Comments received on poems by Parisab
Apologies
L. B. Mek said:
how I relate, dear poet kin
we Diaspora, survivors
trailblazers of haunting grief:
\'When I left, I left you a trail of tears, I migrated with a broken heart\'
\'we watch you collapse in the blood of your trauma
I’m making kabob and rice for the boys tonight
with a side of guilty comfort\'
April 10th, 2023 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
how I relate, dear poet kin
we Diaspora, survivors
trailblazers of haunting grief:
\'When I left, I left you a trail of tears, I migrated with a broken heart\'
\'we watch you collapse in the blood of your trauma
I’m making kabob and rice for the boys tonight
with a side of guilty comfort\'
April 10th, 2023 04:03
Jazz Liberation
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful wording
so vivid it surpasses poetic dimensionality
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 10th, 2023 02:30
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful wording
so vivid it surpasses poetic dimensionality
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 10th, 2023 02:30
Pomegranate
Kurt Philip Behm said:
\"Let shame fulfill us with the scent of pomegranates!\"
Great closing line !
April 8th, 2023 20:23
Kurt Philip Behm said:
\"Let shame fulfill us with the scent of pomegranates!\"
Great closing line !
April 8th, 2023 20:23
This is I
thinkerbell said:
It\'s important to stay true to ourselves and portray ourselves as we are to the entire world..wonderful poem with a powerful message for humanity🥰
February 16th, 2023 10:28
thinkerbell said:
It\'s important to stay true to ourselves and portray ourselves as we are to the entire world..wonderful poem with a powerful message for humanity🥰
February 16th, 2023 10:28
Dancing in the Street
Parisab said:
Thank you for your spiritual and artistic insight dear reader-I’m looking forward to reading your poems.
February 12th, 2023 14:35
Parisab said:
Thank you for your spiritual and artistic insight dear reader-I’m looking forward to reading your poems.
February 12th, 2023 14:35
Dancing in the Street
Eileen Clark said:
I love reading this, many changes made, so much more needs to change. I\'m a person that studies the Bible and without sounding preachy, there is going to be big changes made in the near future.
Thank you for sharing this excellent piece of art.
February 12th, 2023 14:30
Eileen Clark said:
I love reading this, many changes made, so much more needs to change. I\'m a person that studies the Bible and without sounding preachy, there is going to be big changes made in the near future.
Thank you for sharing this excellent piece of art.
February 12th, 2023 14:30
Dancing in the Street
Parisab said:
Thank you for reading and noticing dear poet. Indeed I have not forgotten and neither have the hundreds and thousands of people protesting (and dancing) in the streets of the world against brutality in Iran.
February 12th, 2023 10:39
Parisab said:
Thank you for reading and noticing dear poet. Indeed I have not forgotten and neither have the hundreds and thousands of people protesting (and dancing) in the streets of the world against brutality in Iran.
February 12th, 2023 10:39
Dancing in the Street
jarcher54 said:
Yes, those cruelly patrolled, sterile streets paved with fear and now blood and tears. It is unreal... thanks for not forgetting. He lets her lead him... beautiful and painful image. Women can be leaders to a better day.
February 12th, 2023 02:04
jarcher54 said:
Yes, those cruelly patrolled, sterile streets paved with fear and now blood and tears. It is unreal... thanks for not forgetting. He lets her lead him... beautiful and painful image. Women can be leaders to a better day.
February 12th, 2023 02:04
This is I
Parisab said:
Thank you for reaching out and your kind commentary.
February 10th, 2023 10:39
Parisab said:
Thank you for reaching out and your kind commentary.
February 10th, 2023 10:39
This is I
L. B. Mek said:
\'we must learn to heal, ourselves
learn to keep our doors open
so as to welcome, our possibilities\'
(great message
wonderfully succinct and poetic
yet stylistic
thanks for sharing dear poet)
February 10th, 2023 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'we must learn to heal, ourselves
learn to keep our doors open
so as to welcome, our possibilities\'
(great message
wonderfully succinct and poetic
yet stylistic
thanks for sharing dear poet)
February 10th, 2023 05:48
The Sins of Us
Parisab said:
Thank you for your comments. Great observation about the fearful flow at times-I’m working on it:)
February 9th, 2023 01:25
Parisab said:
Thank you for your comments. Great observation about the fearful flow at times-I’m working on it:)
February 9th, 2023 01:25
Blood Moon
jarcher54 said:
Mahsa has been my screen saver since her death. The inhumanity of the regime is all the more tragic given how beautiful and brave the people of Iran are. Thank you for this little epitaph. Courage.
February 8th, 2023 22:38
jarcher54 said:
Mahsa has been my screen saver since her death. The inhumanity of the regime is all the more tragic given how beautiful and brave the people of Iran are. Thank you for this little epitaph. Courage.
February 8th, 2023 22:38
The Sins of Us
jarcher54 said:
This is enigmatic but offers some memorable images and reeks of mature honesty. It flows so smoothly and a little fearfully.
February 8th, 2023 22:35
jarcher54 said:
This is enigmatic but offers some memorable images and reeks of mature honesty. It flows so smoothly and a little fearfully.
February 8th, 2023 22:35
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