Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Here if you fall
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb piece and those last two lines are jnspirational
January 22nd, 2018 10:41
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb piece and those last two lines are jnspirational
January 22nd, 2018 10:41
Here if you fall
Laura🌻 said:
This is so beautiful, Dan!
I’m so happy for you that you spent the weekend with your children! I know that made you ecstatic! I do love the first line. Such beautiful words...especially for a dad to hear!
A beautiful poem! I will definitely save as my favorite...and share it with my children! I could never write it as beautifully as you have!
Awesome job my friend!
All the best...
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2018 10:30
Laura🌻 said:
This is so beautiful, Dan!
I’m so happy for you that you spent the weekend with your children! I know that made you ecstatic! I do love the first line. Such beautiful words...especially for a dad to hear!
A beautiful poem! I will definitely save as my favorite...and share it with my children! I could never write it as beautifully as you have!
Awesome job my friend!
All the best...
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2018 10:30
Beat or bit a journey under our feet
Caring dove said:
sometimes the unexpected happens when we are not really searching or looking . very nice piece of writing , i love the reference to life changing in a beat
January 19th, 2018 15:07
Caring dove said:
sometimes the unexpected happens when we are not really searching or looking . very nice piece of writing , i love the reference to life changing in a beat
January 19th, 2018 15:07
Feeding the light, nothing is ours
Caring dove said:
i think many words can come the beauty and love in our life .. nice piece of writing dan :-)
January 19th, 2018 15:00
Caring dove said:
i think many words can come the beauty and love in our life .. nice piece of writing dan :-)
January 19th, 2018 15:00
I know of so many
Caring dove said:
really engrossing read ! i love this !your wording is great and i can see how this guy went from feeling unloved and not good enough to having more support, love and people by his side ...
January 19th, 2018 14:56
Caring dove said:
really engrossing read ! i love this !your wording is great and i can see how this guy went from feeling unloved and not good enough to having more support, love and people by his side ...
January 19th, 2018 14:56
I know of so many
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, PD! As you say, to find forgiveness and to remember love is what makes you a better man!
January 19th, 2018 11:32
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, PD! As you say, to find forgiveness and to remember love is what makes you a better man!
January 19th, 2018 11:32
I know of so many
Goldfinch60 said:
We should always give what we can to others even if it is just a smile. Great write Dan.
January 19th, 2018 09:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We should always give what we can to others even if it is just a smile. Great write Dan.
January 19th, 2018 09:06
I know of none
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a great write and shows how we can all change. Life is what you make it and the experience of the past lets you make better choices for the future. That light is there before you, just follow it.
January 19th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a great write and shows how we can all change. Life is what you make it and the experience of the past lets you make better choices for the future. That light is there before you, just follow it.
January 19th, 2018 01:43
I know of none
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant, reflective piece Dan. This is definitely filled with wondering thoughts being tied together in a wonderful revealing write that was written by the best, no doubt.
January 18th, 2018 21:23
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant, reflective piece Dan. This is definitely filled with wondering thoughts being tied together in a wonderful revealing write that was written by the best, no doubt.
January 18th, 2018 21:23
I know of none
Heather T said:
One of those works where you know the writer was compelled to share part of a journey. Wonderful purge!
January 18th, 2018 18:29
Heather T said:
One of those works where you know the writer was compelled to share part of a journey. Wonderful purge!
January 18th, 2018 18:29
I know of none
FredPeyer said:
Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out what it all means to you, but I would say that you are on the right way!
Great word choices!
January 18th, 2018 16:38
FredPeyer said:
Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out what it all means to you, but I would say that you are on the right way!
Great word choices!
January 18th, 2018 16:38
I know of none
Fay Slimm. said:
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling read Dan - - keep that journey alive with enlightenment and meanings behind words will continue to flow.
January 18th, 2018 11:48
Fay Slimm. said:
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling read Dan - - keep that journey alive with enlightenment and meanings behind words will continue to flow.
January 18th, 2018 11:48
I know of none
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This write of yours is super! Very inspirational! I’m trying to pull myself out of a dark pit! This is helping! There are many lines from your poem that I can quote, but these are my favorite...
“A new persona is like a fresh pencil
Ready to flow but need to learn the spell”
“There is no blame or darkness of pain Only light with compassion left to play”
A great pic with a great message!
Your whole share is awesome! Thank you!
I wish you all the best my friend...
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 10:32
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This write of yours is super! Very inspirational! I’m trying to pull myself out of a dark pit! This is helping! There are many lines from your poem that I can quote, but these are my favorite...
“A new persona is like a fresh pencil
Ready to flow but need to learn the spell”
“There is no blame or darkness of pain Only light with compassion left to play”
A great pic with a great message!
Your whole share is awesome! Thank you!
I wish you all the best my friend...
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 10:32
I know of none
Aislinn Wilson said:
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04
Aislinn Wilson said:
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04
Love ya sis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write to your friend, your sister, this is how it should be,
January 17th, 2018 08:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write to your friend, your sister, this is how it should be,
January 17th, 2018 08:47
Love ya sis
Laura🌻 said:
That is absolutely beautiful! Shall share the pic and your awesome poem with my sister! Thank you for posting it!
Enjoyed the read very much!
All the best to you in 2018!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2018 08:18
Laura🌻 said:
That is absolutely beautiful! Shall share the pic and your awesome poem with my sister! Thank you for posting it!
Enjoyed the read very much!
All the best to you in 2018!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2018 08:18
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
FredPeyer said:
Sorry to disappoint you, PD, but the ringing won\'t stop. Had it for years, but am ignoring it most of the time.
Beautiful poem, you are on the right way!
January 11th, 2018 17:17
FredPeyer said:
Sorry to disappoint you, PD, but the ringing won\'t stop. Had it for years, but am ignoring it most of the time.
Beautiful poem, you are on the right way!
January 11th, 2018 17:17
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
Resa71 said:
Not hard to read at all :) Beautifully hopeful!
January 11th, 2018 03:03
Resa71 said:
Not hard to read at all :) Beautifully hopeful!
January 11th, 2018 03:03
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
Goldfinch60 said:
May your hope soon grow into reality, good emotive write.
January 11th, 2018 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May your hope soon grow into reality, good emotive write.
January 11th, 2018 02:11
Happy 2nd
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome poem, gratitude and expressing the love so well. \"Forfinya\" wow that\'s new to me. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:51
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome poem, gratitude and expressing the love so well. \"Forfinya\" wow that\'s new to me. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:51
Happy 2nd
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful tender writing, PD! May your queen be with you for a long, long time!
January 1st, 2018 20:05
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful tender writing, PD! May your queen be with you for a long, long time!
January 1st, 2018 20:05
Happy 2nd
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, may that two turn into many, many more.
January 1st, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, may that two turn into many, many more.
January 1st, 2018 02:12
Happy 2nd
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Beautiful poem for your queen!
Enjoyed the read very much!
HAPPY NEW YEAR my friend!🎆
~Laura~
January 1st, 2018 00:41
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Beautiful poem for your queen!
Enjoyed the read very much!
HAPPY NEW YEAR my friend!🎆
~Laura~
January 1st, 2018 00:41
Happy 2nd
poetboy123 said:
Same with the others, however it was a wonderful write! Happy New Years!
December 31st, 2017 11:04
poetboy123 said:
Same with the others, however it was a wonderful write! Happy New Years!
December 31st, 2017 11:04
Happy 2nd
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I thought you was gonna write about the 2nd of Jan!
December 31st, 2017 05:38
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I thought you was gonna write about the 2nd of Jan!
December 31st, 2017 05:38
Exist and flow
FredPeyer said:
This must be one of your best poems, PD! Love it! And short too!
Happy Holidays!
December 22nd, 2017 12:12
FredPeyer said:
This must be one of your best poems, PD! Love it! And short too!
Happy Holidays!
December 22nd, 2017 12:12
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