Comments received on poems by Parisab
Midlife Rap
evenwheniLie said:
That was very good, I like the flow, I can see you reading that at a rap session…
July 7th, 2023 13:17
evenwheniLie said:
That was very good, I like the flow, I can see you reading that at a rap session…
July 7th, 2023 13:17
This is I
Parisab said:
LOL, knock em sideways, vs out, which would have been underwhelming-thanks for your welcomed commentary as always…
July 4th, 2023 08:38
Parisab said:
LOL, knock em sideways, vs out, which would have been underwhelming-thanks for your welcomed commentary as always…
July 4th, 2023 08:38
This is I
Neville said:
perfectly penned & subsequently presented .. and with an unashamedly knock em sideways conclusion .. 🌷
July 4th, 2023 01:50
Neville said:
perfectly penned & subsequently presented .. and with an unashamedly knock em sideways conclusion .. 🌷
July 4th, 2023 01:50
Only You Quench my Thirst
Parisab said:
Cheers to the bruises that yielded to the right blend to savor at peace-thank you for your kind and wise observation
July 3rd, 2023 03:23
Parisab said:
Cheers to the bruises that yielded to the right blend to savor at peace-thank you for your kind and wise observation
July 3rd, 2023 03:23
Only You Quench my Thirst
L. B. Mek said:
best thing in life, we sip
to make last,
winery\'s of our dreams
we seek
in our everyday reality
taste-tasting
till that one perfect blend
of rich n fruity
dances on our tongues
and soothes
those bruises in our hearts
making-up
for everything else, as finally
we can
let ourselves drink, heartily
knowing
we have found that individual
making us feel
safe enough, to get drunk
on love...
July 3rd, 2023 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
best thing in life, we sip
to make last,
winery\'s of our dreams
we seek
in our everyday reality
taste-tasting
till that one perfect blend
of rich n fruity
dances on our tongues
and soothes
those bruises in our hearts
making-up
for everything else, as finally
we can
let ourselves drink, heartily
knowing
we have found that individual
making us feel
safe enough, to get drunk
on love...
July 3rd, 2023 02:02
Pomegranate
Parisab said:
Thank you for your reaction with the senses and your sophisticated insight, dear poet! I’ll be visiting your writes very soon🙏
July 1st, 2023 17:23
Parisab said:
Thank you for your reaction with the senses and your sophisticated insight, dear poet! I’ll be visiting your writes very soon🙏
July 1st, 2023 17:23
Pomegranate
Garth Rakumakoe said:
So the title caught my attention, and the content justified and exonerated it. Abstract in form, subliminal and attractive in color. A picture worth every second of deserved admiration. 🙏🏼
July 1st, 2023 17:19
Garth Rakumakoe said:
So the title caught my attention, and the content justified and exonerated it. Abstract in form, subliminal and attractive in color. A picture worth every second of deserved admiration. 🙏🏼
July 1st, 2023 17:19
Jazz Liberation
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Like a cat making love to Jazz in the alley...\" \' Wow! - Killer punchline, dear writer. Raw and suave at the same time this write. A definite fave. I have a feeling I\'ll be visiting your offerings a lot more going forth. Be proud of the words. Beautiful character, sculpted to perfection. ❤
July 1st, 2023 17:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Like a cat making love to Jazz in the alley...\" \' Wow! - Killer punchline, dear writer. Raw and suave at the same time this write. A definite fave. I have a feeling I\'ll be visiting your offerings a lot more going forth. Be proud of the words. Beautiful character, sculpted to perfection. ❤
July 1st, 2023 17:11
Only You Quench my Thirst
Neville said:
intoxicating to say the very least ..
I am so glad I imbibed .. and that aint no pup fiction ma\'am ........ Neville
July 1st, 2023 02:40
Neville said:
intoxicating to say the very least ..
I am so glad I imbibed .. and that aint no pup fiction ma\'am ........ Neville
July 1st, 2023 02:40
Only You Quench my Thirst
Bobby O said:
It’s exact. The pleasure or place to find privileged rest that has a value path exponential, cuz it can be unspoken but the knowledge that the place your n cannot be located easy w any certain plan and that satisfies, it gifts knowing smiles and breathing and tomorrow and even yesterday is easier cuz of this place you stand and rely w no pressure. Then though that other stuff you mention, that May first be described as separate and not main agenda , is almost happenstance and is suddenly more gold by multitudes than the silver that made you smile. Windfall please , is yours unplanned, for once important stuff falls in the right side of unintended consequence.
WOW ! your writing is so darn good all that from my brain was born. And it had somehow had to be like that.
June 30th, 2023 22:10
Bobby O said:
It’s exact. The pleasure or place to find privileged rest that has a value path exponential, cuz it can be unspoken but the knowledge that the place your n cannot be located easy w any certain plan and that satisfies, it gifts knowing smiles and breathing and tomorrow and even yesterday is easier cuz of this place you stand and rely w no pressure. Then though that other stuff you mention, that May first be described as separate and not main agenda , is almost happenstance and is suddenly more gold by multitudes than the silver that made you smile. Windfall please , is yours unplanned, for once important stuff falls in the right side of unintended consequence.
WOW ! your writing is so darn good all that from my brain was born. And it had somehow had to be like that.
June 30th, 2023 22:10
Summer Feast
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting and nicely expressed poem )) good writing
June 26th, 2023 02:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting and nicely expressed poem )) good writing
June 26th, 2023 02:41
Summer Feast
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
Poesy\'s verdant ink, purposed
to blossom a garden of words..
beautiful
June 26th, 2023 02:39
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
Poesy\'s verdant ink, purposed
to blossom a garden of words..
beautiful
June 26th, 2023 02:39
This is Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing lovely words .. I especially like the words
At the bay where stones embrace
June 25th, 2023 13:50
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing lovely words .. I especially like the words
At the bay where stones embrace
June 25th, 2023 13:50
Summer Feast
peto said:
I wish I could see through eyes like that
A true poet with deep vision
The scent of roses and peaches add to this great visual
\"Secret life power \" line is stunning also
Magical stroll
June 25th, 2023 07:47
peto said:
I wish I could see through eyes like that
A true poet with deep vision
The scent of roses and peaches add to this great visual
\"Secret life power \" line is stunning also
Magical stroll
June 25th, 2023 07:47
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your cognitive shifting!
June 25th, 2023 02:14
Parisab said:
So glad you visited and gave a shout out…I knew I could count on your cognitive shifting!
June 25th, 2023 02:14
Midlife Rap
Bobby O said:
Way cool. How your mind got to some of those “bars”? Is out of realm of my first 13 guesses and I’m way too shy to spit about getting glammed up
Props Lady P, Props!
June 25th, 2023 02:04
Bobby O said:
Way cool. How your mind got to some of those “bars”? Is out of realm of my first 13 guesses and I’m way too shy to spit about getting glammed up
Props Lady P, Props!
June 25th, 2023 02:04
Summer Feast
Neville said:
this is nothing short of amazing and I rarely use the A word these days ..
bravo my fine literary friend .. N
June 25th, 2023 01:07
Neville said:
this is nothing short of amazing and I rarely use the A word these days ..
bravo my fine literary friend .. N
June 25th, 2023 01:07
Summer Feast
Bobby O said:
I just really love your style. The Ease and confidence paired and powers toward a chosen secret known only by the magic in your mind. Success , guided missile on the target success, enhanced w speed control voyeurs embrace and enjoy cuz slow beauty is fun to watch.
June 25th, 2023 00:36
Bobby O said:
I just really love your style. The Ease and confidence paired and powers toward a chosen secret known only by the magic in your mind. Success , guided missile on the target success, enhanced w speed control voyeurs embrace and enjoy cuz slow beauty is fun to watch.
June 25th, 2023 00:36
The Sins of Us
Parisab said:
Thank you for your kind attention and great insight!
June 18th, 2023 23:23
Parisab said:
Thank you for your kind attention and great insight!
June 18th, 2023 23:23
The Sins of Us
Eugene S. said:
Seeing inside (let alone, acknowledging it) is a difficult art form, and, I have to say, the inside has everything to do with suffering. Great poem. I look forward to discovering more.
June 18th, 2023 09:22
Eugene S. said:
Seeing inside (let alone, acknowledging it) is a difficult art form, and, I have to say, the inside has everything to do with suffering. Great poem. I look forward to discovering more.
June 18th, 2023 09:22
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what it was originally intended for- I really appreciate your read and kind comments.
June 17th, 2023 11:39
Parisab said:
I tried to enter the sacred grounds of this art form with respect and what it was originally intended for- I really appreciate your read and kind comments.
June 17th, 2023 11:39
Midlife Rap
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
June 17th, 2023 03:47
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
I just loved the rhymes and wisdom... some poets are rappers, now I know. Beautiful.
June 17th, 2023 03:47
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
June 16th, 2023 09:22
Parisab said:
Thanks for reading friend poet and appreciating my sincere attempt…
June 16th, 2023 09:22
Midlife Rap
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
June 16th, 2023 09:18
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Brilliant! Just brilliant, loved it and the overall message!
June 16th, 2023 09:18
Midlife Rap
Parisab said:
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
June 16th, 2023 08:59
Parisab said:
Thanks for the reminder to keep it FUNtastic good friend and poet!
June 16th, 2023 08:59
Midlife Rap
L. B. Mek said:
\'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up\'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
June 16th, 2023 01:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'People worked up
Press spinning ugly sweaters
Lots of holes never filled up
Info faked out
Follow money
Indies kept out
Takers propped up\'
deep insight, enveloped
within that ideal of poetic funtastic
indeed
letting our creativity to be free
is the key to keeping our passion
for poesy, alive and inking wild!
(I read and hope to heed, wise Poet)
thank you! such a fun read
June 16th, 2023 01:43
Love Letter to God
Peter Gates said:
I like it! May He \"...restore without blame.\" us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
June 4th, 2023 03:44
Peter Gates said:
I like it! May He \"...restore without blame.\" us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
June 4th, 2023 03:44
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