Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Here & now For a better finale
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Here and now once looked so far away\" . From your write I pick lessons from a life I haven\'t even lived. This is a powerful piece, PD. So much real life woven into it, with its ups and downs. This is definitely a favorite for me. Thank you sir.
January 8th, 2022 03:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
\"Here and now once looked so far away\" . From your write I pick lessons from a life I haven\'t even lived. This is a powerful piece, PD. So much real life woven into it, with its ups and downs. This is definitely a favorite for me. Thank you sir.
January 8th, 2022 03:07
Here & now For a better finale
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Dan, the finale of your life is going to be so very wonderful, it is so very good at the moment though, appreciate every moment of it.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful Dan, the finale of your life is going to be so very wonderful, it is so very good at the moment though, appreciate every moment of it.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 01:48
Here & now For a better finale
Rozina said:
Some sadness but so positive words now. Beautiful.
January 7th, 2022 23:11
Rozina said:
Some sadness but so positive words now. Beautiful.
January 7th, 2022 23:11
What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken
spilleronsheet said:
Congrats dear Dan….such a beautiful voice and it is for sure you must be proud….wonderful poetry dear poet
January 7th, 2022 21:44
spilleronsheet said:
Congrats dear Dan….such a beautiful voice and it is for sure you must be proud….wonderful poetry dear poet
January 7th, 2022 21:44
Here & now For a better finale
Eugene S. said:
A better finale is what we all need. Well expressed!
January 7th, 2022 19:44
Eugene S. said:
A better finale is what we all need. Well expressed!
January 7th, 2022 19:44
Here & now For a better finale
Saxon Crow said:
\'To try and give my love in part time showers.\' Words of genius that I can relate too. In fact the whole poem is relatable Dan. Brilliant.
January 7th, 2022 10:30
Saxon Crow said:
\'To try and give my love in part time showers.\' Words of genius that I can relate too. In fact the whole poem is relatable Dan. Brilliant.
January 7th, 2022 10:30
Here & now For a better finale
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing , Dan 🙂 I especially love these lines
My tears run down the valley and now meadows can be felt for miles
walking hand in hand with harmony.
Writing can be so helpful
I’m
Glad it helps you
Happy Friday to you ))
January 7th, 2022 07:44
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing , Dan 🙂 I especially love these lines
My tears run down the valley and now meadows can be felt for miles
walking hand in hand with harmony.
Writing can be so helpful
I’m
Glad it helps you
Happy Friday to you ))
January 7th, 2022 07:44
Here & now For a better finale
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
\'To try and give all my love in just a part time showers
Still grateful for marriage that started it off
but two homes were better than one
that didn\'t get along\'
January 7th, 2022 07:44
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
\'To try and give all my love in just a part time showers
Still grateful for marriage that started it off
but two homes were better than one
that didn\'t get along\'
January 7th, 2022 07:44
What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, she is going a long way in her life.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan, she is going a long way in her life.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:38
What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Your lucky , Dan and I bet she’s proud of herself . Thanks for sharing video .. she has a nice singing voice )
January 6th, 2022 15:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Your lucky , Dan and I bet she’s proud of herself . Thanks for sharing video .. she has a nice singing voice )
January 6th, 2022 15:07
What\'s truly earned can\'t be taken
dusk arising said:
Well that gal is gonna go far if thats only a 2nd open mike gig Dan. Now she should do some home/portastudio recordings to build the dynamics/mic tecnique which is never easy/impossible in a pub environment cos theres too much other noise going on. Great to see she\'s got the confidence. You\'re a proud dad eh?
January 6th, 2022 14:56
dusk arising said:
Well that gal is gonna go far if thats only a 2nd open mike gig Dan. Now she should do some home/portastudio recordings to build the dynamics/mic tecnique which is never easy/impossible in a pub environment cos theres too much other noise going on. Great to see she\'s got the confidence. You\'re a proud dad eh?
January 6th, 2022 14:56
Comfort in a name
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I especially love the last two lines , Dan )
It doesn’t always feel that way tho , that we can create because we feel we can .
I know I can certainly have times where I feel I can’t get to what I want .. and I don’t feel that sense of inner empowerment and strength .
January 6th, 2022 03:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I especially love the last two lines , Dan )
It doesn’t always feel that way tho , that we can create because we feel we can .
I know I can certainly have times where I feel I can’t get to what I want .. and I don’t feel that sense of inner empowerment and strength .
January 6th, 2022 03:18
Comfort in a name
Goldfinch60 said:
That magic has become part of you Dan and you are moving into a wonderful place in your life, and may it always be so.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That magic has become part of you Dan and you are moving into a wonderful place in your life, and may it always be so.
Andy
January 6th, 2022 01:35
Comfort in a name
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here\'s to more in the coming year.
January 5th, 2022 13:49
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing Dan - you have an accomplished pen and here\'s to more in the coming year.
January 5th, 2022 13:49
Comfort in a name
spilleronsheet said:
Very encouraging write
Good going dear poetic Dan
January 5th, 2022 13:09
spilleronsheet said:
Very encouraging write
Good going dear poetic Dan
January 5th, 2022 13:09
Fast lane thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
That knowledge gained is an absolute blessing in your life and it will lead you into an ever better future.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That knowledge gained is an absolute blessing in your life and it will lead you into an ever better future.
Andy
January 5th, 2022 01:46
Fast lane thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
Cheering loudly for this inspiring piece of wise knowledge on how to walk through dark to light Dan. Moving on when we are down and out is the way to learn more as this poem states. Thanking you most sincerely for sharing it.
January 4th, 2022 16:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Cheering loudly for this inspiring piece of wise knowledge on how to walk through dark to light Dan. Moving on when we are down and out is the way to learn more as this poem states. Thanking you most sincerely for sharing it.
January 4th, 2022 16:43
Fast lane thoughts
dusk arising said:
Who can we pass the buck to? Who should we pass it to? Would anyone accept it? Nope. We are stuck with it so better get on with being ourselves and fitting in where it\'s nice and comfy for everyone.
January 4th, 2022 15:14
dusk arising said:
Who can we pass the buck to? Who should we pass it to? Would anyone accept it? Nope. We are stuck with it so better get on with being ourselves and fitting in where it\'s nice and comfy for everyone.
January 4th, 2022 15:14
Fast lane thoughts
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your writings Dan .. and this is a good poem .. our inner child can be so hurt .. can’t they .
I know mine has been .
If we walk away on our own .. maybe because we feel unloved .. and not a nice feeling
Keep writing , ))
January 4th, 2022 11:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your writings Dan .. and this is a good poem .. our inner child can be so hurt .. can’t they .
I know mine has been .
If we walk away on our own .. maybe because we feel unloved .. and not a nice feeling
Keep writing , ))
January 4th, 2022 11:30
May I strut 2022 in my tune
spilleronsheet said:
A positive zeal is the required ingredient
Imperfect souls born yet striving our best is our need
And lets hustle bustle till we can
Cause only corpses can’t move in lanes
Great one dear poet
January 3rd, 2022 13:06
spilleronsheet said:
A positive zeal is the required ingredient
Imperfect souls born yet striving our best is our need
And lets hustle bustle till we can
Cause only corpses can’t move in lanes
Great one dear poet
January 3rd, 2022 13:06
May I strut 2022 in my tune
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, you have come a long way in your life and I am sure you will complete yourself into the person that you wish to become in a very short time.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, you have come a long way in your life and I am sure you will complete yourself into the person that you wish to become in a very short time.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:16
May I strut 2022 in my tune
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes it\'s also difficult to put into words but you\'ve done it - may 2022 bring all that you hope for.
January 2nd, 2022 15:48
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes it\'s also difficult to put into words but you\'ve done it - may 2022 bring all that you hope for.
January 2nd, 2022 15:48
May I strut 2022 in my tune
dusk arising said:
You\'ll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim reaper can finish us, but we\'re never complete.
That\'s just the way of it .... compromise is key... i.e. coming to terms with our failings and not beating ourselves up over them... we are humans, there never was a perfect human (except me of course).
January 2nd, 2022 06:58
dusk arising said:
You\'ll never complete yourself my friend, none of us do..... the grim reaper can finish us, but we\'re never complete.
That\'s just the way of it .... compromise is key... i.e. coming to terms with our failings and not beating ourselves up over them... we are humans, there never was a perfect human (except me of course).
January 2nd, 2022 06:58
May I strut 2022 in my tune
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing , Dan 🙂 finding balance within is important and finding ourselves .
January 2nd, 2022 03:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing , Dan 🙂 finding balance within is important and finding ourselves .
January 2nd, 2022 03:25
Tomorrow\'s day is hers
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dancing in the moonlight be forever with you both Dan and your love be forever with her.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dancing in the moonlight be forever with you both Dan and your love be forever with her.
Andy
December 31st, 2021 01:39
Tomorrow\'s day is hers
dusk arising said:
Love is life. Life is love.
Someone who levels our life with their love is a gift beyond worth. Cherish!
December 30th, 2021 17:19
dusk arising said:
Love is life. Life is love.
Someone who levels our life with their love is a gift beyond worth. Cherish!
December 30th, 2021 17:19
Tomorrow\'s day is hers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
‘ as wild as dancing with you in moonlight ‘
Lovely words .. Dan )
December 30th, 2021 11:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
‘ as wild as dancing with you in moonlight ‘
Lovely words .. Dan )
December 30th, 2021 11:33
The circle of wipe
Goldfinch60 said:
That humour in life must always be at the forefront of our lives Dan, it can bring so much happiness to all.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That humour in life must always be at the forefront of our lives Dan, it can bring so much happiness to all.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 02:13
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