Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
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Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
MAKE THE MOST
AND THE BEST OF IT!
Forward and Onward
my friend! You will
conquer!
~Laura~
January 29th, 2018 10:44
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
MAKE THE MOST
AND THE BEST OF IT!
Forward and Onward
my friend! You will
conquer!
~Laura~
January 29th, 2018 10:44
Still giving time more time
FredPeyer said:
I think your writing is getting better and better, PD! Hang on to the good thoughts!
January 25th, 2018 14:06
FredPeyer said:
I think your writing is getting better and better, PD! Hang on to the good thoughts!
January 25th, 2018 14:06
Still giving time more time
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love does have matching sorrow and we have to\" learn not to yearn for what is gone\" - - - wise words and a powerful read.
January 25th, 2018 13:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - sad but expertly written this lament for past mistakes Dan - -love does have matching sorrow and we have to\" learn not to yearn for what is gone\" - - - wise words and a powerful read.
January 25th, 2018 13:42
I\'ll keep searching on
Goldfinch60 said:
That search will be successful, as the words flow the light gets nearer.
January 24th, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
That search will be successful, as the words flow the light gets nearer.
January 24th, 2018 01:59
I\'ll keep searching on
FredPeyer said:
PD, sometimes, despite our strongest efforts, it just doesn\'t work. That\'s when faith comes in. Faith in yourself and faith in others. Keep on searching, life is a journey.
January 23rd, 2018 22:39
FredPeyer said:
PD, sometimes, despite our strongest efforts, it just doesn\'t work. That\'s when faith comes in. Faith in yourself and faith in others. Keep on searching, life is a journey.
January 23rd, 2018 22:39
I\'ll keep searching on
kevin browne said:
is this what we would call living dangerously, Poetic Dan? I have faith in you, however, and I believe your pen will wake you up soon enough. we are all here to help by the way too.
January 23rd, 2018 16:11
kevin browne said:
is this what we would call living dangerously, Poetic Dan? I have faith in you, however, and I believe your pen will wake you up soon enough. we are all here to help by the way too.
January 23rd, 2018 16:11
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
Caring dove said:
nice wording throughout this .. soryr to hear of yoru tinnitus , do you know what causes it .. hope it leaves for you soon . . good piece of writing here
January 23rd, 2018 13:57
Caring dove said:
nice wording throughout this .. soryr to hear of yoru tinnitus , do you know what causes it .. hope it leaves for you soon . . good piece of writing here
January 23rd, 2018 13:57
I\'ll keep searching on
Caring dove said:
sometimes it can feel hard to write out how we are feeling ... very strong lines with reference to the gullotine and the dragons fire .. great read
January 23rd, 2018 13:53
Caring dove said:
sometimes it can feel hard to write out how we are feeling ... very strong lines with reference to the gullotine and the dragons fire .. great read
January 23rd, 2018 13:53
Here if you fall
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, children can say the most wonderful things and show their love for you.
You have an Angel in your life Dan.
January 23rd, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, children can say the most wonderful things and show their love for you.
You have an Angel in your life Dan.
January 23rd, 2018 01:32
Here if you fall
poetboy123 said:
This was a beautiful and meaningful write, Dan. You\'ve always been an expert at crafting emotional pieces that truly express what you feel, but this one shines even amongst the gold.
January 22nd, 2018 22:39
poetboy123 said:
This was a beautiful and meaningful write, Dan. You\'ve always been an expert at crafting emotional pieces that truly express what you feel, but this one shines even amongst the gold.
January 22nd, 2018 22:39
Here if you fall
Fay Slimm. said:
A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in expressing the love good parents give to growing offspring and which will go on throughout life - I love that last line and thanks for sharing your blessed weekend.
January 22nd, 2018 17:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A true treasure for your children to keep Dan - - your pen excels in expressing the love good parents give to growing offspring and which will go on throughout life - I love that last line and thanks for sharing your blessed weekend.
January 22nd, 2018 17:37
Here if you fall
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb piece and those last two lines are jnspirational
January 22nd, 2018 10:41
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb piece and those last two lines are jnspirational
January 22nd, 2018 10:41
Here if you fall
Laura🌻 said:
This is so beautiful, Dan!
I’m so happy for you that you spent the weekend with your children! I know that made you ecstatic! I do love the first line. Such beautiful words...especially for a dad to hear!
A beautiful poem! I will definitely save as my favorite...and share it with my children! I could never write it as beautifully as you have!
Awesome job my friend!
All the best...
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2018 10:30
Laura🌻 said:
This is so beautiful, Dan!
I’m so happy for you that you spent the weekend with your children! I know that made you ecstatic! I do love the first line. Such beautiful words...especially for a dad to hear!
A beautiful poem! I will definitely save as my favorite...and share it with my children! I could never write it as beautifully as you have!
Awesome job my friend!
All the best...
~Laura~
January 22nd, 2018 10:30
Beat or bit a journey under our feet
Caring dove said:
sometimes the unexpected happens when we are not really searching or looking . very nice piece of writing , i love the reference to life changing in a beat
January 19th, 2018 15:07
Caring dove said:
sometimes the unexpected happens when we are not really searching or looking . very nice piece of writing , i love the reference to life changing in a beat
January 19th, 2018 15:07
Feeding the light, nothing is ours
Caring dove said:
i think many words can come the beauty and love in our life .. nice piece of writing dan :-)
January 19th, 2018 15:00
Caring dove said:
i think many words can come the beauty and love in our life .. nice piece of writing dan :-)
January 19th, 2018 15:00
I know of so many
Caring dove said:
really engrossing read ! i love this !your wording is great and i can see how this guy went from feeling unloved and not good enough to having more support, love and people by his side ...
January 19th, 2018 14:56
Caring dove said:
really engrossing read ! i love this !your wording is great and i can see how this guy went from feeling unloved and not good enough to having more support, love and people by his side ...
January 19th, 2018 14:56
I know of so many
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, PD! As you say, to find forgiveness and to remember love is what makes you a better man!
January 19th, 2018 11:32
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, PD! As you say, to find forgiveness and to remember love is what makes you a better man!
January 19th, 2018 11:32
I know of so many
Goldfinch60 said:
We should always give what we can to others even if it is just a smile. Great write Dan.
January 19th, 2018 09:06
Goldfinch60 said:
We should always give what we can to others even if it is just a smile. Great write Dan.
January 19th, 2018 09:06
I know of none
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a great write and shows how we can all change. Life is what you make it and the experience of the past lets you make better choices for the future. That light is there before you, just follow it.
January 19th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a great write and shows how we can all change. Life is what you make it and the experience of the past lets you make better choices for the future. That light is there before you, just follow it.
January 19th, 2018 01:43
I know of none
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant, reflective piece Dan. This is definitely filled with wondering thoughts being tied together in a wonderful revealing write that was written by the best, no doubt.
January 18th, 2018 21:23
poetboy123 said:
A brilliant, reflective piece Dan. This is definitely filled with wondering thoughts being tied together in a wonderful revealing write that was written by the best, no doubt.
January 18th, 2018 21:23
I know of none
Heather T said:
One of those works where you know the writer was compelled to share part of a journey. Wonderful purge!
January 18th, 2018 18:29
Heather T said:
One of those works where you know the writer was compelled to share part of a journey. Wonderful purge!
January 18th, 2018 18:29
I know of none
FredPeyer said:
Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out what it all means to you, but I would say that you are on the right way!
Great word choices!
January 18th, 2018 16:38
FredPeyer said:
Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out what it all means to you, but I would say that you are on the right way!
Great word choices!
January 18th, 2018 16:38
I know of none
Fay Slimm. said:
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling read Dan - - keep that journey alive with enlightenment and meanings behind words will continue to flow.
January 18th, 2018 11:48
Fay Slimm. said:
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling read Dan - - keep that journey alive with enlightenment and meanings behind words will continue to flow.
January 18th, 2018 11:48
I know of none
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This write of yours is super! Very inspirational! I’m trying to pull myself out of a dark pit! This is helping! There are many lines from your poem that I can quote, but these are my favorite...
“A new persona is like a fresh pencil
Ready to flow but need to learn the spell”
“There is no blame or darkness of pain Only light with compassion left to play”
A great pic with a great message!
Your whole share is awesome! Thank you!
I wish you all the best my friend...
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 10:32
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This write of yours is super! Very inspirational! I’m trying to pull myself out of a dark pit! This is helping! There are many lines from your poem that I can quote, but these are my favorite...
“A new persona is like a fresh pencil
Ready to flow but need to learn the spell”
“There is no blame or darkness of pain Only light with compassion left to play”
A great pic with a great message!
Your whole share is awesome! Thank you!
I wish you all the best my friend...
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 10:32
I know of none
Aislinn Wilson said:
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04
Aislinn Wilson said:
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04
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