Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Poetry at sea
Fay Slimm. said:

Looking for nature\'s help can do marvels when feeling low dear Dan - I love the video and thanks for sharing your happy experience.

October 29th, 2021 15:45

Poetry at sea
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, just like your ecstatic words of rhyme
celebrating, those simple gifts of life..
(a rejuvenating read, my friend
thanks for sharing
and alerting us:
to that sunshine behind our clouds)

October 29th, 2021 06:12

Poetry at sea
Caring dove said:

I very much believe I’m angels and the comfort they can send us .

Our higher self is so loving ,., never to doubt our worth

October 29th, 2021 05:05

Poetry at sea
Caring dove said:

Makes me think of angels or the light of your higher self maybe ?

Great writing Dan 🙂 nice to see another poem from you

October 29th, 2021 05:04

Poetry at sea
dusk arising said:

Sounds very much like a spiritual thing which happened to me with the light.
I think you were just shown your guardian angel my friend. That light and it\'s moment will never leave you if i am correct.

Stay well to you and yours my friend.

October 29th, 2021 04:24

99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
Goldfinch60 said:

May that poetry forever be in your heart and shared with us all Dan.

Andy

October 21st, 2021 00:49

99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
orchidee said:

Nope, I can\'t see any problems with the poetry here! :)

October 20th, 2021 04:25

99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
spilleronsheet said:

Nice words at play…poetry is freedom, where no rules hold upon and you can be anything you want…

October 20th, 2021 04:08

99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
Neville said:


You sure as hell are right there mate .. but dont let em grind you down, celebrate each and every one ... write on .. A great intro to a new day dawned ....

Neville

October 20th, 2021 03:40

Poetic or not, work never stops
Goldfinch60 said:

May that harmony be forever in your life Dan.

Andy

October 20th, 2021 00:44

All or nothing
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful film Dan, she is coming a long way, as are you, may all your options lead to the wonderful life that awaits you.

Andy

October 18th, 2021 00:41

All or nothing
The BlackShakespeare said:

Nice poem

October 17th, 2021 11:07

All or nothing
Accidental Poet said:

Life so challenging is a life of poetry. 👍

October 17th, 2021 10:21

Only option left is to try
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
and I will keep reading and learning
my friend,
thanks for being
that, guiding beacon
to overcoming\'s: capacity
in allowing us to soar
as high as we can hope
as free, as we can forgive...
what a Brilliant message dear Poet, thank you!
(loved the picture, those mirror smiles
say it all, better than any words)

October 8th, 2021 03:13

Only option left is to try
Goldfinch60 said:

Your ticket has a long way to ride before it it gets punched, you are certainly having more good days than bad.

Andy

October 8th, 2021 00:23

Only option left is to try
Caring dove said:

Life can be cruel , Dan , I understand . Sorry if you are still struggling with how you feel .. I know it’s not easy .

This is a good piece of writing and you have some vstrong lines here )

October 7th, 2021 07:54

My religion
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Dan,

‘bass is my religion and its here to stay!’

Getting in gear with your bass to make you bounce back from your deflated state is extremely worthy of your efforts.

‘To lose all thoughts and find blissful connections between the waves’
‘Building right backup just to wait for the drop again’

If that ‘drop’ should happen…again…, you know very well how to build it ‘rightback up’ …again!

You are a survivor!


Laura🌻

October 1st, 2021 09:56

My religion
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Dan but that bass will highlight your life and bring you back to the new place that you have found over recent times.

Andy

October 1st, 2021 00:36

My religion
Caring dove said:

Good writing , Dan 🙂 I know there’s a problem with the petrol ... my mum luckily managed to get some today . I’m glad the music makes you feel better ! Singings good for the throat chakra , too !

September 30th, 2021 08:52

My religion
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dan. Full of emotion.


September 30th, 2021 08:34

Nice & Snug
Goldfinch60 said:

The mind can bring the wonder of the world within us Dan.

Andy

September 22nd, 2021 00:33

Nice & Snug
Caring dove said:

I agree with Laura ... it’s uplifting !

Maybe when were sad we should start singing , about to drift off to sleep and we could think of something really nice ... or try

September 21st, 2021 16:39

Nice & Snug
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

I’ve enjoyed this great poem of yours. I especially liked…
‘What happens next is up to you, just close your eyes and hum a tune.....’
…and that’s exactly what I’m planning to do—close my ‘eyes and hum a tune’!

Thank you for sharing your wonderful words…very uplifting and inspirational.

Laura🌻

P.S.-I would like to wish you and your precious daughter a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY!



September 21st, 2021 16:35

Nice & Snug
Caring dove said:

Great writing ! Lovely words , Dan 🙂

September 21st, 2021 15:29

40 of me 2 of her
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words DAn and the line
\"We carry on each day trying to just love what we do \" says it all.
Happy 40 and 2 to you both.

Andy

September 21st, 2021 00:52

40 of me 2 of her
dusk arising said:

Happy birthdays to ya both. Beauty and the beast. May your next decade bring you much happiness, fulfuillment, and restful peace.

September 20th, 2021 07:54

40 of me 2 of her
L. B. Mek said:

\'No more hiding in the shadows without the crown of life\'..
Brilliant!
Happy Birthday, brother
awesome to know you, and a Privilege to witness your fight, to infuse \'Worth\' in everything you \'Experience\' of life!
I read and learn, dear Poet

September 20th, 2021 07:25

40 of me 2 of her
Caring dove said:

Happy birthday ! 🙂 40 ... Love your poem , Dan ... birthdays have always been something I struggle with ... but I hope you feel good today . I’m 36 .. where does time go ...

September 20th, 2021 06:00

Rhythm & Rhyme
Neville said:



Thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Hope the morrow goes well and then chill with the gang ......................... Neville

September 19th, 2021 12:04

Rhythm & Rhyme
Michael Edwards said:

Like Neil I don\'t always comment and I\'ve been away for a while so a treatt to return and read your latest gem - keep writing PD.

September 19th, 2021 08:07



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