Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
Christina8 said:
A challenge to read but you made this easier with the side notes. You did a spectacular job! Educated me once again. Would have been awesome to hear read aloud. Fantastic! Hugs-Christina
April 7th, 2017 09:21
Christina8 said:
A challenge to read but you made this easier with the side notes. You did a spectacular job! Educated me once again. Would have been awesome to hear read aloud. Fantastic! Hugs-Christina
April 7th, 2017 09:21
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write, a good thing to come out of Scotland but not as good as the Laphroaig that comes from there.
April 7th, 2017 07:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write, a good thing to come out of Scotland but not as good as the Laphroaig that comes from there.
April 7th, 2017 07:47
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
Tony36 said:
Great write and great tribute to Robert Burn one of my favorite writers
April 7th, 2017 07:15
Tony36 said:
Great write and great tribute to Robert Burn one of my favorite writers
April 7th, 2017 07:15
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
willyweed said:
I once had a Scottish carpenter in my charge in NYC when he spoke... I just said ok what ever because I could not understand a word he said he was a good and honest man so it did work out in the end...anyway loved your wee poem Brain me laddie. WW
April 7th, 2017 06:44
willyweed said:
I once had a Scottish carpenter in my charge in NYC when he spoke... I just said ok what ever because I could not understand a word he said he was a good and honest man so it did work out in the end...anyway loved your wee poem Brain me laddie. WW
April 7th, 2017 06:44
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
WriteBeLight said:
Wow. Quite talented you are Brian. This is a real pain in the tooth :) Nice job.
April 7th, 2017 06:22
WriteBeLight said:
Wow. Quite talented you are Brian. This is a real pain in the tooth :) Nice job.
April 7th, 2017 06:22
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
Michael Edwards said:
Just superb - great piece of poetry and begging to be read.
April 7th, 2017 04:22
Michael Edwards said:
Just superb - great piece of poetry and begging to be read.
April 7th, 2017 04:22
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
Jooles said:
I love this! Love the language 😀 love the style!! It\'s fab! Never ever (touch wood) had toothache though......nor do I ever want to ....your poem sounds painful 😅
April 7th, 2017 04:14
Jooles said:
I love this! Love the language 😀 love the style!! It\'s fab! Never ever (touch wood) had toothache though......nor do I ever want to ....your poem sounds painful 😅
April 7th, 2017 04:14
TO A TOOTHACHE ~ ROBBIE BURNS (1795)
orchidee said:
A fine write. You speaking French there?! That ache is a \'beastie\' as Burns wrote of the mouse!
April 7th, 2017 03:32
orchidee said:
A fine write. You speaking French there?! That ache is a \'beastie\' as Burns wrote of the mouse!
April 7th, 2017 03:32
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
gelyn said:
I love this concert form poetry. ... The mirroring of the words add up to the cuteness of this
April 6th, 2017 20:54
gelyn said:
I love this concert form poetry. ... The mirroring of the words add up to the cuteness of this
April 6th, 2017 20:54
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Aamina said:
wow that\'s so imaginative. pretty cool and unique
April 6th, 2017 15:39
Aamina said:
wow that\'s so imaginative. pretty cool and unique
April 6th, 2017 15:39
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
Christina8 said:
Here. the first sign of spring is usually seeing a robin and hearing them sing. You did a wonderful job on your poem, I really enjoyed it! Hugs-Christina
April 6th, 2017 10:20
Christina8 said:
Here. the first sign of spring is usually seeing a robin and hearing them sing. You did a wonderful job on your poem, I really enjoyed it! Hugs-Christina
April 6th, 2017 10:20
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Christina8 said:
Very good structure to this poem. I\'d never seen a poem like this before. Fabulous job! Always coming up with new types of poems. Hugs-Christina
April 6th, 2017 10:17
Christina8 said:
Very good structure to this poem. I\'d never seen a poem like this before. Fabulous job! Always coming up with new types of poems. Hugs-Christina
April 6th, 2017 10:17
THE DAILY GRIND !
mariannebmo said:
This is fabulous, and strikes a chord with me this week!
April 6th, 2017 08:45
mariannebmo said:
This is fabulous, and strikes a chord with me this week!
April 6th, 2017 08:45
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
willyweed said:
the shape of things to come? good one mate!
April 6th, 2017 06:57
willyweed said:
the shape of things to come? good one mate!
April 6th, 2017 06:57
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Jooles said:
Again I have learned something new....your poems are ALWAYS worth a visit
April 6th, 2017 03:10
Jooles said:
Again I have learned something new....your poems are ALWAYS worth a visit
April 6th, 2017 03:10
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Brian I really like this - something else for me to have a go at - It\'s not you in photo is it?
April 6th, 2017 02:45
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Brian I really like this - something else for me to have a go at - It\'s not you in photo is it?
April 6th, 2017 02:45
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Poetic Justice said:
Brian, I always love how you think and the uniqueness of all your poems!
April 6th, 2017 02:11
Poetic Justice said:
Brian, I always love how you think and the uniqueness of all your poems!
April 6th, 2017 02:11
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic form from top to bottom dear Brian - - very clever indeed.
April 6th, 2017 02:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic form from top to bottom dear Brian - - very clever indeed.
April 6th, 2017 02:04
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Frank Prem said:
That\'s some kind of form you\'ve got there Brian, for sure.
Well matched.
April 6th, 2017 01:59
Frank Prem said:
That\'s some kind of form you\'ve got there Brian, for sure.
Well matched.
April 6th, 2017 01:59
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Aamina said:
Wow i loved this. I study physics so planets to me are quite appealing, this threw me off the usual spectrum of planetary talk =)
April 5th, 2017 08:03
Aamina said:
Wow i loved this. I study physics so planets to me are quite appealing, this threw me off the usual spectrum of planetary talk =)
April 5th, 2017 08:03
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
willyweed said:
they rock in the treetops all day long.
rockin\' and a boppin\'....well you know the rest... good one Brian here comes the sun!
April 5th, 2017 05:53
willyweed said:
they rock in the treetops all day long.
rockin\' and a boppin\'....well you know the rest... good one Brian here comes the sun!
April 5th, 2017 05:53
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
Jooles said:
Great poem...when Robins are near loved ones appear
April 5th, 2017 04:05
Jooles said:
Great poem...when Robins are near loved ones appear
April 5th, 2017 04:05
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
Michael Edwards said:
Love this little poem - as a youngster I read David Lacks \'Life Of The Robin\' and have loved them ever since. I can remember much of the book though I haven\'t read it since - one of the most interesting points is that the Robin is a bit of a nomad - you might think the same robin keeps visiting your garden but it is far more likely that you see a different on each occasion. By the way Brian - American spelling ?
April 5th, 2017 03:57
Michael Edwards said:
Love this little poem - as a youngster I read David Lacks \'Life Of The Robin\' and have loved them ever since. I can remember much of the book though I haven\'t read it since - one of the most interesting points is that the Robin is a bit of a nomad - you might think the same robin keeps visiting your garden but it is far more likely that you see a different on each occasion. By the way Brian - American spelling ?
April 5th, 2017 03:57
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Jooles said:
I love the way you write...there is a free quality to it I cant master. Brill
April 4th, 2017 16:33
Jooles said:
I love the way you write...there is a free quality to it I cant master. Brill
April 4th, 2017 16:33
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Michael Edwards said:
After Fays daffs now this beauty - a colourful day - great acrostic.
April 4th, 2017 13:46
Michael Edwards said:
After Fays daffs now this beauty - a colourful day - great acrostic.
April 4th, 2017 13:46
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