight
October 13th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
I appreciate the literary exchange already and it even came with a small nudge to write this tonight
October 13th, 2023 02:13
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted. I love the picture of the symbiotic relationship.
October 13th, 2023 02:06
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted. I love the picture of the symbiotic relationship.
October 13th, 2023 02:06
Only You Quench my Thirst
Thomas W Case said:
Tons of passion. The flow is brilliant and smooth in the outpouring of emotion.
October 13th, 2023 01:35
Thomas W Case said:
Tons of passion. The flow is brilliant and smooth in the outpouring of emotion.
October 13th, 2023 01:35
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. I can almost hear her now. Powerful poem.
October 13th, 2023 01:04
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. I can almost hear her now. Powerful poem.
October 13th, 2023 01:04
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Parisab said:
Thank you for your generous comment and feeling inspired by her…
October 5th, 2023 09:54
Parisab said:
Thank you for your generous comment and feeling inspired by her…
October 5th, 2023 09:54
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
AuburnScribbler said:
This was a true treat to read Parisab.
This is written in an epic narrative tone, that resembles the deep emotion is which Etta James performed her songs.
A beautiful homage, bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 5th, 2023 09:42
AuburnScribbler said:
This was a true treat to read Parisab.
This is written in an epic narrative tone, that resembles the deep emotion is which Etta James performed her songs.
A beautiful homage, bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 5th, 2023 09:42
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention for her music and appreciating this ode poet peer…
October 5th, 2023 09:31
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention for her music and appreciating this ode poet peer…
October 5th, 2023 09:31
Old Men of Steel
Parisab said:
‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so brilliantly in three words-a poem title perhaps? Thank you for your wise comments post friend…
October 5th, 2023 09:25
Parisab said:
‘untold leadership pandemic’ never heard this being told so brilliantly in three words-a poem title perhaps? Thank you for your wise comments post friend…
October 5th, 2023 09:25
Social Media Whore
Parisab said:
Thank you sir, there was an urgent need, to say it that day…
October 5th, 2023 09:19
Parisab said:
Thank you sir, there was an urgent need, to say it that day…
October 5th, 2023 09:19
Social Media Whore
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece says it all, with brutal clarity. Definitely a fave... I love it! - I love it when poetry tells the sober truth! - A hard hitting expose in every write!
October 5th, 2023 07:51
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This piece says it all, with brutal clarity. Definitely a fave... I love it! - I love it when poetry tells the sober truth! - A hard hitting expose in every write!
October 5th, 2023 07:51
Old Men of Steel
Garth Rakumakoe said:
One realizes many a times that it\'s because the same old faces, and I mean literally old - are are at the helm - that the transformation and evolutionary wheel does not turn. Old politicians refuse to give in. It\'s the untold leadership pandemic! - Thank you for shining a light on this, dear Poet.
October 5th, 2023 07:41
Garth Rakumakoe said:
One realizes many a times that it\'s because the same old faces, and I mean literally old - are are at the helm - that the transformation and evolutionary wheel does not turn. Old politicians refuse to give in. It\'s the untold leadership pandemic! - Thank you for shining a light on this, dear Poet.
October 5th, 2023 07:41
Young Moon Killers
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Loaded with so much truth, also showing us, that there are certain things money cannot buy, or settle.
October 5th, 2023 07:38
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Loaded with so much truth, also showing us, that there are certain things money cannot buy, or settle.
October 5th, 2023 07:38
Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Splendid, splendid write dear poet! - I cannot express my appreciation enough hey, especially as someone who appreciates her music as well... Thank you for this beautiful ode!
October 5th, 2023 07:19
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Splendid, splendid write dear poet! - I cannot express my appreciation enough hey, especially as someone who appreciates her music as well... Thank you for this beautiful ode!
October 5th, 2023 07:19
My son of 2000, My son of now
Parisab said:
Wow I was not aware of the cultural piece-it was born out of maternal intuition-thanks for sharing and I like your poetic name as well…
October 3rd, 2023 17:22
Parisab said:
Wow I was not aware of the cultural piece-it was born out of maternal intuition-thanks for sharing and I like your poetic name as well…
October 3rd, 2023 17:22
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