Comments received on poems by Parisab
Dancing in the Street
jarcher54 said:
Yes, those cruelly patrolled, sterile streets paved with fear and now blood and tears. It is unreal... thanks for not forgetting. He lets her lead him... beautiful and painful image. Women can be leaders to a better day.
February 12th, 2023 02:04
jarcher54 said:
Yes, those cruelly patrolled, sterile streets paved with fear and now blood and tears. It is unreal... thanks for not forgetting. He lets her lead him... beautiful and painful image. Women can be leaders to a better day.
February 12th, 2023 02:04
This is I
Parisab said:
Thank you for reaching out and your kind commentary.
February 10th, 2023 10:39
Parisab said:
Thank you for reaching out and your kind commentary.
February 10th, 2023 10:39
This is I
L. B. Mek said:
\'we must learn to heal, ourselves
learn to keep our doors open
so as to welcome, our possibilities\'
(great message
wonderfully succinct and poetic
yet stylistic
thanks for sharing dear poet)
February 10th, 2023 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'we must learn to heal, ourselves
learn to keep our doors open
so as to welcome, our possibilities\'
(great message
wonderfully succinct and poetic
yet stylistic
thanks for sharing dear poet)
February 10th, 2023 05:48
The Sins of Us
Parisab said:
Thank you for your comments. Great observation about the fearful flow at times-I’m working on it:)
February 9th, 2023 01:25
Parisab said:
Thank you for your comments. Great observation about the fearful flow at times-I’m working on it:)
February 9th, 2023 01:25
Blood Moon
jarcher54 said:
Mahsa has been my screen saver since her death. The inhumanity of the regime is all the more tragic given how beautiful and brave the people of Iran are. Thank you for this little epitaph. Courage.
February 8th, 2023 22:38
jarcher54 said:
Mahsa has been my screen saver since her death. The inhumanity of the regime is all the more tragic given how beautiful and brave the people of Iran are. Thank you for this little epitaph. Courage.
February 8th, 2023 22:38
The Sins of Us
jarcher54 said:
This is enigmatic but offers some memorable images and reeks of mature honesty. It flows so smoothly and a little fearfully.
February 8th, 2023 22:35
jarcher54 said:
This is enigmatic but offers some memorable images and reeks of mature honesty. It flows so smoothly and a little fearfully.
February 8th, 2023 22:35
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