Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Christina8 said:
Great job on this poem! I love bicycling! I\'ll have to tell you where I go later but it\'s great for families to get out and cycle. Great exercise! Another great sonnet! Hugs--Christina
April 4th, 2017 13:32
Christina8 said:
Great job on this poem! I love bicycling! I\'ll have to tell you where I go later but it\'s great for families to get out and cycle. Great exercise! Another great sonnet! Hugs--Christina
April 4th, 2017 13:32
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a magnificent colour shouts from the feathers of cardinal birds - we have nothing to match it here in the U.K. for vivid and very elegant coating. No wonder the states voted this wonder in as their own State Songster.
April 4th, 2017 11:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a magnificent colour shouts from the feathers of cardinal birds - we have nothing to match it here in the U.K. for vivid and very elegant coating. No wonder the states voted this wonder in as their own State Songster.
April 4th, 2017 11:50
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
orchidee said:
A fine write and fine bird!
April 4th, 2017 08:38
orchidee said:
A fine write and fine bird!
April 4th, 2017 08:38
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, don\'t see them in the UK.
April 4th, 2017 08:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, don\'t see them in the UK.
April 4th, 2017 08:15
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Christina8 said:
Oh you wrote about my absolute favorite bird!!! How lovely! Wonderful acrostic! Great job!! Hugs--CHristina
April 4th, 2017 07:46
Christina8 said:
Oh you wrote about my absolute favorite bird!!! How lovely! Wonderful acrostic! Great job!! Hugs--CHristina
April 4th, 2017 07:46
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
willyweed said:
I have cardinals all over the place here, P.S the only real fans are N.Y. Yankee fans WW lol.
April 4th, 2017 07:24
willyweed said:
I have cardinals all over the place here, P.S the only real fans are N.Y. Yankee fans WW lol.
April 4th, 2017 07:24
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Tony36 said:
Well written tribute to a truly lovely bird
April 4th, 2017 07:24
Tony36 said:
Well written tribute to a truly lovely bird
April 4th, 2017 07:24
THE DAILY GRIND !
dawnthechef said:
YES-The grind can get to you! I have many many years to go. Still feel lucky though 😊
April 3rd, 2017 16:01
dawnthechef said:
YES-The grind can get to you! I have many many years to go. Still feel lucky though 😊
April 3rd, 2017 16:01
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Philip said:
Good fun Brian. I would like a go on a penny farthing one day. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:17
Philip said:
Good fun Brian. I would like a go on a penny farthing one day. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:17
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
orchidee said:
You riding that bike forwards or backwards? You coming or going?! heehee.
And - about 4,673 million tons of tea, Michael? I dunno, just a wild guess! lol. Google probably will tell us if we bother to look it up.
April 3rd, 2017 09:05
orchidee said:
You riding that bike forwards or backwards? You coming or going?! heehee.
And - about 4,673 million tons of tea, Michael? I dunno, just a wild guess! lol. Google probably will tell us if we bother to look it up.
April 3rd, 2017 09:05
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
willyweed said:
Is that you on your big wheel Brian?
nice fun poem goes full circle.
April 3rd, 2017 07:03
willyweed said:
Is that you on your big wheel Brian?
nice fun poem goes full circle.
April 3rd, 2017 07:03
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:
Well written and a good fun read. I used to love cycling when the roads were less used but you wouldn\'t get in those lycra outfits and silly looking hats for all the tea in China. How much tea is there in China by the way?
April 3rd, 2017 06:43
Michael Edwards said:
Well written and a good fun read. I used to love cycling when the roads were less used but you wouldn\'t get in those lycra outfits and silly looking hats for all the tea in China. How much tea is there in China by the way?
April 3rd, 2017 06:43
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Garry said:
Very well crafted and funny.
April 3rd, 2017 03:11
Garry said:
Very well crafted and funny.
April 3rd, 2017 03:11
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
lr said:
Your poem is wonderful
Your poetry is very spiritual and questions the morality of humans sinful act when we \'condemned Him to death\'. The repetition of \'Where you there when\' directly asking the reader enforces a sense of responsibility of us to reflect on the depth of humans sins on son of god and in so doing questions our very nature of our morality how could we allow this to happen?
The red colour writing symbolises Jesus sacrificing his life for humanity as in depictions of Jesus at the last supper he is adorned in red and blue robes blue symbolising his spiritual transcendence to heaven red his sacrifice of his life on the cross l.
The repetition of hallelujah enforces rejoicing of Jesuss sacrifice to forgive all mans sins in the name of god. For through his sacrifice we may rejoice in the magnitude Of the power of love of Jesus for humanity.
April 2nd, 2017 17:58
lr said:
Your poem is wonderful
Your poetry is very spiritual and questions the morality of humans sinful act when we \'condemned Him to death\'. The repetition of \'Where you there when\' directly asking the reader enforces a sense of responsibility of us to reflect on the depth of humans sins on son of god and in so doing questions our very nature of our morality how could we allow this to happen?
The red colour writing symbolises Jesus sacrificing his life for humanity as in depictions of Jesus at the last supper he is adorned in red and blue robes blue symbolising his spiritual transcendence to heaven red his sacrifice of his life on the cross l.
The repetition of hallelujah enforces rejoicing of Jesuss sacrifice to forgive all mans sins in the name of god. For through his sacrifice we may rejoice in the magnitude Of the power of love of Jesus for humanity.
April 2nd, 2017 17:58
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
Christina8 said:
I haven\'t seen a rainbow in a while. Cool pajamas! Love your poem. Also love your authors notes. Our color vision truly is a gift from God and to appreciate the things he has given us. Wonderful job! Hugs-Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:08
Christina8 said:
I haven\'t seen a rainbow in a while. Cool pajamas! Love your poem. Also love your authors notes. Our color vision truly is a gift from God and to appreciate the things he has given us. Wonderful job! Hugs-Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:08
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. As we get closer to Easter it gives us something to think about. I have a keychain that says \"thorns on his crowns, cross of wood on his back and YOU on his mind\". Always reminds me that my Lord is with me and that he died for all of us, each and every one of us. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful sunday write!! Hugs in spirit--Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:01
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. As we get closer to Easter it gives us something to think about. I have a keychain that says \"thorns on his crowns, cross of wood on his back and YOU on his mind\". Always reminds me that my Lord is with me and that he died for all of us, each and every one of us. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful sunday write!! Hugs in spirit--Christina
April 2nd, 2017 12:01
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
WriteBeLight said:
He is everywhere Brian! Very joyous message you have posted on this Sunday as we get closer to Easter.
April 2nd, 2017 07:08
WriteBeLight said:
He is everywhere Brian! Very joyous message you have posted on this Sunday as we get closer to Easter.
April 2nd, 2017 07:08
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
Goldfinch60 said:
And He will rise again.
Good write.
April 2nd, 2017 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
And He will rise again.
Good write.
April 2nd, 2017 03:14
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
orchidee said:
A fine write! We were there in a sense - not physically in person, of course.
April 2nd, 2017 03:08
orchidee said:
A fine write! We were there in a sense - not physically in person, of course.
April 2nd, 2017 03:08
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
WriteBeLight said:
Very warm and full of brilliance Brian!
April 1st, 2017 06:03
WriteBeLight said:
Very warm and full of brilliance Brian!
April 1st, 2017 06:03
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys sound chic with their purple stripes.
April 1st, 2017 04:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys sound chic with their purple stripes.
April 1st, 2017 04:37
MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL !
Michael Edwards said:
A descriptive rainbow and love the pyjallmas even though I don\'t wear them !1
April 1st, 2017 02:03
Michael Edwards said:
A descriptive rainbow and love the pyjallmas even though I don\'t wear them !1
April 1st, 2017 02:03
THE DAILY GRIND !
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! Sorry I\'m reviewing it so late--speaking of the daily grind! One of the busiest days I can remember in a while. It\'s amazing what we have to fit in in a day. But I wonder with all the stuff you have to do how you fit MPS in the mix. Great job! Hugs-Christina
March 31st, 2017 22:39
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! Sorry I\'m reviewing it so late--speaking of the daily grind! One of the busiest days I can remember in a while. It\'s amazing what we have to fit in in a day. But I wonder with all the stuff you have to do how you fit MPS in the mix. Great job! Hugs-Christina
March 31st, 2017 22:39
THE DAILY GRIND !
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this Brian,
Like the way you
Manipulated some
End words to keep
The rhyme...very clever !!!
Well done sir...
March 31st, 2017 17:44
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this Brian,
Like the way you
Manipulated some
End words to keep
The rhyme...very clever !!!
Well done sir...
March 31st, 2017 17:44
THE DAILY GRIND !
WriteBeLight said:
I am grateful I have a job I like, and enjoy being at. Great point of being thankful Brian.
March 31st, 2017 11:55
WriteBeLight said:
I am grateful I have a job I like, and enjoy being at. Great point of being thankful Brian.
March 31st, 2017 11:55
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