Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
I AM A STREAM !
Aamina said:
Really good write. It\'s hard to make a teen understand that we don\'t want to grow up, but that\'s pretty hard to believe as we\'re treated like children but expected to act like adults! Cool poem x
April 17th, 2017 06:13
Aamina said:
Really good write. It\'s hard to make a teen understand that we don\'t want to grow up, but that\'s pretty hard to believe as we\'re treated like children but expected to act like adults! Cool poem x
April 17th, 2017 06:13
R E S U R R E C T I O N ! An Acrostic
Hopey_xx said:
Great write showing the reason why Easter exists, happy Easter!
April 16th, 2017 13:48
Hopey_xx said:
Great write showing the reason why Easter exists, happy Easter!
April 16th, 2017 13:48
EASTER ~ WHAT\'S IT ALL ABOUT ? An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Yes Easter is about his resurrection and you did a wonderful job writing about it. I loved your authors comments as well. Happy Easter wishes to you! Easter hugs-Christina
April 16th, 2017 10:00
Christina8 said:
Yes Easter is about his resurrection and you did a wonderful job writing about it. I loved your authors comments as well. Happy Easter wishes to you! Easter hugs-Christina
April 16th, 2017 10:00
R E S U R R E C T I O N ! An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Thank you for that awesome and wonderful write! Too many people get caught up in secular Easter with the Easter bunny, etc. Fantastic job on this acrostic on this wonderful Easter day! Hugs in the spirit-Christina
April 16th, 2017 09:45
Christina8 said:
Thank you for that awesome and wonderful write! Too many people get caught up in secular Easter with the Easter bunny, etc. Fantastic job on this acrostic on this wonderful Easter day! Hugs in the spirit-Christina
April 16th, 2017 09:45
R E S U R R E C T I O N ! An Acrostic
orchidee said:
Yes, Happy Easter, with a fine and true write!
April 16th, 2017 07:14
orchidee said:
Yes, Happy Easter, with a fine and true write!
April 16th, 2017 07:14
EASTER ~ WHAT\'S IT ALL ABOUT ? An Acrostic
WriteBeLight said:
I can see how much you love this Holy Holiday Brian!
April 16th, 2017 06:07
WriteBeLight said:
I can see how much you love this Holy Holiday Brian!
April 16th, 2017 06:07
R E S U R R E C T I O N ! An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Amen.
He is Risen
Alleluia!
April 16th, 2017 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Amen.
He is Risen
Alleluia!
April 16th, 2017 02:29
EASTER ~ WHAT\'S IT ALL ABOUT ? An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes. Happy Easter Brian.
April 16th, 2017 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes. Happy Easter Brian.
April 16th, 2017 00:19
EASTER ~ WHAT\'S IT ALL ABOUT ? An Acrostic
orchidee said:
A fine write. Happy Easter wishes to you too!
April 15th, 2017 09:45
orchidee said:
A fine write. Happy Easter wishes to you too!
April 15th, 2017 09:45
NAT KING COLE ~ UNFORGETTABLE
valene said:
Though I never paid a lot of attention to him, I\'ve always been aware of Nat as a talented singer. Thanks to you, I\'ve learned more about him and your poem has piqued my curiosity to listen to him again. this is a well conceived piece that was informative too! Nicely penned!
April 14th, 2017 17:31
valene said:
Though I never paid a lot of attention to him, I\'ve always been aware of Nat as a talented singer. Thanks to you, I\'ve learned more about him and your poem has piqued my curiosity to listen to him again. this is a well conceived piece that was informative too! Nicely penned!
April 14th, 2017 17:31
GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:
Wonderful write, without any \'religiosity\'. Is that a word?! lol.
I tend to like ye olden art, and more contemporary. I like the part-faces shown in this. I don\'t like ones where face or eyes are smudged out on purpose though. I see the acrostic too!
April 14th, 2017 09:49
orchidee said:
Wonderful write, without any \'religiosity\'. Is that a word?! lol.
I tend to like ye olden art, and more contemporary. I like the part-faces shown in this. I don\'t like ones where face or eyes are smudged out on purpose though. I see the acrostic too!
April 14th, 2017 09:49
GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
April 14th, 2017 07:39
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
April 14th, 2017 07:39
GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the anger and frustration of the way in which he died in the poem Brian. Thanks for reminding us of how fortunate we are on this Good Friday.
April 14th, 2017 05:33
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the anger and frustration of the way in which he died in the poem Brian. Thanks for reminding us of how fortunate we are on this Good Friday.
April 14th, 2017 05:33
GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
A timely and memorable reminder of this very special Celebration. Thanks for sharing the preliminaries to this very good news Brian.
April 14th, 2017 05:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A timely and memorable reminder of this very special Celebration. Thanks for sharing the preliminaries to this very good news Brian.
April 14th, 2017 05:25
GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
We know He will rise again. God Bless you Brian.
April 14th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We know He will rise again. God Bless you Brian.
April 14th, 2017 02:24
A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto
aleda milka said:
Hi BRIAN! I love this Fella with Umbrella poem. Such a great poetry and I enjoy it.
April 13th, 2017 19:48
aleda milka said:
Hi BRIAN! I love this Fella with Umbrella poem. Such a great poetry and I enjoy it.
April 13th, 2017 19:48
A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto
Christina8 said:
Well done indeed! I love how you always are bringing new forms of poetry to MPS! You know, I have never shared an umbrella with a guy? You make it look so romantic! You call it a brolly? Thats neat. I keep one in my car, but it\'s surely not as fancy as yours! Great poem! Hugs-Christina
April 13th, 2017 10:28
Christina8 said:
Well done indeed! I love how you always are bringing new forms of poetry to MPS! You know, I have never shared an umbrella with a guy? You make it look so romantic! You call it a brolly? Thats neat. I keep one in my car, but it\'s surely not as fancy as yours! Great poem! Hugs-Christina
April 13th, 2017 10:28
A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto
orchidee said:
Oh yes, least hint of rain, I have a brolly with me, or a coat with a hood. I look pessimistic. Some days it turns out blazing sun, and me with brolly, looking like a lemon! A fine write. I\'m in a tizzy with me metres in me hymn-poems! Am I?! heehee.
April 13th, 2017 08:08
orchidee said:
Oh yes, least hint of rain, I have a brolly with me, or a coat with a hood. I look pessimistic. Some days it turns out blazing sun, and me with brolly, looking like a lemon! A fine write. I\'m in a tizzy with me metres in me hymn-poems! Am I?! heehee.
April 13th, 2017 08:08
A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto
Goldfinch60 said:
Back in the day when it was de rigour to wear suit and tie to work I too had a black umbrella. I still have a large umbrella given to me back in the late seventies by a contractor that worked for our firm, from the day he gave it to me it has resided in the boot(s) of my cars and never been used but it is still there \'just in case\'.
Good write.
April 13th, 2017 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Back in the day when it was de rigour to wear suit and tie to work I too had a black umbrella. I still have a large umbrella given to me back in the late seventies by a contractor that worked for our firm, from the day he gave it to me it has resided in the boot(s) of my cars and never been used but it is still there \'just in case\'.
Good write.
April 13th, 2017 07:56
A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto
WriteBeLight said:
Ah, you remind me of the parasol my Aunt gave me when I was little! Great idea for a poem Brian!
April 13th, 2017 06:25
WriteBeLight said:
Ah, you remind me of the parasol my Aunt gave me when I was little! Great idea for a poem Brian!
April 13th, 2017 06:25
A FELLA WITH AN UMBRELLA ~ A Rispetto
Michael Edwards said:
Looks to be quite a challenge keeping it co-syllabic but this is great example. In my early career in the City a rolled umbrolly was an essential piece of the male dress - yes I carried one along with dark jacket and pin striped trousers - err no I didn\'t carry them as well - I wore them. Grief - this dates me!!
April 13th, 2017 05:48
Michael Edwards said:
Looks to be quite a challenge keeping it co-syllabic but this is great example. In my early career in the City a rolled umbrolly was an essential piece of the male dress - yes I carried one along with dark jacket and pin striped trousers - err no I didn\'t carry them as well - I wore them. Grief - this dates me!!
April 13th, 2017 05:48
OUR INNER BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Elizabeth said:
this is sad but it is very true... Great write.
April 12th, 2017 13:28
Elizabeth said:
this is sad but it is very true... Great write.
April 12th, 2017 13:28
WHY ?
WriteBeLight said:
Great job reminding us of the importance of this occasion Brian!
April 12th, 2017 06:09
WriteBeLight said:
Great job reminding us of the importance of this occasion Brian!
April 12th, 2017 06:09
WHY ?
Fay Slimm. said:
A time of sadness and ultimate happiness - what a Redeemer the human race has - thank you for sharing this good news Brian.
April 12th, 2017 02:50
Fay Slimm. said:
A time of sadness and ultimate happiness - what a Redeemer the human race has - thank you for sharing this good news Brian.
April 12th, 2017 02:50
WHY ?
orchidee said:
Thanks Brian. This shows your true faith. It occurred to me again, how that \'religion\' in itself caused the troubles to start - though all as Scripture foretold. Of course, Christianity is one religion, but not hypocritical, etc as the Pharisees. They got Jesus\' stern words - you snakes. etc!
April 12th, 2017 02:04
orchidee said:
Thanks Brian. This shows your true faith. It occurred to me again, how that \'religion\' in itself caused the troubles to start - though all as Scripture foretold. Of course, Christianity is one religion, but not hypocritical, etc as the Pharisees. They got Jesus\' stern words - you snakes. etc!
April 12th, 2017 02:04
WHY ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for sharing this poem Brian.
A busy, sad and happy time starts. I am on duty at my our Church for three of the Services this weekend ending with the Easter Service when Our Lord rose form the grave and gave us our faith.
April 12th, 2017 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for sharing this poem Brian.
A busy, sad and happy time starts. I am on duty at my our Church for three of the Services this weekend ending with the Easter Service when Our Lord rose form the grave and gave us our faith.
April 12th, 2017 01:48
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