Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Why my poetry exists
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , in the first two verses .
April 10th, 2022 02:00
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , in the first two verses .
April 10th, 2022 02:00
Why my poetry exists
Caring dove said:
Great poem Dan ! Yes , I feel this is my ‘ home ‘ too . ‘ the rest of my days can be dancing in salads ‘ love that line 🙂 I think this is why many write .. to deal with how their feeling , I know writing can help me sometimes ..
April 10th, 2022 01:58
Caring dove said:
Great poem Dan ! Yes , I feel this is my ‘ home ‘ too . ‘ the rest of my days can be dancing in salads ‘ love that line 🙂 I think this is why many write .. to deal with how their feeling , I know writing can help me sometimes ..
April 10th, 2022 01:58
Letting nature describe
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those smiles will be forever with you Dan.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those smiles will be forever with you Dan.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:31
Letting nature describe
Bella Shepard said:
I found myself smiling throughout this delightful video, and poem. Finding joy in each day of life, no matter what you do, is a gift. I see that joy in smile of a beautiful child and the dad who loves her.
April 8th, 2022 14:19
Bella Shepard said:
I found myself smiling throughout this delightful video, and poem. Finding joy in each day of life, no matter what you do, is a gift. I see that joy in smile of a beautiful child and the dad who loves her.
April 8th, 2022 14:19
Letting nature describe
dusk arising said:
Cor! I hope you are keeping all these videos cos in twenty or more years time you\'ll look back on words and vids with a different head on. A proud head.
Stay fit and healthy Dan.
April 8th, 2022 11:50
dusk arising said:
Cor! I hope you are keeping all these videos cos in twenty or more years time you\'ll look back on words and vids with a different head on. A proud head.
Stay fit and healthy Dan.
April 8th, 2022 11:50
Letting nature describe
Crowns4Christ said:
The journey that we take through life, makes all the struggles worth it, life is unpredictable and tough, but it\'s worth living to the fullest, thank you Dan
April 8th, 2022 10:43
Crowns4Christ said:
The journey that we take through life, makes all the struggles worth it, life is unpredictable and tough, but it\'s worth living to the fullest, thank you Dan
April 8th, 2022 10:43
Letting nature describe
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
Awesome video complemented by a great poem.
‘happiness is an adventure to bring back some smiles’…this is so true my friend.
Thank you for sharing.🙏🏻
Laura🌻
April 8th, 2022 07:53
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
Awesome video complemented by a great poem.
‘happiness is an adventure to bring back some smiles’…this is so true my friend.
Thank you for sharing.🙏🏻
Laura🌻
April 8th, 2022 07:53
Easy to say, another to be or do
Goldfinch60 said:
You had moved into a good time in your life Dan I am sure that you can get back to that wonderful place.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
You had moved into a good time in your life Dan I am sure that you can get back to that wonderful place.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:32
Easy to say, another to be or do
Crowns4Christ said:
Dan,you have the fight of a lion you just need to dig deep within yourself to find it,and the heart as gentle,, loving and hopeful as a dove,you have the support you need here on MPS
April 6th, 2022 18:13
Crowns4Christ said:
Dan,you have the fight of a lion you just need to dig deep within yourself to find it,and the heart as gentle,, loving and hopeful as a dove,you have the support you need here on MPS
April 6th, 2022 18:13
Easy to say, another to be or do
Christina8 said:
Oh Dan, \"every inch of my life is falling apart\"...that\'s so sad! If you ever need someone to talk to just private message me, tho I\'ll be on vacation next week....YOU ARE STRONG! You can make it through this, whatever life throws your way!!
April 6th, 2022 13:37
Christina8 said:
Oh Dan, \"every inch of my life is falling apart\"...that\'s so sad! If you ever need someone to talk to just private message me, tho I\'ll be on vacation next week....YOU ARE STRONG! You can make it through this, whatever life throws your way!!
April 6th, 2022 13:37
Easy to say, another to be or do
Bella Shepard said:
This really grabs me, \"a ghost in my shadow\", \"a smile lay deep in the soul\". To me the juxtaposition of these two lines speaks of the surface life, and what lies deep within. That somehow we are never completely drained. Many good wishes for that smile to reappear.
April 6th, 2022 11:24
Bella Shepard said:
This really grabs me, \"a ghost in my shadow\", \"a smile lay deep in the soul\". To me the juxtaposition of these two lines speaks of the surface life, and what lies deep within. That somehow we are never completely drained. Many good wishes for that smile to reappear.
April 6th, 2022 11:24
Easy to say, another to be or do
Caring dove said:
Love your last line , Dan ! )) you expressed yourself well .. sorry if your still struggling a bit with how you feel .
April 6th, 2022 08:15
Caring dove said:
Love your last line , Dan ! )) you expressed yourself well .. sorry if your still struggling a bit with how you feel .
April 6th, 2022 08:15
Burning up
Goldfinch60 said:
She is growing fast Dan and is obviously very happy in her life. She has learned a great deal from you as have you over the years and your life has become so good.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
She is growing fast Dan and is obviously very happy in her life. She has learned a great deal from you as have you over the years and your life has become so good.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:44
Burning up
Crowns4Christ said:
Kids are so precious,is that your daughter on the video
March 24th, 2022 11:05
Crowns4Christ said:
Kids are so precious,is that your daughter on the video
March 24th, 2022 11:05
Burning up
Bella Shepard said:
As I watch the video of this beautiful child, and read your beautiful words, I understand the joy in each moment, as she learns about the world she lives in. Learning comes in so many forms for these little ones, especially with loving parents to guide them. I\'ve been there as a parent and grandparent, and I wish you all the happiness that I know fatherhood will bring.
March 24th, 2022 09:09
Bella Shepard said:
As I watch the video of this beautiful child, and read your beautiful words, I understand the joy in each moment, as she learns about the world she lives in. Learning comes in so many forms for these little ones, especially with loving parents to guide them. I\'ve been there as a parent and grandparent, and I wish you all the happiness that I know fatherhood will bring.
March 24th, 2022 09:09
Burning up
L. B. Mek said:
that picture, alone
is worth a million words
of proclaimed: fatherly devotion!
\'This truly is the hardest most challenging thing I\'ve ever done, building and playing so close to the sun
I\'ll continue to write my legacy while burning up!\'
not only Daedalus
grasps, the true Poignant
poetic brevity of these words
dear brave, Poet!
Thank you! for Choosing
to share
and allowing your Poetry
to guide us
so we may avoid, overcome and wade bravely
though our own
challenging paths, in life
March 24th, 2022 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
that picture, alone
is worth a million words
of proclaimed: fatherly devotion!
\'This truly is the hardest most challenging thing I\'ve ever done, building and playing so close to the sun
I\'ll continue to write my legacy while burning up!\'
not only Daedalus
grasps, the true Poignant
poetic brevity of these words
dear brave, Poet!
Thank you! for Choosing
to share
and allowing your Poetry
to guide us
so we may avoid, overcome and wade bravely
though our own
challenging paths, in life
March 24th, 2022 06:53
Daily test!
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely right, Dan,we need to stop,and appreciate the beautiful life we have, instead of always wanting wanting and then face the disappointment of not getting
March 22nd, 2022 14:03
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely right, Dan,we need to stop,and appreciate the beautiful life we have, instead of always wanting wanting and then face the disappointment of not getting
March 22nd, 2022 14:03
Daily test!
Christina8 said:
Loved this write dear Dan!
I used to struggle with other people being successful or driving a mercedes benz. I realized I too am successful in all the things I do. It took a while. But your write was a great way to start the day!!!
March 22nd, 2022 10:33
Christina8 said:
Loved this write dear Dan!
I used to struggle with other people being successful or driving a mercedes benz. I realized I too am successful in all the things I do. It took a while. But your write was a great way to start the day!!!
March 22nd, 2022 10:33
Daily test!
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumph
of life-affirmingly empowering, poetic sincerity!
who needs caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry, alone
can fuel your marathon ambitions...
a great write, brother
lovely to see your succinct poetry, soaring
March 22nd, 2022 08:12
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumph
of life-affirmingly empowering, poetic sincerity!
who needs caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry, alone
can fuel your marathon ambitions...
a great write, brother
lovely to see your succinct poetry, soaring
March 22nd, 2022 08:12
Daily test!
dusk arising said:
That last line says so much but all too often it\'s truth is only realised when what we have is taken away. By which time regrets are too late.
March 22nd, 2022 08:01
dusk arising said:
That last line says so much but all too often it\'s truth is only realised when what we have is taken away. By which time regrets are too late.
March 22nd, 2022 08:01
Portals in the mind
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.
March 18th, 2022 12:30
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.
March 18th, 2022 12:30
Portals in the mind
Goldfinch60 said:
That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:39
Portals in the mind
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between
March 17th, 2022 13:18
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between
March 17th, 2022 13:18
Portals in the mind
Rocky Lagou said:
A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 13:00
Rocky Lagou said:
A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 13:00
Portals in the mind
dusk arising said:
Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn\'t available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.
March 17th, 2022 12:25
dusk arising said:
Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn\'t available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.
March 17th, 2022 12:25
Portals in the mind
Christina8 said:
Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it\'s warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Christina8 said:
Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it\'s warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Before I push it away again
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, your wonderful life is becoming part of you now, yes there are memories that will never go but always look forward into the new life you are creating.
Andy
March 16th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, your wonderful life is becoming part of you now, yes there are memories that will never go but always look forward into the new life you are creating.
Andy
March 16th, 2022 02:11
Before I push it away again
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Before I push it away again
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
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