Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
THE DAILY GRIND !
Fay Slimm. said:
Daily grind described so well - this verse makes me glad I have retired dear Brian...
March 31st, 2017 04:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Daily grind described so well - this verse makes me glad I have retired dear Brian...
March 31st, 2017 04:41
THE DAILY GRIND !
Michael Edwards said:
Same for me - retired some 7 years ago and enjoying every minute of it. Plenty to fill my time and the following certainly doesn\'t apply to me: why do old folk not look out of their windows in the morning? Because they\'d have nothing to do in the afternoons ! Great piece of poetry Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:44
Michael Edwards said:
Same for me - retired some 7 years ago and enjoying every minute of it. Plenty to fill my time and the following certainly doesn\'t apply to me: why do old folk not look out of their windows in the morning? Because they\'d have nothing to do in the afternoons ! Great piece of poetry Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:44
THE DAILY GRIND !
Goldfinch60 said:
Worked solidly for forty seven years and one month, never forget the one month, and have been retired for five years in June. Had a good working life and a good home life, no regrets and when I get up in the morning I know the day will be good.
Good write Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Worked solidly for forty seven years and one month, never forget the one month, and have been retired for five years in June. Had a good working life and a good home life, no regrets and when I get up in the morning I know the day will be good.
Good write Brian.
March 31st, 2017 03:04
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
WG7 said:
This is wonderful I love it
As to say what animal I am it would be a shame to tell
I ruin all relationships so maybe I\'m a snake who took a bite of the fruit from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil.
Or am I a a different animal? It\'s hard to tell but it\'s just a kind of love...many don\'t even have a certain type...
March 30th, 2017 12:11
WG7 said:
This is wonderful I love it
As to say what animal I am it would be a shame to tell
I ruin all relationships so maybe I\'m a snake who took a bite of the fruit from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil.
Or am I a a different animal? It\'s hard to tell but it\'s just a kind of love...many don\'t even have a certain type...
March 30th, 2017 12:11
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Christina8 said:
I can\'t say what animal I am but after 17 years of being with the same person I guess it\'s working. Very good write and I love the last couplet the best. Great job!!! Hugs--Christina
March 30th, 2017 11:58
Christina8 said:
I can\'t say what animal I am but after 17 years of being with the same person I guess it\'s working. Very good write and I love the last couplet the best. Great job!!! Hugs--Christina
March 30th, 2017 11:58
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:34
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:34
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'ve been called a silly ass - does that count?
March 30th, 2017 06:10
Michael Edwards said:
Well I\'ve been called a silly ass - does that count?
March 30th, 2017 06:10
WHAT IF ~ TRUMP WINS ?
krystal said:
If you can still dream but not make dreams your master..
If you can still think for youself and not loose your humanity among all if the propaganda and mind control, you\'re halfway there.
The hard part is not letting your dreams control you. We consiously know what needs to be done but we live all of our waking life living for someone else..under submission to someone else at work, how youre expected to behavd at home, under the law, then schooling our babies.
If we know what should be done, how do we not let our dreams control us when while we\'re awake we are so removed from our dreams, our values, our subconscious. Our dreams-our true selves
March 30th, 2017 05:13
krystal said:
If you can still dream but not make dreams your master..
If you can still think for youself and not loose your humanity among all if the propaganda and mind control, you\'re halfway there.
The hard part is not letting your dreams control you. We consiously know what needs to be done but we live all of our waking life living for someone else..under submission to someone else at work, how youre expected to behavd at home, under the law, then schooling our babies.
If we know what should be done, how do we not let our dreams control us when while we\'re awake we are so removed from our dreams, our values, our subconscious. Our dreams-our true selves
March 30th, 2017 05:13
MY LOVE IS LIKE ................... ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write and analogy.
March 30th, 2017 03:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write and analogy.
March 30th, 2017 03:28
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Michael Edwards said:
More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.
March 29th, 2017 11:29
Michael Edwards said:
More than done it justice Brian - super stuff.
March 29th, 2017 11:29
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Christina8 said:
You did a really nice job on these Haiku! You even came up with a rhyme for Uranus which is hard to do! lol Superb authors notes.. All around fantastic job! Hugs-Christina
March 29th, 2017 11:18
Christina8 said:
You did a really nice job on these Haiku! You even came up with a rhyme for Uranus which is hard to do! lol Superb authors notes.. All around fantastic job! Hugs-Christina
March 29th, 2017 11:18
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
willyweed said:
I think there are other planets that support life, in other systems, and dimensions? very interesting as usual my friend!
March 29th, 2017 06:51
willyweed said:
I think there are other planets that support life, in other systems, and dimensions? very interesting as usual my friend!
March 29th, 2017 06:51
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Pluto used to be my favourite but I do\'t watch Walt Disney much nowadays.
Good write.
March 29th, 2017 04:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Pluto used to be my favourite but I do\'t watch Walt Disney much nowadays.
Good write.
March 29th, 2017 04:34
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 1
Christina8 said:
Wonderful Haiku! I see you took poetic license with these and made them rhyme, I love it! They are all very unique and well written. Well done! Hugs-Christina
March 28th, 2017 10:05
Christina8 said:
Wonderful Haiku! I see you took poetic license with these and made them rhyme, I love it! They are all very unique and well written. Well done! Hugs-Christina
March 28th, 2017 10:05
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 1
orchidee said:
But you is only on Part 1 - you said so in the title! I wasn\'t expecting to read all parts at once - and I didn\'t! The are probably in Part 2, 3, however many parts!
March 28th, 2017 08:50
orchidee said:
But you is only on Part 1 - you said so in the title! I wasn\'t expecting to read all parts at once - and I didn\'t! The are probably in Part 2, 3, however many parts!
March 28th, 2017 08:50
GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Christina8 said:
A great acrostic! I had never heard of a Gymkhana before. You continually raise my IQ! :-) Someone I know owns horses. They are beautiful creatures! It\'s a great day to go to the countryside and go for a ride on a beautiful day! Awesome write! Hugs--Christina
March 27th, 2017 12:51
Christina8 said:
A great acrostic! I had never heard of a Gymkhana before. You continually raise my IQ! :-) Someone I know owns horses. They are beautiful creatures! It\'s a great day to go to the countryside and go for a ride on a beautiful day! Awesome write! Hugs--Christina
March 27th, 2017 12:51
GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
This is something I\'ve never got into but I do live in the middle of hunt country. Always makes me smile when I see a fox walking down the middle of the street and hear the dogs barking in the kennels - a case of snubbing their nose. Another good acrostic
March 27th, 2017 08:27
Michael Edwards said:
This is something I\'ve never got into but I do live in the middle of hunt country. Always makes me smile when I see a fox walking down the middle of the street and hear the dogs barking in the kennels - a case of snubbing their nose. Another good acrostic
March 27th, 2017 08:27
GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 27th, 2017 08:11
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 27th, 2017 08:11
GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, one of our friends used to go eventing and one time we went to watch her she was berated about using bad language to help her horse over a particularly hard obstacle!
March 27th, 2017 08:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, one of our friends used to go eventing and one time we went to watch her she was berated about using bad language to help her horse over a particularly hard obstacle!
March 27th, 2017 08:09
GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging acrostic and I truly agree that with a day at Gymkhana you can meet those who have a real coordination with the horse. - - - a good read Brian.
March 27th, 2017 07:48
Fay Slimm. said:
An engaging acrostic and I truly agree that with a day at Gymkhana you can meet those who have a real coordination with the horse. - - - a good read Brian.
March 27th, 2017 07:48
SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING !
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, yes God is everywhere and within us all all the time, sometimes though we do not listen.
March 27th, 2017 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, yes God is everywhere and within us all all the time, sometimes though we do not listen.
March 27th, 2017 00:28
SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING !
Augustus said:
I was about 8 years old and remember in amazement the nuns teaching in Catechism class. \"Where is God? God is everywhere.\" Nicely done.
March 26th, 2017 19:01
Augustus said:
I was about 8 years old and remember in amazement the nuns teaching in Catechism class. \"Where is God? God is everywhere.\" Nicely done.
March 26th, 2017 19:01
SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING !
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful sonnet and picture! I have never seen the \"eye of God\' through the hubble before! Lovely thoughts you have in this poem. And I agree. Happy Sunday! Hugs Christina
March 26th, 2017 12:27
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful sonnet and picture! I have never seen the \"eye of God\' through the hubble before! Lovely thoughts you have in this poem. And I agree. Happy Sunday! Hugs Christina
March 26th, 2017 12:27
SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING !
orchidee said:
Yep, I would believe in a pencil tree in me dafter moments! Well, it\'s starts with a bit of wood! lol.
March 26th, 2017 11:50
orchidee said:
Yep, I would believe in a pencil tree in me dafter moments! Well, it\'s starts with a bit of wood! lol.
March 26th, 2017 11:50
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