Comments received on poems by Parisab
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peto said:
I had to rewind and play again
1st read had me imagine you singing in the mirror with hairbrush as a microphone
Now see it more as an MTV\' moment
Or a metaphor for a 3 minute wonder
Will be reading yet again
Probably reading too much into it
But I love that my interpretation has so many options
Long story short
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 9th, 2023 20:27
peto said:
I had to rewind and play again
1st read had me imagine you singing in the mirror with hairbrush as a microphone
Now see it more as an MTV\' moment
Or a metaphor for a 3 minute wonder
Will be reading yet again
Probably reading too much into it
But I love that my interpretation has so many options
Long story short
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 9th, 2023 20:27
Social Media Whore
L. B. Mek said:
what bothers me most
is that this once trend, is now
accepted as a societal norm
a concept, career path
where new generations will seek
to emulate for its ease of access
to instant attention and
hollow validation.. scary!
(what a brave and important write
dear Poet)
August 4th, 2023 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
what bothers me most
is that this once trend, is now
accepted as a societal norm
a concept, career path
where new generations will seek
to emulate for its ease of access
to instant attention and
hollow validation.. scary!
(what a brave and important write
dear Poet)
August 4th, 2023 02:52
Summer Feast
Sunsetmet said:
This is vibrant refreshing and totally amazing love the words like an artist palette all the colors could brighten up any mood Thanks so much
August 3rd, 2023 13:39
Sunsetmet said:
This is vibrant refreshing and totally amazing love the words like an artist palette all the colors could brighten up any mood Thanks so much
August 3rd, 2023 13:39
Love Potion No.19
Sunsetmet said:
Just lovely well put together
Two voices** will rise waves an ocean embrace* that is nice Thanks
August 3rd, 2023 13:34
Sunsetmet said:
Just lovely well put together
Two voices** will rise waves an ocean embrace* that is nice Thanks
August 3rd, 2023 13:34
Social Media Whore
Doggerel Dave said:
Really don\'t know what you are on about. I don\'t do social media. why would I ? I encounter enough stupid people in my everyday existence without what I hear is that.
August 3rd, 2023 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Really don\'t know what you are on about. I don\'t do social media. why would I ? I encounter enough stupid people in my everyday existence without what I hear is that.
August 3rd, 2023 06:02
Social Media Whore
Neville said:
jeez I Just love it when ya talk dirty to me like that .. ssh .. it happens and only too often .. sadly .. write on ma\'am .. Neville
August 3rd, 2023 02:13
Neville said:
jeez I Just love it when ya talk dirty to me like that .. ssh .. it happens and only too often .. sadly .. write on ma\'am .. Neville
August 3rd, 2023 02:13
Social Media Whore
Parisab said:
He he, the poem was definitely confrontational-but I’m glad that you’re keeping accurate stats-KA I appreciate your visit and feedback friend…
August 2nd, 2023 22:35
Parisab said:
He he, the poem was definitely confrontational-but I’m glad that you’re keeping accurate stats-KA I appreciate your visit and feedback friend…
August 2nd, 2023 22:35
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Bobby O said:
I love this. Half battle all poem. Thrust out your chest the best fall down when you claim YOUR ground.
August 2nd, 2023 22:15
Bobby O said:
I love this. Half battle all poem. Thrust out your chest the best fall down when you claim YOUR ground.
August 2nd, 2023 22:15
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Parisab said:
Thank you for your read and I’m glad that this was thought provokingly honest-I just that it would be nice to have something important to say if you’re putting yourself on display-best poet friend
August 2nd, 2023 16:39
Parisab said:
Thank you for your read and I’m glad that this was thought provokingly honest-I just that it would be nice to have something important to say if you’re putting yourself on display-best poet friend
August 2nd, 2023 16:39
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Bella Shepard said:
So sad when some women wrap their entire self worth up in their appearance, or are willing to degrade themselves in a public forum for shock value. However, I wonder, would they do such things if it were really in public, or does the safety of their own bedroom give them courage to put themselves on display. Either way, you are spot on my friend.
August 2nd, 2023 16:26
Bella Shepard said:
So sad when some women wrap their entire self worth up in their appearance, or are willing to degrade themselves in a public forum for shock value. However, I wonder, would they do such things if it were really in public, or does the safety of their own bedroom give them courage to put themselves on display. Either way, you are spot on my friend.
August 2nd, 2023 16:26
Social Media Whore
LIZ said:
Lord have mercy!!! You\'re not lying! One of the reasons why I left \"social media\". Too fake! This title is chef\'s kiss!!! 🙏
August 2nd, 2023 05:18
LIZ said:
Lord have mercy!!! You\'re not lying! One of the reasons why I left \"social media\". Too fake! This title is chef\'s kiss!!! 🙏
August 2nd, 2023 05:18
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peto said:
Loved this write
Well worth the wait
Different world from the one I grew up in
Great read
August 2nd, 2023 05:13
peto said:
Loved this write
Well worth the wait
Different world from the one I grew up in
Great read
August 2nd, 2023 05:13
Social Media Whore
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh, I\'ve seen some terrible crap myself on Instagram, it\'s a shame really how women can sometimes use social media to flaunt their bodies for their image. I also find it really sad when people use filters It\'s so fake. I find this an important subject especially for the young. 💖
August 2nd, 2023 02:58
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh, I\'ve seen some terrible crap myself on Instagram, it\'s a shame really how women can sometimes use social media to flaunt their bodies for their image. I also find it really sad when people use filters It\'s so fake. I find this an important subject especially for the young. 💖
August 2nd, 2023 02:58
Summer Feast
Parisab said:
Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as you. Peace
August 1st, 2023 14:32
Parisab said:
Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as you. Peace
August 1st, 2023 14:32
Only You Quench my Thirst
Parisab said:
Thank you for your beautiful comment and visiting
July 26th, 2023 21:24
Parisab said:
Thank you for your beautiful comment and visiting
July 26th, 2023 21:24
Only You Quench my Thirst
Bella Shepard said:
The seasons of our lives seem so fleeting, the illusion of time so mystifying, that which we would treasure slips from our grasp so readily, how can we hope to possess. Beautifully written my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:17
Bella Shepard said:
The seasons of our lives seem so fleeting, the illusion of time so mystifying, that which we would treasure slips from our grasp so readily, how can we hope to possess. Beautifully written my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:17
Summer Feast
Pop64 said:
Your words fill the page with clarity, beauty and life (and death as the cycle). Fantastic flow and captured essence of summers birth. - Michael
July 26th, 2023 07:07
Pop64 said:
Your words fill the page with clarity, beauty and life (and death as the cycle). Fantastic flow and captured essence of summers birth. - Michael
July 26th, 2023 07:07
Blood Moon
Neville said:
This speaks volumes
and needs more air time ..
I sincerely hope many others shall now make their way here in the wake I hope I have created .. Neville
July 26th, 2023 06:51
Neville said:
This speaks volumes
and needs more air time ..
I sincerely hope many others shall now make their way here in the wake I hope I have created .. Neville
July 26th, 2023 06:51
Dancing in the Street
Parisab said:
The pen is much more effective in this battle-thank you for being an empathic and alert citizen of this world, poet friend-
July 20th, 2023 02:31
Parisab said:
The pen is much more effective in this battle-thank you for being an empathic and alert citizen of this world, poet friend-
July 20th, 2023 02:31
Apologies
Parisab said:
I feel better that this poem spoke to you about an important tragedy of our time…Your visit is always welcome
July 20th, 2023 02:28
Parisab said:
I feel better that this poem spoke to you about an important tragedy of our time…Your visit is always welcome
July 20th, 2023 02:28
Dancing in the Street
Neville said:
I have no known prejudices .. except maybe that of utter contempt for any form of injustice .. and I\'m opposed to corruption too .. with my hand on my heart .. I am so glad that you wrote this but sorry you ever had to .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 02:27
Neville said:
I have no known prejudices .. except maybe that of utter contempt for any form of injustice .. and I\'m opposed to corruption too .. with my hand on my heart .. I am so glad that you wrote this but sorry you ever had to .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 02:27
Apologies
Neville said:
your authors note both confirmed and reinforced the forming of an already birthed impression .. the guilt you allude to is palpable throughout and makes this work of yours something to be correspondingly very proud of .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:43
Neville said:
your authors note both confirmed and reinforced the forming of an already birthed impression .. the guilt you allude to is palpable throughout and makes this work of yours something to be correspondingly very proud of .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:43
My son of 2000, My son of now
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Such sweet words. Love the work.
July 12th, 2023 13:40
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Such sweet words. Love the work.
July 12th, 2023 13:40
Only You Quench my Thirst
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting and beautiful words . Liked the read
You write nicely ))
July 10th, 2023 01:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting and beautiful words . Liked the read
You write nicely ))
July 10th, 2023 01:10
Only You Quench my Thirst
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh so beautifully crafted and your last stanza a kudos from me, this is what I call love ❤️
July 10th, 2023 01:08
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh so beautifully crafted and your last stanza a kudos from me, this is what I call love ❤️
July 10th, 2023 01:08
Jazz Liberation
Parisab said:
Thanks for visiting and yes indeed that’s the jazz spirit!
July 10th, 2023 00:59
Parisab said:
Thanks for visiting and yes indeed that’s the jazz spirit!
July 10th, 2023 00:59
Jazz Liberation
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Parisab showing the freedom that jazz can bring.
Andy
July 10th, 2023 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Parisab showing the freedom that jazz can bring.
Andy
July 10th, 2023 00:34
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