Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Feeding the light, nothing is ours
Laura🌻 said:

Awesome pic, Dan!
So happy and cheerful!
Great moments to remember and cherish! Enjoyed the write! A fave to save! All the best to you and your children!

~Laura~

December 22nd, 2017 08:24

Exist and flow
Laura🌻 said:

Beautifully expressed Dan! Wishing you joy and happiness together with your children!

All the best...
~Laura~

December 22nd, 2017 04:24

Feeding the light, nothing is ours
FredPeyer said:

PD, love the picture of the three kids, yes, you are included! :-)
Enjoy every precious moment, and writing a poem about it is genius!

December 20th, 2017 20:02

Feeding the light, nothing is ours
Accidental Poet said:

A really great write here Dan. Nice to see you enjoying some time with your kids. You all look so happy together. Nothing like kids being with dad, or dad being with his kids.

December 20th, 2017 19:20

First weekend back
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a lively encounter with children and trains - - your parental care shows through every line Dan - thanks for sharing that rolling adventure - keep on track with the fine fathering and wishing you and those happy offspring a really great Christmas.

December 18th, 2017 14:30

Don\'t waste your hate
Goldfinch60 said:

That hate is always there but as each moment passes it is further away as love will always beat it.

December 17th, 2017 02:24

Don\'t waste your hate
Laura🌻 said:

Hi Dan,
I saw your poem on the Fusioned page! I’m glad you posted it here! It’s a great poem! The first line sucked me right into the poem! I’m happy for you that you’re not letting those emotions of hate control “your wave”! Awesome!

December 16th, 2017 18:28

Poetry is.... Part two
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good one there are so many reasons behind Poetry is....

December 12th, 2017 01:34

Poetry is.... Part two
FredPeyer said:

Just like you, I too still have that \'Poetry Is\' in my head, like an advertising jingle, it won\'t leave me alone!
Love yours here, it is a great continuation to the others!

December 11th, 2017 23:47

Poetry is.... Part two
Louis Gibbs said:

Poetry is
The voice of the muse
Speaking truths
Through your heart.

Well done addition to the \'Poetry is\" challenge, PD!


December 11th, 2017 17:48

Poetry is.... Part two
Accidental Poet said:

Yes Dan, poetry is many things. But most importantly, beautiful. Such as your write here.

December 11th, 2017 16:35

Listening to my heart
Laura🌻 said:

So happy your children are with you! Keep that inner light forever lit! It is there to guide you!

December 11th, 2017 15:04

Here to teach and be taught
Laura🌻 said:

Poetic Dan,
I don’t know how I missed this great inspirational write! I love the read. So chock full of positivity! Keep on moving forward!
Precious pic to illustrate your poem!

~Laura~

December 11th, 2017 14:51

Poetry is.... Part two
Laura🌻 said:

Poetic Dan,
They’re infectious!
I concur with your comment...and with the ending of your poem! Great write! Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~



December 11th, 2017 14:20

Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write PD, it is amazing how many picked up on the \'Poetry is..\' theme. It shows how many people care and how many different ways the poets mind works.

December 11th, 2017 02:25

Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
FredPeyer said:

Wonderful, PD! Like the consciousness connecting universe and higher frequency references. We are all just frequency, and love is the highest of them.

Agree with you that fusion doesn\'t always work well, but in this case I think it did. There are advantages to put the poems on the main page, but it is also nice to be able to see a lot of them on one page (fusion). So I guess, both ways are great, as long as many participate, which in this case they did. It does bring the community together.

December 10th, 2017 21:05

Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Laura🌻 said:

Awesome Poetic Dan!
Truly a brilliant write!
Loved it!

December 10th, 2017 19:08

Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Seven said:

I love the short and sweet.

December 10th, 2017 14:49

Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
poetboy123 said:

Another brilliant work on the subject, you never disappoint friend!

December 10th, 2017 10:52

Poetry is (inspired by L.Gibbs)
Michael Edwards said:

Well written PD and mine to follow tomorrow. On an art site to which I belong we often have challenges and it\'s great to see them here as well - hope others will follow as they do stretch you. I\'m not sure Fusions works quite so well as seeing postings in the main gallery.

December 10th, 2017 10:04

Listening to my heart
FredPeyer said:

And all you have to do is to trust and follow that inner light.

December 7th, 2017 19:43

Listening to my heart
Ternic73 said:

very well done

December 6th, 2017 10:27

Listening to my heart
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 6th, 2017 08:29

Here to teach and be taught
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, we all make mistakes but that just adds to our experience to help us go forward in our lives.

December 6th, 2017 02:24

Here to teach and be taught
poetboy123 said:

I\'m very glad things have begun getting better or at least that you\'ve been upholding hope, a candle in darkness. Overall, loved this piece Dan, perfectly illustrates you\'re meaning.

December 5th, 2017 22:05

Here to teach and be taught
FredPeyer said:

Am with Fay here, PD! Very well written.

December 5th, 2017 12:55

Here to teach and be taught
Fay Slimm. said:

Positive throughout are these poetic expressions of gaining ourselves despite outside negative reactions - some worthy stanzas contained in the verse Dan - - and one of my favourites is - -
\"No longer infected by the will of others
We can make mistakes and learn too
Not wrong or right but feeding the light\"- - - keep going forward and keep that ink flowing my friend.

December 5th, 2017 11:55

Never be afraid to go your own way
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, we must keep on that stage and always go behind the curtain to see what awaits us. Life has its uncertainties but most of the time those uncertainties lead to a better way in our lives.

December 2nd, 2017 01:40

Never be afraid to go your own way
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,
Your heart knows what to do because you’re trusting your gut feelings...
INTROSPECTION!!! That in itself shows the wonderful
man that you are who will soon enjoy his children’s hugs and kisses! Everything will work out...
and deservingly so!
Sending all good thoughts your way!

December 1st, 2017 22:35

Never be afraid to go your own way
Fay Slimm. said:

A deep and powerful write Dan - - lots of super lines and my favourite thought is \"Listen and reflect, then return to now\" - best of wishes as you continue along your journey dear friend.

December 1st, 2017 17:11



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