Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful symbolism and metaphor, sweet Teddy.an
July 24th, 2024 21:35
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful symbolism and metaphor, sweet Teddy.an
July 24th, 2024 21:35
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
MendedFences27 said:
The third stanza hit me the hardest.
The entire poem is masterful. It brings loneliness and grief, a missed someone, to its greatest height. Throughout your poem many tender moments are reproduced. The reader watches as one struggles with grief through loneliness of a departed lover. Very, very sad. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:27
MendedFences27 said:
The third stanza hit me the hardest.
The entire poem is masterful. It brings loneliness and grief, a missed someone, to its greatest height. Throughout your poem many tender moments are reproduced. The reader watches as one struggles with grief through loneliness of a departed lover. Very, very sad. - Phil A.
July 24th, 2024 15:27
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Bella Shepard said:
You express the feeling of profound emptiness so tangibly in this poem, as everything you encounter is a sad reminder. So beautifully written dear friend.!
July 24th, 2024 13:24
Bella Shepard said:
You express the feeling of profound emptiness so tangibly in this poem, as everything you encounter is a sad reminder. So beautifully written dear friend.!
July 24th, 2024 13:24
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
aDarkerMind said:
sad....yes.
but how beautifully put in words Teddy.
brought a tear to my eye...
bless you.
July 24th, 2024 09:48
aDarkerMind said:
sad....yes.
but how beautifully put in words Teddy.
brought a tear to my eye...
bless you.
July 24th, 2024 09:48
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Thoughtless said:
Grief is so personal and experienced so differently by each individual. It never goes away. But the joy of better times is a balm for it. After more than eight years, I still miss my wife. But joy does grow our of grief and the love we had for each other. Your poem- Well done.
July 24th, 2024 06:45
Thoughtless said:
Grief is so personal and experienced so differently by each individual. It never goes away. But the joy of better times is a balm for it. After more than eight years, I still miss my wife. But joy does grow our of grief and the love we had for each other. Your poem- Well done.
July 24th, 2024 06:45
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
sorenbarrett said:
I am slow to come to realizations but it became apparent in this poem that your poetry is not just from the metaphor or image and symbolism but from the emotion evoked woven into the images and metaphors tying them together and weaving them into a single tapestry. Most beautiful in its sad forlornness.
July 24th, 2024 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
I am slow to come to realizations but it became apparent in this poem that your poetry is not just from the metaphor or image and symbolism but from the emotion evoked woven into the images and metaphors tying them together and weaving them into a single tapestry. Most beautiful in its sad forlornness.
July 24th, 2024 06:18
Stars
Caring dove said:
Very lovely .. beautiful writing . Like your gentle way with words
July 24th, 2024 02:57
Caring dove said:
Very lovely .. beautiful writing . Like your gentle way with words
July 24th, 2024 02:57
There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge
Caring dove said:
Very sad writing .. yet well expressed , teddy
July 24th, 2024 02:54
Caring dove said:
Very sad writing .. yet well expressed , teddy
July 24th, 2024 02:54
Poet\'s True Worth
Bella Shepard said:
It gave me more than a chuckle, the perfect senyru and the perfect pic. I love the self satisfied smile on his face. You made me feel the emotion of happiness,dear poetess, and I thank you!
July 23rd, 2024 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
It gave me more than a chuckle, the perfect senyru and the perfect pic. I love the self satisfied smile on his face. You made me feel the emotion of happiness,dear poetess, and I thank you!
July 23rd, 2024 13:20
Poet\'s True Worth
MendedFences27 said:
If writing in \"Word,\" just highlight the entire poem and select the centered justified format.
I think I knew Art once, a former neighbor who sat out on his patio and never mowed his lawn, just drank a lot of beer and listened to his music.
A very fine description of poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:10
MendedFences27 said:
If writing in \"Word,\" just highlight the entire poem and select the centered justified format.
I think I knew Art once, a former neighbor who sat out on his patio and never mowed his lawn, just drank a lot of beer and listened to his music.
A very fine description of poetry. - Phil A.
July 23rd, 2024 12:10
Poet\'s True Worth
sorenbarrett said:
So true Teddy it is the first measure I use in my definition of art. One of the best Haiku\'s I\'ve seen. I truly love this one friend.
July 23rd, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
So true Teddy it is the first measure I use in my definition of art. One of the best Haiku\'s I\'ve seen. I truly love this one friend.
July 23rd, 2024 05:48
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad words Teddy, I do hope that this is just some very good words and not the way you really feel.
Andy
July 23rd, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad words Teddy, I do hope that this is just some very good words and not the way you really feel.
Andy
July 23rd, 2024 01:48
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Dan Williams said:
Wow, I thought I was negative. I agree and appreciate a fellow pessimist. Good work.
July 22nd, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Wow, I thought I was negative. I agree and appreciate a fellow pessimist. Good work.
July 22nd, 2024 23:36
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
MendedFences27 said:
I was feeling helpless today and your poem hit me hard. It\'s a feeling not exactly like mine, but I surely felt the tone of your poem A beautifully expressed poem of trust and the loss of it. - Phil A.
July 22nd, 2024 17:31
MendedFences27 said:
I was feeling helpless today and your poem hit me hard. It\'s a feeling not exactly like mine, but I surely felt the tone of your poem A beautifully expressed poem of trust and the loss of it. - Phil A.
July 22nd, 2024 17:31
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Bella Shepard said:
I share your sentiment Teddy, trust seems to be a word missing from our vocabulary these days. Beautifully expressed my friend.
July 22nd, 2024 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
I share your sentiment Teddy, trust seems to be a word missing from our vocabulary these days. Beautifully expressed my friend.
July 22nd, 2024 14:11
My Giant
sorenbarrett said:
Something always with us that we can not loose. A comforting thought and a wonderful poem.
July 22nd, 2024 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
Something always with us that we can not loose. A comforting thought and a wonderful poem.
July 22nd, 2024 12:52
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
aDarkerMind said:
losing trust in people....
a subject I am very close to Teddy.
I couldn\'t have written it any better.
July 22nd, 2024 12:12
aDarkerMind said:
losing trust in people....
a subject I am very close to Teddy.
I couldn\'t have written it any better.
July 22nd, 2024 12:12
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Thomas W Case said:
Sometimes in life, it gets so rough, that we stop trusting. Well done, sweet Teddy.
July 22nd, 2024 10:45
Thomas W Case said:
Sometimes in life, it gets so rough, that we stop trusting. Well done, sweet Teddy.
July 22nd, 2024 10:45
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
Doggerel Dave said:
There may quite possibly be a relevant entry in DSM5 - ask Neville , he may be able to provide some advice.
In the meantime, an intriguing write, Teddy.
July 22nd, 2024 07:05
Doggerel Dave said:
There may quite possibly be a relevant entry in DSM5 - ask Neville , he may be able to provide some advice.
In the meantime, an intriguing write, Teddy.
July 22nd, 2024 07:05
A Life Lesson In Tapestry
sorenbarrett said:
A most mournful poem that strikes to the heart. Have felt this way and been there. As I have always maintained, anything that strikes the heart in any way is poetry. Lovely
July 22nd, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
A most mournful poem that strikes to the heart. Have felt this way and been there. As I have always maintained, anything that strikes the heart in any way is poetry. Lovely
July 22nd, 2024 05:49
Summoning of a Gentle Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
A great use of diametrically opposed to create a unified message. A wonderful write.
July 20th, 2024 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
A great use of diametrically opposed to create a unified message. A wonderful write.
July 20th, 2024 11:35
So I Can Finally Become Me
Thad Wilk said:
Sounds so romantic, magical and
refreshing to me! ❤️
Poetic perfection,
penned mellifluously! 🎵 🎶 🎶
Best wishes poetess! 🌹 ✌️
Thad
July 20th, 2024 09:35
Thad Wilk said:
Sounds so romantic, magical and
refreshing to me! ❤️
Poetic perfection,
penned mellifluously! 🎵 🎶 🎶
Best wishes poetess! 🌹 ✌️
Thad
July 20th, 2024 09:35
So I Can Finally Become Me
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message to both a potential love and the love for oneself set in stunning images of nature in all her grandeurs.
July 20th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message to both a potential love and the love for oneself set in stunning images of nature in all her grandeurs.
July 20th, 2024 06:06
So I Can Finally Become Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy and I know for a fact that when you are with the one you love life makes you become as one.
Andy
July 20th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy and I know for a fact that when you are with the one you love life makes you become as one.
Andy
July 20th, 2024 01:11
The Great Moon and The Baubab
Dan Williams said:
Keep going. I\'m sure you have more to say.
July 19th, 2024 23:52
Dan Williams said:
Keep going. I\'m sure you have more to say.
July 19th, 2024 23:52
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