Comments received on poems by Parisab
Love Potion No.19
Parisab said:
Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
October 26th, 2023 01:26
Parisab said:
Glad I tried and happy that you enjoyed the read…
October 26th, 2023 01:26
Forever Losses
Parisab said:
I am humbled each time I try to pen one story of one brave heart, at a time. All the while acknowledging that war is but a dirty business. Thank you for your kind comments…
October 26th, 2023 01:23
Parisab said:
I am humbled each time I try to pen one story of one brave heart, at a time. All the while acknowledging that war is but a dirty business. Thank you for your kind comments…
October 26th, 2023 01:23
Midnight Flight
Parisab said:
Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
October 26th, 2023 01:11
Parisab said:
Thank you Eileen! I’m so glad you visited and enjoyed!
October 26th, 2023 01:11
Midnight Flight
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, what an amazing piece of art, you take the readers on a wonderful journey, thank you.
October 25th, 2023 15:33
Eileen Clark said:
Hi, what an amazing piece of art, you take the readers on a wonderful journey, thank you.
October 25th, 2023 15:33
Forever Losses
Garth Rakumakoe said:
What a compelling title to start with. This is how poetry shines a light, revealing those plight we see and blatantly refuse to acknowledge. The shame of our righteous false self assurances is laid bare by these words. Of the lives we have so bravely sacrificed at the altars of glory seeking, traumatizing, those souls who literally gave themselves, forsaking those dear to them, for their fatherland flag. You weave a mighty pen dear Poet.
October 25th, 2023 12:28
Garth Rakumakoe said:
What a compelling title to start with. This is how poetry shines a light, revealing those plight we see and blatantly refuse to acknowledge. The shame of our righteous false self assurances is laid bare by these words. Of the lives we have so bravely sacrificed at the altars of glory seeking, traumatizing, those souls who literally gave themselves, forsaking those dear to them, for their fatherland flag. You weave a mighty pen dear Poet.
October 25th, 2023 12:28
Love Potion No.19
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the passion and drive well here.
October 25th, 2023 00:51
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the passion and drive well here.
October 25th, 2023 00:51
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Garth Rakumakoe said:
There\'s just something about the reassurance trees exude to all life about. This is exquisitely penned, dear poet.
October 24th, 2023 08:17
Garth Rakumakoe said:
There\'s just something about the reassurance trees exude to all life about. This is exquisitely penned, dear poet.
October 24th, 2023 08:17
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
October 22nd, 2023 11:45
Parisab said:
LOL, I’m glad we had fun-you must be fabulous Teddy…
October 22nd, 2023 11:45
Midlife Rap
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, and very relatable I don\'t know what midlife really means but as a woman at the gorgeous age of 49 I\'m feeling this, I still feel like an 18 year old though. Loved this it obviously has all your character painted in the lines. The language made me chuckle... 🤗
October 22nd, 2023 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, and very relatable I don\'t know what midlife really means but as a woman at the gorgeous age of 49 I\'m feeling this, I still feel like an 18 year old though. Loved this it obviously has all your character painted in the lines. The language made me chuckle... 🤗
October 22nd, 2023 03:57
Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain
Thomas W Case said:
Superb tribute. Thank you for bringing to light the struggles we all have with mental health. Great poem.
October 21st, 2023 11:49
Thomas W Case said:
Superb tribute. Thank you for bringing to light the struggles we all have with mental health. Great poem.
October 21st, 2023 11:49
Holy Amnesia
Parisab said:
Thank you! We must be returning somewhere good, in such haste…
October 19th, 2023 12:02
Parisab said:
Thank you! We must be returning somewhere good, in such haste…
October 19th, 2023 12:02
Holy Amnesia
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. This life is just a flash. Glad you have solace.
October 19th, 2023 11:59
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. This life is just a flash. Glad you have solace.
October 19th, 2023 11:59
Apologies
Thomas W Case said:
Stunning. Very powerful. You convey emotion well.
October 19th, 2023 11:38
Thomas W Case said:
Stunning. Very powerful. You convey emotion well.
October 19th, 2023 11:38
My son of 2000, My son of now
Parisab said:
Appreciate your kind comments and glad that you found the poem beautiful…
October 18th, 2023 09:31
Parisab said:
Appreciate your kind comments and glad that you found the poem beautiful…
October 18th, 2023 09:31
My son of 2000, My son of now
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in your thoughts in your imagery and in your heart. Loved this. Truly beautiful ❤️
October 18th, 2023 04:59
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in your thoughts in your imagery and in your heart. Loved this. Truly beautiful ❤️
October 18th, 2023 04:59
My son of 2000, My son of now
Parisab said:
Thank you for appreciating the read…
October 18th, 2023 00:51
Parisab said:
Thank you for appreciating the read…
October 18th, 2023 00:51
Old Men of Steel
Thomas W Case said:
So much corruption, new and old. Great write.
October 18th, 2023 00:40
Thomas W Case said:
So much corruption, new and old. Great write.
October 18th, 2023 00:40
Pomegranate
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. Strange, I always thought the pomegranate was a sensual fruit. Something about those seeds. Well crafted and powerful.
October 16th, 2023 15:12
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. Strange, I always thought the pomegranate was a sensual fruit. Something about those seeds. Well crafted and powerful.
October 16th, 2023 15:12
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Parisab said:
So glad you enjoyed this dear Teddy…
October 14th, 2023 01:24
Parisab said:
So glad you enjoyed this dear Teddy…
October 14th, 2023 01:24
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning piece of poetry dear Parisab wonderful imagery and you truly did make the tree stand strong loved your last lines too. ❤️
October 14th, 2023 01:22
Teddy.15 said:
A stunning piece of poetry dear Parisab wonderful imagery and you truly did make the tree stand strong loved your last lines too. ❤️
October 14th, 2023 01:22
Like a Video
Thomas W Case said:
I love the way you use assonance and alliteration in this poem. Great job.
October 14th, 2023 01:10
Thomas W Case said:
I love the way you use assonance and alliteration in this poem. Great job.
October 14th, 2023 01:10
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