Comments received on poems by Parisab
Midlife Rap
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
June 17th, 2023 03:47
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
June 17th, 2023 03:47
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
June 16th, 2023 09:22
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
June 16th, 2023 09:22
Midlife Rap
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
June 16th, 2023 09:18
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
June 16th, 2023 09:18
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
June 16th, 2023 08:59
Parisab said:
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
June 16th, 2023 08:59
Midlife Rap
L. B. Mek said:
\'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up\'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
June 16th, 2023 01:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up\'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
June 16th, 2023 01:43
Love Letter to God
Peter Gates said:
I like it! May He \"...restore without blame.\" us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
June 4th, 2023 03:44
Peter Gates said:
I like it! May He \"...restore without blame.\" us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
June 4th, 2023 03:44
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
Thank you LB for never forgetting! Great to see your return and your feedback…
June 2nd, 2023 07:07
Parisab said:
Thank you LB for never forgetting! Great to see your return and your feedback…
June 2nd, 2023 07:07
Forever Losses
L. B. Mek said:
We must never forget!
an important write, dear Poet
thank you
June 2nd, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
We must never forget!
an important write, dear Poet
thank you
June 2nd, 2023 04:09
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
Thank you for connecting with this poem’s emotions. I appreciate the read and positive comments.
May 27th, 2023 22:23
Parisab said:
Thank you for connecting with this poem’s emotions. I appreciate the read and positive comments.
May 27th, 2023 22:23
Forever Losses
Bella Shepard said:
I don\'t think we can ever fully understand the losses suffered by so many in service to their country. This poem is a powerful reminder, as we participate in ceremonies and lay wreaths on Memorial Day, of those who came home never to be the same again. Thank you dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
I don\'t think we can ever fully understand the losses suffered by so many in service to their country. This poem is a powerful reminder, as we participate in ceremonies and lay wreaths on Memorial Day, of those who came home never to be the same again. Thank you dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 14:14
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
I am grateful for your attention and acknowledgement of our veterans. I am extending you a little sharpened pencil flower, poet friend…
May 26th, 2023 15:07
Parisab said:
I am grateful for your attention and acknowledgement of our veterans. I am extending you a little sharpened pencil flower, poet friend…
May 26th, 2023 15:07
Forever Losses
Bobby O said:
Reminding in succinct style the debt we owe without preaching but a touch of responsible urging and I for one will shepherd my acknowledgement and like little sharpened pencil flowers foster it’s growth.
May 26th, 2023 13:24
Bobby O said:
Reminding in succinct style the debt we owe without preaching but a touch of responsible urging and I for one will shepherd my acknowledgement and like little sharpened pencil flowers foster it’s growth.
May 26th, 2023 13:24
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
I will do so, sir-my father was a vet and so are some of my patients who experience PTSD
May 26th, 2023 12:42
Parisab said:
I will do so, sir-my father was a vet and so are some of my patients who experience PTSD
May 26th, 2023 12:42
Forever Losses
Peter Gates said:
Parisab, Enjoyed \"Forever Losses\" so much. You are a vet also, I believe. You are welcome to visit my \"A Memorial Day Tribute\" It\'s short but \"sweet\".
May 26th, 2023 06:08
Peter Gates said:
Parisab, Enjoyed \"Forever Losses\" so much. You are a vet also, I believe. You are welcome to visit my \"A Memorial Day Tribute\" It\'s short but \"sweet\".
May 26th, 2023 06:08
Dancing in the Street
Peter Gates said:
Beautiful read, Parisab. Loved it. Not in the same vein, but you may like my \"A Memorial Day Trubute\"
May 26th, 2023 04:23
Peter Gates said:
Beautiful read, Parisab. Loved it. Not in the same vein, but you may like my \"A Memorial Day Trubute\"
May 26th, 2023 04:23
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Parisab said:
Thank you for the close read poet friend-The texts gathered the final days exchanged with Asia Sergento are said to you triggered his depression and distress even more-when the public and private boundaries are crossed in such extreme manner, a sensitive soul can really shatter
May 21st, 2023 01:31
Parisab said:
Thank you for the close read poet friend-The texts gathered the final days exchanged with Asia Sergento are said to you triggered his depression and distress even more-when the public and private boundaries are crossed in such extreme manner, a sensitive soul can really shatter
May 21st, 2023 01:31
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Bobby O said:
It certainly hit me hard when I first heard and of course I’m still confused Nd still admire and enjoyed reading your piece and tribute. He was many things and sometimes the Devil creeps in. Thanks fir the write. I might need to reed this s lot to fully gather and I think that’s great. Much like Art Pepper’s tune Patricia , often heard in the great series Hieronymos Bosch.
May 21st, 2023 00:18
Bobby O said:
It certainly hit me hard when I first heard and of course I’m still confused Nd still admire and enjoyed reading your piece and tribute. He was many things and sometimes the Devil creeps in. Thanks fir the write. I might need to reed this s lot to fully gather and I think that’s great. Much like Art Pepper’s tune Patricia , often heard in the great series Hieronymos Bosch.
May 21st, 2023 00:18
Love Potion No.19
Neville said:
I\'ll take two bottles of No 19 thank you very much ..
What a treat it was to find these words this mane .. Thanks for the ride back down way back when I missed the signs oh\' so many times ... Neville
May 21st, 2023 00:10
Neville said:
I\'ll take two bottles of No 19 thank you very much ..
What a treat it was to find these words this mane .. Thanks for the ride back down way back when I missed the signs oh\' so many times ... Neville
May 21st, 2023 00:10
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment in
Mental health.
May 20th, 2023 21:48
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment in
Mental health.
May 20th, 2023 21:48
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
sorenbarrett said:
Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the patients I see come in they are set in their ways and it is costly in time and effort to make changes. Mental health should be given priority from infancy onward as prevention not treatment. A very interesting poem that keep thinking about. I am not as familiar with him as I need to be to completely understand the poem. It does seem to follow the thought process appropriate for this. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2023 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the patients I see come in they are set in their ways and it is costly in time and effort to make changes. Mental health should be given priority from infancy onward as prevention not treatment. A very interesting poem that keep thinking about. I am not as familiar with him as I need to be to completely understand the poem. It does seem to follow the thought process appropriate for this. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2023 18:51
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Neville said:
I have no reservation whatsoever in emphasizing here and now, just how sadly and much, I liked and enjoyed this poem ..
Like you, I met him briefly, but in London where we were both dining (my son himself was a chef there) ..
There are many great chefs and many great personalities, but few deserve the pedestal that I would place this particular gentleman on .. and indeed, for many reasons ..
Neville
May 15th, 2023 02:21
Neville said:
I have no reservation whatsoever in emphasizing here and now, just how sadly and much, I liked and enjoyed this poem ..
Like you, I met him briefly, but in London where we were both dining (my son himself was a chef there) ..
There are many great chefs and many great personalities, but few deserve the pedestal that I would place this particular gentleman on .. and indeed, for many reasons ..
Neville
May 15th, 2023 02:21
Love Potion No.19
Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer said:
Exquisite ink. Magnificently crafted.
May 14th, 2023 12:20
Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer said:
Exquisite ink. Magnificently crafted.
May 14th, 2023 12:20
Love Potion No.19
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Great write. Love by \"potion\" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and devotion. Such is life. Wisdom of experience laced with morality and understanding. Wise words indeed. - Phil A.
May 12th, 2023 13:48
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Great write. Love by \"potion\" or otherwise, leads to sacrifice and devotion. Such is life. Wisdom of experience laced with morality and understanding. Wise words indeed. - Phil A.
May 12th, 2023 13:48
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
L. B. Mek said:
this reminds me of my feelings when I heard Robin Williams
had passed away
thank you! dear Poet
for this ever-Timely
and most necessary poem
\'Listen to the music when it fades.
You must let go of the summers.\'
that\'s why we have seasons
I think
to teach us change\'s
lessons of inevitability
and that for every Winter
a promise of Spring, awaits
we must never lose sight
of existence\'s small mercies
May 12th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
this reminds me of my feelings when I heard Robin Williams
had passed away
thank you! dear Poet
for this ever-Timely
and most necessary poem
\'Listen to the music when it fades.
You must let go of the summers.\'
that\'s why we have seasons
I think
to teach us change\'s
lessons of inevitability
and that for every Winter
a promise of Spring, awaits
we must never lose sight
of existence\'s small mercies
May 12th, 2023 04:44
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
orchidee said:
A sharp comment - delete it if it\'s too much. Wikipedia says he was a drug-crazed so-and-so.
May 12th, 2023 04:25
orchidee said:
A sharp comment - delete it if it\'s too much. Wikipedia says he was a drug-crazed so-and-so.
May 12th, 2023 04:25
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the reminder.
May 12th, 2023 02:50
jarcher54 said:
Thank you for the reminder.
May 12th, 2023 02:50
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise to see through the words. I appreciate your helpful comments, poet-friend.
May 12th, 2023 01:54
Parisab said:
Thank you for your great power of observation and your elevated expertise to see through the words. I appreciate your helpful comments, poet-friend.
May 12th, 2023 01:54
Love Potion No.19
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative
\'batch no.19\'
what matters most, is that we find
hope/strength, stubbornness enough
to keep experimenting and hoping
\'We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption \'
not settling
for those shallow solutions
of love potion mirages...
(just a great read, dear Poet
your insightful poetry
as eloquently refined, as-ever)
thank you!
(widening our word spacing
like we widen our fishing nets
of hope,
a showcasing of wordless imagery)
May 12th, 2023 01:48
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully creative
\'batch no.19\'
what matters most, is that we find
hope/strength, stubbornness enough
to keep experimenting and hoping
\'We’ll forget the cuts
and claim preemption \'
not settling
for those shallow solutions
of love potion mirages...
(just a great read, dear Poet
your insightful poetry
as eloquently refined, as-ever)
thank you!
(widening our word spacing
like we widen our fishing nets
of hope,
a showcasing of wordless imagery)
May 12th, 2023 01:48
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