Comments received on poems by Parisab
Old Men of Steel
Parisab said:
So I hear, I’m not running to the pole to exercise my right… They keep pushing that old agenda that, if this old man doesn’t win, the other old man will win! Is this how it was supposed to be? Thanks for reaching out, Peto….
August 13th, 2023 16:22
Parisab said:
So I hear, I’m not running to the pole to exercise my right… They keep pushing that old agenda that, if this old man doesn’t win, the other old man will win! Is this how it was supposed to be? Thanks for reaching out, Peto….
August 13th, 2023 16:22
Old Men of Steel
peto said:
Oh you always have me thinking
If it\'s any consolation ( doubt it will be)
It\'s every bit as bad here in the uk
We recently had a clown who rugby tackled kids broke his own laws constantly
And of course they lie constantly
I\'m ashamed to say I didn\'t even vote last time around
Be in no rush next time either
Sorry for going on
Hit a raw nerve
August 13th, 2023 16:16
peto said:
Oh you always have me thinking
If it\'s any consolation ( doubt it will be)
It\'s every bit as bad here in the uk
We recently had a clown who rugby tackled kids broke his own laws constantly
And of course they lie constantly
I\'m ashamed to say I didn\'t even vote last time around
Be in no rush next time either
Sorry for going on
Hit a raw nerve
August 13th, 2023 16:16
Midnight Flight
Parisab said:
Thank you for visiting and your thoughtful attention.
August 11th, 2023 11:22
Parisab said:
Thank you for visiting and your thoughtful attention.
August 11th, 2023 11:22
Midnight Flight
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written piece here Parisab, to me, each word helps to create a beautiful wispy cloud, and when fully formed, the last words of your poem, speak volumes of the unfair swiftness of life.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 09:07
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written piece here Parisab, to me, each word helps to create a beautiful wispy cloud, and when fully formed, the last words of your poem, speak volumes of the unfair swiftness of life.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 09:07
Flight
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in every stanza 💖 I love your title,
Some never gained momentum, when they were sitting on the edge of this tree of life and someone or something pushed them off
Outstanding lines perfectly described. 💖
August 10th, 2023 23:47
Teddy.15 said:
Such beauty in every stanza 💖 I love your title,
Some never gained momentum, when they were sitting on the edge of this tree of life and someone or something pushed them off
Outstanding lines perfectly described. 💖
August 10th, 2023 23:47
Pomegranate
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, a rug and a drum .. but you just can\'t beat being fulfilled with the scent of pomegranates .. 🙂
August 10th, 2023 12:25
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, a rug and a drum .. but you just can\'t beat being fulfilled with the scent of pomegranates .. 🙂
August 10th, 2023 12:25
Like a Video
Neville said:
so many options to choose from one is literarily spooled for choice .. Neville
August 10th, 2023 06:46
Neville said:
so many options to choose from one is literarily spooled for choice .. Neville
August 10th, 2023 06:46
Like a Video
peto said:
I had to rewind and play again
1st read had me imagine you singing in the mirror with hairbrush as a microphone
Now see it more as an MTV\' moment
Or a metaphor for a 3 minute wonder
Will be reading yet again
Probably reading too much into it
But I love that my interpretation has so many options
Long story short
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 9th, 2023 20:27
peto said:
I had to rewind and play again
1st read had me imagine you singing in the mirror with hairbrush as a microphone
Now see it more as an MTV\' moment
Or a metaphor for a 3 minute wonder
Will be reading yet again
Probably reading too much into it
But I love that my interpretation has so many options
Long story short
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 9th, 2023 20:27
Social Media Whore
L. B. Mek said:
what bothers me most
is that this once trend, is now
accepted as a societal norm
a concept, career path
where new generations will seek
to emulate for its ease of access
to instant attention and
hollow validation.. scary!
(what a brave and important write
dear Poet)
August 4th, 2023 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
what bothers me most
is that this once trend, is now
accepted as a societal norm
a concept, career path
where new generations will seek
to emulate for its ease of access
to instant attention and
hollow validation.. scary!
(what a brave and important write
dear Poet)
August 4th, 2023 02:52
Summer Feast
Sunsetmet said:
This is vibrant refreshing and totally amazing love the words like an artist palette all the colors could brighten up any mood Thanks so much
August 3rd, 2023 13:39
Sunsetmet said:
This is vibrant refreshing and totally amazing love the words like an artist palette all the colors could brighten up any mood Thanks so much
August 3rd, 2023 13:39
Love Potion No.19
Sunsetmet said:
Just lovely well put together
Two voices** will rise waves an ocean embrace* that is nice Thanks
August 3rd, 2023 13:34
Sunsetmet said:
Just lovely well put together
Two voices** will rise waves an ocean embrace* that is nice Thanks
August 3rd, 2023 13:34
Social Media Whore
Doggerel Dave said:
Really don\'t know what you are on about. I don\'t do social media. why would I ? I encounter enough stupid people in my everyday existence without what I hear is that.
August 3rd, 2023 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Really don\'t know what you are on about. I don\'t do social media. why would I ? I encounter enough stupid people in my everyday existence without what I hear is that.
August 3rd, 2023 06:02
Social Media Whore
Neville said:
jeez I Just love it when ya talk dirty to me like that .. ssh .. it happens and only too often .. sadly .. write on ma\'am .. Neville
August 3rd, 2023 02:13
Neville said:
jeez I Just love it when ya talk dirty to me like that .. ssh .. it happens and only too often .. sadly .. write on ma\'am .. Neville
August 3rd, 2023 02:13
Social Media Whore
Parisab said:
He he, the poem was definitely confrontational-but I’m glad that you’re keeping accurate stats-KA I appreciate your visit and feedback friend…
August 2nd, 2023 22:35
Parisab said:
He he, the poem was definitely confrontational-but I’m glad that you’re keeping accurate stats-KA I appreciate your visit and feedback friend…
August 2nd, 2023 22:35
Social Media Whore
Bobby O said:
I love this. Half battle all poem. Thrust out your chest the best fall down when you claim YOUR ground.
August 2nd, 2023 22:15
Bobby O said:
I love this. Half battle all poem. Thrust out your chest the best fall down when you claim YOUR ground.
August 2nd, 2023 22:15
Social Media Whore
Parisab said:
Thank you for your read and I’m glad that this was thought provokingly honest-I just that it would be nice to have something important to say if you’re putting yourself on display-best poet friend
August 2nd, 2023 16:39
Parisab said:
Thank you for your read and I’m glad that this was thought provokingly honest-I just that it would be nice to have something important to say if you’re putting yourself on display-best poet friend
August 2nd, 2023 16:39
Social Media Whore
Bella Shepard said:
So sad when some women wrap their entire self worth up in their appearance, or are willing to degrade themselves in a public forum for shock value. However, I wonder, would they do such things if it were really in public, or does the safety of their own bedroom give them courage to put themselves on display. Either way, you are spot on my friend.
August 2nd, 2023 16:26
Bella Shepard said:
So sad when some women wrap their entire self worth up in their appearance, or are willing to degrade themselves in a public forum for shock value. However, I wonder, would they do such things if it were really in public, or does the safety of their own bedroom give them courage to put themselves on display. Either way, you are spot on my friend.
August 2nd, 2023 16:26
Social Media Whore
LIZ said:
Lord have mercy!!! You\'re not lying! One of the reasons why I left \"social media\". Too fake! This title is chef\'s kiss!!! 🙏
August 2nd, 2023 05:18
LIZ said:
Lord have mercy!!! You\'re not lying! One of the reasons why I left \"social media\". Too fake! This title is chef\'s kiss!!! 🙏
August 2nd, 2023 05:18
Social Media Whore
peto said:
Loved this write
Well worth the wait
Different world from the one I grew up in
Great read
August 2nd, 2023 05:13
peto said:
Loved this write
Well worth the wait
Different world from the one I grew up in
Great read
August 2nd, 2023 05:13
Social Media Whore
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh, I\'ve seen some terrible crap myself on Instagram, it\'s a shame really how women can sometimes use social media to flaunt their bodies for their image. I also find it really sad when people use filters It\'s so fake. I find this an important subject especially for the young. 💖
August 2nd, 2023 02:58
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh, I\'ve seen some terrible crap myself on Instagram, it\'s a shame really how women can sometimes use social media to flaunt their bodies for their image. I also find it really sad when people use filters It\'s so fake. I find this an important subject especially for the young. 💖
August 2nd, 2023 02:58
Summer Feast
Parisab said:
Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as you. Peace
August 1st, 2023 14:32
Parisab said:
Thank you #hotidris ! Means a lot from an awesome story teller, such as you. Peace
August 1st, 2023 14:32
Only You Quench my Thirst
Parisab said:
Thank you for your beautiful comment and visiting
July 26th, 2023 21:24
Parisab said:
Thank you for your beautiful comment and visiting
July 26th, 2023 21:24
Only You Quench my Thirst
Bella Shepard said:
The seasons of our lives seem so fleeting, the illusion of time so mystifying, that which we would treasure slips from our grasp so readily, how can we hope to possess. Beautifully written my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:17
Bella Shepard said:
The seasons of our lives seem so fleeting, the illusion of time so mystifying, that which we would treasure slips from our grasp so readily, how can we hope to possess. Beautifully written my friend!
July 26th, 2023 14:17
Summer Feast
Pop64 said:
Your words fill the page with clarity, beauty and life (and death as the cycle). Fantastic flow and captured essence of summers birth. - Michael
July 26th, 2023 07:07
Pop64 said:
Your words fill the page with clarity, beauty and life (and death as the cycle). Fantastic flow and captured essence of summers birth. - Michael
July 26th, 2023 07:07
Blood Moon
Neville said:
This speaks volumes
and needs more air time ..
I sincerely hope many others shall now make their way here in the wake I hope I have created .. Neville
July 26th, 2023 06:51
Neville said:
This speaks volumes
and needs more air time ..
I sincerely hope many others shall now make their way here in the wake I hope I have created .. Neville
July 26th, 2023 06:51
Dancing in the Street
Parisab said:
The pen is much more effective in this battle-thank you for being an empathic and alert citizen of this world, poet friend-
July 20th, 2023 02:31
Parisab said:
The pen is much more effective in this battle-thank you for being an empathic and alert citizen of this world, poet friend-
July 20th, 2023 02:31
Apologies
Parisab said:
I feel better that this poem spoke to you about an important tragedy of our time…Your visit is always welcome
July 20th, 2023 02:28
Parisab said:
I feel better that this poem spoke to you about an important tragedy of our time…Your visit is always welcome
July 20th, 2023 02:28
Dancing in the Street
Neville said:
I have no known prejudices .. except maybe that of utter contempt for any form of injustice .. and I\'m opposed to corruption too .. with my hand on my heart .. I am so glad that you wrote this but sorry you ever had to .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 02:27
Neville said:
I have no known prejudices .. except maybe that of utter contempt for any form of injustice .. and I\'m opposed to corruption too .. with my hand on my heart .. I am so glad that you wrote this but sorry you ever had to .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 02:27
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