Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
Christina8 said:
I haven\'t seen a rainbow in a while. Cool pajamas! Love your poem. Also love your authors notes. Our color vision truly is a gift from God and to appreciate the things he has given us. Wonderful job! Hugs-Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:08
Christina8 said:
I haven\'t seen a rainbow in a while. Cool pajamas! Love your poem. Also love your authors notes. Our color vision truly is a gift from God and to appreciate the things he has given us. Wonderful job! Hugs-Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:08
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. As we get closer to Easter it gives us something to think about. I have a keychain that says \"thorns on his crowns, cross of wood on his back and YOU on his mind\". Always reminds me that my Lord is with me and that he died for all of us, each and every one of us. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful sunday write!! Hugs in spirit--Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:01
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. As we get closer to Easter it gives us something to think about. I have a keychain that says \"thorns on his crowns, cross of wood on his back and YOU on his mind\". Always reminds me that my Lord is with me and that he died for all of us, each and every one of us. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful sunday write!! Hugs in spirit--Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:01
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
WriteBeLight said:
He is everywhere Brian! Very joyous message you have posted on this Sunday as we get closer to Easter.
April 2nd, 2017 07:08
WriteBeLight said:
He is everywhere Brian! Very joyous message you have posted on this Sunday as we get closer to Easter.
April 2nd, 2017 07:08
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
Goldfinch60 said:
And He will rise again.
Good write.
April 2nd, 2017 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
And He will rise again.
Good write.
April 2nd, 2017 03:14
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
orchidee said:
A fine write! We were there in a sense - not physically in person, of course.
April 2nd, 2017 03:08
orchidee said:
A fine write! We were there in a sense - not physically in person, of course.
April 2nd, 2017 03:08
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
WriteBeLight said:
Very warm and full of brilliance Brian!
April 1st, 2017 06:03
WriteBeLight said:
Very warm and full of brilliance Brian!
April 1st, 2017 06:03
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys sound chic with their purple stripes.
April 1st, 2017 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys sound chic with their purple stripes.
April 1st, 2017 04:37
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
Michael Edwards said:
A descriptive rainbow and love the pyjallmas even though I don\'t wear them !1
April 1st, 2017 02:03
Michael Edwards said:
A descriptive rainbow and love the pyjallmas even though I don\'t wear them !1
April 1st, 2017 02:03
THE DAILY GRIND !
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! Sorry I\'m reviewing it so late--speaking of the daily grind! One of the busiest days I can remember in a while. It\'s amazing what we have to fit in in a day. But I wonder with all the stuff you have to do how you fit MPS in the mix. Great job! Hugs-Christina
March 31st, 2017 22:39
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! Sorry I\'m reviewing it so late--speaking of the daily grind! One of the busiest days I can remember in a while. It\'s amazing what we have to fit in in a day. But I wonder with all the stuff you have to do how you fit MPS in the mix. Great job! Hugs-Christina
March 31st, 2017 22:39
THE DAILY GRIND !
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this Brian,
Like the way you
Manipulated some
End words to keep
The rhyme...very clever !!!
Well done sir...
March 31st, 2017 17:44
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this Brian,
Like the way you
Manipulated some
End words to keep
The rhyme...very clever !!!
Well done sir...
March 31st, 2017 17:44
THE DAILY GRIND !
WriteBeLight said:
I am grateful I have a job I like, and enjoy being at. Great point of being thankful Brian.
March 31st, 2017 11:55
WriteBeLight said:
I am grateful I have a job I like, and enjoy being at. Great point of being thankful Brian.
March 31st, 2017 11:55
THE DAILY GRIND !
Fay Slimm. said:
Daily grind described so well - this verse makes me glad I have retired dear Brian...
March 31st, 2017 04:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Daily grind described so well - this verse makes me glad I have retired dear Brian...
March 31st, 2017 04:41
THE DAILY GRIND !
Michael Edwards said:
Same for me - retired some 7 years ago and enjoying every minute of it. Plenty to fill my time and the following certainly doesn\'t apply to me: why do old folk not look out of their windows in the morning? Because they\'d have nothing to do in the afternoons ! Great piece of poetry Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:44
Michael Edwards said:
Same for me - retired some 7 years ago and enjoying every minute of it. Plenty to fill my time and the following certainly doesn\'t apply to me: why do old folk not look out of their windows in the morning? Because they\'d have nothing to do in the afternoons ! Great piece of poetry Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:44
THE DAILY GRIND !
Goldfinch60 said:
Worked solidly for forty seven years and one month, never forget the one month, and have been retired for five years in June. Had a good working life and a good home life, no regrets and when I get up in the morning I know the day will be good.
Good write Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Worked solidly for forty seven years and one month, never forget the one month, and have been retired for five years in June. Had a good working life and a good home life, no regrets and when I get up in the morning I know the day will be good.
Good write Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:04
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
WG7 said:
This is wonderful I love it
As to say what animal I am it would be a shame to tell
I ruin all relationships so maybe I\'m a snake who took a bite of the fruit from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil.
Or am I a a different animal? It\'s hard to tell but it\'s just a kind of love...many don\'t even have a certain type...
March 30th, 2017 12:11
WG7 said:
This is wonderful I love it
As to say what animal I am it would be a shame to tell
I ruin all relationships so maybe I\'m a snake who took a bite of the fruit from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil.
Or am I a a different animal? It\'s hard to tell but it\'s just a kind of love...many don\'t even have a certain type...
March 30th, 2017 12:11
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Christina8 said:
I can\'t say what animal I am but after 17 years of being with the same person I guess it\'s working. Very good write and I love the last couplet the best. Great job!!! Hugs--Christina
March 30th, 2017 11:58
Christina8 said:
I can\'t say what animal I am but after 17 years of being with the same person I guess it\'s working. Very good write and I love the last couplet the best. Great job!!! Hugs--Christina
March 30th, 2017 11:58
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:34
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:34
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'ve been called a silly ass - does that count?
March 30th, 2017 06:10
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'ve been called a silly ass - does that count?
March 30th, 2017 06:10
WHAT IF ~ TRUMP WINS ?
krystal said:
If you can still dream but not make dreams your master..
If you can still think for youself and not loose your humanity among all if the propaganda and mind control, you\'re halfway there.
The hard part is not letting your dreams control you. We consiously know what needs to be done but we live all of our waking life living for someone else..under submission to someone else at work, how youre expected to behavd at home, under the law, then schooling our babies.
If we know what should be done, how do we not let our dreams control us when while we\'re awake we are so removed from our dreams, our values, our subconscious. Our dreams-our true selves
March 30th, 2017 05:13
krystal said:
If you can still dream but not make dreams your master..
If you can still think for youself and not loose your humanity among all if the propaganda and mind control, you\'re halfway there.
The hard part is not letting your dreams control you. We consiously know what needs to be done but we live all of our waking life living for someone else..under submission to someone else at work, how youre expected to behavd at home, under the law, then schooling our babies.
If we know what should be done, how do we not let our dreams control us when while we\'re awake we are so removed from our dreams, our values, our subconscious. Our dreams-our true selves
March 30th, 2017 05:13
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write and analogy.
March 30th, 2017 03:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write and analogy.
March 30th, 2017 03:28
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Michael Edwards said:
More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.
March 29th, 2017 11:29
Michael Edwards said:
More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.
March 29th, 2017 11:29
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Christina8 said:
You did a really nice job on these Haiku! You even came up with a rhyme for Uranus which is hard to do! lol Superb authors notes.. All around fantastic job! Hugs-Christina
March 29th, 2017 11:18
Christina8 said:
You did a really nice job on these Haiku! You even came up with a rhyme for Uranus which is hard to do! lol Superb authors notes.. All around fantastic job! Hugs-Christina
March 29th, 2017 11:18
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