Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I know of none
FredPeyer said:
Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out what it all means to you, but I would say that you are on the right way!
Great word choices!
January 18th, 2018 16:38
FredPeyer said:
Very truthful and well written, PD! You may still be trying to figure out what it all means to you, but I would say that you are on the right way!
Great word choices!
January 18th, 2018 16:38
I know of none
Fay Slimm. said:
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling read Dan - - keep that journey alive with enlightenment and meanings behind words will continue to flow.
January 18th, 2018 11:48
Fay Slimm. said:
\"A new persona\" can teach us much as does the message in this compelling read Dan - - keep that journey alive with enlightenment and meanings behind words will continue to flow.
January 18th, 2018 11:48
I know of none
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This write of yours is super! Very inspirational! Iām trying to pull myself out of a dark pit! This is helping! There are many lines from your poem that I can quote, but these are my favorite...
āA new persona is like a fresh pencil
Ready to flow but need to learn the spellā
āThere is no blame or darkness of pain Only light with compassion left to playā
A great pic with a great message!
Your whole share is awesome! Thank you!
I wish you all the best my friend...
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 10:32
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This write of yours is super! Very inspirational! Iām trying to pull myself out of a dark pit! This is helping! There are many lines from your poem that I can quote, but these are my favorite...
āA new persona is like a fresh pencil
Ready to flow but need to learn the spellā
āThere is no blame or darkness of pain Only light with compassion left to playā
A great pic with a great message!
Your whole share is awesome! Thank you!
I wish you all the best my friend...
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 10:32
I know of none
Aislinn Wilson said:
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04
Aislinn Wilson said:
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04
Love ya sis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write to your friend, your sister, this is how it should be,
January 17th, 2018 08:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write to your friend, your sister, this is how it should be,
January 17th, 2018 08:47
Love ya sis
Lauraš» said:
That is absolutely beautiful! Shall share the pic and your awesome poem with my sister! Thank you for posting it!
Enjoyed the read very much!
All the best to you in 2018!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2018 08:18
Lauraš» said:
That is absolutely beautiful! Shall share the pic and your awesome poem with my sister! Thank you for posting it!
Enjoyed the read very much!
All the best to you in 2018!
~Laura~
January 17th, 2018 08:18
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
FredPeyer said:
Sorry to disappoint you, PD, but the ringing won\'t stop. Had it for years, but am ignoring it most of the time.
Beautiful poem, you are on the right way!
January 11th, 2018 17:17
FredPeyer said:
Sorry to disappoint you, PD, but the ringing won\'t stop. Had it for years, but am ignoring it most of the time.
Beautiful poem, you are on the right way!
January 11th, 2018 17:17
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
Resa71 said:
Not hard to read at all :) Beautifully hopeful!
January 11th, 2018 03:03
Resa71 said:
Not hard to read at all :) Beautifully hopeful!
January 11th, 2018 03:03
Thought it stopped but it came straight back
Goldfinch60 said:
May your hope soon grow into reality, good emotive write.
January 11th, 2018 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May your hope soon grow into reality, good emotive write.
January 11th, 2018 02:11
Happy 2nd
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Awesome poem, gratitude and expressing the love so well. \"Forfinya\" wow that\'s new to me. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:51
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Awesome poem, gratitude and expressing the love so well. \"Forfinya\" wow that\'s new to me. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:51
Happy 2nd
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful tender writing, PD! May your queen be with you for a long, long time!
January 1st, 2018 20:05
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful tender writing, PD! May your queen be with you for a long, long time!
January 1st, 2018 20:05
Happy 2nd
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, may that two turn into many, many more.
January 1st, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, may that two turn into many, many more.
January 1st, 2018 02:12
Happy 2nd
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Beautiful poem for your queen!
Enjoyed the read very much!
HAPPY NEW YEAR my friend!š
~Laura~
January 1st, 2018 00:41
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Beautiful poem for your queen!
Enjoyed the read very much!
HAPPY NEW YEAR my friend!š
~Laura~
January 1st, 2018 00:41
Happy 2nd
poetboy123 said:
Same with the others, however it was a wonderful write! Happy New Years!
December 31st, 2017 11:04
poetboy123 said:
Same with the others, however it was a wonderful write! Happy New Years!
December 31st, 2017 11:04
Happy 2nd
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I thought you was gonna write about the 2nd of Jan!
December 31st, 2017 05:38
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I thought you was gonna write about the 2nd of Jan!
December 31st, 2017 05:38
Exist and flow
FredPeyer said:
This must be one of your best poems, PD! Love it! And short too!
Happy Holidays!
December 22nd, 2017 12:12
FredPeyer said:
This must be one of your best poems, PD! Love it! And short too!
Happy Holidays!
December 22nd, 2017 12:12
Feeding the light, nothing is ours
Lauraš» said:
Awesome pic, Dan!
So happy and cheerful!
Great moments to remember and cherish! Enjoyed the write! A fave to save! All the best to you and your children!
~Laura~
December 22nd, 2017 08:24
Lauraš» said:
Awesome pic, Dan!
So happy and cheerful!
Great moments to remember and cherish! Enjoyed the write! A fave to save! All the best to you and your children!
~Laura~
December 22nd, 2017 08:24
Exist and flow
Lauraš» said:
Beautifully expressed Dan! Wishing you joy and happiness together with your children!
All the best...
~Laura~
December 22nd, 2017 04:24
Lauraš» said:
Beautifully expressed Dan! Wishing you joy and happiness together with your children!
All the best...
~Laura~
December 22nd, 2017 04:24
Feeding the light, nothing is ours
FredPeyer said:
PD, love the picture of the three kids, yes, you are included! :-)
Enjoy every precious moment, and writing a poem about it is genius!
December 20th, 2017 20:02
FredPeyer said:
PD, love the picture of the three kids, yes, you are included! :-)
Enjoy every precious moment, and writing a poem about it is genius!
December 20th, 2017 20:02
First weekend back
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a lively encounter with children and trains - - your parental care shows through every line Dan - thanks for sharing that rolling adventure - keep on track with the fine fathering and wishing you and those happy offspring a really great Christmas.
December 18th, 2017 14:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a lively encounter with children and trains - - your parental care shows through every line Dan - thanks for sharing that rolling adventure - keep on track with the fine fathering and wishing you and those happy offspring a really great Christmas.
December 18th, 2017 14:30
Don\'t waste your hate
Goldfinch60 said:
That hate is always there but as each moment passes it is further away as love will always beat it.
December 17th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That hate is always there but as each moment passes it is further away as love will always beat it.
December 17th, 2017 02:24
Don\'t waste your hate
Lauraš» said:
Hi Dan,
I saw your poem on the Fusioned page! Iām glad you posted it here! Itās a great poem! The first line sucked me right into the poem! Iām happy for you that youāre not letting those emotions of hate control āyour waveā! Awesome!
December 16th, 2017 18:28
Lauraš» said:
Hi Dan,
I saw your poem on the Fusioned page! Iām glad you posted it here! Itās a great poem! The first line sucked me right into the poem! Iām happy for you that youāre not letting those emotions of hate control āyour waveā! Awesome!
December 16th, 2017 18:28
Poetry is.... Part two
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one there are so many reasons behind Poetry is....
December 12th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one there are so many reasons behind Poetry is....
December 12th, 2017 01:34
Poetry is.... Part two
FredPeyer said:
Just like you, I too still have that \'Poetry Is\' in my head, like an advertising jingle, it won\'t leave me alone!
Love yours here, it is a great continuation to the others!
December 11th, 2017 23:47
FredPeyer said:
Just like you, I too still have that \'Poetry Is\' in my head, like an advertising jingle, it won\'t leave me alone!
Love yours here, it is a great continuation to the others!
December 11th, 2017 23:47
Poetry is.... Part two
Louis Gibbs said:
Poetry is
The voice of the muse
Speaking truths
Through your heart.
Well done addition to the \'Poetry is\" challenge, PD!
December 11th, 2017 17:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Poetry is
The voice of the muse
Speaking truths
Through your heart.
Well done addition to the \'Poetry is\" challenge, PD!
December 11th, 2017 17:48
Listening to my heart
Lauraš» said:
So happy your children are with you! Keep that inner light forever lit! It is there to guide you!
December 11th, 2017 15:04
Lauraš» said:
So happy your children are with you! Keep that inner light forever lit! It is there to guide you!
December 11th, 2017 15:04
Here to teach and be taught
Lauraš» said:
Poetic Dan,
I donāt know how I missed this great inspirational write! I love the read. So chock full of positivity! Keep on moving forward!
Precious pic to illustrate your poem!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2017 14:51
Lauraš» said:
Poetic Dan,
I donāt know how I missed this great inspirational write! I love the read. So chock full of positivity! Keep on moving forward!
Precious pic to illustrate your poem!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2017 14:51
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