Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Teddy, I often know that Angels are with me as they are with you.

Andy

June 3rd, 2024 01:42

The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
MendedFences27 said:

A strong voice for the light as opposed to the dark. Your conclusion is spot on.
As for me I\'m with you all the way. Give me hope, life and the light over despair, darkness, and death, anytime. Enjoyed this inspiring poem. - Phil A.

June 2nd, 2024 15:47

The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Yes, hope springs eternal and comes in the morning. I had many a hopeless night, thank God that is over. This spoke to me.

June 2nd, 2024 06:06

The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
aDarkerMind said:

as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy.

full of purpose and a little gem I reckon.

June 2nd, 2024 04:20

The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
sorenbarrett said:

Most interesting as a concept and its wording enhances it. \" anything that wants to die is surely already dead\" Nicely done.

June 2nd, 2024 03:55

The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul
Cassie58 said:

Such a strong write here Teddy. You can wallow in misery or do your best to catch the sunlight. I know what I prefer. The ravens I associate with the dark and bloody history of the Tower of London. Give me the light and the angels every day. Such a meaningful write with sage advice in it too. Have a beautiful Sunday dear Teddy. šŸŒ¹

June 2nd, 2024 03:15

Palms Spring
Poetic Dan said:

Italy is definitely on my list of places I have you to visit and now you\'ve made it sound even more fun!
I\'d fit right in and my hands never stay still!
Happy Friday
Have a wonderful weekend

June 1st, 2024 09:46

Palms Spring
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, there is humour in this poem of yours but I also detect a little something else too. I too experience those little slaps from time to time, so you arenā€™t alone. Your posted pic of Italy is gorgeous. Have a beautiful weekend.

June 1st, 2024 00:00

Palms Spring
sorenbarrett said:

Humor yes but only when I got to the end. No one should be slapped around physically of emotionally. But hand gestures can bring on the wrath of others. Gave me a smile Teddy thanks for that.

May 31st, 2024 11:33

Poor Poet
Accidental Poet said:

Teddy, you always seem to lift me up when I need it most. Thank you dear friend. šŸ«‚

May 31st, 2024 03:23

Palms Spring
Accidental Poet said:

Except for the handshakes, the world needs more handshaking.

May 31st, 2024 03:10

Poor Poet
Goldfinch60 said:

You will never be lost Teddy.

Andy

May 31st, 2024 01:04

Palms Spring
Doggerel Dave said:

ā€œIf you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,ā€ Some of those slaps seem a bit close to me. But probably not as bad as love bitesā€¦ā€¦. Which Iā€™d never do as Iā€™m a vegetarianā€¦ā€¦ā€¦.. Teddy.

I think Iā€™ve got a touch of the orchiā€™s coming onā€¦.. šŸ˜†


May 31st, 2024 01:02

Poor Poet
MendedFences27 said:

Here\'s a thought - If there\'s a chance at a second passing through life, would you take it? My thought is, No. Thank you, once was enough. Your poem will cause lots of folks to think on this same subject. It was brief but powerful. Much enjoyed by me. - Phil A.

May 30th, 2024 15:09

Poor Poet
Thomas W Case said:

I found you Teddy and I\'m eternally grateful. Wonderful work.

May 30th, 2024 14:05

Poor Poet
Doggerel Dave said:

Sometimes Teddy you creep me out a littleā€¦. You make odd connections which cause me to think, and at other timesā€¦.
I think I enjoy the punishmentā€¦.


May 30th, 2024 06:53

Poor Poet
Cassie58 said:

Oh Teddy. Good morning to you. Your poem made me chuckle. Isnā€™t it amazing what tech can do? All that problem solving from the past and yet no help for some in the present šŸ˜€. Thereā€™s got to be a money spinning opportunity lol. Have a lovely day Teddy. šŸŒ¹

May 30th, 2024 05:58

Poor Poet
sorenbarrett said:

Now Teddy here is a thought that I think many have. Maybe the technology will be such that they will clone who they find and bring back to life the dead. But then I see a metaphor in this as well and we are all living fossils as well in a nonphysical sense. We all need to be found by others and ourselves. Enjoyed the read as always Teddy.

May 30th, 2024 05:33

A Leap In The Dark
MendedFences27 said:

Head or heart, matters not, neither can live without the other. If one loves with the heart or the head is less important than the fact of love.
A lovely poem to start my reading today, also my favorite subject. it certainly stirs the imagination and causes one to ponder over heart or head. Loved it. - Phil A.

May 29th, 2024 16:20

A Leap In The Dark
Thomas W Case said:

Yes. It\'s always that battle. Great work.

May 29th, 2024 15:51

A Leap In The Dark
aDarkerMind said:

a write that asks a question I cannot answer Teddy;

but it certainly got me thinking.

May 29th, 2024 11:54

A Leap In The Dark
sorenbarrett said:

It is true but I usually have heard it the other way that the head makes the heart look like a fool. I think I like it better your way. Nicely penned friend.

May 29th, 2024 11:15

A Leap In The Dark
Doggerel Dave said:

Having mildly sociopathic (delete ā€“ Iā€™m a wee bit antisocial) tendencies Itā€™s always a battleā€¦.. but sometimesā€¦.šŸ˜‡

May 29th, 2024 02:51

A Leap In The Dark
Cassie58 said:

Good morning Teddy. Youā€™d need a very focused and determined head to overrule the heart. It rarely happens. Heart chooses where love is concerned and wins doesnā€™t it? Regardless of the consequences. Have a beautiful day Teddy. šŸŒ¹

May 29th, 2024 02:13

A Leap In The Dark
Goldfinch60 said:

The heart rules the love bug in our minds Teddy.

Andy

May 29th, 2024 01:04

Shingles Shenanigans
Goldfinch60 said:

So sorry to hear about this Teddy, I do sincerely hope that you get better soon.
As for the MRI scan, I have had six of them when I had a problem many years ago. I had them on my head and did not find them that bad. One of the scans they could not transfer to the hospital where I was going to have my operation so they gave me a cd to take to the hospital when I next went there. When I got home I copied it so I can now prove to people that I have a brain!
Be brave, think of good things in your life as you have the scan and all will be well.
Thinking of you.

Andy

May 29th, 2024 00:56

Shingles Shenanigans
aDarkerMind said:

good to see you in a better mood Teddy, and sharing your funny side.

a joy to read.

May 28th, 2024 14:34

Shingles Shenanigans
Bella Shepard said:

You put such a humorous spin on such a painful condition in this poem. And your poxy chicken has that \"What the....? on his face. All kidding aside, this was such a fun read on such a painful and anxiety ridden experience. The last MRI that I had was for my knee. The machine was shorter, somewhat more open, they gave me a warm blanket, played my choice of classical music, the only thing missing was a nice glass of Lambrusco. Wishing you a healthy recovery and an MRI free future my friend.

May 28th, 2024 13:45

Shingles Shenanigans
Doggerel Dave said:

Teddy, Iā€™m so sorry to hear that you are still suffering.
I must thank you though. You have in passing , mentioned your shingles before. It was in fact you and that mention which motivated me to request my Shingrix shots, the second of which I had last week.

With respect to the MRI, I know I cannot do that without sedation, which I requested during my recent hospital stay. I had to beg and because of the culture in that particular hospital, it was a degrading experience, but necessary all for the sake of one bloody valium tablet.

Get well soon.


May 28th, 2024 08:36

Shingles Shenanigans
sorenbarrett said:

A tragic event turned humorous. Never the less I am not sure which is worse the misery of shingles or the claustrophobia. Whether fantasy or real this piece evokes compassion. Hope all is well.

May 28th, 2024 05:04



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