Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Roaming around
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the centre of life\'s road is where we should walk to learn trust - - love the sentiments of this short verse Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the centre of life\'s road is where we should walk to learn trust - - love the sentiments of this short verse Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:54
Roaming around
Michael Edwards said:
Three little gems whether together or even separate. Nice one Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
Three little gems whether together or even separate. Nice one Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:50
I\'ll keep searching on
Caring dove said:
wow, poetic dan ! some powerful lines here
\'\'My tears pull down like a guillotine
My silence is a dragons fire in my being\'\'
a good piece of writing
February 25th, 2018 04:04
Caring dove said:
wow, poetic dan ! some powerful lines here
\'\'My tears pull down like a guillotine
My silence is a dragons fire in my being\'\'
a good piece of writing
February 25th, 2018 04:04
Time to enter not just look
FredPeyer said:
That harmony is what we all seek! Nicely written, PD!
February 24th, 2018 15:11
FredPeyer said:
That harmony is what we all seek! Nicely written, PD!
February 24th, 2018 15:11
Time to enter not just look
Laura🌻 said:
So happy for you, my friend
A fine write for an enjoyable beautiful read!
“The reason my mind took me away
To show not what I miss but what I have”
Powerful words to remind us of the precious things that we have!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 06:21
Laura🌻 said:
So happy for you, my friend
A fine write for an enjoyable beautiful read!
“The reason my mind took me away
To show not what I miss but what I have”
Powerful words to remind us of the precious things that we have!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 06:21
Time to enter not just look
Goldfinch60 said:
Harmony in life is a wonderful thing for which to aim, I hope to find it soon.
February 24th, 2018 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Harmony in life is a wonderful thing for which to aim, I hope to find it soon.
February 24th, 2018 01:35
Always trying to learn more
FredPeyer said:
Agree with poetboy5454! Your writing is getting better and better as well!
February 19th, 2018 11:49
FredPeyer said:
Agree with poetboy5454! Your writing is getting better and better as well!
February 19th, 2018 11:49
Always trying to learn more
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I totally agree with
poetboy5454.
Continue releasing
those emotions and
that clarity will be more
evident with each passing
day! A beautiful write!
Love the last two lines!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 16:10
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I totally agree with
poetboy5454.
Continue releasing
those emotions and
that clarity will be more
evident with each passing
day! A beautiful write!
Love the last two lines!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 16:10
Always trying to learn more
poetboy123 said:
They say happiness is fleeting, but so is misery. I know you can push past whatever\'s in your way my friend, wonderful write!
February 18th, 2018 10:51
poetboy123 said:
They say happiness is fleeting, but so is misery. I know you can push past whatever\'s in your way my friend, wonderful write!
February 18th, 2018 10:51
A. A. A. I will always be
FredPeyer said:
I hope you will sing and dance the WHOLE time! Have fun and make her happy!
February 11th, 2018 00:46
FredPeyer said:
I hope you will sing and dance the WHOLE time! Have fun and make her happy!
February 11th, 2018 00:46
A. A. A. I will always be
Christina8 said:
So happy for you! I hope you both have a great time, Dan! Enjoy the moments!
February 9th, 2018 13:25
Christina8 said:
So happy for you! I hope you both have a great time, Dan! Enjoy the moments!
February 9th, 2018 13:25
Roses tinted glasses
Accidental Poet said:
yea yea, ooh, yea just a little bit more, YES! GOT IT! hmmm hmmm yumm yumm yumm. I don\'t know what it is, but it sure is yummy.
February 6th, 2018 19:43
Accidental Poet said:
yea yea, ooh, yea just a little bit more, YES! GOT IT! hmmm hmmm yumm yumm yumm. I don\'t know what it is, but it sure is yummy.
February 6th, 2018 19:43
Dictated
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Dan, life does dictate a lot, but we do have a choice, we can say no.
Love your poem!
January 31st, 2018 01:29
FredPeyer said:
Yes, Dan, life does dictate a lot, but we do have a choice, we can say no.
Love your poem!
January 31st, 2018 01:29
Floating
dusk arising said:
A six line admission of what being a fallible human being is all about.
Compact and punchy excellence.
You know i\'m a great fan of \'less is more\'
January 30th, 2018 18:27
dusk arising said:
A six line admission of what being a fallible human being is all about.
Compact and punchy excellence.
You know i\'m a great fan of \'less is more\'
January 30th, 2018 18:27
Floating
Laura🌻 said:
Awesome write, Dan!
Love the visual...
it’s like I’m looking in
my mirror!!
So relatable!
Yes, we can get lost
in the flow my dear
captain...but we’re
strong enough to let
that ship sail home again!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 15:46
Laura🌻 said:
Awesome write, Dan!
Love the visual...
it’s like I’m looking in
my mirror!!
So relatable!
Yes, we can get lost
in the flow my dear
captain...but we’re
strong enough to let
that ship sail home again!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 15:46
Dictated
Accidental Poet said:
You\'ll carry on like a trooper Dan, because you\'re a winner through and through. Great write.
January 29th, 2018 19:45
Accidental Poet said:
You\'ll carry on like a trooper Dan, because you\'re a winner through and through. Great write.
January 29th, 2018 19:45
Dictated
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
MAKE THE MOST
AND THE BEST OF IT!
Forward and Onward
my friend! You will
conquer!
~Laura~
January 29th, 2018 10:44
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
MAKE THE MOST
AND THE BEST OF IT!
Forward and Onward
my friend! You will
conquer!
~Laura~
January 29th, 2018 10:44
Still giving time more time
FredPeyer said:
I think your writing is getting better and better, PD! Hang on to the good thoughts!
January 25th, 2018 14:06
FredPeyer said:
I think your writing is getting better and better, PD! Hang on to the good thoughts!
January 25th, 2018 14:06
Still giving time more time
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love does have matching sorrow and we have to\" learn not to yearn for what is gone\" - - - wise words and a powerful read.
January 25th, 2018 13:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love does have matching sorrow and we have to\" learn not to yearn for what is gone\" - - - wise words and a powerful read.
January 25th, 2018 13:42
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