Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



An Ode To The Sandwich
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Teddy.
I\'m between KP and dunno who else. It\'s a mouldy old sandwich! 😁 Tastes of... you know it, botox!

September 28th, 2023 01:45

An Ode To The Sandwich
LIZ said:

🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 I was thinking....I\'m hungry...but now I\'m REALLY hungry!!! I\'ll have a bite....or 2....or 3....Damn!!! 😲😲 OK give me the whole thing!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

September 28th, 2023 01:28

The Death of Great Music
Daye Writes said:

That\'s powerful

September 27th, 2023 09:35

The Death of Great Music
Pop64 said:

While their families remain the victims, we as appreciators of the music only lose potential songs, but we carry forward their library of life. Well penned!

September 27th, 2023 08:31

And Write She shall
Pop64 said:

Sadness, I find, turns into more profound, deeper writes. These 3 short lines are a true statement of fact. Wonderfully conveyed.

September 27th, 2023 08:05

The Death of Great Music
sorenbarrett said:

I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin, Mozart, Jimi Hendrix and many other greats what would music be like today? A provocative and most interesting thought. Nicely done Teddy.

September 27th, 2023 05:19

The Death of Great Music
Christina8 said:

I often wonder the same....as the daughter in law of a recording artist I think he went to soon....same with all the above mentioned artists....enough to make you cry when you think about all the music we missed out on.....Christina

September 27th, 2023 02:27

The Death of Great Music
LIZ said:

Tragedies....only way to not let ourselves become victims of it, is by keeping their music alive! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

September 27th, 2023 02:07

The Death of Great Music
orchidee said:

A fine write Teddy.

September 27th, 2023 02:04

And Write She shall
Christina8 said:

i do find it\'s easier to write about the sad stuff than happy...

September 26th, 2023 04:56

And Write She shall
Neville said:



................. superb ❀️

September 26th, 2023 01:59

And Write She shall
orchidee said:

Will KP write?! lol

September 26th, 2023 01:28

And Write She shall
LIZ said:

EVERY TIME!!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

September 26th, 2023 01:03

Washed Away
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going down the drain but this kind of wraps it all up into one. The metaphor of the umbrella is great, I think we all need one.

September 25th, 2023 13:50

Senryu 1
peto said:

Touche Teddy


September 25th, 2023 12:48

Washed Away
Doggerel Dave said:

I have absolutely no idea how your brain is wired (and, I admit, have been troubled by this in the past) but you certainly come up with some very interesting and entertaining connections, Teddy.

September 25th, 2023 04:15

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
(I bow to your superior talent
dear Poetess)
Beautiful poetry
I think your beloved Dante
would agree with me..
Have a lovely week, my friend

September 25th, 2023 04:13

Washed Away
Neville said:



brilliant .. this reminds me so much of ME .. ❀️

September 25th, 2023 03:20

Washed Away
Goldfinch60 said:

That can happen to us all Teddy but there is always a way forward into a better life where that umbrella will not be needed.

Andy

September 25th, 2023 02:46

Senryu 1
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful Senryu Teddy,

Andy

September 25th, 2023 02:40

Washed Away
LIZ said:

Teddy, life\'s experiences can do that to us. Letting go is no joke. But setting ourselves free....well that\'s priceless. And we must be aware...hence the heavy duty umbrella. BUT, I truly believe that sometimes....those hurricane winds take us to the most incredible, unexpected places...and that\'s where we learn and grow. I may be way off here but....I loved it!! ❀️

September 25th, 2023 02:32

Washed Away
orchidee said:

Yes, airing my dirty washing in public? Not meaning actual washing, but.... ohh you know what I mean! lol.

September 25th, 2023 02:20

Washed Away
orchidee said:

Good write Teddy.

September 25th, 2023 01:40

Senryu 1
Neville said:


this is probably one of the finest examples of this poetic form I have ever come across .. ❀️

September 24th, 2023 14:51

Senryu 1
Bella Shepard said:

Perfectly constructed, beautifully expressed. Simple, yes. But oh, so profound.

September 24th, 2023 12:40

Senryu 1
orchidee said:

Good senryu Teddy - bit of French there? Sen-wotsit. lol.

September 24th, 2023 09:49

Senryu 1
spilleronsheet said:

In lines of three, you praised and encouraged many….lovely dearest teddy

September 24th, 2023 08:09

Senryu 1
aDarkerMind said:

indeed it is Teddy;
a true reflection as clever as always;

September 24th, 2023 06:09

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
aDarkerMind said:

very true Teddy.
and beautifully written.

September 24th, 2023 06:00

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Teddy.

I do understand others pain as I am a listener and have helped many people just by listening.

Andy

September 24th, 2023 00:50



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