Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Portals in the mind
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.
March 18th, 2022 12:30
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.
March 18th, 2022 12:30
Portals in the mind
Goldfinch60 said:
That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:39
Portals in the mind
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between
March 17th, 2022 13:18
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between
March 17th, 2022 13:18
Portals in the mind
Rocky Lagou said:
A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 13:00
Rocky Lagou said:
A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 13:00
Portals in the mind
dusk arising said:
Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn\'t available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.
March 17th, 2022 12:25
dusk arising said:
Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn\'t available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.
March 17th, 2022 12:25
Portals in the mind
Christina8 said:
Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it\'s warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Christina8 said:
Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it\'s warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Portals in the mind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem , Dan 🙂
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely poem , Dan 🙂
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Before I push it away again
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, your wonderful life is becoming part of you now, yes there are memories that will never go but always look forward into the new life you are creating.
Andy
March 16th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, your wonderful life is becoming part of you now, yes there are memories that will never go but always look forward into the new life you are creating.
Andy
March 16th, 2022 02:11
Before I push it away again
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Before I push it away again
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
A day late or is it!
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness always be with Dan.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness always be with Dan.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 03:05
A day late or is it!
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,once again Dan,you use your words beautifully
March 9th, 2022 19:53
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,once again Dan,you use your words beautifully
March 9th, 2022 19:53
A day late or is it!
spilleronsheet said:
I missed the date
So I couldn’t ink
But I guess all the poets did justice to the special day
You as well inked the words of gratitude and love for the world so well dear Poetic Dan
March 9th, 2022 14:42
spilleronsheet said:
I missed the date
So I couldn’t ink
But I guess all the poets did justice to the special day
You as well inked the words of gratitude and love for the world so well dear Poetic Dan
March 9th, 2022 14:42
A day late or is it!
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful tribute to ladies everywhere, thank you for sharing, dan!!
March 9th, 2022 08:39
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful tribute to ladies everywhere, thank you for sharing, dan!!
March 9th, 2022 08:39
Another soul returns home (sad)
Neville said:
this is far more than just a poem Dan, it is a prayer, a song & a splendid dedication & tribute to someone who once shone briefly and bright, not only your life, but I imagine in so many other peoples lives also ... Neville
March 7th, 2022 09:36
Neville said:
this is far more than just a poem Dan, it is a prayer, a song & a splendid dedication & tribute to someone who once shone briefly and bright, not only your life, but I imagine in so many other peoples lives also ... Neville
March 7th, 2022 09:36
Burning light
Fay Slimm. said:
Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks for sharing them.
March 5th, 2022 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks for sharing them.
March 5th, 2022 04:57
Burning light
Crowns4Christ said:
All we can really ever be is ourselves take one step at a time
March 5th, 2022 04:53
Crowns4Christ said:
All we can really ever be is ourselves take one step at a time
March 5th, 2022 04:53
Burning light
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, that light in your life is certainly glowing brighter.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, that light in your life is certainly glowing brighter.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:53
Burning light
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan 🙂love your use of nature in this , and like your mention of the light .. theirs a nice spiritual aspect to your writing
March 5th, 2022 02:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan 🙂love your use of nature in this , and like your mention of the light .. theirs a nice spiritual aspect to your writing
March 5th, 2022 02:33
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Dan, may that connection always be with you.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Dan, may that connection always be with you.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:10
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Rozina said:
Supporting each other. Lovely poem.
March 4th, 2022 22:40
Rozina said:
Supporting each other. Lovely poem.
March 4th, 2022 22:40
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Crowns4Christ said:
Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
Nicely written.
Melissa Crown
March 4th, 2022 19:19
Crowns4Christ said:
Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
Nicely written.
Melissa Crown
March 4th, 2022 19:19
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! 💖
March 4th, 2022 09:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! 💖
March 4th, 2022 09:16
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. it’s so important to feel grounded in life 🙂
March 4th, 2022 07:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. it’s so important to feel grounded in life 🙂
March 4th, 2022 07:37
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
L. B. Mek said:
\'Never alone
with many spirits in mind, swirling
to make any moment, rhyme
I\'ll wave
to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
a shadow: wherever I roam.\'
these lines, showcase
such sincere and bravely pure
poetic genius
distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
with Purpose!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(Brilliant!)
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 4th, 2022 07:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Never alone
with many spirits in mind, swirling
to make any moment, rhyme
I\'ll wave
to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
a shadow: wherever I roam.\'
these lines, showcase
such sincere and bravely pure
poetic genius
distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
with Purpose!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(Brilliant!)
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 4th, 2022 07:11
Regardless of nothing
Rozina said:
The Gift Of Life. Precious words. Thank you for this reminder.
March 4th, 2022 00:33
Rozina said:
The Gift Of Life. Precious words. Thank you for this reminder.
March 4th, 2022 00:33
Regardless of nothing
Christina8 said:
Yes, I think things will get better for you.......but nothing is more powerful than the last line...enjoy the gift of life!!! Wonderful write, Dan!
March 3rd, 2022 15:16
Christina8 said:
Yes, I think things will get better for you.......but nothing is more powerful than the last line...enjoy the gift of life!!! Wonderful write, Dan!
March 3rd, 2022 15:16
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