Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Easy to say, another to be or do
Christina8 said:
Oh Dan, \"every inch of my life is falling apart\"...that\'s so sad! If you ever need someone to talk to just private message me, tho I\'ll be on vacation next week....YOU ARE STRONG! You can make it through this, whatever life throws your way!!
April 6th, 2022 13:37
Christina8 said:
Oh Dan, \"every inch of my life is falling apart\"...that\'s so sad! If you ever need someone to talk to just private message me, tho I\'ll be on vacation next week....YOU ARE STRONG! You can make it through this, whatever life throws your way!!
April 6th, 2022 13:37
Easy to say, another to be or do
Bella Shepard said:
This really grabs me, \"a ghost in my shadow\", \"a smile lay deep in the soul\". To me the juxtaposition of these two lines speaks of the surface life, and what lies deep within. That somehow we are never completely drained. Many good wishes for that smile to reappear.
April 6th, 2022 11:24
Bella Shepard said:
This really grabs me, \"a ghost in my shadow\", \"a smile lay deep in the soul\". To me the juxtaposition of these two lines speaks of the surface life, and what lies deep within. That somehow we are never completely drained. Many good wishes for that smile to reappear.
April 6th, 2022 11:24
Easy to say, another to be or do
Caring dove said:
Love your last line , Dan ! )) you expressed yourself well .. sorry if your still struggling a bit with how you feel .
April 6th, 2022 08:15
Caring dove said:
Love your last line , Dan ! )) you expressed yourself well .. sorry if your still struggling a bit with how you feel .
April 6th, 2022 08:15
Burning up
Goldfinch60 said:
She is growing fast Dan and is obviously very happy in her life. She has learned a great deal from you as have you over the years and your life has become so good.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
She is growing fast Dan and is obviously very happy in her life. She has learned a great deal from you as have you over the years and your life has become so good.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:44
Burning up
Crowns4Christ said:
Kids are so precious,is that your daughter on the video
March 24th, 2022 11:05
Crowns4Christ said:
Kids are so precious,is that your daughter on the video
March 24th, 2022 11:05
Burning up
Bella Shepard said:
As I watch the video of this beautiful child, and read your beautiful words, I understand the joy in each moment, as she learns about the world she lives in. Learning comes in so many forms for these little ones, especially with loving parents to guide them. I\'ve been there as a parent and grandparent, and I wish you all the happiness that I know fatherhood will bring.
March 24th, 2022 09:09
Bella Shepard said:
As I watch the video of this beautiful child, and read your beautiful words, I understand the joy in each moment, as she learns about the world she lives in. Learning comes in so many forms for these little ones, especially with loving parents to guide them. I\'ve been there as a parent and grandparent, and I wish you all the happiness that I know fatherhood will bring.
March 24th, 2022 09:09
Burning up
L. B. Mek said:
that picture, alone
is worth a million words
of proclaimed: fatherly devotion!
\'This truly is the hardest most challenging thing I\'ve ever done, building and playing so close to the sun
I\'ll continue to write my legacy while burning up!\'
not only Daedalus
grasps, the true Poignant
poetic brevity of these words
dear brave, Poet!
Thank you! for Choosing
to share
and allowing your Poetry
to guide us
so we may avoid, overcome and wade bravely
though our own
challenging paths, in life
March 24th, 2022 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
that picture, alone
is worth a million words
of proclaimed: fatherly devotion!
\'This truly is the hardest most challenging thing I\'ve ever done, building and playing so close to the sun
I\'ll continue to write my legacy while burning up!\'
not only Daedalus
grasps, the true Poignant
poetic brevity of these words
dear brave, Poet!
Thank you! for Choosing
to share
and allowing your Poetry
to guide us
so we may avoid, overcome and wade bravely
though our own
challenging paths, in life
March 24th, 2022 06:53
Daily test!
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely right, Dan,we need to stop,and appreciate the beautiful life we have, instead of always wanting wanting and then face the disappointment of not getting
March 22nd, 2022 14:03
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely right, Dan,we need to stop,and appreciate the beautiful life we have, instead of always wanting wanting and then face the disappointment of not getting
March 22nd, 2022 14:03
Daily test!
Christina8 said:
Loved this write dear Dan!
I used to struggle with other people being successful or driving a mercedes benz. I realized I too am successful in all the things I do. It took a while. But your write was a great way to start the day!!!
March 22nd, 2022 10:33
Christina8 said:
Loved this write dear Dan!
I used to struggle with other people being successful or driving a mercedes benz. I realized I too am successful in all the things I do. It took a while. But your write was a great way to start the day!!!
March 22nd, 2022 10:33
Daily test!
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumph
of life-affirmingly empowering, poetic sincerity!
who needs caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry, alone
can fuel your marathon ambitions...
a great write, brother
lovely to see your succinct poetry, soaring
March 22nd, 2022 08:12
L. B. Mek said:
what a triumph
of life-affirmingly empowering, poetic sincerity!
who needs caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry, alone
can fuel your marathon ambitions...
a great write, brother
lovely to see your succinct poetry, soaring
March 22nd, 2022 08:12
Daily test!
dusk arising said:
That last line says so much but all too often it\'s truth is only realised when what we have is taken away. By which time regrets are too late.
March 22nd, 2022 08:01
dusk arising said:
That last line says so much but all too often it\'s truth is only realised when what we have is taken away. By which time regrets are too late.
March 22nd, 2022 08:01
Portals in the mind
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.
March 18th, 2022 12:30
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.
March 18th, 2022 12:30
Portals in the mind
Goldfinch60 said:
That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:39
Portals in the mind
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between
March 17th, 2022 13:18
Crowns4Christ said:
That\'s the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between
March 17th, 2022 13:18
Portals in the mind
Rocky Lagou said:
A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 13:00
Rocky Lagou said:
A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!
March 17th, 2022 13:00
Portals in the mind
dusk arising said:
Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn\'t available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.
March 17th, 2022 12:25
dusk arising said:
Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn\'t available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.
March 17th, 2022 12:25
Portals in the mind
Christina8 said:
Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it\'s warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Christina8 said:
Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it\'s warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!
March 17th, 2022 09:55
Before I push it away again
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, your wonderful life is becoming part of you now, yes there are memories that will never go but always look forward into the new life you are creating.
Andy
March 16th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan, your wonderful life is becoming part of you now, yes there are memories that will never go but always look forward into the new life you are creating.
Andy
March 16th, 2022 02:11
Before I push it away again
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Before I push it away again
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
A day late or is it!
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness always be with Dan.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness always be with Dan.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 03:05
A day late or is it!
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,once again Dan,you use your words beautifully
March 9th, 2022 19:53
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,once again Dan,you use your words beautifully
March 9th, 2022 19:53
A day late or is it!
spilleronsheet said:
I missed the date
So I couldn’t ink
But I guess all the poets did justice to the special day
You as well inked the words of gratitude and love for the world so well dear Poetic Dan
March 9th, 2022 14:42
spilleronsheet said:
I missed the date
So I couldn’t ink
But I guess all the poets did justice to the special day
You as well inked the words of gratitude and love for the world so well dear Poetic Dan
March 9th, 2022 14:42
A day late or is it!
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful tribute to ladies everywhere, thank you for sharing, dan!!
March 9th, 2022 08:39
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful tribute to ladies everywhere, thank you for sharing, dan!!
March 9th, 2022 08:39
Another soul returns home (sad)
Neville said:
this is far more than just a poem Dan, it is a prayer, a song & a splendid dedication & tribute to someone who once shone briefly and bright, not only your life, but I imagine in so many other peoples lives also ... Neville
March 7th, 2022 09:36
Neville said:
this is far more than just a poem Dan, it is a prayer, a song & a splendid dedication & tribute to someone who once shone briefly and bright, not only your life, but I imagine in so many other peoples lives also ... Neville
March 7th, 2022 09:36
Burning light
Fay Slimm. said:
Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks for sharing them.
March 5th, 2022 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks for sharing them.
March 5th, 2022 04:57
Burning light
Crowns4Christ said:
All we can really ever be is ourselves take one step at a time
March 5th, 2022 04:53
Crowns4Christ said:
All we can really ever be is ourselves take one step at a time
March 5th, 2022 04:53
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