Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Inch by inch the moment you landed
dusk arising said:

The love you get is equal to the love you give. You\'ve lots to give - tis plain to see.

February 26th, 2022 18:50

Inch by inch the moment you landed
Rozina said:

A lovely poem. Very touching words.

February 26th, 2022 17:26

Inch by inch the moment you landed
Crowns4Christ said:

So beautiful Dan, truly written from your heart

February 26th, 2022 16:15

I give it away
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Dan but you know you have the light within you, you have moved on so far in your life that this is just a blip that will soon be behind you.

Andy

February 25th, 2022 01:42

I give it away
Crowns4Christ said:

I really like this Dan, thank you my friend for opening your heart

February 24th, 2022 22:29

I give it away
Doggerel Dave said:

I definitely feel you have, as expressed in the poem, resolved something conclusively and are moving forward. Thanks for that, Dan - there\'s a lot of strength in there.

February 24th, 2022 20:43

I give it away
Christina8 said:

Hi Dan! Wonderful write, but I love the last line about giving the guilt to the sun moon and stars. Good advice!

February 24th, 2022 19:52

Passed on the left
Goldfinch60 said:

May that sunshine always be in your life Dan.

Andy

February 24th, 2022 01:40

Passed on the left
Rozina said:

Great lines. Let the sun shine in. All the best to you.

February 24th, 2022 00:44

Passed on the left
spilleronsheet said:

The sun is right behind my dear friend
It’s aura surrounds you
So rise and shine
I can see magic spreading from your pen

February 23rd, 2022 16:10

Passed on the left
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes Dan! Live your life man! Be happy and focus on the bright side of things! Great poem! 💖

February 23rd, 2022 11:02

Passed on the left
dusk arising said:

Great stuff Dan..... here you express our moods and how they change. It\'s clear to see here that you definitely do have a positive outlook.

February 23rd, 2022 09:49

Keep sailing on
spilleronsheet said:

An intriguing poetry
Laced with lines of inner reflection
The deep insights that contours, very well crafted dear poet
I agree in many folds on the lines that you wrote…

February 22nd, 2022 03:17

Keep sailing on
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dan and so true but what we must do is grab every moment we have with both hands and enjoy every one of them.

Andy

February 22nd, 2022 01:46

Keep sailing on
Neville said:


filled to the point of overflowing with universal truths ... tis nowt short of brill Dan and I aint talking fish ... N :)

February 21st, 2022 16:07

A little Thank you
Goldfinch60 said:

That glow will become brighter in your life Dan, you have come a long way and all is going to be wonderful.

Andy

February 21st, 2022 02:05

A little Thank you
Rozina said:

Encouragement and positive input gives us all the motivation to continue. Your message is true.

February 21st, 2022 00:39

A little Thank you
Neville said:



simply sensational sir ... a great message & gesture combined .. N :)

February 20th, 2022 16:02

Adventuring on
Rozina said:

Great adventure, enjoying nature. Lovely lines indeed.

February 18th, 2022 03:19

Adventuring on
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

‘As we\'re all waiting for our time to go adventuring in this world.’

Ah…such prophetic words are making me wonder and think of this new unforeseen adventure of mine which has begun. Always a pleasure to read your work.

Thank you for sharing.

Laura🌻





February 17th, 2022 12:54

Adventuring on
Rocky Lagou said:

Wanderlust encapsulated in one beautiful poem. As a gypsy myself I felt this poem! 👏❣

February 16th, 2022 09:51

Adventuring on
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dan, just keep on adventuring in your life.

Andy

February 16th, 2022 01:53

Adventuring on
spilleronsheet said:

An epic tale
Another fantasy
Another journey
Giving positive vibes
Welcoming the spring in its blooming time
Well crafted dear Poetic Dan

February 15th, 2022 15:28

Adventuring on
L. B. Mek said:

(when I so your name
a smile as wide as my screen
glued itself to my face,
when I read your words
a drop of solace, as weighty
as my love for poetry
settled itself within me..)
from one \'tadpole\'
(awaiting those promised adventures)
to a true Poet
who shines bright and shows us
how to make everyday an adventure,
I thank you, brother
for your words of impassioned resolve and hope!
a great write, my friend


February 15th, 2022 05:35

Adventuring on
Caring dove said:

Great writing , Dan ! 🙂 I love this ..

February 15th, 2022 03:33

It can be fun!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Dan.

Andy

February 15th, 2022 01:56

It can be fun!
spilleronsheet said:

A fun read
Took me on a trail of walking carefree
Watching them play
Great rhyme dear poetic Dan, cause I hardly rhyme…..

February 15th, 2022 00:55

It can be fun!
Rozina said:

I like your rhyming poem. It was fun to read.

February 14th, 2022 21:44

It can be fun!
Crowns4Christ said:

This is so cute Dan

February 14th, 2022 17:19

It can be fun!
Rocky Lagou said:

OK, apart from me finding the first line ironic when linking it to the image above. \"A dog under the sun\" This was witty and fun. Rhyming is such a joyful tool. 👏

February 14th, 2022 14:21



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