Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Rozina said:
Lovely lines here. Keep on shining.
January 18th, 2022 21:03
Rozina said:
Lovely lines here. Keep on shining.
January 18th, 2022 21:03
Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Completely love your last line ! 🙂🙂
Great writing ….
Such a nice expression
January 18th, 2022 16:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Completely love your last line ! 🙂🙂
Great writing ….
Such a nice expression
January 18th, 2022 16:14
Uncharted waters
Goldfinch60 said:
Those uncharted waters will lead us to the wonders in our lives Dan.
Andy
January 17th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those uncharted waters will lead us to the wonders in our lives Dan.
Andy
January 17th, 2022 01:33
Uncharted waters
Rozina said:
Life is full of unknowns. We\'ll get through this. Thank you for sharing.
January 16th, 2022 22:17
Rozina said:
Life is full of unknowns. We\'ll get through this. Thank you for sharing.
January 16th, 2022 22:17
Uncharted waters
spilleronsheet said:
A true reflection
Realising the depth inside
No rules or advice
But a custom made experience
So true dear poetic Dan
January 16th, 2022 11:49
spilleronsheet said:
A true reflection
Realising the depth inside
No rules or advice
But a custom made experience
So true dear poetic Dan
January 16th, 2022 11:49
Split into two
spilleronsheet said:
The liens brought me different feel
It was a bouquet of flowers
Where each strand told me different story
Where each heed a different advice
Where the lines told me different experiences
And where I could agree by all kind
Great one dear poetic Dan
January 15th, 2022 11:41
spilleronsheet said:
The liens brought me different feel
It was a bouquet of flowers
Where each strand told me different story
Where each heed a different advice
Where the lines told me different experiences
And where I could agree by all kind
Great one dear poetic Dan
January 15th, 2022 11:41
Split into two
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile always be looking down on you Dan.
Andy
January 15th, 2022 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile always be looking down on you Dan.
Andy
January 15th, 2022 01:18
Split into two
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tip toe
through the forbidden forest, shedding
any unwanted horrors
Washing back up
from the depths of our soul, to find
no other place called home\'
(who needs
caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry like yours
can fuel me, endlessly...)
thank you, dear Poet
for reminding us all
\'to leap:
for those \'frisbee\'s\' of opportunity
whilst battling, through our sandpits
of life...\'
January 14th, 2022 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tip toe
through the forbidden forest, shedding
any unwanted horrors
Washing back up
from the depths of our soul, to find
no other place called home\'
(who needs
caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry like yours
can fuel me, endlessly...)
thank you, dear Poet
for reminding us all
\'to leap:
for those \'frisbee\'s\' of opportunity
whilst battling, through our sandpits
of life...\'
January 14th, 2022 07:10
Split into two
dusk arising said:
You capture something magic within us all here Dan. This is a different higher you speaking out. Probably a voice in you that has been quietly crying to be heard beneath the burdens you hide it behind.... let it flow, it\'s the real core of your spirit.... run with it, doesn\'t it feel good?
THis one goes into my favourites.
January 14th, 2022 05:28
dusk arising said:
You capture something magic within us all here Dan. This is a different higher you speaking out. Probably a voice in you that has been quietly crying to be heard beneath the burdens you hide it behind.... let it flow, it\'s the real core of your spirit.... run with it, doesn\'t it feel good?
THis one goes into my favourites.
January 14th, 2022 05:28
Split into two
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love this ! One of my favourites from you
🙂🙂
Great lines
Hope you have a good day
January 14th, 2022 03:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I love this ! One of my favourites from you
🙂🙂
Great lines
Hope you have a good day
January 14th, 2022 03:47
Beaching walk
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write, that family love is so wonderful in you all Dan.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write, that family love is so wonderful in you all Dan.
Andy
January 14th, 2022 01:47
Beaching walk
Michael Edwards said:
May the trickle continue into loves lagoons.
January 14th, 2022 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
May the trickle continue into loves lagoons.
January 14th, 2022 00:34
Beaching walk
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful scene and wonderful complementing lines
The last lines were so appeasing to eyes
January 13th, 2022 23:16
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful scene and wonderful complementing lines
The last lines were so appeasing to eyes
January 13th, 2022 23:16
Beaching walk
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful last line , ‘ waterfalls cascade into love ‘
Nice writing 🙂
January 13th, 2022 14:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful last line , ‘ waterfalls cascade into love ‘
Nice writing 🙂
January 13th, 2022 14:43
Love & hurt
Goldfinch60 said:
Most of my memories are so good from my long life Dan, I am sure that yours will be as well.
Andy
January 11th, 2022 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Most of my memories are so good from my long life Dan, I am sure that yours will be as well.
Andy
January 11th, 2022 01:39
Love & hurt
spilleronsheet said:
A few lines conveyed a tale
Such beauty dictating as you nail
The verse went deeper imbibed
Coated with many verses of life
Truly captivated by the words as you weave by
May you make more memories
You already am sure made many
Or else how would such jewels be created in such beautiful lines
January 10th, 2022 11:58
spilleronsheet said:
A few lines conveyed a tale
Such beauty dictating as you nail
The verse went deeper imbibed
Coated with many verses of life
Truly captivated by the words as you weave by
May you make more memories
You already am sure made many
Or else how would such jewels be created in such beautiful lines
January 10th, 2022 11:58
Love & hurt
dusk arising said:
I think that right now Dan you are making some of the best memories which you will re-live time and again.... and better times are ahead. Do you feel a better man now tthat you know you are one?
January 10th, 2022 11:32
dusk arising said:
I think that right now Dan you are making some of the best memories which you will re-live time and again.... and better times are ahead. Do you feel a better man now tthat you know you are one?
January 10th, 2022 11:32
Love & hurt
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Memories are so important . So lucky if we have a lot of good ones ..
A nice writing , Dan )
January 10th, 2022 03:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Memories are so important . So lucky if we have a lot of good ones ..
A nice writing , Dan )
January 10th, 2022 03:51
We all need to breathe
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and superb pictures Dan, that love from you to them and them to you is so resilient in your life and it will always be so.
Andy
January 10th, 2022 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and superb pictures Dan, that love from you to them and them to you is so resilient in your life and it will always be so.
Andy
January 10th, 2022 01:13
We all need to breathe
spilleronsheet said:
Such beautiful lines
More precious when could relate to memory of yours
When you meet next make new memories to frame
It’s never late to spend time again
They were child back then
Now you can be child with them
A very heartfelt poetry my dear friend
Reminded me to keep making sweet memories
January 9th, 2022 14:09
spilleronsheet said:
Such beautiful lines
More precious when could relate to memory of yours
When you meet next make new memories to frame
It’s never late to spend time again
They were child back then
Now you can be child with them
A very heartfelt poetry my dear friend
Reminded me to keep making sweet memories
January 9th, 2022 14:09
We all need to breathe
Laura🌻 said:
Hello Dan!
My first read of the day. I enjoyed the video very much along with your inspirational scripted poem. Thank you for sharing your author’s comments. I love your words,
‘Let nothing stand in our path when love is the heart.’ So beautifully stated.
Laura 🌻
January 9th, 2022 11:33
Laura🌻 said:
Hello Dan!
My first read of the day. I enjoyed the video very much along with your inspirational scripted poem. Thank you for sharing your author’s comments. I love your words,
‘Let nothing stand in our path when love is the heart.’ So beautifully stated.
Laura 🌻
January 9th, 2022 11:33
We all need to breathe
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some beautiful lines in here , Dan
love builds a bridge for all spirit to part
Before you know it you\'ll write poetry in memory of all that made you strong, to dance the rest of the days to any emotional song
Such lovely words
I think it’s difficult to be believe that life is for living … when we are caught up in pain .. but your right it completely is for living
Something that I find very confusing .,
I guess it’s difficult not to spend as much time with your kids .. as you perhaps want to
I’ve had an ‘ on and off ‘ relationship with my dad for a while now . Met up with him a few weeks ago , made me feel sad about time not seeing him , but it was nice !
Relationships can always improve between people .
January 9th, 2022 11:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some beautiful lines in here , Dan
love builds a bridge for all spirit to part
Before you know it you\'ll write poetry in memory of all that made you strong, to dance the rest of the days to any emotional song
Such lovely words
I think it’s difficult to be believe that life is for living … when we are caught up in pain .. but your right it completely is for living
Something that I find very confusing .,
I guess it’s difficult not to spend as much time with your kids .. as you perhaps want to
I’ve had an ‘ on and off ‘ relationship with my dad for a while now . Met up with him a few weeks ago , made me feel sad about time not seeing him , but it was nice !
Relationships can always improve between people .
January 9th, 2022 11:26
A door never open but lifes worth holding
Rozina said:
To acknowledge that you have a mental health concern is a huge brave step you have taken. I applaud you.
My daughter had an eating disorder and I discovered how difficult and depressing life was for her and the grave worries the family had. She has recovered. Never give up. All the very best to you.
January 9th, 2022 08:56
Rozina said:
To acknowledge that you have a mental health concern is a huge brave step you have taken. I applaud you.
My daughter had an eating disorder and I discovered how difficult and depressing life was for her and the grave worries the family had. She has recovered. Never give up. All the very best to you.
January 9th, 2022 08:56
A door never open but lifes worth holding
Goldfinch60 said:
Mental health is certainly precious Dan, you have come a long way though Dan and I am sure you will come into that wonderful life that I know is there for you.
Andy
January 9th, 2022 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Mental health is certainly precious Dan, you have come a long way though Dan and I am sure you will come into that wonderful life that I know is there for you.
Andy
January 9th, 2022 01:34
A door never open but lifes worth holding
spilleronsheet said:
Thank you for sharing your woes
Mental health is very crucial and it’s good you are facing it
Your courageous step to accept it
I am pretty sure soon you will overcome it
I wish you luck
You will soon
Cause the best part is you have already start healing
Have always admired your poetry
January 8th, 2022 12:35
spilleronsheet said:
Thank you for sharing your woes
Mental health is very crucial and it’s good you are facing it
Your courageous step to accept it
I am pretty sure soon you will overcome it
I wish you luck
You will soon
Cause the best part is you have already start healing
Have always admired your poetry
January 8th, 2022 12:35
A door never open but lifes worth holding
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hello Dan .. I’m sorry that you struggle with eating . Brave of you to open up on here . Our mental health can affect our eating I guess and it goes the other way aswell , lack of eating affecting us mentally .
I hope things improve for you in regards to this
I’ve been told recently that I have an eating disorder … just because I’ve lost weight , and to me that’s ridiculous , because I eat really well !
We can hold so many emotions in our bodies ,
Have you tried eft emotional freedom technique to help with how you feel ?
No need to say sorry ..
Our mental health is so important tho .. I understand how difficult it is to struggle with it
January 8th, 2022 11:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hello Dan .. I’m sorry that you struggle with eating . Brave of you to open up on here . Our mental health can affect our eating I guess and it goes the other way aswell , lack of eating affecting us mentally .
I hope things improve for you in regards to this
I’ve been told recently that I have an eating disorder … just because I’ve lost weight , and to me that’s ridiculous , because I eat really well !
We can hold so many emotions in our bodies ,
Have you tried eft emotional freedom technique to help with how you feel ?
No need to say sorry ..
Our mental health is so important tho .. I understand how difficult it is to struggle with it
January 8th, 2022 11:36
What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I have a twelve year old daughter. I can identify as a father. This piece write here, is INSPIRATION. Thank you Dan.
January 8th, 2022 03:34
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I have a twelve year old daughter. I can identify as a father. This piece write here, is INSPIRATION. Thank you Dan.
January 8th, 2022 03:34
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