Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken
dusk arising said:
Well that gal is gonna go far if thats only a 2nd open mike gig Dan. Now she should do some home/portastudio recordings to build the dynamics/mic tecnique which is never easy/impossible in a pub environment cos theres too much other noise going on. Great to see she\'s got the confidence. You\'re a proud dad eh?
January 6th, 2022 14:56
dusk arising said:
Well that gal is gonna go far if thats only a 2nd open mike gig Dan. Now she should do some home/portastudio recordings to build the dynamics/mic tecnique which is never easy/impossible in a pub environment cos theres too much other noise going on. Great to see she\'s got the confidence. You\'re a proud dad eh?
January 6th, 2022 14:56
Comfort in a name
Caring dove said:
I especially love the last two lines , Dan )
It doesn’t always feel that way tho , that we can create because we feel we can .
I know I can certainly have times where I feel I can’t get to what I want .. and I don’t feel that sense of inner empowerment and strength .
January 6th, 2022 03:18
Caring dove said:
I especially love the last two lines , Dan )
It doesn’t always feel that way tho , that we can create because we feel we can .
I know I can certainly have times where I feel I can’t get to what I want .. and I don’t feel that sense of inner empowerment and strength .
January 6th, 2022 03:18
Comfort in a name
Goldfinch60 said:
That magic has become part of you Dan and you are moving into a wonderful place in your life, and may it always be so.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That magic has become part of you Dan and you are moving into a wonderful place in your life, and may it always be so.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:35
Comfort in a name
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here\'s to more in the coming year.
January 5th, 2022 13:49
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here\'s to more in the coming year.
January 5th, 2022 13:49
Comfort in a name
spilleronsheet said:
Very encouraging write
Good going dear poetic Dan
January 5th, 2022 13:09
spilleronsheet said:
Very encouraging write
Good going dear poetic Dan
January 5th, 2022 13:09
Fast lane thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
That knowledge gained is an absolute blessing in your life and it will lead you into an ever better future.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That knowledge gained is an absolute blessing in your life and it will lead you into an ever better future.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:46
Fast lane thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
Cheering loudly for this inspiring piece of wise knowledge on how to walk through dark to light Dan. Moving on when we are down and out is the way to learn more as this poem states. Thanking you most sincerely for sharing it.
January 4th, 2022 16:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Cheering loudly for this inspiring piece of wise knowledge on how to walk through dark to light Dan. Moving on when we are down and out is the way to learn more as this poem states. Thanking you most sincerely for sharing it.
January 4th, 2022 16:43
Fast lane thoughts
dusk arising said:
Who can we pass the buck to? Who should we pass it to? Would anyone accept it? Nope. We are stuck with it so better get on with being ourselves and fitting in where it\'s nice and comfy for everyone.
January 4th, 2022 15:14
dusk arising said:
Who can we pass the buck to? Who should we pass it to? Would anyone accept it? Nope. We are stuck with it so better get on with being ourselves and fitting in where it\'s nice and comfy for everyone.
January 4th, 2022 15:14
Fast lane thoughts
Caring dove said:
I like your writings Dan .. and this is a good poem .. our inner child can be so hurt .. can’t they .
I know mine has been .
If we walk away on our own .. maybe because we feel unloved .. and not a nice feeling
Keep writing , ))
January 4th, 2022 11:30
Caring dove said:
I like your writings Dan .. and this is a good poem .. our inner child can be so hurt .. can’t they .
I know mine has been .
If we walk away on our own .. maybe because we feel unloved .. and not a nice feeling
Keep writing , ))
January 4th, 2022 11:30
May I strut 2022 in my tune
spilleronsheet said:
A positive zeal is the required ingredient
Imperfect souls born yet striving our best is our need
And lets hustle bustle till we can
Cause only corpses can’t move in lanes
Great one dear poet
January 3rd, 2022 13:06
spilleronsheet said:
A positive zeal is the required ingredient
Imperfect souls born yet striving our best is our need
And lets hustle bustle till we can
Cause only corpses can’t move in lanes
Great one dear poet
January 3rd, 2022 13:06
May I strut 2022 in my tune
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, you have come a long way in your life and I am sure you will complete yourself into the person that you wish to become in a very short time.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, you have come a long way in your life and I am sure you will complete yourself into the person that you wish to become in a very short time.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:16
May I strut 2022 in my tune
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes it\'s also difficult to put into words but you\'ve done it - may 2022 bring all that you hope for.
January 2nd, 2022 15:48
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes it\'s also difficult to put into words but you\'ve done it - may 2022 bring all that you hope for.
January 2nd, 2022 15:48
May I strut 2022 in my tune
dusk arising said:
You\'ll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim reaper can finish us, but we\'re never complete.
That\'s just the way of it .... compromise is key... i.e. coming to terms with our failings and not beating ourselves up over them... we are humans, there never was a perfect human (except me of course).
January 2nd, 2022 06:58
dusk arising said:
You\'ll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim reaper can finish us, but we\'re never complete.
That\'s just the way of it .... compromise is key... i.e. coming to terms with our failings and not beating ourselves up over them... we are humans, there never was a perfect human (except me of course).
January 2nd, 2022 06:58
May I strut 2022 in my tune
Caring dove said:
Great writing , Dan 🙂 finding balance within is important and finding ourselves .
January 2nd, 2022 03:25
Caring dove said:
Great writing , Dan 🙂 finding balance within is important and finding ourselves .
January 2nd, 2022 03:25
Tomorrow\'s day is hers
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dancing in the moonlight be forever with you both Dan and your love be forever with her.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dancing in the moonlight be forever with you both Dan and your love be forever with her.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:39
Tomorrow\'s day is hers
dusk arising said:
Love is life. Life is love.
Someone who levels our life with their love is a gift beyond worth. Cherish!
December 30th, 2021 17:19
dusk arising said:
Love is life. Life is love.
Someone who levels our life with their love is a gift beyond worth. Cherish!
December 30th, 2021 17:19
Tomorrow\'s day is hers
Caring dove said:
‘ as wild as dancing with you in moonlight ‘
Lovely words .. Dan )
December 30th, 2021 11:33
Caring dove said:
‘ as wild as dancing with you in moonlight ‘
Lovely words .. Dan )
December 30th, 2021 11:33
The circle of wipe
Goldfinch60 said:
That humour in life must always be at the forefront of our lives Dan, it can bring so much happiness to all.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That humour in life must always be at the forefront of our lives Dan, it can bring so much happiness to all.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:13
The circle of wipe
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
What a circle of life you wove
Very unique and so intriguing
It had the essence and it also made me smile
Such a light hearted poetry with such a deep insight
A sincere gratitude tricked from the lines
Simply beautiful dear poet
Keep penning your thoughts
December 27th, 2021 22:40
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
What a circle of life you wove
Very unique and so intriguing
It had the essence and it also made me smile
Such a light hearted poetry with such a deep insight
A sincere gratitude tricked from the lines
Simply beautiful dear poet
Keep penning your thoughts
December 27th, 2021 22:40
The circle of wipe
Caring dove said:
Energy / vibration is important and they say like energy attracts like energy .
December 27th, 2021 18:25
Caring dove said:
Energy / vibration is important and they say like energy attracts like energy .
December 27th, 2021 18:25
The circle of wipe
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Like your words , Dan 🙂🙂
December 27th, 2021 18:12
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Like your words , Dan 🙂🙂
December 27th, 2021 18:12
Battlefields
Neville said:
I dare not go against the flow .. I must just say, this is simply too powerful sir, before I get carried away ... N
December 27th, 2021 05:28
Neville said:
I dare not go against the flow .. I must just say, this is simply too powerful sir, before I get carried away ... N
December 27th, 2021 05:28
Battlefields
Goldfinch60 said:
Such powerful words Dan. This does happen in life but you have come so far in your life, you must continue into the good life you have made for youself.
Andy
December 26th, 2021 22:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Such powerful words Dan. This does happen in life but you have come so far in your life, you must continue into the good life you have made for youself.
Andy
December 26th, 2021 22:52
Battlefields
Caring dove said:
I understand . I had a difficult day yesterday , in fact I think my inner child felt very sad . Today I feel better .
An expressive writing Dan . Sorry you are struggling with your feelings .
December 26th, 2021 13:02
Caring dove said:
I understand . I had a difficult day yesterday , in fact I think my inner child felt very sad . Today I feel better .
An expressive writing Dan . Sorry you are struggling with your feelings .
December 26th, 2021 13:02
Dusty paths
Goldfinch60 said:
Such friends are so very special Dan and must always be treasured.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Such friends are so very special Dan and must always be treasured.
Andy
December 22nd, 2021 01:52
Dusty paths
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Woven in the fabric that covers the heart, to live like you own it from the start\"... So much courage infused in these words. A piece of fine art Sir.
December 21st, 2021 15:42
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Woven in the fabric that covers the heart, to live like you own it from the start\"... So much courage infused in these words. A piece of fine art Sir.
December 21st, 2021 15:42
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