Comments received on poems by Parisab
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
sorenbarrett said:
What a great way of portraying the way of the world today countering what Christianity preaches.
December 28th, 2023 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
What a great way of portraying the way of the world today countering what Christianity preaches.
December 28th, 2023 09:10
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Bobby O said:
Any system that waits until it’s too late to reveal its most important Axiom should be held accountable
December 28th, 2023 03:25
Bobby O said:
Any system that waits until it’s too late to reveal its most important Axiom should be held accountable
December 28th, 2023 03:25
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
orchidee said:
Feelings of darkness, yet He still remains the Light of the world, is my belief.
December 28th, 2023 03:03
orchidee said:
Feelings of darkness, yet He still remains the Light of the world, is my belief.
December 28th, 2023 03:03
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
Thank you for the visit and your kind feedback-
December 12th, 2023 00:44
Parisab said:
Thank you for the visit and your kind feedback-
December 12th, 2023 00:44
The Fig Tree and the Bird
nephilim56 said:
a beautiful poem , loved the passion
December 11th, 2023 04:56
nephilim56 said:
a beautiful poem , loved the passion
December 11th, 2023 04:56
The Fig Tree and the Bird
jarcher54 said:
Your title evokes Aesop\'s fables... the Fox and the Grapes, the Lion and the Mouse, the Fox and the Hare... you have uttered a lesson for all the world. Lovely and reassuring.
November 19th, 2023 15:35
jarcher54 said:
Your title evokes Aesop\'s fables... the Fox and the Grapes, the Lion and the Mouse, the Fox and the Hare... you have uttered a lesson for all the world. Lovely and reassuring.
November 19th, 2023 15:35
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
jarcher54 said:
They say there are no words... but you found the right ones. I recall as a child feeling sorry for the \"weeds\" folks pulled from their yards... you plumb the deepest feelings of compassion and heartbreak...
November 19th, 2023 15:30
jarcher54 said:
They say there are no words... but you found the right ones. I recall as a child feeling sorry for the \"weeds\" folks pulled from their yards... you plumb the deepest feelings of compassion and heartbreak...
November 19th, 2023 15:30
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Until we meet them again …
November 19th, 2023 14:43
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Until we meet them again …
November 19th, 2023 14:43
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading and I appreciate your comments…
November 18th, 2023 23:43
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading and I appreciate your comments…
November 18th, 2023 23:43
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Neville said:
I would be honoured to stand next to your shadow & weep alongside you ..
November 18th, 2023 01:25
Neville said:
I would be honoured to stand next to your shadow & weep alongside you ..
November 18th, 2023 01:25
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Bobby O said:
I feel this. Whether by happenstance, circumstance or perhaps injustice that forced limits unnoticed by those that don’t or didn’t pay a price and and may never know the pain of seeing the specter of a the rose you were forbidden to be.
I have a special pulse of my heart for You, dear Poet
November 16th, 2023 21:15
Bobby O said:
I feel this. Whether by happenstance, circumstance or perhaps injustice that forced limits unnoticed by those that don’t or didn’t pay a price and and may never know the pain of seeing the specter of a the rose you were forbidden to be.
I have a special pulse of my heart for You, dear Poet
November 16th, 2023 21:15
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem. Vivid imagery and metaphor.
November 16th, 2023 16:30
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem. Vivid imagery and metaphor.
November 16th, 2023 16:30
Blood Moon
Parisab said:
Thank you for visiting an event from last year and things never went back despite all odds
October 27th, 2023 17:34
Parisab said:
Thank you for visiting an event from last year and things never went back despite all odds
October 27th, 2023 17:34
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
October 26th, 2023 01:26
Parisab said:
Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
October 26th, 2023 01:26
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
I am humbled each time I try to pen one story of one brave heart, at a time. All the while acknowledging that war is but a dirty business. Thank you for your kind comments…
October 26th, 2023 01:23
Parisab said:
I am humbled each time I try to pen one story of one brave heart, at a time. All the while acknowledging that war is but a dirty business. Thank you for your kind comments…
October 26th, 2023 01:23
Midnight Flight
Parisab said:
Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
October 26th, 2023 01:11
Parisab said:
Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
October 26th, 2023 01:11
Midnight Flight
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, what an amazing piece of art, you take the readers on a wonderful journey, thank you.
October 25th, 2023 15:33
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, what an amazing piece of art, you take the readers on a wonderful journey, thank you.
October 25th, 2023 15:33
Forever Losses
Garth Rakumakoe said:
What a compelling title to start with. This is how poetry shines a light, revealing those plight we see and blatantly refuse to acknowledge. The shame of our righteous false self assurances is laid bare by these words. Of the lives we have so bravely sacrificed at the altars of glory seeking, traumatizing, those souls who literally gave themselves, forsaking those dear to them, for their fatherland flag. You weave a mighty pen dear Poet.
October 25th, 2023 12:28
Garth Rakumakoe said:
What a compelling title to start with. This is how poetry shines a light, revealing those plight we see and blatantly refuse to acknowledge. The shame of our righteous false self assurances is laid bare by these words. Of the lives we have so bravely sacrificed at the altars of glory seeking, traumatizing, those souls who literally gave themselves, forsaking those dear to them, for their fatherland flag. You weave a mighty pen dear Poet.
October 25th, 2023 12:28
Love Potion No.19
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the passion and drive well here.
October 25th, 2023 00:51
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the passion and drive well here.
October 25th, 2023 00:51
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Garth Rakumakoe said:
There\'s just something about the reassurance trees exude to all life about. This is exquisitely penned, dear poet.
October 24th, 2023 08:17
Garth Rakumakoe said:
There\'s just something about the reassurance trees exude to all life about. This is exquisitely penned, dear poet.
October 24th, 2023 08:17
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
October 22nd, 2023 11:45
Parisab said:
LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
October 22nd, 2023 11:45
Midlife Rap
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, and very relatable I don\'t know what midlife really means but as a woman at the gorgeous age of 49 I\'m feeling this, I still feel like an 18 year old though. Loved this it obviously has all your character painted in the lines. The language made me chuckle... 🤗
October 22nd, 2023 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, and very relatable I don\'t know what midlife really means but as a woman at the gorgeous age of 49 I\'m feeling this, I still feel like an 18 year old though. Loved this it obviously has all your character painted in the lines. The language made me chuckle... 🤗
October 22nd, 2023 03:57
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Thomas W Case said:
Superb tribute. Thank you for bringing to light the struggles we all have with mental health. Great poem.
October 21st, 2023 11:49
Thomas W Case said:
Superb tribute. Thank you for bringing to light the struggles we all have with mental health. Great poem.
October 21st, 2023 11:49
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