Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Poetry is.... Part two
Laura🌻 said:
Poetic Dan,
They’re infectious!
I concur with your comment...and with the ending of your poem! Great write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2017 14:20
Laura🌻 said:
Poetic Dan,
They’re infectious!
I concur with your comment...and with the ending of your poem! Great write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2017 14:20
Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write PD, it is amazing how many picked up on the \'Poetry is..\' theme. It shows how many people care and how many different ways the poets mind works.
December 11th, 2017 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write PD, it is amazing how many picked up on the \'Poetry is..\' theme. It shows how many people care and how many different ways the poets mind works.
December 11th, 2017 02:25
Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful, PD! Like the consciousness connecting universe and higher frequency references. We are all just frequency, and love is the highest of them.
Agree with you that fusion doesn\'t always work well, but in this case I think it did. There are advantages to put the poems on the main page, but it is also nice to be able to see a lot of them on one page (fusion). So I guess, both ways are great, as long as many participate, which in this case they did. It does bring the community together.
December 10th, 2017 21:05
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful, PD! Like the consciousness connecting universe and higher frequency references. We are all just frequency, and love is the highest of them.
Agree with you that fusion doesn\'t always work well, but in this case I think it did. There are advantages to put the poems on the main page, but it is also nice to be able to see a lot of them on one page (fusion). So I guess, both ways are great, as long as many participate, which in this case they did. It does bring the community together.
December 10th, 2017 21:05
Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Laura🌻 said:
Awesome Poetic Dan!
Truly a brilliant write!
Loved it!
December 10th, 2017 19:08
Laura🌻 said:
Awesome Poetic Dan!
Truly a brilliant write!
Loved it!
December 10th, 2017 19:08
Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
poetboy123 said:
Another brilliant work on the subject, you never disappoint friend!
December 10th, 2017 10:52
poetboy123 said:
Another brilliant work on the subject, you never disappoint friend!
December 10th, 2017 10:52
Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Michael Edwards said:
Well written PD and mine to follow tomorrow. On an art site to which I belong we often have challenges and it\'s great to see them here as well - hope others will follow as they do stretch you. I\'m not sure Fusions works quite so well as seeing postings in the main gallery.
December 10th, 2017 10:04
Michael Edwards said:
Well written PD and mine to follow tomorrow. On an art site to which I belong we often have challenges and it\'s great to see them here as well - hope others will follow as they do stretch you. I\'m not sure Fusions works quite so well as seeing postings in the main gallery.
December 10th, 2017 10:04
Listening to my heart
FredPeyer said:
And all you have to do is to trust and follow that inner light.
December 7th, 2017 19:43
FredPeyer said:
And all you have to do is to trust and follow that inner light.
December 7th, 2017 19:43
Here to teach and be taught
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, we all make mistakes but that just adds to our experience to help us go forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, we all make mistakes but that just adds to our experience to help us go forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:24
Here to teach and be taught
poetboy123 said:
I\'m very glad things have begun getting better or at least that you\'ve been upholding hope, a candle in darkness. Overall, loved this piece Dan, perfectly illustrates you\'re meaning.
December 5th, 2017 22:05
poetboy123 said:
I\'m very glad things have begun getting better or at least that you\'ve been upholding hope, a candle in darkness. Overall, loved this piece Dan, perfectly illustrates you\'re meaning.
December 5th, 2017 22:05
Here to teach and be taught
FredPeyer said:
Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.
December 5th, 2017 12:55
FredPeyer said:
Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.
December 5th, 2017 12:55
Here to teach and be taught
Fay Slimm. said:
Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves despite outside negative reactions - some worthy stanzas contained in the verse Dan - - and one of my favourites is - -
\"No longer infected by the will of others
We can make mistakes and learn too
Not wrong or right but feeding the light\"- - - keep going forward and keep that ink flowing my friend.
December 5th, 2017 11:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves despite outside negative reactions - some worthy stanzas contained in the verse Dan - - and one of my favourites is - -
\"No longer infected by the will of others
We can make mistakes and learn too
Not wrong or right but feeding the light\"- - - keep going forward and keep that ink flowing my friend.
December 5th, 2017 11:55
Never be afraid to go your own way
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we must keep on that stage and always go behind the curtain to see what awaits us. Life has its uncertainties but most of the time those uncertainties lead to a better way in our lives.
December 2nd, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, we must keep on that stage and always go behind the curtain to see what awaits us. Life has its uncertainties but most of the time those uncertainties lead to a better way in our lives.
December 2nd, 2017 01:40
Never be afraid to go your own way
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Your heart knows what to do because you’re trusting your gut feelings...
INTROSPECTION!!! That in itself shows the wonderful
man that you are who will soon enjoy his children’s hugs and kisses! Everything will work out...
and deservingly so!
Sending all good thoughts your way!
December 1st, 2017 22:35
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Your heart knows what to do because you’re trusting your gut feelings...
INTROSPECTION!!! That in itself shows the wonderful
man that you are who will soon enjoy his children’s hugs and kisses! Everything will work out...
and deservingly so!
Sending all good thoughts your way!
December 1st, 2017 22:35
Never be afraid to go your own way
Fay Slimm. said:
A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite thought is \"Listen and reflect, then return to now\" - best of wishes as you continue along your journey dear friend.
December 1st, 2017 17:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite thought is \"Listen and reflect, then return to now\" - best of wishes as you continue along your journey dear friend.
December 1st, 2017 17:11
Keeping gratefulness on my plate
Goldfinch60 said:
Kids are so important and the most important thing you can give them (and they to you) is time. Good write.
November 28th, 2017 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Kids are so important and the most important thing you can give them (and they to you) is time. Good write.
November 28th, 2017 02:07
Keeping gratefulness on my plate
FredPeyer said:
With my kids living in California, and me on this rock here in the middle of nowhere, I know what you are writing about. I do miss them, and your excellent poem brought that back into my mind. Need to make a few phone calls now!!!
November 27th, 2017 21:04
FredPeyer said:
With my kids living in California, and me on this rock here in the middle of nowhere, I know what you are writing about. I do miss them, and your excellent poem brought that back into my mind. Need to make a few phone calls now!!!
November 27th, 2017 21:04
Keeping gratefulness on my plate
Christina8 said:
This was an absolutely beautiful and heart touching write, Dan! You are such an adoring father! You live in the moment---wish more people did. Awesome!
November 27th, 2017 19:56
Christina8 said:
This was an absolutely beautiful and heart touching write, Dan! You are such an adoring father! You live in the moment---wish more people did. Awesome!
November 27th, 2017 19:56
Love the people around you & feel beat of the rhythm
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful experience, may your wisdom and his combine into a good life for the three of you.
November 26th, 2017 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and a wonderful experience, may your wisdom and his combine into a good life for the three of you.
November 26th, 2017 01:53
Made to fight this fight peacefully
FredPeyer said:
Dan, I not only admire your writing, but also your willingness to fight this fight, to overcome your maybe self imposed restrictions, to go where you have never gone before, unafraid and with open eyes.
May you succeed in your journey and may it bring you happiness and peace!
November 24th, 2017 12:12
FredPeyer said:
Dan, I not only admire your writing, but also your willingness to fight this fight, to overcome your maybe self imposed restrictions, to go where you have never gone before, unafraid and with open eyes.
May you succeed in your journey and may it bring you happiness and peace!
November 24th, 2017 12:12
I shall become the storm
FredPeyer said:
Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from below that door. Even in the darkest hour there is that sliver of light. Even in the most hopeless situation there is that sliver of hope. These slivers are the ones we have to hold on to, the ones that will guide us to which way we have to go.
And don\'t forget, PD, life is uncertain, so make sure you eat your dessert first!!!
November 24th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from below that door. Even in the darkest hour there is that sliver of light. Even in the most hopeless situation there is that sliver of hope. These slivers are the ones we have to hold on to, the ones that will guide us to which way we have to go.
And don\'t forget, PD, life is uncertain, so make sure you eat your dessert first!!!
November 24th, 2017 11:34
I shall become the storm
Goldfinch60 said:
The open is there for yo PD, all you need to do is take that first step. Good write.
November 24th, 2017 09:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The open is there for yo PD, all you need to do is take that first step. Good write.
November 24th, 2017 09:18
I shall become the storm
kevin browne said:
there is not just one way forward, there are thousands to pick from. I will leave the discoveries for you to discover because it\'s in ones own heart that can truly see the truth. don\'t ever rely on others ideas, search for yourself, Poetic Dan. from what I can perceive,m your inner heart is your inner piece but like I said, that fits for me, not everyone. you are one of Billions and billions of people on this planet and please allow me to say, you stick out among the most.
November 24th, 2017 04:05
kevin browne said:
there is not just one way forward, there are thousands to pick from. I will leave the discoveries for you to discover because it\'s in ones own heart that can truly see the truth. don\'t ever rely on others ideas, search for yourself, Poetic Dan. from what I can perceive,m your inner heart is your inner piece but like I said, that fits for me, not everyone. you are one of Billions and billions of people on this planet and please allow me to say, you stick out among the most.
November 24th, 2017 04:05
Made to fight this fight peacefully
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Trying to achieve\" is all we ever need Dan - - a moving read about your journey through life\'s storms toward the light.
November 23rd, 2017 09:03
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Trying to achieve\" is all we ever need Dan - - a moving read about your journey through life\'s storms toward the light.
November 23rd, 2017 09:03
Made to fight this fight peacefully
kevin browne said:
I thing your journey through life has led to a spark which has lightened up your life by using a pen. your writing is astonishing to read and it intrigues me how you manage your day to day routines. I admire you and I admire your work. so. if anything, please keep writing and expressing those demons within. you\'re a great artist so keep it going.
November 23rd, 2017 06:24
kevin browne said:
I thing your journey through life has led to a spark which has lightened up your life by using a pen. your writing is astonishing to read and it intrigues me how you manage your day to day routines. I admire you and I admire your work. so. if anything, please keep writing and expressing those demons within. you\'re a great artist so keep it going.
November 23rd, 2017 06:24
More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit
poetboy123 said:
We\'re all here to talk with Dan, this was a wonderful write and thank you sharing that mind-opening quote!
November 22nd, 2017 15:27
poetboy123 said:
We\'re all here to talk with Dan, this was a wonderful write and thank you sharing that mind-opening quote!
November 22nd, 2017 15:27
Amazing grace by the shore
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play \'the tune\'!
November 21st, 2017 03:17
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play \'the tune\'!
November 21st, 2017 03:17
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