Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Responsibility flew away
Caring dove said:
Lol . I like your act of self kindness in your comments .. it’s nice to respect yourself . I’m taking a bit of a break from posting poems on here but I wanted to comment on your poem .
A good writing Dan .. I’m sure two weeks will fly by .. sorry that you miss them .
You know .. darkness can be turned into light and we can move through some of our feelings just by writing . Or atleast a little . It can be healing , I find
Take care ))
April 25th, 2022 09:11
Caring dove said:
Lol . I like your act of self kindness in your comments .. it’s nice to respect yourself . I’m taking a bit of a break from posting poems on here but I wanted to comment on your poem .
A good writing Dan .. I’m sure two weeks will fly by .. sorry that you miss them .
You know .. darkness can be turned into light and we can move through some of our feelings just by writing . Or atleast a little . It can be healing , I find
Take care ))
April 25th, 2022 09:11
Responsibility flew away
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Dan, the sweetest part of life is your child, I wish them the best and a safe flight,
Te amo meu amigo,
April 25th, 2022 09:06
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Dan, the sweetest part of life is your child, I wish them the best and a safe flight,
Te amo meu amigo,
April 25th, 2022 09:06
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
spilleronsheet said:
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
April 13th, 2022 01:28
spilleronsheet said:
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
April 13th, 2022 01:28
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
L. B. Mek said:
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom\'s, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
April 12th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom\'s, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
April 12th, 2022 06:13
Why my poetry exists
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery
and yes, we All
should learn
to: \'Utilise our Art\'
for ourselves, first..
what an exemplary message to promote
thank you, dear Poet
April 12th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery
and yes, we All
should learn
to: \'Utilise our Art\'
for ourselves, first..
what an exemplary message to promote
thank you, dear Poet
April 12th, 2022 06:09
Letting nature describe
L. B. Mek said:
\'The worthiness
to follow and be that guide, putting
the need for harmony, in my stride\'..
Amen!
April 12th, 2022 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'The worthiness
to follow and be that guide, putting
the need for harmony, in my stride\'..
Amen!
April 12th, 2022 06:05
Easy to say, another to be or do
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bring my mind back to the body in spirit to feel whole\'
its so hard to differentiate
between our mind\'s, anxieties
warping our reality
and us, just being life weary...
that\'s why we need, those tools in life
to centre ourselves, when we\'re lost
to those winds of chaos and strife..
stay strong, dear poet
entrust your evidently abundant, wisdom
to guide you
through those choppy waters of life
April 12th, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bring my mind back to the body in spirit to feel whole\'
its so hard to differentiate
between our mind\'s, anxieties
warping our reality
and us, just being life weary...
that\'s why we need, those tools in life
to centre ourselves, when we\'re lost
to those winds of chaos and strife..
stay strong, dear poet
entrust your evidently abundant, wisdom
to guide you
through those choppy waters of life
April 12th, 2022 06:03
I don\'t wear sunglasses
L. B. Mek said:
that first line said it all!
(sorry for my tardiness, my friend)
April 12th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
that first line said it all!
(sorry for my tardiness, my friend)
April 12th, 2022 05:58
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
Crowns4Christ said:
Life can and will be overwhelming at times,but the precious moments make the overwhelming times worth it,all we can really do is live life to it\'s fullest, appreciate the little things and live enjoy every day as if its the last,
Great write Dan,no matter what, the world still goes on and keeps spinning, keep writing my friend,
Many blessings to you and your family
April 11th, 2022 14:16
Crowns4Christ said:
Life can and will be overwhelming at times,but the precious moments make the overwhelming times worth it,all we can really do is live life to it\'s fullest, appreciate the little things and live enjoy every day as if its the last,
Great write Dan,no matter what, the world still goes on and keeps spinning, keep writing my friend,
Many blessings to you and your family
April 11th, 2022 14:16
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
Christina8 said:
That was definitely an optimistic ending, I loved it!!!
April 11th, 2022 09:56
Christina8 said:
That was definitely an optimistic ending, I loved it!!!
April 11th, 2022 09:56
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. So so beautiful. Life is so full of purpose seeking and just finding a reason (a reason for life, a reason for the now, or a reason to live.) But I enjoy your optimistic finale. We\'re all coloring the world one stroke at a time.
April 11th, 2022 08:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. So so beautiful. Life is so full of purpose seeking and just finding a reason (a reason for life, a reason for the now, or a reason to live.) But I enjoy your optimistic finale. We\'re all coloring the world one stroke at a time.
April 11th, 2022 08:51
Why my poetry exists
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Poetry is such a great outlet for our emotions and our thoughts and I adore this one! It feels reassuring to know we always have a refuge in poetry!
April 11th, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Poetry is such a great outlet for our emotions and our thoughts and I adore this one! It feels reassuring to know we always have a refuge in poetry!
April 11th, 2022 08:24
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
dusk arising said:
Great Video, yours always are.
Wassup Dan? You say you wanted the day to be over at 9am but you don\'t say why. Or don\'t you know why?
Everyone\'s life is still in the making till they cross to the other side and everyone has to deal with whatever that roll of the dice dealt them.
You\'ve got a lot more going for you than a lot of folk m8.
April 11th, 2022 08:13
dusk arising said:
Great Video, yours always are.
Wassup Dan? You say you wanted the day to be over at 9am but you don\'t say why. Or don\'t you know why?
Everyone\'s life is still in the making till they cross to the other side and everyone has to deal with whatever that roll of the dice dealt them.
You\'ve got a lot more going for you than a lot of folk m8.
April 11th, 2022 08:13
Why my poetry exists
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautiful words . The way you pour your soul is really unique. Enjoy your salad
April 10th, 2022 20:54
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautiful words . The way you pour your soul is really unique. Enjoy your salad
April 10th, 2022 20:54
Why my poetry exists
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful and fun read
The title totally caught me
Cause I resonate therein so much
MPS truly a home
And the note you mentioned so sweet, thanks for stopping by
It surely feels great
April 10th, 2022 14:35
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful and fun read
The title totally caught me
Cause I resonate therein so much
MPS truly a home
And the note you mentioned so sweet, thanks for stopping by
It surely feels great
April 10th, 2022 14:35
Why my poetry exists
Bella Shepard said:
So often the words roll around in our heads before we have the courage to speak them. To find a home such as this wonderful place, where no one judges, but accepts and understands is a gift. Your words are your feelings, let them run free. Good Write!
April 10th, 2022 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
So often the words roll around in our heads before we have the courage to speak them. To find a home such as this wonderful place, where no one judges, but accepts and understands is a gift. Your words are your feelings, let them run free. Good Write!
April 10th, 2022 12:49
Why my poetry exists
Crowns4Christ said:
Definitely an escape from everyday life, poetry has a way of releasing our pent up energy, and get our thoughts on paper or screen can help us work through our issues,, makes us realize things that we miss in our minds
April 10th, 2022 12:22
Crowns4Christ said:
Definitely an escape from everyday life, poetry has a way of releasing our pent up energy, and get our thoughts on paper or screen can help us work through our issues,, makes us realize things that we miss in our minds
April 10th, 2022 12:22
Why my poetry exists
dusk arising said:
Maybe you write to show the world that there is something in you the world cannot see but you want it to be seen.
Maybe it\'s the soft centre of you crying out to be shared because the people you meet day to day just cannot see that you are the big hearted person we see in your words and vids.
April 10th, 2022 11:07
dusk arising said:
Maybe you write to show the world that there is something in you the world cannot see but you want it to be seen.
Maybe it\'s the soft centre of you crying out to be shared because the people you meet day to day just cannot see that you are the big hearted person we see in your words and vids.
April 10th, 2022 11:07
Why my poetry exists
Michael Edwards said:
And may you always be dancing in salads PD - poignant write much
enjoyed.
April 10th, 2022 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
And may you always be dancing in salads PD - poignant write much
enjoyed.
April 10th, 2022 10:34
Why my poetry exists
Christina8 said:
Its a poignant write but I hope you feel better now that you\'ve written it! Great one, Christina
April 10th, 2022 08:24
Christina8 said:
Its a poignant write but I hope you feel better now that you\'ve written it! Great one, Christina
April 10th, 2022 08:24
Why my poetry exists
Neville said:
I\'m firmly with Violet bluebell .. this is indeed a great poem Dan .. I hope you feel better for getting it off your chest and out into the open my friend .. am keeping my fingers crossed anyway .. stay safe and be well sir ................... Neville
April 10th, 2022 02:21
Neville said:
I\'m firmly with Violet bluebell .. this is indeed a great poem Dan .. I hope you feel better for getting it off your chest and out into the open my friend .. am keeping my fingers crossed anyway .. stay safe and be well sir ................... Neville
April 10th, 2022 02:21
Why my poetry exists
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , in the first two verses .
April 10th, 2022 02:00
Caring dove said:
Interesting words , in the first two verses .
April 10th, 2022 02:00
Why my poetry exists
Caring dove said:
Great poem Dan ! Yes , I feel this is my ‘ home ‘ too . ‘ the rest of my days can be dancing in salads ‘ love that line 🙂 I think this is why many write .. to deal with how their feeling , I know writing can help me sometimes ..
April 10th, 2022 01:58
Caring dove said:
Great poem Dan ! Yes , I feel this is my ‘ home ‘ too . ‘ the rest of my days can be dancing in salads ‘ love that line 🙂 I think this is why many write .. to deal with how their feeling , I know writing can help me sometimes ..
April 10th, 2022 01:58
Letting nature describe
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those smiles will be forever with you Dan.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those smiles will be forever with you Dan.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:31
Letting nature describe
Bella Shepard said:
I found myself smiling throughout this delightful video, and poem. Finding joy in each day of life, no matter what you do, is a gift. I see that joy in smile of a beautiful child and the dad who loves her.
April 8th, 2022 14:19
Bella Shepard said:
I found myself smiling throughout this delightful video, and poem. Finding joy in each day of life, no matter what you do, is a gift. I see that joy in smile of a beautiful child and the dad who loves her.
April 8th, 2022 14:19
Letting nature describe
dusk arising said:
Cor! I hope you are keeping all these videos cos in twenty or more years time you\'ll look back on words and vids with a different head on. A proud head.
Stay fit and healthy Dan.
April 8th, 2022 11:50
dusk arising said:
Cor! I hope you are keeping all these videos cos in twenty or more years time you\'ll look back on words and vids with a different head on. A proud head.
Stay fit and healthy Dan.
April 8th, 2022 11:50
Letting nature describe
Crowns4Christ said:
The journey that we take through life, makes all the struggles worth it, life is unpredictable and tough, but it\'s worth living to the fullest, thank you Dan
April 8th, 2022 10:43
Crowns4Christ said:
The journey that we take through life, makes all the struggles worth it, life is unpredictable and tough, but it\'s worth living to the fullest, thank you Dan
April 8th, 2022 10:43
Letting nature describe
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
Awesome video complemented by a great poem.
‘happiness is an adventure to bring back some smiles’…this is so true my friend.
Thank you for sharing.🙏🏻
Laura🌻
April 8th, 2022 07:53
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
Awesome video complemented by a great poem.
‘happiness is an adventure to bring back some smiles’…this is so true my friend.
Thank you for sharing.🙏🏻
Laura🌻
April 8th, 2022 07:53
Easy to say, another to be or do
Goldfinch60 said:
You had moved into a good time in your life Dan I am sure that you can get back to that wonderful place.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
You had moved into a good time in your life Dan I am sure that you can get back to that wonderful place.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:32
Easy to say, another to be or do
Crowns4Christ said:
Dan,you have the fight of a lion you just need to dig deep within yourself to find it,and the heart as gentle,, loving and hopeful as a dove,you have the support you need here on MPS
April 6th, 2022 18:13
Crowns4Christ said:
Dan,you have the fight of a lion you just need to dig deep within yourself to find it,and the heart as gentle,, loving and hopeful as a dove,you have the support you need here on MPS
April 6th, 2022 18:13
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