Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
willyweed said:
the shape of things to come? good one mate!
April 6th, 2017 06:57
willyweed said:
the shape of things to come? good one mate!
April 6th, 2017 06:57
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Jooles said:
Again I have learned something new....your poems are ALWAYS worth a visit
April 6th, 2017 03:10
Jooles said:
Again I have learned something new....your poems are ALWAYS worth a visit
April 6th, 2017 03:10
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Brian I really like this - something else for me to have a go at - It\'s not you in photo is it?
April 6th, 2017 02:45
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff Brian I really like this - something else for me to have a go at - It\'s not you in photo is it?
April 6th, 2017 02:45
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Poetic Justice said:
Brian, I always love how you think and the uniqueness of all your poems!
April 6th, 2017 02:11
Poetic Justice said:
Brian, I always love how you think and the uniqueness of all your poems!
April 6th, 2017 02:11
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic form from top to bottom dear Brian - - very clever indeed.
April 6th, 2017 02:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic form from top to bottom dear Brian - - very clever indeed.
April 6th, 2017 02:04
HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE
Frank Prem said:
That\'s some kind of form you\'ve got there Brian, for sure.
Well matched.
April 6th, 2017 01:59
Frank Prem said:
That\'s some kind of form you\'ve got there Brian, for sure.
Well matched.
April 6th, 2017 01:59
SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2
Aamina said:
Wow i loved this. I study physics so planets to me are quite appealing, this threw me off the usual spectrum of planetary talk =)
April 5th, 2017 08:03
Aamina said:
Wow i loved this. I study physics so planets to me are quite appealing, this threw me off the usual spectrum of planetary talk =)
April 5th, 2017 08:03
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
willyweed said:
they rock in the treetops all day long.
rockin\' and a boppin\'....well you know the rest... good one Brian here comes the sun!
April 5th, 2017 05:53
willyweed said:
they rock in the treetops all day long.
rockin\' and a boppin\'....well you know the rest... good one Brian here comes the sun!
April 5th, 2017 05:53
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
Jooles said:
Great poem...when Robins are near loved ones appear
April 5th, 2017 04:05
Jooles said:
Great poem...when Robins are near loved ones appear
April 5th, 2017 04:05
ROBIN ~ BRITAIN\'S FAVORITE BIRD !
Michael Edwards said:
Love this little poem - as a youngster I read David Lacks \'Life Of The Robin\' and have loved them ever since. I can remember much of the book though I haven\'t read it since - one of the most interesting points is that the Robin is a bit of a nomad - you might think the same robin keeps visiting your garden but it is far more likely that you see a different on each occasion. By the way Brian - American spelling ?
April 5th, 2017 03:57
Michael Edwards said:
Love this little poem - as a youngster I read David Lacks \'Life Of The Robin\' and have loved them ever since. I can remember much of the book though I haven\'t read it since - one of the most interesting points is that the Robin is a bit of a nomad - you might think the same robin keeps visiting your garden but it is far more likely that you see a different on each occasion. By the way Brian - American spelling ?
April 5th, 2017 03:57
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Jooles said:
I love the way you write...there is a free quality to it I cant master. Brill
April 4th, 2017 16:33
Jooles said:
I love the way you write...there is a free quality to it I cant master. Brill
April 4th, 2017 16:33
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Michael Edwards said:
After Fays daffs now this beauty - a colourful day - great acrostic.
April 4th, 2017 13:46
Michael Edwards said:
After Fays daffs now this beauty - a colourful day - great acrostic.
April 4th, 2017 13:46
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Christina8 said:
Great job on this poem! I love bicycling! I\'ll have to tell you where I go later but it\'s great for families to get out and cycle. Great exercise! Another great sonnet! Hugs--Christina
April 4th, 2017 13:32
Christina8 said:
Great job on this poem! I love bicycling! I\'ll have to tell you where I go later but it\'s great for families to get out and cycle. Great exercise! Another great sonnet! Hugs--Christina
April 4th, 2017 13:32
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a magnificent colour shouts from the feathers of cardinal birds - we have nothing to match it here in the U.K. for vivid and very elegant coating. No wonder the states voted this wonder in as their own State Songster.
April 4th, 2017 11:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a magnificent colour shouts from the feathers of cardinal birds - we have nothing to match it here in the U.K. for vivid and very elegant coating. No wonder the states voted this wonder in as their own State Songster.
April 4th, 2017 11:50
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
orchidee said:
A fine write and fine bird!
April 4th, 2017 08:38
orchidee said:
A fine write and fine bird!
April 4th, 2017 08:38
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, don\'t see them in the UK.
April 4th, 2017 08:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, don\'t see them in the UK.
April 4th, 2017 08:15
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Christina8 said:
Oh you wrote about my absolute favorite bird!!! How lovely! Wonderful acrostic! Great job!! Hugs--CHristina
April 4th, 2017 07:46
Christina8 said:
Oh you wrote about my absolute favorite bird!!! How lovely! Wonderful acrostic! Great job!! Hugs--CHristina
April 4th, 2017 07:46
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
willyweed said:
I have cardinals all over the place here, P.S the only real fans are N.Y. Yankee fans WW lol.
April 4th, 2017 07:24
willyweed said:
I have cardinals all over the place here, P.S the only real fans are N.Y. Yankee fans WW lol.
April 4th, 2017 07:24
CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD
Tony36 said:
Well written tribute to a truly lovely bird
April 4th, 2017 07:24
Tony36 said:
Well written tribute to a truly lovely bird
April 4th, 2017 07:24
THE DAILY GRIND !
dawnthechef said:
YES-The grind can get to you! I have many many years to go. Still feel lucky though 😊
April 3rd, 2017 16:01
dawnthechef said:
YES-The grind can get to you! I have many many years to go. Still feel lucky though 😊
April 3rd, 2017 16:01
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Philip said:
Good fun Brian. I would like a go on a penny farthing one day. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:17
Philip said:
Good fun Brian. I would like a go on a penny farthing one day. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:17
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
orchidee said:
You riding that bike forwards or backwards? You coming or going?! heehee.
And - about 4,673 million tons of tea, Michael? I dunno, just a wild guess! lol. Google probably will tell us if we bother to look it up.
April 3rd, 2017 09:05
orchidee said:
You riding that bike forwards or backwards? You coming or going?! heehee.
And - about 4,673 million tons of tea, Michael? I dunno, just a wild guess! lol. Google probably will tell us if we bother to look it up.
April 3rd, 2017 09:05
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
willyweed said:
Is that you on your big wheel Brian?
nice fun poem goes full circle.
April 3rd, 2017 07:03
willyweed said:
Is that you on your big wheel Brian?
nice fun poem goes full circle.
April 3rd, 2017 07:03
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:
Well written and a good fun read. I used to love cycling when the roads were less used but you wouldn\'t get in those lycra outfits and silly looking hats for all the tea in China. How much tea is there in China by the way?
April 3rd, 2017 06:43
Michael Edwards said:
Well written and a good fun read. I used to love cycling when the roads were less used but you wouldn\'t get in those lycra outfits and silly looking hats for all the tea in China. How much tea is there in China by the way?
April 3rd, 2017 06:43
BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet !
Garry said:
Very well crafted and funny.
April 3rd, 2017 03:11
Garry said:
Very well crafted and funny.
April 3rd, 2017 03:11
WHERE YOU THERE ............. ?
lr said:
Your poem is wonderful
Your poetry is very spiritual and questions the morality of humans sinful act when we \'condemned Him to death\'. The repetition of \'Where you there when\' directly asking the reader enforces a sense of responsibility of us to reflect on the depth of humans sins on son of god and in so doing questions our very nature of our morality how could we allow this to happen?
The red colour writing symbolises Jesus sacrificing his life for humanity as in depictions of Jesus at the last supper he is adorned in red and blue robes blue symbolising his spiritual transcendence to heaven red his sacrifice of his life on the cross l.
The repetition of hallelujah enforces rejoicing of Jesuss sacrifice to forgive all mans sins in the name of god. For through his sacrifice we may rejoice in the magnitude Of the power of love of Jesus for humanity.
April 2nd, 2017 17:58
lr said:
Your poem is wonderful
Your poetry is very spiritual and questions the morality of humans sinful act when we \'condemned Him to death\'. The repetition of \'Where you there when\' directly asking the reader enforces a sense of responsibility of us to reflect on the depth of humans sins on son of god and in so doing questions our very nature of our morality how could we allow this to happen?
The red colour writing symbolises Jesus sacrificing his life for humanity as in depictions of Jesus at the last supper he is adorned in red and blue robes blue symbolising his spiritual transcendence to heaven red his sacrifice of his life on the cross l.
The repetition of hallelujah enforces rejoicing of Jesuss sacrifice to forgive all mans sins in the name of god. For through his sacrifice we may rejoice in the magnitude Of the power of love of Jesus for humanity.
April 2nd, 2017 17:58
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