Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Great Journey Home
Cloie said:
Your poem tenderly expresses a longing for solace and peace. The imagery of flying with an angel away from a harsh world evokes a sense of seeking refuge and comfort. It beautifully portrays a heartfelt desire for release and tranquility. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:44
Cloie said:
Your poem tenderly expresses a longing for solace and peace. The imagery of flying with an angel away from a harsh world evokes a sense of seeking refuge and comfort. It beautifully portrays a heartfelt desire for release and tranquility. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:44
Death In Verona
Cloie said:
Your retelling of Romeo and Juliet\'s story is truly captivating. The depth of emotion you infuse into their tale is remarkable. Despite the obstacles posed by their feuding families, you portray their love as an unstoppable force, which is incredibly moving. As Shakespeare said, \"The course of true love never did run smooth,\" and your narrative beautifully illustrates this sentiment. The imagery you use, such as the metaphor of \"a million lightning bolts,\" vividly conveys the intensity of their connection. The drama in the narrative emphasizes its timeless allure. The climax, depicting Romeo and Juliet\'s tragic end, is handled with poignant detail and depth. The uncertainty surrounding their fate in the afterlife evokes a profound sense of longing and melancholy, yet there\'s a glimmer of hope that they might reunite beyond mortal constraints. Your retelling skillfully captures both the beauty and tragedy of this enduring love story from literature.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
Cloie said:
Your retelling of Romeo and Juliet\'s story is truly captivating. The depth of emotion you infuse into their tale is remarkable. Despite the obstacles posed by their feuding families, you portray their love as an unstoppable force, which is incredibly moving. As Shakespeare said, \"The course of true love never did run smooth,\" and your narrative beautifully illustrates this sentiment. The imagery you use, such as the metaphor of \"a million lightning bolts,\" vividly conveys the intensity of their connection. The drama in the narrative emphasizes its timeless allure. The climax, depicting Romeo and Juliet\'s tragic end, is handled with poignant detail and depth. The uncertainty surrounding their fate in the afterlife evokes a profound sense of longing and melancholy, yet there\'s a glimmer of hope that they might reunite beyond mortal constraints. Your retelling skillfully captures both the beauty and tragedy of this enduring love story from literature.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
The Great Journey Home
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the acknowledgment of a dream coming on. Beautiful and serene in any sense, hope it\'s the latter.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the acknowledgment of a dream coming on. Beautiful and serene in any sense, hope it\'s the latter.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
The Great Journey Home
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful dedication to your Angel Teddy. 😇
March 7th, 2024 07:17
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful dedication to your Angel Teddy. 😇
March 7th, 2024 07:17
The Great Journey Home
Neville said:
same here but everyone needs an angel .. 🌹
March 7th, 2024 05:38
Neville said:
same here but everyone needs an angel .. 🌹
March 7th, 2024 05:38
Death In Verona
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Teddy, showing just how powerful love can be.
Andy
https://youtu.be/QxidjMJK9f4?si=QHt346XtWQ5Pjdv7
March 7th, 2024 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words Teddy, showing just how powerful love can be.
Andy
https://youtu.be/QxidjMJK9f4?si=QHt346XtWQ5Pjdv7
March 7th, 2024 02:02
Death In Verona
sorenbarrett said:
I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s original tale that became a great cover by Shakespeare. Others before him covered it as well so I guess it was well known. It is a great love story with all that a love story needs, forbidden love being the greatest. It has a great twist at the end and is most tragic. However I believe love never dies and is only transformed so what ever you believe as far as afterlife, transformed existence, etc. they can not be kept apart. You have done a most marvelous job of condensing a long play or story into a short poem, brevity is the job of a poet. Well done.
March 6th, 2024 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s original tale that became a great cover by Shakespeare. Others before him covered it as well so I guess it was well known. It is a great love story with all that a love story needs, forbidden love being the greatest. It has a great twist at the end and is most tragic. However I believe love never dies and is only transformed so what ever you believe as far as afterlife, transformed existence, etc. they can not be kept apart. You have done a most marvelous job of condensing a long play or story into a short poem, brevity is the job of a poet. Well done.
March 6th, 2024 16:48
Death In Verona
Bella Shepard said:
I love your version of one of my favorite plays. Each time I\'ve seen it I keep hoping that somehow it will have a happier ending, but alas it is not to be. You\'ve made it so easy and pleasurable to enjoy, Thank you dear Teddy!
March 6th, 2024 16:22
Bella Shepard said:
I love your version of one of my favorite plays. Each time I\'ve seen it I keep hoping that somehow it will have a happier ending, but alas it is not to be. You\'ve made it so easy and pleasurable to enjoy, Thank you dear Teddy!
March 6th, 2024 16:22
Death In Verona
Accidental Poet said:
Although not much of a betting man, I\'ll bet my love for Sharon that Romeo and Juliet did join together in love\'s most sacred place and still live there today. Very well penned Teddy. ❤️🌹
March 6th, 2024 09:25
Accidental Poet said:
Although not much of a betting man, I\'ll bet my love for Sharon that Romeo and Juliet did join together in love\'s most sacred place and still live there today. Very well penned Teddy. ❤️🌹
March 6th, 2024 09:25
Death In Verona
Tom Dylan said:
In fair Verona we lay our scene... love this, Teddy. You nailed it. :-)
March 6th, 2024 06:43
Tom Dylan said:
In fair Verona we lay our scene... love this, Teddy. You nailed it. :-)
March 6th, 2024 06:43
Death In Verona
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Night Teddy - Sweet dreams. (For me? lol)
March 6th, 2024 06:31
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Night Teddy - Sweet dreams. (For me? lol)
March 6th, 2024 06:31
Death In Verona
Doggerel Dave said:
From all reports the end is roughly right - they did both cark it, didn\'t they Teddy.... As is blindingly obvious, my knowledge of this play is not great, but your version sounds very Shakespearian to me... and if perchance there maybe some variations, then this can only be a tribute to your creativity and versatility.
(\'Have I gone over the top here?\' - \'Quite probably, question is will she swallow it?\'...)
March 6th, 2024 06:14
Doggerel Dave said:
From all reports the end is roughly right - they did both cark it, didn\'t they Teddy.... As is blindingly obvious, my knowledge of this play is not great, but your version sounds very Shakespearian to me... and if perchance there maybe some variations, then this can only be a tribute to your creativity and versatility.
(\'Have I gone over the top here?\' - \'Quite probably, question is will she swallow it?\'...)
March 6th, 2024 06:14
Death In Verona
Neville said:
Dear Lady T ..
I imagine with ease, even the great Bard himself would give this version his thumbs up and verily .. 👍👍it gets mine as well .. I\'ve been to Verona, but only once and stood looking up at the balcony there and just wondered ..
Here, have one of these, as well🌹
March 6th, 2024 03:05
Neville said:
Dear Lady T ..
I imagine with ease, even the great Bard himself would give this version his thumbs up and verily .. 👍👍it gets mine as well .. I\'ve been to Verona, but only once and stood looking up at the balcony there and just wondered ..
Here, have one of these, as well🌹
March 6th, 2024 03:05
Algebra of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen sometimes Teddy, Mary and I found each other.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen sometimes Teddy, Mary and I found each other.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:11
Algebra of Love
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, they find one another and it lasts forever. They would tell you how very fortunate they were. Romeo and Juliet lasted a lifetime.
Loved your little mind- bending poem - Phil A.
March 5th, 2024 17:57
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, they find one another and it lasts forever. They would tell you how very fortunate they were. Romeo and Juliet lasted a lifetime.
Loved your little mind- bending poem - Phil A.
March 5th, 2024 17:57
Algebra of Love
Neville said:
One on one = babies .. dunno why I wrote that .. maybe it was just a math thing .. or was it that you asked the billion dollar question .. 🌹
March 5th, 2024 13:34
Neville said:
One on one = babies .. dunno why I wrote that .. maybe it was just a math thing .. or was it that you asked the billion dollar question .. 🌹
March 5th, 2024 13:34
Algebra of Love
peto said:
Teddy
I love how you say so much with so few words
An artist of the highest order
March 5th, 2024 13:32
peto said:
Teddy
I love how you say so much with so few words
An artist of the highest order
March 5th, 2024 13:32
Algebra of Love
Thomas W Case said:
Algebra drives me crazy, as does love. Tremendous work.
March 5th, 2024 13:27
Thomas W Case said:
Algebra drives me crazy, as does love. Tremendous work.
March 5th, 2024 13:27
Algebra of Love
Accidental Poet said:
Love works in mysterious ways Teddy. Patience is rule #1. 😊👍
March 5th, 2024 10:04
Accidental Poet said:
Love works in mysterious ways Teddy. Patience is rule #1. 😊👍
March 5th, 2024 10:04
Algebra of Love
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis because, as a grumpy old bugger, I believe that most poets don\'t be within a bum\'s scratch of working out wot \'love\' really is..... I kno I shouldn\'t a writ this... I just kno I shouldn\'t... I kno (fades quickly towards the horizon never to be heard...of...again...)
March 5th, 2024 07:32
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tis because, as a grumpy old bugger, I believe that most poets don\'t be within a bum\'s scratch of working out wot \'love\' really is..... I kno I shouldn\'t a writ this... I just kno I shouldn\'t... I kno (fades quickly towards the horizon never to be heard...of...again...)
March 5th, 2024 07:32
Algebra of Love
sorenbarrett said:
A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is it because in this world of billions the odds of finding one match is so small? Poignant and well stated.
March 5th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is it because in this world of billions the odds of finding one match is so small? Poignant and well stated.
March 5th, 2024 05:06
Unbounded
Noah Malice said:
Your diction is intoxicating. Love the scene it calls into my mind.
March 5th, 2024 04:57
Noah Malice said:
Your diction is intoxicating. Love the scene it calls into my mind.
March 5th, 2024 04:57
Grieving Heart
Neville said:
in the trade, we call such dramatic & frequent mood changes rapid cycling .. although, given the grief context you introduce in your authors note, you have, albeit belatedly my sincere condolences .. 🌹
March 5th, 2024 03:37
Neville said:
in the trade, we call such dramatic & frequent mood changes rapid cycling .. although, given the grief context you introduce in your authors note, you have, albeit belatedly my sincere condolences .. 🌹
March 5th, 2024 03:37
Grieving Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy but you have found your way through the grief as many, including me, have done in our lives.
Andy
March 5th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy but you have found your way through the grief as many, including me, have done in our lives.
Andy
March 5th, 2024 02:22
Grieving Heart
Cassie58 said:
Grief is totally debilitating dear Teddy and I admit have experienced my fair share of it too. You describe it so well here, when it’s impossible to navigate those overwhelming feelings. You have to endure the waves until the strength of them wanes and at times that can seem never ending. The darkest clouds in an unforgiving sky. Oh yes, I have been there too. Great metaphors used here in a fine piece of writing. Have a happy Tuesday dear poet.
March 5th, 2024 01:41
Cassie58 said:
Grief is totally debilitating dear Teddy and I admit have experienced my fair share of it too. You describe it so well here, when it’s impossible to navigate those overwhelming feelings. You have to endure the waves until the strength of them wanes and at times that can seem never ending. The darkest clouds in an unforgiving sky. Oh yes, I have been there too. Great metaphors used here in a fine piece of writing. Have a happy Tuesday dear poet.
March 5th, 2024 01:41
Grieving Heart
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the ups and downs of life\'s journey. It vividly describes the struggle of feeling lost and the search for direction, ultimately finding peace in acceptance and resilience. Great job!
March 4th, 2024 12:54
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the ups and downs of life\'s journey. It vividly describes the struggle of feeling lost and the search for direction, ultimately finding peace in acceptance and resilience. Great job!
March 4th, 2024 12:54
Unbounded
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly portrays life as a tumultuous ocean, with dreams lying unfulfilled in a dying heart. It\'s a powerful exploration of resilience and hope. Great job!
March 4th, 2024 12:46
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly portrays life as a tumultuous ocean, with dreams lying unfulfilled in a dying heart. It\'s a powerful exploration of resilience and hope. Great job!
March 4th, 2024 12:46
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