Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Here to teach and be taught
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, we all make mistakes but that just adds to our experience to help us go forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, we all make mistakes but that just adds to our experience to help us go forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:24
Here to teach and be taught
poetboy123 said:
I\'m very glad things have begun getting better or at least that you\'ve been upholding hope, a candle in darkness. Overall, loved this piece Dan, perfectly illustrates you\'re meaning.
December 5th, 2017 22:05
poetboy123 said:
I\'m very glad things have begun getting better or at least that you\'ve been upholding hope, a candle in darkness. Overall, loved this piece Dan, perfectly illustrates you\'re meaning.
December 5th, 2017 22:05
Here to teach and be taught
FredPeyer said:
Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.
December 5th, 2017 12:55
FredPeyer said:
Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.
December 5th, 2017 12:55
Here to teach and be taught
Fay Slimm. said:
Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves despite outside negative reactions - some worthy stanzas contained in the verse Dan - - and one of my favourites is - -
\"No longer infected by the will of others
We can make mistakes and learn too
Not wrong or right but feeding the light\"- - - keep going forward and keep that ink flowing my friend.
December 5th, 2017 11:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves despite outside negative reactions - some worthy stanzas contained in the verse Dan - - and one of my favourites is - -
\"No longer infected by the will of others
We can make mistakes and learn too
Not wrong or right but feeding the light\"- - - keep going forward and keep that ink flowing my friend.
December 5th, 2017 11:55
Never be afraid to go your own way
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we must keep on that stage and always go behind the curtain to see what awaits us. Life has its uncertainties but most of the time those uncertainties lead to a better way in our lives.
December 2nd, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we must keep on that stage and always go behind the curtain to see what awaits us. Life has its uncertainties but most of the time those uncertainties lead to a better way in our lives.
December 2nd, 2017 01:40
Never be afraid to go your own way
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your heart knows what to do because youāre trusting your gut feelings...
INTROSPECTION!!! That in itself shows the wonderful
man that you are who will soon enjoy his childrenās hugs and kisses! Everything will work out...
and deservingly so!
Sending all good thoughts your way!
December 1st, 2017 22:35
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your heart knows what to do because youāre trusting your gut feelings...
INTROSPECTION!!! That in itself shows the wonderful
man that you are who will soon enjoy his childrenās hugs and kisses! Everything will work out...
and deservingly so!
Sending all good thoughts your way!
December 1st, 2017 22:35
Never be afraid to go your own way
Fay Slimm. said:
A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite thought is \"Listen and reflect, then return to now\" - best of wishes as you continue along your journey dear friend.
December 1st, 2017 17:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite thought is \"Listen and reflect, then return to now\" - best of wishes as you continue along your journey dear friend.
December 1st, 2017 17:11
Keeping gratefulness on my plate
Goldfinch60 said:
Kids are so important and the most important thing you can give them (and they to you) is time. Good write.
November 28th, 2017 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Kids are so important and the most important thing you can give them (and they to you) is time. Good write.
November 28th, 2017 02:07
Keeping gratefulness on my plate
FredPeyer said:
With my kids living in California, and me on this rock here in the middle of nowhere, I know what you are writing about. I do miss them, and your excellent poem brought that back into my mind. Need to make a few phone calls now!!!
November 27th, 2017 21:04
FredPeyer said:
With my kids living in California, and me on this rock here in the middle of nowhere, I know what you are writing about. I do miss them, and your excellent poem brought that back into my mind. Need to make a few phone calls now!!!
November 27th, 2017 21:04
Keeping gratefulness on my plate
Christina8 said:
This was an absolutely beautiful and heart touching write, Dan! You are such an adoring father! You live in the moment---wish more people did. Awesome!
November 27th, 2017 19:56
Christina8 said:
This was an absolutely beautiful and heart touching write, Dan! You are such an adoring father! You live in the moment---wish more people did. Awesome!
November 27th, 2017 19:56
Love the people around you & feel beat of the rhythm
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful experience, may your wisdom and his combine into a good life for the three of you.
November 26th, 2017 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful experience, may your wisdom and his combine into a good life for the three of you.
November 26th, 2017 01:53
Love the people around you & feel beat of the rhythm
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful that you got to spend time together.
November 25th, 2017 21:38
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful that you got to spend time together.
November 25th, 2017 21:38
Made to fight this fight peacefully
FredPeyer said:
Dan, I not only admire your writing, but also your willingness to fight this fight, to overcome your maybe self imposed restrictions, to go where you have never gone before, unafraid and with open eyes.
May you succeed in your journey and may it bring you happiness and peace!
November 24th, 2017 12:12
FredPeyer said:
Dan, I not only admire your writing, but also your willingness to fight this fight, to overcome your maybe self imposed restrictions, to go where you have never gone before, unafraid and with open eyes.
May you succeed in your journey and may it bring you happiness and peace!
November 24th, 2017 12:12
I shall become the storm
FredPeyer said:
Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from below that door. Even in the darkest hour there is that sliver of light. Even in the most hopeless situation there is that sliver of hope. These slivers are the ones we have to hold on to, the ones that will guide us to which way we have to go.
And don\'t forget, PD, life is uncertain, so make sure you eat your dessert first!!!
November 24th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from below that door. Even in the darkest hour there is that sliver of light. Even in the most hopeless situation there is that sliver of hope. These slivers are the ones we have to hold on to, the ones that will guide us to which way we have to go.
And don\'t forget, PD, life is uncertain, so make sure you eat your dessert first!!!
November 24th, 2017 11:34
I shall become the storm
Goldfinch60 said:
The open is there for yo PD, all you need to do is take that first step. Good write.
November 24th, 2017 09:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The open is there for yo PD, all you need to do is take that first step. Good write.
November 24th, 2017 09:18
I shall become the storm
kevin browne said:
there is not just one way forward, there are thousands to pick from. I will leave the discoveries for you to discover because it\'s in ones own heart that can truly see the truth. don\'t ever rely on others ideas, search for yourself, Poetic Dan. from what I can perceive,m your inner heart is your inner piece but like I said, that fits for me, not everyone. you are one of Billions and billions of people on this planet and please allow me to say, you stick out among the most.
November 24th, 2017 04:05
kevin browne said:
there is not just one way forward, there are thousands to pick from. I will leave the discoveries for you to discover because it\'s in ones own heart that can truly see the truth. don\'t ever rely on others ideas, search for yourself, Poetic Dan. from what I can perceive,m your inner heart is your inner piece but like I said, that fits for me, not everyone. you are one of Billions and billions of people on this planet and please allow me to say, you stick out among the most.
November 24th, 2017 04:05
Made to fight this fight peacefully
Accidental Poet said:
This write speaks to me on a very deep level Dan. It also reminds me of a quote I found in a book one time...
\"For when a man no longer confuses himself
With the definition of himself that others have given him
He is at once universal and unique\"
Great write Dan.
November 23rd, 2017 12:44
Accidental Poet said:
This write speaks to me on a very deep level Dan. It also reminds me of a quote I found in a book one time...
\"For when a man no longer confuses himself
With the definition of himself that others have given him
He is at once universal and unique\"
Great write Dan.
November 23rd, 2017 12:44
Made to fight this fight peacefully
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Trying to achieve\" is all we ever need Dan - - a moving read about your journey through life\'s storms toward the light.
November 23rd, 2017 09:03
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Trying to achieve\" is all we ever need Dan - - a moving read about your journey through life\'s storms toward the light.
November 23rd, 2017 09:03
Made to fight this fight peacefully
kevin browne said:
I thing your journey through life has led to a spark which has lightened up your life by using a pen. your writing is astonishing to read and it intrigues me how you manage your day to day routines. I admire you and I admire your work. so. if anything, please keep writing and expressing those demons within. you\'re a great artist so keep it going.
November 23rd, 2017 06:24
kevin browne said:
I thing your journey through life has led to a spark which has lightened up your life by using a pen. your writing is astonishing to read and it intrigues me how you manage your day to day routines. I admire you and I admire your work. so. if anything, please keep writing and expressing those demons within. you\'re a great artist so keep it going.
November 23rd, 2017 06:24
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
poetboy123 said:
We\'re all here to talk with Dan, this was a wonderful write and thank you sharing that mind-opening quote!
November 22nd, 2017 15:27
poetboy123 said:
We\'re all here to talk with Dan, this was a wonderful write and thank you sharing that mind-opening quote!
November 22nd, 2017 15:27
Amazing grace by the shore
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play \'the tune\'!
November 21st, 2017 03:17
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play \'the tune\'!
November 21st, 2017 03:17
Amazing grace by the shore
Fay Slimm. said:
A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith - thanks for the lovely video.
November 19th, 2017 21:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith - thanks for the lovely video.
November 19th, 2017 21:11
Amazing grace by the shore
Lauraš» said:
Poetic Dan,
A beautiful write...especially the last stanza! Enjoyed the read and the video! Is that you in the video?
~Laura~
November 19th, 2017 18:27
Lauraš» said:
Poetic Dan,
A beautiful write...especially the last stanza! Enjoyed the read and the video! Is that you in the video?
~Laura~
November 19th, 2017 18:27
Amazing grace by the shore
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. It\'s me fussing about metres again! Or syllables-per-line! This almost fits to the hymn of the same name, with adjustments here and there.
Any excuse will do, for me/us to sing it! lol.
November 19th, 2017 11:53
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. It\'s me fussing about metres again! Or syllables-per-line! This almost fits to the hymn of the same name, with adjustments here and there.
Any excuse will do, for me/us to sing it! lol.
November 19th, 2017 11:53
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us in. Wish I could help you with your \'demons\' in more than just words.
November 19th, 2017 02:25
FredPeyer said:
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us in. Wish I could help you with your \'demons\' in more than just words.
November 19th, 2017 02:25
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
dusk arising said:
So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my favourites
November 18th, 2017 17:54
dusk arising said:
So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my favourites
November 18th, 2017 17:54
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