Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Crowns4Christ said:

Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
Nicely written.

Melissa Crown

March 4th, 2022 19:19

Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Rocky Lagou said:

Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! ๐Ÿ’–

March 4th, 2022 09:16

Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Caring dove said:

I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. itโ€™s so important to feel grounded in life ๐Ÿ™‚

March 4th, 2022 07:37

Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
L. B. Mek said:

\'Never alone
with many spirits in mind, swirling
to make any moment, rhyme
I\'ll wave
to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
a shadow: wherever I roam.\'
these lines, showcase
such sincere and bravely pure
poetic genius
distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
with Purpose!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(Brilliant!)
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet

March 4th, 2022 07:11

Regardless of nothing
Rozina said:

The Gift Of Life. Precious words. Thank you for this reminder.

March 4th, 2022 00:33

Regardless of nothing
Christina8 said:

Yes, I think things will get better for you.......but nothing is more powerful than the last line...enjoy the gift of life!!! Wonderful write, Dan!

March 3rd, 2022 15:16

Regardless of nothing
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! We need to revolutionize our own beings and be ready for change! It can happen at any moment! ๐Ÿ’–

March 3rd, 2022 10:12

Regardless of nothing
orchidee said:

Ohh no, don\'t forget it all! lol.

March 3rd, 2022 10:05

Regardless of nothing
Neville said:



superbly scripted ..... made me think no end .. keep your chin up Dan .. regardless of everything that is ...

March 3rd, 2022 09:45

Regardless of nothing
L. B. Mek said:

words to meditate over
and wisdom to devour..
thank you!
in sharing your journey
you highlight
poignant questions and hopeful answers
for so many
and as one, of the many
I humbly, reiterate my appreciation
for your Purposed, poetry

March 3rd, 2022 06:57

Another soul returns home (sad)
L. B. Mek said:

\'we must cherish
those fateful encounters in our lives
for, from the thousands
that cross our life\'s path
we\'re lucky
to have, but a handful few
tattoo their presence
in our memories and heart\'s...\'
may she rest in peace
(what a beautiful eulogy you\'ve penned, brother
what a way to utilise your wonderful gift, dear Poet)

March 3rd, 2022 06:51

Another soul returns home (sad)
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderful tribute to that lady Dan, she will always be in your memories.

Andy

March 3rd, 2022 01:49

Another soul returns home (sad)
Bella Shepard said:

There are those people who seem to transcend earthly boundaries while they are here, and when they are gone leave a shining trail behind them. Loss is pain, but memories can be the balm. A beautiful, heartfelt piece.

March 2nd, 2022 13:25

Another soul returns home (sad)
Rocky Lagou said:

So gracious! Sorry for your loss! But sometimes those short encounters leave grand impacts on us, for better. Great poem!

March 2nd, 2022 10:20

Another soul returns home (sad)
Christina8 said:

A wonderful tribute for a soul who so obviously touched your life. May she live on in your memory.....a beautiful write, Dan!

March 2nd, 2022 09:29

Another soul returns home (sad)
Laura๐ŸŒป said:

Dear Dan,

A beautifully penned tribute for your friend. Her suffering has ended. May she now Rest In Peace.๐Ÿ™๐Ÿปโค๏ธ

Laura๐ŸŒป

March 2nd, 2022 08:30

Another soul returns home (sad)
orchidee said:

A poignant write Dan.

March 2nd, 2022 07:34

Another soul returns home (sad)
dusk arising said:

Dan t.his is a truly wonderful piece, A touching tribute to a soul who touched you.

There are so many wonderful people out there if only we could see their aura as we pass among them.



March 2nd, 2022 06:27

Rain or shine I\'ll write my rhymes
L. B. Mek said:

\'in every day that she grows, so do I\'..
I can just imagine
the shining beacon
you are to them all,
in the now
of blessed breath and good health..
(it\'s a privilege to call
such an earnest, kind hearted
soldier
in this warring chaos of life
a friend)
and a cherished Poet, as that cherry on top..
lol
so happy for you!

March 1st, 2022 03:56

Rain or shine I\'ll write my rhymes
orchidee said:

Good write and video Dan.

March 1st, 2022 03:18

Rain or shine I\'ll write my rhymes
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Dan and such a great video, she is so very very happy and I am sure she will always be that way.

Andy

March 1st, 2022 01:46

Rain or shine I\'ll write my rhymes
Rozina said:

Very enjoyable read. Thank you.

March 1st, 2022 00:51

Rain or shine I\'ll write my rhymes
Crowns4Christ said:

A very sweet ode to your little ones Dan,any parent will completely understand your love for your children,we love them as God loves us,His children

February 28th, 2022 23:51

Inch by inch the moment you landed
Rocky Lagou said:

What a wonderful poem! Truly expressed to a fine point of eloquence. Bravo! ๐Ÿ’–

February 28th, 2022 13:51

Inch by inch the moment you landed
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful positive words Dan, you have come a long way and it is so rewarding to see.

Andy

February 27th, 2022 01:42

Inch by inch the moment you landed
dusk arising said:

The love you get is equal to the love you give. You\'ve lots to give - tis plain to see.

February 26th, 2022 18:50

Inch by inch the moment you landed
Rozina said:

A lovely poem. Very touching words.

February 26th, 2022 17:26

Inch by inch the moment you landed
Crowns4Christ said:

So beautiful Dan, truly written from your heart

February 26th, 2022 16:15

I give it away
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Dan but you know you have the light within you, you have moved on so far in your life that this is just a blip that will soon be behind you.

Andy

February 25th, 2022 01:42

I give it away
Crowns4Christ said:

I really like this Dan, thank you my friend for opening your heart

February 24th, 2022 22:29



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