Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Days like this
Christina8 said:
May the rest of your weeks be filled with Saturdays! Fine write! Nice picture too!
October 14th, 2017 08:16
Christina8 said:
May the rest of your weeks be filled with Saturdays! Fine write! Nice picture too!
October 14th, 2017 08:16
Days like this
Accidental Poet said:
May your weeks only get better and better Dan. Great poem. ; )
October 14th, 2017 07:51
Accidental Poet said:
May your weeks only get better and better Dan. Great poem. ; )
October 14th, 2017 07:51
Days like this
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this break-down and build-up again of what most experience some time in life.......... an honest write and a good reminder to keep on remembering the good days Dan
October 14th, 2017 05:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this break-down and build-up again of what most experience some time in life.......... an honest write and a good reminder to keep on remembering the good days Dan
October 14th, 2017 05:39
Days like this
FredPeyer said:
Forget the week, PD, just live weekend to weekend!
October 14th, 2017 04:43
FredPeyer said:
Forget the week, PD, just live weekend to weekend!
October 14th, 2017 04:43
I don\'t believe what I believe
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I do agree with Fred though, in my mind I am still thirty five but when I try to use this sixty nine year old body to try and do things the mind just laughs at me.
October 14th, 2017 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I do agree with Fred though, in my mind I am still thirty five but when I try to use this sixty nine year old body to try and do things the mind just laughs at me.
October 14th, 2017 01:18
I don\'t believe what I believe
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to find the power inside .Love that last line.
October 13th, 2017 14:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to find the power inside .Love that last line.
October 13th, 2017 14:49
I don\'t believe what I believe
Louis Gibbs said:
We conceive, believe, then create. Your fine poem says it more eloquently, Dan. Well done!
October 13th, 2017 14:21
Louis Gibbs said:
We conceive, believe, then create. Your fine poem says it more eloquently, Dan. Well done!
October 13th, 2017 14:21
I don\'t believe what I believe
FredPeyer said:
Good advice, PD. The mind and belief come first, then everything else follows.
There is sometimes a problem though when you get older, when the mind says \'I can do that\' and the body answers \'Are you kidding?\'
October 13th, 2017 11:51
FredPeyer said:
Good advice, PD. The mind and belief come first, then everything else follows.
There is sometimes a problem though when you get older, when the mind says \'I can do that\' and the body answers \'Are you kidding?\'
October 13th, 2017 11:51
Thank you for the support
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and well done at the open mike night.
October 13th, 2017 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and well done at the open mike night.
October 13th, 2017 00:28
Thank you for the support
Accidental Poet said:
Way to go Dan. Congratulations. I give you much credit my friend. I went to one of these poetry nights and I did not have the courage to get up in front of everyone and recite my poetry. Good for you. You da man. Great write here too. ; )
Hey, I started a fusion poem and I\'d like your input. You can find it on my front profile page under my list of poems. ; )
October 12th, 2017 18:54
Accidental Poet said:
Way to go Dan. Congratulations. I give you much credit my friend. I went to one of these poetry nights and I did not have the courage to get up in front of everyone and recite my poetry. Good for you. You da man. Great write here too. ; )
Hey, I started a fusion poem and I\'d like your input. You can find it on my front profile page under my list of poems. ; )
October 12th, 2017 18:54
Thank you for the support
poetboy123 said:
I\'m pretty sure the thank you should be going the other way around, after all you\'re the one who writes these poems! And the open mic part was awesome, good on you!
October 12th, 2017 18:19
poetboy123 said:
I\'m pretty sure the thank you should be going the other way around, after all you\'re the one who writes these poems! And the open mic part was awesome, good on you!
October 12th, 2017 18:19
Thank you for the support
FredPeyer said:
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up in front of a crowd and read my poems. So, hat\'s off to you!
October 12th, 2017 18:02
FredPeyer said:
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up in front of a crowd and read my poems. So, hat\'s off to you!
October 12th, 2017 18:02
I\'m thinking
FredPeyer said:
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people around us. Sometimes in a good way, sometimes in a not so good way. Then, instead of getting mad or upset, we do have to take a good look at ourselves to find the truth. I do believe that if we love somebody we give up part of ourselves and together with the other person become a new whole.
You went pretty deep here!
October 11th, 2017 11:18
FredPeyer said:
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people around us. Sometimes in a good way, sometimes in a not so good way. Then, instead of getting mad or upset, we do have to take a good look at ourselves to find the truth. I do believe that if we love somebody we give up part of ourselves and together with the other person become a new whole.
You went pretty deep here!
October 11th, 2017 11:18
His and hers
Christina8 said:
A sad read, probably difficult to write. The childhood stuff was not your fault. Glad you are healing through this process. Good luck to you and your healing heart!
October 10th, 2017 11:28
Christina8 said:
A sad read, probably difficult to write. The childhood stuff was not your fault. Glad you are healing through this process. Good luck to you and your healing heart!
October 10th, 2017 11:28
His and hers
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked that have no one answer as troubles come by the score to some - yet the piece shows so clearly the results of childhood abuse. Thanks my friend for sharing such hurtful memories.
October 10th, 2017 08:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked that have no one answer as troubles come by the score to some - yet the piece shows so clearly the results of childhood abuse. Thanks my friend for sharing such hurtful memories.
October 10th, 2017 08:24
No hesitation
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
October 10th, 2017 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write what is within us.
October 10th, 2017 00:34
No hesitation
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan! I loved the Cheyenne saying in the beginning. Also the last two lines of your poem is so true! Thanks for sharing this write with us!
October 9th, 2017 16:42
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan! I loved the Cheyenne saying in the beginning. Also the last two lines of your poem is so true! Thanks for sharing this write with us!
October 9th, 2017 16:42
No hesitation
FredPeyer said:
Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do think you could expand the \'Dan syndrome\' to a \'Writers syndrome\'
October 9th, 2017 13:00
FredPeyer said:
Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do think you could expand the \'Dan syndrome\' to a \'Writers syndrome\'
October 9th, 2017 13:00
Wings
FredPeyer said:
My rhythm just went up a notch after reading this, PD!
And with my voice, I go hide now and sing a song!
Love your poem!
October 8th, 2017 15:15
FredPeyer said:
My rhythm just went up a notch after reading this, PD!
And with my voice, I go hide now and sing a song!
Love your poem!
October 8th, 2017 15:15
Consequences are free
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, may the dog and you share a great journey together.
October 8th, 2017 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, may the dog and you share a great journey together.
October 8th, 2017 01:05
Consequences are free
FredPeyer said:
After reading the quote I was ready for some deep thoughts challenging my mind. Then, by the third line of the poem I realized you were talking about a dog, and getting to the \'mostly fun\' line, was smiling too.
But then, I also realized that you are talking about much more here than \'just a dog\'. The \'history of our connection\', \'fear of expressing\', \'walking together\', and \'compassion and balance\', apply to any relationship, be it animal or human, as does the last line. So, challenge my mind it did!!!
Great, great poem, PD!
October 7th, 2017 12:37
FredPeyer said:
After reading the quote I was ready for some deep thoughts challenging my mind. Then, by the third line of the poem I realized you were talking about a dog, and getting to the \'mostly fun\' line, was smiling too.
But then, I also realized that you are talking about much more here than \'just a dog\'. The \'history of our connection\', \'fear of expressing\', \'walking together\', and \'compassion and balance\', apply to any relationship, be it animal or human, as does the last line. So, challenge my mind it did!!!
Great, great poem, PD!
October 7th, 2017 12:37
Consequences are free
Accidental Poet said:
I knew it was the dog from the first line. Great idea and write. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:05
Accidental Poet said:
I knew it was the dog from the first line. Great idea and write. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:05
Consequences are free
Fay Slimm. said:
Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had to read it over again and I am still smiling.
October 7th, 2017 08:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had to read it over again and I am still smiling.
October 7th, 2017 08:30
Frolicking fun
FredPeyer said:
Days like that are like the icing on the cake! You did a tremendous job, PD!
October 6th, 2017 00:53
FredPeyer said:
Days like that are like the icing on the cake! You did a tremendous job, PD!
October 6th, 2017 00:53
Frolicking fun
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like having some family fun Dan. ; )
October 5th, 2017 18:57
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like having some family fun Dan. ; )
October 5th, 2017 18:57
Frolicking fun
orchidee said:
Was a bit scared to read this, in case it brought on a swoon - erm \'frolicking?\' heehee.
October 5th, 2017 15:30
orchidee said:
Was a bit scared to read this, in case it brought on a swoon - erm \'frolicking?\' heehee.
October 5th, 2017 15:30
Frolicking fun
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the rhythm and was out there having a go at that dance with you and the family - great last stanza too Dan - - or should I be calling you D-man !! Lovely stuff.
October 5th, 2017 11:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the rhythm and was out there having a go at that dance with you and the family - great last stanza too Dan - - or should I be calling you D-man !! Lovely stuff.
October 5th, 2017 11:08
Words of passion
FredPeyer said:
Great imagination, PD! Great lines, like \'Atoms become entwined in the mist\' and \'As I rise within my own being to walk your deck\'. And the picture goes well with the poem. Kudos!
October 4th, 2017 14:12
FredPeyer said:
Great imagination, PD! Great lines, like \'Atoms become entwined in the mist\' and \'As I rise within my own being to walk your deck\'. And the picture goes well with the poem. Kudos!
October 4th, 2017 14:12
Littlest of things
Goldfinch60 said:
Those little things in our lives are so important and can bring us such joy.
October 4th, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those little things in our lives are so important and can bring us such joy.
October 4th, 2017 00:46
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