Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Dusty paths
Caring dove said:
One of my favourite reads from you Dan . Great poem … lovely expression 🙂
I especially love this line
Woven in the fabric that covers the heart,‘
December 21st, 2021 06:11
Caring dove said:
One of my favourite reads from you Dan . Great poem … lovely expression 🙂
I especially love this line
Woven in the fabric that covers the heart,‘
December 21st, 2021 06:11
Dusty paths
woundedheart said:
Sometimes we all need someone to walk beside us man was never meant to be a solitary creature, nicely penned.
December 21st, 2021 05:32
woundedheart said:
Sometimes we all need someone to walk beside us man was never meant to be a solitary creature, nicely penned.
December 21st, 2021 05:32
Never left just locked away
Neville said:
when you let it flow, like this & without worrying how or where the next word or line comes from, or where it needs to be placed .. you write some of the most amazing stuff PD .................. revealing & quite beautiful ............................ N
December 16th, 2021 02:09
Neville said:
when you let it flow, like this & without worrying how or where the next word or line comes from, or where it needs to be placed .. you write some of the most amazing stuff PD .................. revealing & quite beautiful ............................ N
December 16th, 2021 02:09
Never left just locked away
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom into the new wonderful world you know is out there be forever with you Dan.
Andy
December 12th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom into the new wonderful world you know is out there be forever with you Dan.
Andy
December 12th, 2021 01:09
Never left just locked away
dusk arising said:
One day whilst heartbroken my heartbreaker said to me \"life\'s a bitch, and then you die\" which was rather unkind I thought but as the years deepen the scars of time across me I have reasoned the truth within those words. Yes, life can be a bitch but somehow we struggle through, breathing, walking, doing all the boring things we don\'t care to think about whilst cussing all and everything around us. Blinded by our frame of mind. Until one day a ray of sunshine lights the beauty of someone\'s written words. Here on MPS it\'s happened for me. Reading someone\'s capture of a part of that beauty all around us which I have been taking for granted. Something wonderful in the way it lives through the seasons, renewing life. A wonderful picture closed to my frame of mind began to open now because the things I was reading were there for me to see too if only i had the eyes to see them. But of course i do have those eyes, temporarily blinded to beauty maybe, but i began to see as if \"through a glass darkly\" (to coin a phrase). The world is still a beautiful place Dan.
December 11th, 2021 06:50
dusk arising said:
One day whilst heartbroken my heartbreaker said to me \"life\'s a bitch, and then you die\" which was rather unkind I thought but as the years deepen the scars of time across me I have reasoned the truth within those words. Yes, life can be a bitch but somehow we struggle through, breathing, walking, doing all the boring things we don\'t care to think about whilst cussing all and everything around us. Blinded by our frame of mind. Until one day a ray of sunshine lights the beauty of someone\'s written words. Here on MPS it\'s happened for me. Reading someone\'s capture of a part of that beauty all around us which I have been taking for granted. Something wonderful in the way it lives through the seasons, renewing life. A wonderful picture closed to my frame of mind began to open now because the things I was reading were there for me to see too if only i had the eyes to see them. But of course i do have those eyes, temporarily blinded to beauty maybe, but i began to see as if \"through a glass darkly\" (to coin a phrase). The world is still a beautiful place Dan.
December 11th, 2021 06:50
Never left just locked away
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Dan. Total reflection of life this piece is. Love it big time
December 11th, 2021 04:54
Saxon Crow said:
Nice one Dan. Total reflection of life this piece is. Love it big time
December 11th, 2021 04:54
Never left just locked away
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , Dan 🙂 I like your words . I see your muse here . And it’s nice to see you back on here , writing again )
December 11th, 2021 03:59
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , Dan 🙂 I like your words . I see your muse here . And it’s nice to see you back on here , writing again )
December 11th, 2021 03:59
Never left just locked away
spilleronsheet said:
When your words have drifted
Still the poetry is so poignant
Wonder when it comes back
What fireworks will it crackle
Loved these lines-
“ Writing for my future from my past destiny, keeping the flow of the present in harmony ”
The essence of life it seems
Well penned dear poet
December 11th, 2021 03:45
spilleronsheet said:
When your words have drifted
Still the poetry is so poignant
Wonder when it comes back
What fireworks will it crackle
Loved these lines-
“ Writing for my future from my past destiny, keeping the flow of the present in harmony ”
The essence of life it seems
Well penned dear poet
December 11th, 2021 03:45
Still searching
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved on so far in your life Dan, it is such a shame to see you slide back. Look at the good things that you have found in your life and bring them to the fore.
Andy
December 11th, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved on so far in your life Dan, it is such a shame to see you slide back. Look at the good things that you have found in your life and bring them to the fore.
Andy
December 11th, 2021 01:30
Still searching
dusk arising said:
So sorry to read youve been feeling down my buddy. Blame it on the misery of winter and this pandemic thing..... try to get your head around looking forward to spring. How is that beautiful little daughter of yours??? No, i\'m not forgetting the other beautiful daughter or her brother who\'s probably into all sorts of mischief between the two of them.
Keep writing for us Dan, you know its a necessary outlet rather than bottling it up inside. You know you have lots of supporting friends here and we want to read your words as regularly as you can please. Apart from self help, you are a great help to others here through your fearless honesty.
Respect.
December 10th, 2021 13:39
dusk arising said:
So sorry to read youve been feeling down my buddy. Blame it on the misery of winter and this pandemic thing..... try to get your head around looking forward to spring. How is that beautiful little daughter of yours??? No, i\'m not forgetting the other beautiful daughter or her brother who\'s probably into all sorts of mischief between the two of them.
Keep writing for us Dan, you know its a necessary outlet rather than bottling it up inside. You know you have lots of supporting friends here and we want to read your words as regularly as you can please. Apart from self help, you are a great help to others here through your fearless honesty.
Respect.
December 10th, 2021 13:39
Still searching
Lorna said:
Maybe it\'s the holiday season doing you in Dan .... days get longer soon! We\'ll watch for you.....
December 10th, 2021 10:56
Lorna said:
Maybe it\'s the holiday season doing you in Dan .... days get longer soon! We\'ll watch for you.....
December 10th, 2021 10:56
Still searching
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love may not of expired but existence is numb
No fire to absorb the sodden focused thoughts
A river of denial to an oceans unsecured floor
Embedded in the pressure from responsibilities shore\'..
Brilliant!
(your intuitive poetic talent, showcased
at its succinctly eloquent best,
so happy for you my friend
a Great write!)
December 10th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Love may not of expired but existence is numb
No fire to absorb the sodden focused thoughts
A river of denial to an oceans unsecured floor
Embedded in the pressure from responsibilities shore\'..
Brilliant!
(your intuitive poetic talent, showcased
at its succinctly eloquent best,
so happy for you my friend
a Great write!)
December 10th, 2021 05:46
Muse in my view
L. B. Mek said:
wise words indeed, sometimes
fleeting be the theme, to life
and yet, I can close my eyes
and still remember that scent
of a perfect day at the beach
from childhood\'s memory reels, while
I can\'t recall what I was doing
this time last week, maybe
we have more choice: than we think...
(a wonderfully nostalgic depiction
of how quickly that guaranteed change, in existence
warps our sense of fulfilment)
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
December 10th, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
wise words indeed, sometimes
fleeting be the theme, to life
and yet, I can close my eyes
and still remember that scent
of a perfect day at the beach
from childhood\'s memory reels, while
I can\'t recall what I was doing
this time last week, maybe
we have more choice: than we think...
(a wonderfully nostalgic depiction
of how quickly that guaranteed change, in existence
warps our sense of fulfilment)
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
December 10th, 2021 05:40
Still searching
spilleronsheet said:
Ummm
Hope you find your muse soon
Distraught and grieved I resonate along
Some words you spoke struck my chords
I don’t know what your going through
But as long as, your on way of healing, it’s a relief
Happy healing dear poet
Hope we find our passion soon
December 10th, 2021 03:37
spilleronsheet said:
Ummm
Hope you find your muse soon
Distraught and grieved I resonate along
Some words you spoke struck my chords
I don’t know what your going through
But as long as, your on way of healing, it’s a relief
Happy healing dear poet
Hope we find our passion soon
December 10th, 2021 03:37
Still searching
Caring dove said:
This seems a little different to your other writings , somehow .. but I like it ! 🙂 I’m sorry your feeling ‘ numb ‘
I like your reference to nature in this
December 10th, 2021 02:51
Caring dove said:
This seems a little different to your other writings , somehow .. but I like it ! 🙂 I’m sorry your feeling ‘ numb ‘
I like your reference to nature in this
December 10th, 2021 02:51
Muse in my view
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan but the good \'hits\' will always outweigh the bad ones.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan but the good \'hits\' will always outweigh the bad ones.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:32
Muse in my view
Lorna said:
Makes me want to sit down and do nothing and just think....... got to get going though.
November 7th, 2021 09:13
Lorna said:
Makes me want to sit down and do nothing and just think....... got to get going though.
November 7th, 2021 09:13
Muse in my view
dusk arising said:
Great pictures Dan, That little beauty is growing up fast... now to the poetry....
Take it as it comes, It never lasts for long, it changes or is gone or something out of the blue changes you.
I\'d like to sit by the ocean and watch it\'s consistency. Once again absorbing insignificance... but i\'m housebound just now, health reasons
November 7th, 2021 04:28
dusk arising said:
Great pictures Dan, That little beauty is growing up fast... now to the poetry....
Take it as it comes, It never lasts for long, it changes or is gone or something out of the blue changes you.
I\'d like to sit by the ocean and watch it\'s consistency. Once again absorbing insignificance... but i\'m housebound just now, health reasons
November 7th, 2021 04:28
Muse in my view
Caring dove said:
Good poem Dan .. especially like the last verse 🙂
November 7th, 2021 03:44
Caring dove said:
Good poem Dan .. especially like the last verse 🙂
November 7th, 2021 03:44
Poetry at sea
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light be forever in your life Dan and the darkness fades away.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light be forever in your life Dan and the darkness fades away.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:26
Poetry at sea
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking for nature\'s help can do marvels when feeling low dear Dan - I love the video and thanks for sharing your happy experience.
October 29th, 2021 15:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking for nature\'s help can do marvels when feeling low dear Dan - I love the video and thanks for sharing your happy experience.
October 29th, 2021 15:45
Poetry at sea
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, just like your ecstatic words of rhyme
celebrating, those simple gifts of life..
(a rejuvenating read, my friend
thanks for sharing
and alerting us:
to that sunshine behind our clouds)
October 29th, 2021 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, just like your ecstatic words of rhyme
celebrating, those simple gifts of life..
(a rejuvenating read, my friend
thanks for sharing
and alerting us:
to that sunshine behind our clouds)
October 29th, 2021 06:12
Poetry at sea
Caring dove said:
I very much believe I’m angels and the comfort they can send us .
Our higher self is so loving ,., never to doubt our worth
October 29th, 2021 05:05
Caring dove said:
I very much believe I’m angels and the comfort they can send us .
Our higher self is so loving ,., never to doubt our worth
October 29th, 2021 05:05
Poetry at sea
Caring dove said:
Makes me think of angels or the light of your higher self maybe ?
Great writing Dan 🙂 nice to see another poem from you
October 29th, 2021 05:04
Caring dove said:
Makes me think of angels or the light of your higher self maybe ?
Great writing Dan 🙂 nice to see another poem from you
October 29th, 2021 05:04
Poetry at sea
dusk arising said:
Sounds very much like a spiritual thing which happened to me with the light.
I think you were just shown your guardian angel my friend. That light and it\'s moment will never leave you if i am correct.
Stay well to you and yours my friend.
October 29th, 2021 04:24
dusk arising said:
Sounds very much like a spiritual thing which happened to me with the light.
I think you were just shown your guardian angel my friend. That light and it\'s moment will never leave you if i am correct.
Stay well to you and yours my friend.
October 29th, 2021 04:24
99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poetry forever be in your heart and shared with us all Dan.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poetry forever be in your heart and shared with us all Dan.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:49
99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
orchidee said:
Nope, I can\'t see any problems with the poetry here! :)
October 20th, 2021 04:25
orchidee said:
Nope, I can\'t see any problems with the poetry here! :)
October 20th, 2021 04:25
99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
spilleronsheet said:
Nice words at play…poetry is freedom, where no rules hold upon and you can be anything you want…
October 20th, 2021 04:08
spilleronsheet said:
Nice words at play…poetry is freedom, where no rules hold upon and you can be anything you want…
October 20th, 2021 04:08
99 problems and poetry ain\'t one
Neville said:
You sure as hell are right there mate .. but dont let em grind you down, celebrate each and every one ... write on .. A great intro to a new day dawned ....
Neville
October 20th, 2021 03:40
Neville said:
You sure as hell are right there mate .. but dont let em grind you down, celebrate each and every one ... write on .. A great intro to a new day dawned ....
Neville
October 20th, 2021 03:40
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