Comments received on poems by Parisab
Love Letter to God
Parisab said:
LOL-as to your daily practice, may it always be received by the correct destination-Gestalt is staring at an empty chair and it is not answering back, he he
September 14th, 2023 12:40
Parisab said:
LOL-as to your daily practice, may it always be received by the correct destination-Gestalt is staring at an empty chair and it is not answering back, he he
September 14th, 2023 12:40
Love Letter to God
Neville said:
I have a habit of writing them, then throwing them away .. I know each one is subsequently found and read in full each and every day ... well penned .. Gestalt would have a field day .. Neville
September 14th, 2023 01:23
Neville said:
I have a habit of writing them, then throwing them away .. I know each one is subsequently found and read in full each and every day ... well penned .. Gestalt would have a field day .. Neville
September 14th, 2023 01:23
Holy Dreamscape
Neville said:
you can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat a bloomin good dreamscape ..
September 13th, 2023 13:33
Neville said:
you can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat a bloomin good dreamscape ..
September 13th, 2023 13:33
Blood Moon
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention, this is near the anniversary of her killing and the
Woman Life Freedom uprising, poet and brother in pen…
September 11th, 2023 02:04
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention, this is near the anniversary of her killing and the
Woman Life Freedom uprising, poet and brother in pen…
September 11th, 2023 02:04
Blood Moon
L. B. Mek said:
these words will be needed
should be repeated
for every new generation, to realise
until someday
people will learn, belief\'s or culture
if our ideal\'s equate to us judging
another person, as being less
due to our differences
and their entitled, choices
then it is our ideals that must
change!
such a timely and needed write, dear Poet
thank you!
September 11th, 2023 01:59
L. B. Mek said:
these words will be needed
should be repeated
for every new generation, to realise
until someday
people will learn, belief\'s or culture
if our ideal\'s equate to us judging
another person, as being less
due to our differences
and their entitled, choices
then it is our ideals that must
change!
such a timely and needed write, dear Poet
thank you!
September 11th, 2023 01:59
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Thanks my dear poet friend-my words described that intoxicated feeling-I know if you’re aware that research suggests the brain releases those intense chemicals couple times in a life span and after that it releases the chemicals for attachment and bonding (and more mature and stable love:))
September 10th, 2023 10:23
Parisab said:
Thanks my dear poet friend-my words described that intoxicated feeling-I know if you’re aware that research suggests the brain releases those intense chemicals couple times in a life span and after that it releases the chemicals for attachment and bonding (and more mature and stable love:))
September 10th, 2023 10:23
Old Men of Steel
Alex Praw said:
I love it. It is short, accurate and funny. With good rhymes and meaning. It has everything.
September 9th, 2023 14:51
Alex Praw said:
I love it. It is short, accurate and funny. With good rhymes and meaning. It has everything.
September 9th, 2023 14:51
Holy Dreamscape
Parisab said:
I’m so glad you found this piece engaging, Maxine:)
September 8th, 2023 23:43
Parisab said:
I’m so glad you found this piece engaging, Maxine:)
September 8th, 2023 23:43
Love Letter to God
vividvoid14 said:
getting to read a poem is a privilege getting to read one of your poems is a gift
September 7th, 2023 10:14
vividvoid14 said:
getting to read a poem is a privilege getting to read one of your poems is a gift
September 7th, 2023 10:14
Holy Dreamscape
Bella Shepard said:
Such a dream, described in such beautiful words.
September 4th, 2023 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
Such a dream, described in such beautiful words.
September 4th, 2023 14:15
Holy Dreamscape
Pop64 said:
Beautiful in flow, imagery and perspective. Wonderfully written.
September 1st, 2023 09:46
Pop64 said:
Beautiful in flow, imagery and perspective. Wonderfully written.
September 1st, 2023 09:46
Holy Dreamscape
L. B. Mek said:
first and last line, bookend
and contextualise, such a fantastical
poet wording of our imagination
carrying us to thought pathways
we never knew we were capable of
I believe dreams, are simultaneously
irrelevant and consequential
they\'re often a projection
of the things we notice but keep
repressed
or, that we dwell-on relentlessly
it\'s always, what we see in them
that defines their relevance..
but purely as a reading experience
this was such a wonderful poetic delight
thank you! dear cherished Poet
September 1st, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
first and last line, bookend
and contextualise, such a fantastical
poet wording of our imagination
carrying us to thought pathways
we never knew we were capable of
I believe dreams, are simultaneously
irrelevant and consequential
they\'re often a projection
of the things we notice but keep
repressed
or, that we dwell-on relentlessly
it\'s always, what we see in them
that defines their relevance..
but purely as a reading experience
this was such a wonderful poetic delight
thank you! dear cherished Poet
September 1st, 2023 02:19
Holy Dreamscape
Parisab said:
Regards to you and your engagement with these words…
August 31st, 2023 21:19
Parisab said:
Regards to you and your engagement with these words…
August 31st, 2023 21:19
Holy Dreamscape
Bobby O said:
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti inflammatory
That aside, it’s such a thought provoking piece at a really high level. As always, XOXO
August 31st, 2023 20:45
Bobby O said:
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti inflammatory
That aside, it’s such a thought provoking piece at a really high level. As always, XOXO
August 31st, 2023 20:45
Holy Dreamscape
Bobby O said:
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti inflammatory
That aside, it’s such a thought provoking piece at a really high level. As always, XOXO
August 31st, 2023 20:36
Bobby O said:
Had to dig out my Funk & Wagnals
Alone or solemn
Or A NSAID anti inflammatory
That aside, it’s such a thought provoking piece at a really high level. As always, XOXO
August 31st, 2023 20:36
Old Men of Steel
Bella Shepard said:
I Love this poem, wise words indeed. I look around and don\'t recognize my country any more. The principles upon which our U.S. was founded have gone by the wayside, and what we have is exactly what you have so succintly described. We need young leaders whose minds are free of corruption, to lead us, it is their future that is at stake. The clock is indeed ticking! Thank you for telling it like it is.
August 26th, 2023 10:26
Bella Shepard said:
I Love this poem, wise words indeed. I look around and don\'t recognize my country any more. The principles upon which our U.S. was founded have gone by the wayside, and what we have is exactly what you have so succintly described. We need young leaders whose minds are free of corruption, to lead us, it is their future that is at stake. The clock is indeed ticking! Thank you for telling it like it is.
August 26th, 2023 10:26
Like a Video
Parisab said:
Thank you for viewing and noticing my instinct for inventive styling, at your first view, poet peer…
August 25th, 2023 04:28
Parisab said:
Thank you for viewing and noticing my instinct for inventive styling, at your first view, poet peer…
August 25th, 2023 04:28
Old Men of Steel
Parisab said:
Yes for sure ‘new engagement’ is needed-while gender and age were not my main contention, I’m glad that it looked and quacked like the ‘old men of Steele’ whom have set up the system which all kind of players have to play by its fundamental principals-I’m particularly looking at our possible US presidential contenders, whom both fit the Bill of Wrongs for these times… It’s great to see you back, dear LB Mek
August 25th, 2023 04:15
Parisab said:
Yes for sure ‘new engagement’ is needed-while gender and age were not my main contention, I’m glad that it looked and quacked like the ‘old men of Steele’ whom have set up the system which all kind of players have to play by its fundamental principals-I’m particularly looking at our possible US presidential contenders, whom both fit the Bill of Wrongs for these times… It’s great to see you back, dear LB Mek
August 25th, 2023 04:15
Old Men of Steel
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know if we can just assume
the male gene, is at fault
Hilary Clinton or Kamala Harris or Nicola Sturgeon
aren\'t really flying a high flag..
or the \'age\' alone being the problem
(Justin Trudeau\'s as just one example
of how quickly youthful fervour
can curate a warped dictatorial mindset)
maybe, its more the \'mindset\'
of the people attracted to power positions
\'in general\'
that needs to be considered..
and no, i\'m not trying to belittle
the majority male patriarchy legacy
that\'s curated most of our problems
with politics and democracy as a whole
still, there\'s something deeper going on
than assuming getting rid of all the old fellas
in charge and replacing them with younger or the opposite sex
would solve our problems...
look at chicago, san fran, california etc
failed states who have been doing this for decades
(voting young and empowering ladies)
but hey what do i know, still
love the open discourse
we need more of this active engagement to take back ownership
of a political system, supposedly designed
with us, \'the voters\'
in the power seat... ha!
August 25th, 2023 00:38
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know if we can just assume
the male gene, is at fault
Hilary Clinton or Kamala Harris or Nicola Sturgeon
aren\'t really flying a high flag..
or the \'age\' alone being the problem
(Justin Trudeau\'s as just one example
of how quickly youthful fervour
can curate a warped dictatorial mindset)
maybe, its more the \'mindset\'
of the people attracted to power positions
\'in general\'
that needs to be considered..
and no, i\'m not trying to belittle
the majority male patriarchy legacy
that\'s curated most of our problems
with politics and democracy as a whole
still, there\'s something deeper going on
than assuming getting rid of all the old fellas
in charge and replacing them with younger or the opposite sex
would solve our problems...
look at chicago, san fran, california etc
failed states who have been doing this for decades
(voting young and empowering ladies)
but hey what do i know, still
love the open discourse
we need more of this active engagement to take back ownership
of a political system, supposedly designed
with us, \'the voters\'
in the power seat... ha!
August 25th, 2023 00:38
Like a Video
L. B. Mek said:
some music videos stay with you throughout life
but we can never recreate that first viewing feel..
(a quirky write, love the free spirit energy and uniquely inventive style)
thank you, dear Poet
August 25th, 2023 00:15
L. B. Mek said:
some music videos stay with you throughout life
but we can never recreate that first viewing feel..
(a quirky write, love the free spirit energy and uniquely inventive style)
thank you, dear Poet
August 25th, 2023 00:15
Social Media Whore
Parisab said:
It’s great that you visited and connected with my words, Maxine-I’m looking forward to the rest of your raw and authentic poetry…
August 20th, 2023 16:18
Parisab said:
It’s great that you visited and connected with my words, Maxine-I’m looking forward to the rest of your raw and authentic poetry…
August 20th, 2023 16:18
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Thank you for your input and insight-looking forward to visiting more of your words and distinct voice, in the near future…
August 19th, 2023 23:44
Parisab said:
Thank you for your input and insight-looking forward to visiting more of your words and distinct voice, in the near future…
August 19th, 2023 23:44
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