Comments received on poems by Parisab
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your cognitive shifting!
June 25th, 2023 02:14
Parisab said:
So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your cognitive shifting!
June 25th, 2023 02:14
Midlife Rap
Bobby O said:
Way cool. How your mind got to some of those “bars”? Is out of realm of my first 13 guesses and I’m way too shy to spit about getting glammed up
Props Lady P, Props!
June 25th, 2023 02:04
Bobby O said:
Way cool. How your mind got to some of those “bars”? Is out of realm of my first 13 guesses and I’m way too shy to spit about getting glammed up
Props Lady P, Props!
June 25th, 2023 02:04
Summer Feast
Neville said:
this is nothing short of amazing and I rarely use the A word these days ..
bravo my fine literary friend .. N
June 25th, 2023 01:07
Neville said:
this is nothing short of amazing and I rarely use the A word these days ..
bravo my fine literary friend .. N
June 25th, 2023 01:07
Summer Feast
Bobby O said:
I just really love your style. The Ease and confidence paired and powers toward a chosen secret known only by the magic in your mind. Success , guided missile on the target success, enhanced w speed control voyeurs embrace and enjoy cuz slow beauty is fun to watch.
June 25th, 2023 00:36
Bobby O said:
I just really love your style. The Ease and confidence paired and powers toward a chosen secret known only by the magic in your mind. Success , guided missile on the target success, enhanced w speed control voyeurs embrace and enjoy cuz slow beauty is fun to watch.
June 25th, 2023 00:36
The Sins of Us
Parisab said:
Thank you for your kind attention and great insight!
June 18th, 2023 23:23
Parisab said:
Thank you for your kind attention and great insight!
June 18th, 2023 23:23
The Sins of Us
Eugene S. said:
Seeing inside (let alone, acknowledging it) is a difficult art form, and, I have to say, the inside has everything to do with suffering. Great poem. I look forward to discovering more.
June 18th, 2023 09:22
Eugene S. said:
Seeing inside (let alone, acknowledging it) is a difficult art form, and, I have to say, the inside has everything to do with suffering. Great poem. I look forward to discovering more.
June 18th, 2023 09:22
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what it was originally intended for- I really appreciate your read and kind comments.
June 17th, 2023 11:39
Parisab said:
I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what it was originally intended for- I really appreciate your read and kind comments.
June 17th, 2023 11:39
Midlife Rap
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
June 17th, 2023 03:47
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
June 17th, 2023 03:47
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
June 16th, 2023 09:22
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
June 16th, 2023 09:22
Midlife Rap
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
June 16th, 2023 09:18
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
June 16th, 2023 09:18
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
June 16th, 2023 08:59
Parisab said:
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
June 16th, 2023 08:59
Midlife Rap
L. B. Mek said:
\'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up\'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
June 16th, 2023 01:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up\'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
June 16th, 2023 01:43
Love Letter to God
Peter Gates said:
I like it! May He \"...restore without blame.\" us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
June 4th, 2023 03:44
Peter Gates said:
I like it! May He \"...restore without blame.\" us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
June 4th, 2023 03:44
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
Thank you LB for never forgetting! Great to see your return and your feedback…
June 2nd, 2023 07:07
Parisab said:
Thank you LB for never forgetting! Great to see your return and your feedback…
June 2nd, 2023 07:07
Forever Losses
L. B. Mek said:
We must never forget!
an important write, dear Poet
thank you
June 2nd, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
We must never forget!
an important write, dear Poet
thank you
June 2nd, 2023 04:09
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
Thank you for connecting with this poem’s emotions. I appreciate the read and positive comments.
May 27th, 2023 22:23
Parisab said:
Thank you for connecting with this poem’s emotions. I appreciate the read and positive comments.
May 27th, 2023 22:23
Forever Losses
Bella Shepard said:
I don\'t think we can ever fully understand the losses suffered by so many in service to their country. This poem is a powerful reminder, as we participate in ceremonies and lay wreaths on Memorial Day, of those who came home never to be the same again. Thank you dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
I don\'t think we can ever fully understand the losses suffered by so many in service to their country. This poem is a powerful reminder, as we participate in ceremonies and lay wreaths on Memorial Day, of those who came home never to be the same again. Thank you dear poet.
May 27th, 2023 14:14
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
I am grateful for your attention and acknowledgement of our veterans. I am extending you a little sharpened pencil flower, poet friend…
May 26th, 2023 15:07
Parisab said:
I am grateful for your attention and acknowledgement of our veterans. I am extending you a little sharpened pencil flower, poet friend…
May 26th, 2023 15:07
Forever Losses
Bobby O said:
Reminding in succinct style the debt we owe without preaching but a touch of responsible urging and I for one will shepherd my acknowledgement and like little sharpened pencil flowers foster it’s growth.
May 26th, 2023 13:24
Bobby O said:
Reminding in succinct style the debt we owe without preaching but a touch of responsible urging and I for one will shepherd my acknowledgement and like little sharpened pencil flowers foster it’s growth.
May 26th, 2023 13:24
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
I will do so, sir-my father was a vet and so are some of my patients who experience PTSD
May 26th, 2023 12:42
Parisab said:
I will do so, sir-my father was a vet and so are some of my patients who experience PTSD
May 26th, 2023 12:42
Forever Losses
Peter Gates said:
Parisab, Enjoyed \"Forever Losses\" so much. You are a vet also, I believe. You are welcome to visit my \"A Memorial Day Tribute\" It\'s short but \"sweet\".
May 26th, 2023 06:08
Peter Gates said:
Parisab, Enjoyed \"Forever Losses\" so much. You are a vet also, I believe. You are welcome to visit my \"A Memorial Day Tribute\" It\'s short but \"sweet\".
May 26th, 2023 06:08
Dancing in the Street
Peter Gates said:
Beautiful read, Parisab. Loved it. Not in the same vein, but you may like my \"A Memorial Day Trubute\"
May 26th, 2023 04:23
Peter Gates said:
Beautiful read, Parisab. Loved it. Not in the same vein, but you may like my \"A Memorial Day Trubute\"
May 26th, 2023 04:23
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Parisab said:
Thank you for the close read poet friend-The texts gathered the final days exchanged with Asia Sergento are said to you triggered his depression and distress even more-when the public and private boundaries are crossed in such extreme manner, a sensitive soul can really shatter
May 21st, 2023 01:31
Parisab said:
Thank you for the close read poet friend-The texts gathered the final days exchanged with Asia Sergento are said to you triggered his depression and distress even more-when the public and private boundaries are crossed in such extreme manner, a sensitive soul can really shatter
May 21st, 2023 01:31
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Bobby O said:
It certainly hit me hard when I first heard and of course I’m still confused Nd still admire and enjoyed reading your piece and tribute. He was many things and sometimes the Devil creeps in. Thanks fir the write. I might need to reed this s lot to fully gather and I think that’s great. Much like Art Pepper’s tune Patricia , often heard in the great series Hieronymos Bosch.
May 21st, 2023 00:18
Bobby O said:
It certainly hit me hard when I first heard and of course I’m still confused Nd still admire and enjoyed reading your piece and tribute. He was many things and sometimes the Devil creeps in. Thanks fir the write. I might need to reed this s lot to fully gather and I think that’s great. Much like Art Pepper’s tune Patricia , often heard in the great series Hieronymos Bosch.
May 21st, 2023 00:18
Love Potion No.19
Neville said:
I\'ll take two bottles of No 19 thank you very much ..
What a treat it was to find these words this mane .. Thanks for the ride back down way back when I missed the signs oh\' so many times ... Neville
May 21st, 2023 00:10
Neville said:
I\'ll take two bottles of No 19 thank you very much ..
What a treat it was to find these words this mane .. Thanks for the ride back down way back when I missed the signs oh\' so many times ... Neville
May 21st, 2023 00:10
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment in
Mental health.
May 20th, 2023 21:48
Parisab said:
Thank you for your attention to the poem, as well as your investment in
Mental health.
May 20th, 2023 21:48
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
sorenbarrett said:
Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the patients I see come in they are set in their ways and it is costly in time and effort to make changes. Mental health should be given priority from infancy onward as prevention not treatment. A very interesting poem that keep thinking about. I am not as familiar with him as I need to be to completely understand the poem. It does seem to follow the thought process appropriate for this. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2023 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the patients I see come in they are set in their ways and it is costly in time and effort to make changes. Mental health should be given priority from infancy onward as prevention not treatment. A very interesting poem that keep thinking about. I am not as familiar with him as I need to be to completely understand the poem. It does seem to follow the thought process appropriate for this. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2023 18:51
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