Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Only option left is to try
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ticket has a long way to ride before it it gets punched, you are certainly having more good days than bad.
Andy
October 8th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ticket has a long way to ride before it it gets punched, you are certainly having more good days than bad.
Andy
October 8th, 2021 00:23
Only option left is to try
Caring dove said:
Life can be cruel , Dan , I understand . Sorry if you are still struggling with how you feel .. I know it’s not easy .
This is a good piece of writing and you have some vstrong lines here )
October 7th, 2021 07:54
Caring dove said:
Life can be cruel , Dan , I understand . Sorry if you are still struggling with how you feel .. I know it’s not easy .
This is a good piece of writing and you have some vstrong lines here )
October 7th, 2021 07:54
My religion
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
‘bass is my religion and its here to stay!’
Getting in gear with your bass to make you bounce back from your deflated state is extremely worthy of your efforts.
‘To lose all thoughts and find blissful connections between the waves’
‘Building right backup just to wait for the drop again’
If that ‘drop’ should happen…again…, you know very well how to build it ‘rightback up’ …again!
You are a survivor!
Laura🌻
October 1st, 2021 09:56
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
‘bass is my religion and its here to stay!’
Getting in gear with your bass to make you bounce back from your deflated state is extremely worthy of your efforts.
‘To lose all thoughts and find blissful connections between the waves’
‘Building right backup just to wait for the drop again’
If that ‘drop’ should happen…again…, you know very well how to build it ‘rightback up’ …again!
You are a survivor!
Laura🌻
October 1st, 2021 09:56
My religion
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Dan but that bass will highlight your life and bring you back to the new place that you have found over recent times.
Andy
October 1st, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Dan but that bass will highlight your life and bring you back to the new place that you have found over recent times.
Andy
October 1st, 2021 00:36
My religion
Caring dove said:
Good writing , Dan 🙂 I know there’s a problem with the petrol ... my mum luckily managed to get some today . I’m glad the music makes you feel better ! Singings good for the throat chakra , too !
September 30th, 2021 08:52
Caring dove said:
Good writing , Dan 🙂 I know there’s a problem with the petrol ... my mum luckily managed to get some today . I’m glad the music makes you feel better ! Singings good for the throat chakra , too !
September 30th, 2021 08:52
Nice & Snug
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can bring the wonder of the world within us Dan.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can bring the wonder of the world within us Dan.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:33
Nice & Snug
Caring dove said:
I agree with Laura ... it’s uplifting !
Maybe when were sad we should start singing , about to drift off to sleep and we could think of something really nice ... or try
September 21st, 2021 16:39
Caring dove said:
I agree with Laura ... it’s uplifting !
Maybe when were sad we should start singing , about to drift off to sleep and we could think of something really nice ... or try
September 21st, 2021 16:39
Nice & Snug
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I’ve enjoyed this great poem of yours. I especially liked…
‘What happens next is up to you, just close your eyes and hum a tune.....’
…and that’s exactly what I’m planning to do—close my ‘eyes and hum a tune’!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful words…very uplifting and inspirational.
Laura🌻
P.S.-I would like to wish you and your precious daughter a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
September 21st, 2021 16:35
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I’ve enjoyed this great poem of yours. I especially liked…
‘What happens next is up to you, just close your eyes and hum a tune.....’
…and that’s exactly what I’m planning to do—close my ‘eyes and hum a tune’!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful words…very uplifting and inspirational.
Laura🌻
P.S.-I would like to wish you and your precious daughter a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
September 21st, 2021 16:35
40 of me 2 of her
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words DAn and the line
\"We carry on each day trying to just love what we do \" says it all.
Happy 40 and 2 to you both.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words DAn and the line
\"We carry on each day trying to just love what we do \" says it all.
Happy 40 and 2 to you both.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:52
40 of me 2 of her
dusk arising said:
Happy birthdays to ya both. Beauty and the beast. May your next decade bring you much happiness, fulfuillment, and restful peace.
September 20th, 2021 07:54
dusk arising said:
Happy birthdays to ya both. Beauty and the beast. May your next decade bring you much happiness, fulfuillment, and restful peace.
September 20th, 2021 07:54
40 of me 2 of her
L. B. Mek said:
\'No more hiding in the shadows without the crown of life\'..
Brilliant!
Happy Birthday, brother
awesome to know you, and a Privilege to witness your fight, to infuse \'Worth\' in everything you \'Experience\' of life!
I read and learn, dear Poet
September 20th, 2021 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'No more hiding in the shadows without the crown of life\'..
Brilliant!
Happy Birthday, brother
awesome to know you, and a Privilege to witness your fight, to infuse \'Worth\' in everything you \'Experience\' of life!
I read and learn, dear Poet
September 20th, 2021 07:25
40 of me 2 of her
Caring dove said:
Happy birthday ! 🙂 40 ... Love your poem , Dan ... birthdays have always been something I struggle with ... but I hope you feel good today . I’m 36 .. where does time go ...
September 20th, 2021 06:00
Caring dove said:
Happy birthday ! 🙂 40 ... Love your poem , Dan ... birthdays have always been something I struggle with ... but I hope you feel good today . I’m 36 .. where does time go ...
September 20th, 2021 06:00
Rhythm & Rhyme
Neville said:
Thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Hope the morrow goes well and then chill with the gang ......................... Neville
September 19th, 2021 12:04
Neville said:
Thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Hope the morrow goes well and then chill with the gang ......................... Neville
September 19th, 2021 12:04
Rhythm & Rhyme
Michael Edwards said:
Like Neil I don\'t always comment and I\'ve been away for a while so a treatt to return and read your latest gem - keep writing PD.
September 19th, 2021 08:07
Michael Edwards said:
Like Neil I don\'t always comment and I\'ve been away for a while so a treatt to return and read your latest gem - keep writing PD.
September 19th, 2021 08:07
Rhythm & Rhyme
Caring dove said:
Great poem Dan 🙂 certainly a favourite , love your Choice of words . I hope you have a good day ...
September 19th, 2021 05:20
Caring dove said:
Great poem Dan 🙂 certainly a favourite , love your Choice of words . I hope you have a good day ...
September 19th, 2021 05:20
We are all Jack
dusk arising said:
The second line throws me completely, or is there a typo in there?
Yep, my experience of literally being on stage was initially a bit of fright, followed by an act i polished and finally, just letting myself be me. But life is a stage. You, yes you Dan, choose just how you want the world to see you and there are loads of choices. Here\'s a couple. A working person content to be a part of a family unit nuturing a young child and enjoying their work. Or. All of the above but with a chip on his shoulder that he\'s reluctant to cast off for fear of becoming a nobody... which is clearly something he definitely shouldn\'t have to fear.
September 17th, 2021 09:07
dusk arising said:
The second line throws me completely, or is there a typo in there?
Yep, my experience of literally being on stage was initially a bit of fright, followed by an act i polished and finally, just letting myself be me. But life is a stage. You, yes you Dan, choose just how you want the world to see you and there are loads of choices. Here\'s a couple. A working person content to be a part of a family unit nuturing a young child and enjoying their work. Or. All of the above but with a chip on his shoulder that he\'s reluctant to cast off for fear of becoming a nobody... which is clearly something he definitely shouldn\'t have to fear.
September 17th, 2021 09:07
We are all Jack
Doggerel Dave said:
We\'re here because we\'re here, Dan - there\'s not much more we can know.
I feel that is the essence of your poem, Dan - do correct me if you feel I\'m wrong.
September 17th, 2021 06:46
Doggerel Dave said:
We\'re here because we\'re here, Dan - there\'s not much more we can know.
I feel that is the essence of your poem, Dan - do correct me if you feel I\'m wrong.
September 17th, 2021 06:46
We are all Jack
L. B. Mek said:
that last line underlines and anchors it all: brilliantly,
not just todays write my friend
but close to everything I\'ve ever read from you!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
September 17th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
that last line underlines and anchors it all: brilliantly,
not just todays write my friend
but close to everything I\'ve ever read from you!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
September 17th, 2021 05:00
We are all Jack
Goldfinch60 said:
We should all be ourselves Dan and try and always improve to what we see will be good for us and for others in our life.
September 17th, 2021 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
We should all be ourselves Dan and try and always improve to what we see will be good for us and for others in our life.
September 17th, 2021 03:01
We are all Jack
orchidee said:
Oops, I looked this up. Some possible link to John Thomas, then, woof, Fido, my imaginary moral watch-dog barked, and said it will be too much for me! lol.
Too Much Info to say more of J.T.
September 17th, 2021 02:47
orchidee said:
Oops, I looked this up. Some possible link to John Thomas, then, woof, Fido, my imaginary moral watch-dog barked, and said it will be too much for me! lol.
Too Much Info to say more of J.T.
September 17th, 2021 02:47
We are all Jack
Caring dove said:
I really like it on here ! Nice writing , Dan 🙂
September 17th, 2021 02:01
Caring dove said:
I really like it on here ! Nice writing , Dan 🙂
September 17th, 2021 02:01
What you see is not all of me
Goldfinch60 said:
Keeping that love is so important Dan, we all have days where we slip into a form of misery but with love in our hearts it makes it easier to come out into happiness.
Andy
September 17th, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Keeping that love is so important Dan, we all have days where we slip into a form of misery but with love in our hearts it makes it easier to come out into happiness.
Andy
September 17th, 2021 00:46
What you see is not all of me
dusk arising said:
Know what mate, reading your piece today has just made me realise something about myself for the first time.
I\'ve realised why i am a happy and positive person. It\'s not that i dont have negative crap and background, i left home at 15 yrs old, am currently fighting with cancer, have a handicapped daughter, and i\'ve become physically disabled. But b*llocks to all that (and dont for one moment think this is a trawl for sympathy - b*llocks to that). I\'d rather not dwell on any of that when it\'s so easy to think about, or to do stuff which gives me pleasure.
EASY = Nice thoughts and doing nice stuff.
HARD = thinking about things which get me down and depressed.
Thanks mate you made me realise that today.
But why do you think about hard stuff when theres easy stuff to do and think about..... answers on a postcard to Dusky\'s Problem Page
September 16th, 2021 14:16
dusk arising said:
Know what mate, reading your piece today has just made me realise something about myself for the first time.
I\'ve realised why i am a happy and positive person. It\'s not that i dont have negative crap and background, i left home at 15 yrs old, am currently fighting with cancer, have a handicapped daughter, and i\'ve become physically disabled. But b*llocks to all that (and dont for one moment think this is a trawl for sympathy - b*llocks to that). I\'d rather not dwell on any of that when it\'s so easy to think about, or to do stuff which gives me pleasure.
EASY = Nice thoughts and doing nice stuff.
HARD = thinking about things which get me down and depressed.
Thanks mate you made me realise that today.
But why do you think about hard stuff when theres easy stuff to do and think about..... answers on a postcard to Dusky\'s Problem Page
September 16th, 2021 14:16
What you see is not all of me
Caring dove said:
‘ tangled soul looking for something dear ‘ lovely line )
September 16th, 2021 13:50
Caring dove said:
‘ tangled soul looking for something dear ‘ lovely line )
September 16th, 2021 13:50
What you see is not all of me
Caring dove said:
This shows you care ... Dan .. even as you feel sad and unhappy you still want to help others ... that’s how I read the words in your poem ‘ helping where I can and truly trying to keep the love ‘
I understand it’s frustrating when we can’t help others ... but I guess we try and if we can’t then it’s not our fault
Such warmth and care within your words
September 16th, 2021 13:49
Caring dove said:
This shows you care ... Dan .. even as you feel sad and unhappy you still want to help others ... that’s how I read the words in your poem ‘ helping where I can and truly trying to keep the love ‘
I understand it’s frustrating when we can’t help others ... but I guess we try and if we can’t then it’s not our fault
Such warmth and care within your words
September 16th, 2021 13:49
What you see is not all of me
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes sometimes we have to \"let it be\" and give misery central stage for a while Dan - -- good points on what makes folk try to keep the positive afloat even when feeling like a \"ghost in the shell\"
September 16th, 2021 12:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes sometimes we have to \"let it be\" and give misery central stage for a while Dan - -- good points on what makes folk try to keep the positive afloat even when feeling like a \"ghost in the shell\"
September 16th, 2021 12:44
What you see is not all of me
L. B. Mek said:
such an uplifting perspective, I think your picture mirrors your words metaphorically:
we may all be mere pebbles, in the face of a sea of circumstance and consequence
but our marking lines, can add so much depth to our beauty, and experience of life...
thanks for sharing, there\'s such an honesty to your words, my friend
September 16th, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
such an uplifting perspective, I think your picture mirrors your words metaphorically:
we may all be mere pebbles, in the face of a sea of circumstance and consequence
but our marking lines, can add so much depth to our beauty, and experience of life...
thanks for sharing, there\'s such an honesty to your words, my friend
September 16th, 2021 05:39
« Return to the profile of Poetic Dan
