Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
From Florence With Love
Bella Shepard said:
The sweetness of your words soothes the soul, and creates beautiful images in the mind. The second stanza begs to be read again, and again. A true work of art, dedicated to the capital of arts.
March 4th, 2024 12:41
Bella Shepard said:
The sweetness of your words soothes the soul, and creates beautiful images in the mind. The second stanza begs to be read again, and again. A true work of art, dedicated to the capital of arts.
March 4th, 2024 12:41
Slumberbash
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful place, your slumberbash! The picture, the stuff dreams are made of. Beautiful dear Teddy. The perfect pick-me-up I needed today.
March 4th, 2024 12:29
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful place, your slumberbash! The picture, the stuff dreams are made of. Beautiful dear Teddy. The perfect pick-me-up I needed today.
March 4th, 2024 12:29
Grieving Heart
Accidental Poet said:
They say, \"What doesn\'t kill you, only makes you stronger\". Almost, makes me feel sorry for anyone who pisses you off Teddy. 😉👍
March 4th, 2024 10:41
Accidental Poet said:
They say, \"What doesn\'t kill you, only makes you stronger\". Almost, makes me feel sorry for anyone who pisses you off Teddy. 😉👍
March 4th, 2024 10:41
Grieving Heart
Doggerel Dave said:
Your way of poeticising contradictions very much in evidence here, Teddy. The most helpful of reassurance is the simple advice/information that it will get better or less intense in the end. Very humane. Thanks for another good \'un.
March 4th, 2024 06:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Your way of poeticising contradictions very much in evidence here, Teddy. The most helpful of reassurance is the simple advice/information that it will get better or less intense in the end. Very humane. Thanks for another good \'un.
March 4th, 2024 06:13
Grieving Heart
Tom Dylan said:
Such a powerful poem, Teddy. I really felt this one.
March 4th, 2024 05:24
Tom Dylan said:
Such a powerful poem, Teddy. I really felt this one.
March 4th, 2024 05:24
Grieving Heart
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a clear sign indeed but in the winds and rain (tears) of grief we can get lost. I am glad you found the road with light.
March 4th, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a clear sign indeed but in the winds and rain (tears) of grief we can get lost. I am glad you found the road with light.
March 4th, 2024 04:47
Unbounded
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Teddy and I am sure that many on this site will crew that boat so that nothing bad happens when you sail on the ocean of joy.
Andy
March 4th, 2024 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Teddy and I am sure that many on this site will crew that boat so that nothing bad happens when you sail on the ocean of joy.
Andy
March 4th, 2024 02:17
Unbounded
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful thoughts in beautiful words. Wistful in nature almost surreal.
March 3rd, 2024 21:41
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful thoughts in beautiful words. Wistful in nature almost surreal.
March 3rd, 2024 21:41
Unbounded
Thomas W Case said:
Oh wow. Tremendous question we all must ask. Great work.
March 3rd, 2024 17:38
Thomas W Case said:
Oh wow. Tremendous question we all must ask. Great work.
March 3rd, 2024 17:38
Unbounded
Thoughtless said:
Without a mast, you need a motor. Good set of metaphors. All ships have a crew, so one must be implied.
March 3rd, 2024 17:33
Thoughtless said:
Without a mast, you need a motor. Good set of metaphors. All ships have a crew, so one must be implied.
March 3rd, 2024 17:33
Unbounded
Doggerel Dave said:
Full of metaphorical agony. And since I\'ve always claimed to not understand metaphor, I\'m going to stay with that but hope you don\'t tear yourself apart but charge forward and give us more poems.
(This one\'s OK even😉)
March 3rd, 2024 16:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Full of metaphorical agony. And since I\'ve always claimed to not understand metaphor, I\'m going to stay with that but hope you don\'t tear yourself apart but charge forward and give us more poems.
(This one\'s OK even😉)
March 3rd, 2024 16:50
Unbounded
Neville said:
in succinct poetic terms you have clearly gone overboard ..
a dramatic end Teddy but not on my watch ..
you got eons left in you yet Pet .. 🌹Neville
March 3rd, 2024 13:03
Neville said:
in succinct poetic terms you have clearly gone overboard ..
a dramatic end Teddy but not on my watch ..
you got eons left in you yet Pet .. 🌹Neville
March 3rd, 2024 13:03
Unbounded
peto said:
When you\'re good
You\'re good
Some great lines in here Teddy
The last 2 in particular
Great read
March 3rd, 2024 12:45
peto said:
When you\'re good
You\'re good
Some great lines in here Teddy
The last 2 in particular
Great read
March 3rd, 2024 12:45
Unbounded
Accidental Poet said:
As I gently blow a gust of poetic wind to carry you through your life, I wish you the very best life can bring to you dearest Teddy and keep your quill wet. 🫂
March 3rd, 2024 12:07
Accidental Poet said:
As I gently blow a gust of poetic wind to carry you through your life, I wish you the very best life can bring to you dearest Teddy and keep your quill wet. 🫂
March 3rd, 2024 12:07
From Florence With Love
rhmn_7 said:
You just reminded me of my trip to Florence some years ago (thanks for that), very inspiring poem!
March 3rd, 2024 08:11
rhmn_7 said:
You just reminded me of my trip to Florence some years ago (thanks for that), very inspiring poem!
March 3rd, 2024 08:11
Slumberbashing with Raven
Cloie said:
This poem feels like a gentle nudge from a caring friend, guiding you to embrace your authenticity and recognize the beauty in your everyday moments. It\'s a heartwarming reminder that you are seen and appreciated just as you are. Marvelous!
March 2nd, 2024 11:09
Cloie said:
This poem feels like a gentle nudge from a caring friend, guiding you to embrace your authenticity and recognize the beauty in your everyday moments. It\'s a heartwarming reminder that you are seen and appreciated just as you are. Marvelous!
March 2nd, 2024 11:09
Eruption
sorenbarrett said:
Love is not only at the top but also at the bottom. It is the underlying foundation of all things, what holds reason up and keeps meaning standing. So if you look you will find it top and bottom, inside and out. Loved the poem Teddy
March 2nd, 2024 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
Love is not only at the top but also at the bottom. It is the underlying foundation of all things, what holds reason up and keeps meaning standing. So if you look you will find it top and bottom, inside and out. Loved the poem Teddy
March 2nd, 2024 09:23
Slumberbashing with Raven
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t often do this, Teddy - quote from the poem above , but here
\'the day is now your follower
and today she\'ll be with you\'
somehow clicked and I will see the day slightly differently in future...
PS You will get \'slumberbash\' into the dictionary yet....... 😊
March 2nd, 2024 06:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t often do this, Teddy - quote from the poem above , but here
\'the day is now your follower
and today she\'ll be with you\'
somehow clicked and I will see the day slightly differently in future...
PS You will get \'slumberbash\' into the dictionary yet....... 😊
March 2nd, 2024 06:58
Slumberbashing with Raven
Neville said:
if you ever feel like slumberbashing please give us a call ..
On a more serious note .. you really have excelled here Teddy the whole thing is from a poetry perspective rather special .. and the image that heads the page extraordinary .. Neville ..
ps .. have you still got my number .. 🌹
March 2nd, 2024 04:16
Neville said:
if you ever feel like slumberbashing please give us a call ..
On a more serious note .. you really have excelled here Teddy the whole thing is from a poetry perspective rather special .. and the image that heads the page extraordinary .. Neville ..
ps .. have you still got my number .. 🌹
March 2nd, 2024 04:16
Slumberbashing with Raven
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem Teddy, I totally agree with your raven.
Andy
March 2nd, 2024 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem Teddy, I totally agree with your raven.
Andy
March 2nd, 2024 02:10
Slumberbashing with Raven
Accidental Poet said:
And others can\'t help but smile at your own beauty. 🌹
March 2nd, 2024 01:57
Accidental Poet said:
And others can\'t help but smile at your own beauty. 🌹
March 2nd, 2024 01:57
Slumberbashing with Raven
sorenbarrett said:
\"the day is now your follower
and today she\'ll be with you\"
Loved these lines that though simple seemed so much to belong to each other like pieces of a puzzle and one piece of logic that follows another. Very nice Teddy.
March 1st, 2024 22:11
sorenbarrett said:
\"the day is now your follower
and today she\'ll be with you\"
Loved these lines that though simple seemed so much to belong to each other like pieces of a puzzle and one piece of logic that follows another. Very nice Teddy.
March 1st, 2024 22:11
Slumberbashing with Raven
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work Teddy. Very well crafted.
March 1st, 2024 18:37
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work Teddy. Very well crafted.
March 1st, 2024 18:37
Slumberbashing with Raven
peto said:
Ah dreams
Talking ravens and distant memories
So much to enjoy
Yet
All I wonder is the colour of your finest shoes
We see you as you really are Teddy
A much loved friend to all here
Keep smiling
It\'s infectious
March 1st, 2024 14:03
peto said:
Ah dreams
Talking ravens and distant memories
So much to enjoy
Yet
All I wonder is the colour of your finest shoes
We see you as you really are Teddy
A much loved friend to all here
Keep smiling
It\'s infectious
March 1st, 2024 14:03
From Florence With Love
Cassie58 said:
A passionate write dear Teddy. Rich with description and metaphor. I haven’t visited Florence but I have been invited. We have friends living there, so it is on my bucket list. Such an inspiring write and your posted image of Florence, so appealing. Wonderful read. Have a happy weekend.
March 1st, 2024 10:46
Cassie58 said:
A passionate write dear Teddy. Rich with description and metaphor. I haven’t visited Florence but I have been invited. We have friends living there, so it is on my bucket list. Such an inspiring write and your posted image of Florence, so appealing. Wonderful read. Have a happy weekend.
March 1st, 2024 10:46
Slumberbashing with Raven
Tom Dylan said:
A compelling poem, Teddy. Very intriguing. And Happy Friday! :-)
March 1st, 2024 06:07
Tom Dylan said:
A compelling poem, Teddy. Very intriguing. And Happy Friday! :-)
March 1st, 2024 06:07
From Florence With Love
Neville said:
some of my favourite poetry came out of Italy in the fifteenth century .. and one of my old travelling companions came out in La Spezia in 19 .. something I can\'t writely remember but I do know that Florence is my favourite city in the whole of the world and boy have I travelled .. Oh\' and what a smashing poem you have produced and posted this very day .. Neville 🌹
March 1st, 2024 04:28
Neville said:
some of my favourite poetry came out of Italy in the fifteenth century .. and one of my old travelling companions came out in La Spezia in 19 .. something I can\'t writely remember but I do know that Florence is my favourite city in the whole of the world and boy have I travelled .. Oh\' and what a smashing poem you have produced and posted this very day .. Neville 🌹
March 1st, 2024 04:28
From Florence With Love
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to not only a city but in metaphor a person.. This write filled with near rhymes, irregular stanzas that fit so well still carrying the flow and meter are a triumph in and of themselves, but more than this is the poetic form of the piece itself that has a feel so enchanting and well written that it takes me to the location itself. Charming and very professionally written.
March 1st, 2024 02:41
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to not only a city but in metaphor a person.. This write filled with near rhymes, irregular stanzas that fit so well still carrying the flow and meter are a triumph in and of themselves, but more than this is the poetic form of the piece itself that has a feel so enchanting and well written that it takes me to the location itself. Charming and very professionally written.
March 1st, 2024 02:41
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